Unit7 Writing paper
Dear Li Ping,
I hope you are well! I’m very busy in my new school and there are so many rules at the school, and most of them are strict. I feel unhappy and uneasy. Are there any rules in your school What are the rules What do you think of them Look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Lucy
一、写作指导
写作内容: _________________________________________________________________________________
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谋篇布局: 第一段___________________ 第二段_________________________ 第三段_________________
写作建议:(1)文章三段写作;(2)尝试用多样句型描述3-5点学校的规则;(3)规则与规则之间用衔接词衔接;(4)对规则的看法是否具有正能量导向。
词汇积累
严格的学校规则_____________________ 制定规则____________________ 遵守规则__________________
穿校服______________________ 在上学日____________________ 被允许做...________________________ 制造噪音________________________ 听音乐________________________ 打耳洞______________________
被惩罚__________________________ 在我看来_____________________ 习惯_________________________
句子积累
第一段:表达感受
很高兴收到你的来信。
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我很遗憾听到你因为新学校严格的规则而不开心。(I’m sorry to hear...)
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第二段:介绍学校规则
表达规则的句型:...can’t + do...; ...have to/must...; ...be not allowed to do...; If..., you....
我在学校也有很多严格的规则要遵守。
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我们学生在上学日必须要穿校服。(must)
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我们上课不能迟到。(can’t)
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我们不能在课堂上吃东西、制造噪音以及听音乐。(be not allowed to)
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男生不能留长头发,女生不能打耳洞。(while)
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如果我们带手机去学校,我们会被惩罚。(If...)
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第三段:介绍对规则的看法
在我看来,虽然大部分规则很严格,但是他们是被制定让我们变得更好。(although)
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我们最好遵守他们。(had better)
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你很快就会适应他们并且重拾快乐。(get use to)
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篇章写作
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自评:(1)文章是否三段;(2)是否描述学校规则以及对这些规则的看法;(3)是否用不同句型描述3-5点学校规则;(4)规则之间是否有合适的衔接;(5)句子结构、单词形式、拼写是否正确;(6)书写是否端正清晰。