广东省茂名市2016高考英语二轮：短文改错练习（2）含答案
(2015·海南省5月模拟)
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1．命题立意：考查固定短语。
解析：去掉on the earth中的the 根据on earth究竟＝in the world。故on the earth去掉the。
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解析：exactly→exact 根据definition是名词，需要形容词修饰。故exactly→exact。
3．命题立意：考查介词。
解析：lives后加in 根据lives是不及物动词，应加介词in。
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5．命题立意：考查时态。
解析：helped→helps 根据上下文的时态，应用一般现在时，主语是the old lady。故helped→helps。
6．命题立意：考查连词。
解析：Wherever→Whenever 根据从句的谓语动词snow判断应是“无论何时”，故Wherever→Whenever。
7．命题立意：考查代词。
解析：those→them 根据前文的children。故those→them。
8．命题立意：考查介词。
解析：去掉about 根据短语tell sb. a story给某人讲故事。故去掉about。
9．命题立意：考查形容词。
解析：lucky→unlucky 根据前文是不幸的。故lucky→unlucky。
10．命题立意：考查系动词。
解析：full前加is 根据full of laughter判断需要系动词。
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下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
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注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词，
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下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
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注意：
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6．命题立意：考查副词。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
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注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
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参考答案：
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6．命题立意：考查代词。
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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【参考答案】4.
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参考答案：
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2014届高考英语二轮专题复习提升精选：短文改错
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下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】2.
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此题要求改正所给短文中的错 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Attention, please, ev ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )eryone. We’ve accepted the 1. ______
weather forecast on the radio this morning that 2. ______
there will have a heavy rain tonight. Be sure 3. ______
to shut the windows and doors until you leave 4. ______
your classrooms. The sports meet when we planned to 5. ______
hold it tomorrow will be put off. After it becomes 6. ______
fine, we’ll make other announcement. We will 7. ______
have classes on Wednesday as usually. Since it is 8. ______
colder tomorrow, please dress on more clothes in time. 9. ______
Those come to school by bike, don’t keep your 10.______
umbrellas open while riding.
【参考答案】3.
1. accepted----received 2.正确 3. have ----be
4. until---before 5. when—which
6. it 7. other—another 8. as usual
9. put on 10. those who
