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Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation
人教新目标版 八年级上
SectionB 3a-selfcheck公开课课件
Learning objectives
1.复习Jane的旅游日记，总结归纳如何写好旅行日记。
2. 学会日记的审题，构思和勾勒,并根据所学知识进行词语润色。
3. 通过写日记记录日常生活，传达旅游意识。
4. 运用英语思维及一般过去时记录日记。
Ben went to Beijing on vacation.
I took many photos there.
Warming-up
Do you know these places
Tian’anmen Square
the Palace Museum
the Great Wall
Do you know these places
the Summer Palace
a Beijing hutong
the old Summer Palace
Do you know these places
the Bird’s Nest
the Water Cube
the Summer Palace
Do you know these places
Old Summer Palace
Tsinghua University
Peking University
Do you know these food in Beijing
Beijing Duck
ZhaJiangmian
Lvdagun
【思路点拨】 Step Idea Expression
1 开篇点题：具体日期，我去北京（天安门广场/故宫博物院/北京胡同）度假了 I went to Beijing… with my…
2 旅行经历：介绍旅游时去过的地方 visited Tian’anmen Square… the Palace Museum… a Beijing hutong… took photos… ate Beijing duck… bought… learned…
3 所感所思：玩得高兴，期待下一次再去游览 We had a great time… hope to go there
again
My Trip to Beijing
Group the words in the box.
hot and sunny
Beijing duck
take some photos
buy something special
learn something important
tired
delicious
beautiful
interesting
August
Date
Weather
Activities
Food
Description words
August
take some photos
buy something special
learn something important
Beijing duck
tired
delicious
beautiful
interesting
hot and sunny
TRAVEL
Wednesday, _______ 20th
Today the weather was ____________.
I went to ______________. It was ________. We _________________.
I liked this place because _______________________________________.
For dinner we had ____________. It was _________________.
In the evening, I felt really ______.
hot and sunny tired
Beijing duck delicious
take some photos beautiful
buy something special interesting
learn something important August
Complete the diary entry about a trip to one of these places. Use the words and phrases in the box to help you.
3a
Wednesday,_______20th
Today the weather was ____________. I went to____________________. It was________ .
We _________________________. I liked this place because______________________________. For dinner we had___________. It was ________ . In the evening, I felt really_______ .
hot and sunny
Beijing duck
delicious
tired
Tian’anmen Square
beautiful
took some photos
I learnt something important
August
Tian’anmen
the Palace Museum
a Beijing hutong
Check the answers,
日记是属于记叙文性质的应用文，是将一天所经历的主要事情和过程依次简要的记下来。日记可以记叙自己一天生活中做过的、看到的、遇到的、想到的和听到的事情，可以记事，可以写人，可以状物，可以写景，也可以记述活动。
What is a diary
Let’s learn how to
write a diary.
What is the structure of a diary entry
Day and Date
(星期在前，月日在后)
Body
Let’s learn how to
write a diary.
表示天气情况的词一般用形容词，写在日期之后，用逗号隔开。
1.开头
位置：第一行
一般写上日期、星期和天气状况。
顺序：月→日→年
What is the structure of a diary entry
Body
Let’s learn how to
write a diary.
另起一行。正文可以顶格写，也可以内缩3至5个字母的空间。
2.正文
注意使用正确的时态，如果记叙已经发生的事，需用过去时态。如果写的是感想等，就可以用一般现在时。
What are the common features of language in a diary entry
Day and Date
(星期在前，月日在后)
Body
the first person(第一人称)
simple past tense
(一般过去时)
timeline
(按时间顺序)
Let’s learn how to
write a diary.
What do we usually write in the body part
Body
weather
activities
feelings
food
other things
Let’s learn how to
write a diary.
What do we usually write in the body part
Body
activities
feelings+reason
food
feelings
Let’s learn how to
write a diary.
Wednesday, August 20th
Today the weather was hot and sunny. I went to Tian’anmen Square. It was beautiful. We took some photos. I like this place because I could learn something important. For dinner we had Beijing duck. It was delicious. In the evening, I felt really tired.
weather
5. What food did you eat
6. What did you like best
7. Did you dislike anything
8. How did you feel about the trip
1. Where did you go
2. Did you go with anyone
3. How was the weather
4.What did you do every day
It’s time to
write your diary.
Answer the questions to make notes about a vacation you took.
3b
It’s time to
write your diary.
place
with
whom
weather
activities
food
things
like best
things
dislike
feelings
my diary
The content of writing: what, where, when, who and how.
Write a travel diary like Jane’s on page 5. Use your notes in 3b.
3c
Framework (结构)
My travel
Beginning
Main body
Ending
time
place
weather
feelings
partner
activities
We did
We ate
We thought
We enjoyed
...
