Unit13 Writing paper
假如你是李华, 你的笔友Lucy来信和你讨论环境保护, 请你给她回信发表自己的观点。词数80左右。
Dear Li Hua, How are you these days Recently, I have learned that energy has become less and less. And pollution such as water pollution or air pollution has become more and more serious. I make my mind to do something for the environment. But I don’t know what I can really do. So could you give some advice I am looking forward to your reply. Yours, Lucy
一、写作指导
写作内容: ___________________________________________________________________________
时态:______________________________________________________________________________
谋篇布局: 第一段____________________ 第二段_________________ 第三段__________________
写作建议:(1)从节约资源和保护环境两个方面进行写作;(2)提出3-4点建议,所提建议需要接地气,是学生能在日常生活中使用的;(3)运用多种句型、短语提出相关建议。
词汇积累
关注______________________ 环保___________________ 以...开始_____________________
关灯______________________ 节约能源_________________ 用...替代____________________
使用公共交通____________________ 私家车_______________ 像...的小事________________
塑料袋____________________ 增加起来________________ 提升环境____________________
句子积累
第一段:引入话题
我很高兴你能关注环境保护。(pay attention to+n/doing)
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保护环境从小事开始。(begin with)
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第二段:阐述具体环保建议
有很多我们能做事情来保护环境。(There be)
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在不使用时,我们可以通过关灯和关电脑来节约电。(by+doing)
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你可以回收废水、废纸以及其他废弃物从而我们可以再次利用他们。(so that + 表目的的句子)
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建议更多地使用公共交通来替代私家车出行。(It’s suggested to..., instead of)
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我们应该拒绝使用塑料袋,他们对环境不好。(which引导的定于从句)
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简单的事情诸如像带袋子去购物可以帮助保护环境。(Simple things like...)
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当你点外卖的时候不要木制筷子或者塑料叉子。(Don’t...)
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第三段:总结
所有小情都可以汇聚起来变成提升环境的大事。
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希望这些能帮助你。
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篇章写作
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自评:(1)文章从节约资源和保护环境两个方面进行写作;(2)是否提出3-4点合适的建议;(3)是否使用多种句型描述建议;(4)句子结构、单词形式、拼写是否正确;(5)书写是否端正清晰。