We saw/heard
feelings
3w( when, where, who)+weather
what
feelings
how
Let’s learn how to
write a diary.
on vacation 度假 the next day 第二天
take photos 照相 quite a few 相当多
learn about 了解 go to the beach 去海滩
at first 首先 feel like 给……的感觉；感受到
have fun/enjoy oneself 玩得高兴
have a three-day trip 进行三天的旅行
go hiking/camping/swimming 去远足/野营/游泳
积句成篇
短语储备
具体描述 活动+感受
活动描述要有顺序性
描述感受
描述原因
时间顺序 in the morning/afternoon/evening…
先后顺序 first/at first, then, after that, in the end/at last…
be+adj
so adj.that +句子 我是如此兴奋以至于我一点也不累。
I was so excited that I was not tired at all.
feel like 我感觉像行走在油画之中。
I felt like I was walking in the painting.
That’s why
That’s because
As a result…
句型荟萃
总结假期感受+旅游相关的名言
All in all, In a word,
感叹句 多么美好的假期！
What a wonderful vacation!
How wonderful the vacation is!
总结
表达看法
名言
In my eyes, As far as I am concerned(就我而言)
I think that +句子
旅行让人明智。
读万卷书，行万里路。
Traveling makes us wise.
Read ten thousand books, travel ten thousand miles.
句型荟萃
I went to Beijing on vacation with my parents this summer.
First we went to Tian’anmen Square and watched the flag-raising ceremony. How exciting it was! Then we visited the Great Wall. There were a lot of people there. The next day, we visited the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and the Temple of Heaven.We took quite a few photos there and we learnt something important about Chinese history.
We were very tired but happy. We enjoyed the trip so much that we hoped to visit it again.
My trip to Beijing
范文欣赏
Work in groups and correct each other’s passages.
4’
7’
2’
Word choice
Have a clear beginning, middle and ending.
Include six main points:
places, weather, people, date, route, food.
Sentences
Use specific words.
Use rich expressions and touch
the readers deeply.
Handwriting
Use beautiful handwriting.
2’
5’
Organization
Ideas
Hi, my name's
Paul.
I went to Nanjing.
Hi, Paul. I'm Anna. Where did you go on vacation
Oh, I went to Beijing.
Did you do anything
special in Nanjing？
Imagine you are all of foreigners on vacation in China. You meet each other at the airport on your way home. Talk about what you did on your vacation.
4
要求：
1.确定自己的身份（名字、国籍等）；
2. 选取自己在中国的游览地；
3. 确定两至三项活动内容；
4. 描述自己的感受；
5. 列出询问对方的若干问题。
Sample
—Yeah, I visited Qinhuai River and took a boat at night. The lights along the bank were fantastic. I really enjoyed myself. Was your trip to Beijing interesting
—Sure. The first day I went to the Palace Museum. It was great. And the next day, I went shopping in Wangfujing. People there are friendly.
Self Check
1.A：Did go on vacation with you last month
B：Yes, my family went to the countryside with me.
2.A：Did your family go to the beach with you last weekend
B：No. from my family went, but my friend
went with me.
3. A: I didn’t bring back anything from Malaysia.
B: ________at all Why not
anything
everything
nothing
anyone
everyone
no one
anyone
No one
Complete the conversations with the correct words in the box.
1
Nothing
Self Check
anything
everything
nothing
anyone
everyone
no one
Complete the conversations with the correct words in the box.
1
4. A: Did you buy _________ in the shopping center
B: No, I didn’t.___________was very expensive.
5. A: How was the volleyball game yesterday
B: Great! __________had a fun time!
anything
Everything
Everyone
Self Check
Last August, our class ______(do) something very special on our school trip. We _______(go) to Mount Tai. We _______ (start) our trip at 12:00 at night. Everyone in our class _______(take) a bag with some food and water.
did
went
started
took
Complete the passage with the correct forms of the verbs in brackets.
2
Complete the passage with the correct forms of the verbs in brackets.
2
Self Check
After three hours, someone looked at the map and _______ (find) out we _______ (be, not) anywhere near the top. My legs _______(be) so tired that I wanted to stop. My classmates_______(tell) me to keep going, so I _______ (go) on.
found
weren’t
were
told
went
太……以至于……
Complete the passage with the correct forms of the verbs in brackets.
2
Self Check
At 5:00 a.m., we got to the top! Everyone __________ (jump) up and down in excitement. Twenty minutes later, the sun _______ (start) to come up. It was so beautiful that we _______ (forget) about the last five hours!
jumped
started
forgot
（太阳或月亮）升起
激动
上上下下
Falling in love with the diary
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