Unit 1 How can we become good learners?书面表达15篇（含解析）-2024-2025学年英语九年级全册单元冲刺满分题型训练(人教版)

Unit1书面表达15篇
1.（23-24九年级上·宁夏吴忠·期末）
英语学习在初中学习生活中是尤为重要的。假如你是Linda，你的韩国笔友Jenny来信向你询问如何学好英语。请你根据以下图示的提示，用英语给他写封回信。
要求：
1. 内容必须包含图示中所有要点，可适当发挥：
2. 80词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数：
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名、地名等信息。
Dear Jenny,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Linda
【答案】范文：
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to hear from you and happy to share some tips on how to learn English well.
Firstly, listening to tapes regularly can help improve your listening skills. Secondly, don’t be afraid to ask for help when you encounter difficulties. Your teachers and classmates are always willing to assist you. Thirdly, reading textbooks aloud can enhance your speaking and reading abilities. Fourthly, listening to English songs can make learning more enjoyable. Additionally, watching English movies can improve your vocabulary and grammar knowledge. Lastly, making frequent use of English in daily life, such as speaking with friends, will help you master the language more quickly.
I hope that these tips will be helpful to you in your English learning journey.
Yours,
Linda
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍学好英语的建议，注意不要忘记补充至少3点自己的建议，可适当发挥，并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“如何学好英语”这一主题；
第二步，根据图示信息，分条介绍学好英语的建议；
第三步，书写结语，希望这些建议对对方有用。
[亮点词汇]
①be afraid to do sth害怕做某事
②ask for help寻求帮助
③be willing to do sth乐意做某事
[高分句型]
①listening to tapes regularly can help improve your listening skills. (动名词作主语)
②don’t be afraid to ask for help when you encounter difficulties. (when引导时间状语从句)
③I hope that these tips will be helpful to you in your English learning journey. (that引导宾语从句)
（23-24九年级上·河南商丘·期末）
假如你是李华，你班班会将进行一次英语学习交流活动，请同学们讲一讲自己在英语学习过程中曾经遇到过哪些困难或问题，后来又是怎样解决的，获得了什么样的进步和感悟。请你根据以上要点完成一篇发言稿，谈一谈你特别的英语学习经历和感悟吧。
要求：1. 条理清晰，行文连贯，书写规范、整洁；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
3. 词数100词左右。（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today let me tell you something about my English-learning experiences.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks for your listening.
【答案】例文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today let me tell you something about my English-learning experiences.
I was a shy boy before, and I didn’t like to talk. My spoken English was not good because I was afraid of speaking English. My English teacher Miss Zhang noticed that. She had a talk with me and gave me some good suggestions. I felt better. After class, I took part in the English corner and practice speaking English as often as possible. Gradually, I became brave to express myself. I got first prize in my class English speech contest. I really feel happy and confident now. I believe as long as we practice more, we’ll make more progress.
Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”与“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己学习英语的经历和感悟”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，说明要分享自己学习英语的经历；
第二步，介绍自己学习英语遇到过的困难，以及如何解决并提高英语水平的；
第三步，感谢聆听，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②as long as只要
[高分句型]
①My spoken English was not good because I was afraid of speaking English.（because引导原因状语从句）
②I believe as long as we practice more, we’ll make more progress.（宾语从句，as long as引导的状语从句）
（23-24九年级上·江西宜春·期末）
如何高效学习一直是大家讨论的热点话题。假如你所在的学校正在举办以“Learn well and wisely”为主题的演讲比赛，请你根据下面提示写一篇英语演讲稿。
写作要点：
1. The importance of learning well and wisely
2. Good habits of learning
3. Your experience
Hello, everyone. I’m glad to be here to talk about learning well and wisely. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Hello, everyone. I’m glad to be here to talk about learning well and wisely. Learning well and wisely is of great importance. We should not only study hard, but also have good learning habits and methods.
For me, good learning habits help me learn widely. I think understanding what the teacher says in class is more important than taking notes. Besides, before doing my homework, I set a time limit for each subject. What’s more, every evening I go over what I learned in class.
For example, every day before I go to bed, I recite the English words in order to remember them better. I review grammar exercises so that I will not make any mistakes again. Through these methods, my English has improved.
Let’s try our best to learn well and wisely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作提示和开头已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍好好学习、明智地学习是非常重要的；
第二步，介绍良好的学习习惯；
第三步，介绍自己的经历。
[亮点词汇]
①of great importance 重要的
②go over 复习
③in order to 为了
④so that 以便
[高分句型]
①We should not only study hard, but also have good learning habits and methods.（“not only...but also”结构）
②I think understanding what the teacher says in class is more important than taking notes.（比较级、宾语从句）
（23-24九年级上·江西宜春·期末）
假定你是李华。为了让作为高一新生的自己快速适应高中英语教学进度，请写一份高中英语学习计划并发邮件给你班英语老师Elena进行审阅。内容包括：
1. 你的计划
2. 你的决心
注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Elena,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Hua
【答案】范文：
Dear Elena,
I am writing to tell you my English learning plan for this academic year.
First of all, I will make full use of the time to preview new words at weekends before the class, aiming to master their correct pronunciation and spelling. Second, I will attach much importance to training on after-class reading to expand my vocabularies. Finally, listening to various materials and practising speaking are included in my plan for a better use of the language.
Thank you for your time to read about my plan. I will put my plan into practice, and I believe I can learn English well in the future.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：本文时态以“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：要点已给出，注意衔接自然顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明写这封邮件的目的是为了给老师呈现自己的计划；
第二步，详细记述自己的计划和决心；
第三步，感谢对方抽出时间审阅自己的计划。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all首先
②Finally最后
[高分句型]
①I believe I can learn English well in the future.（宾语从句）
②Finally, listening to various materials and practising speaking are included in my plan for a better use of the language.（动名词作主语）
（23-24九年级上·江西抚州·期末）
自进入初三阶段的学习以来，王媛同学因学业增多，学习难度增加而感到焦虑不安，因此向学校“刘莹姐姐工作室”寻求心理援助。假设你是“刘莹姐姐工作室”的一员，收到了她的求助信，请根据以下提示给王媛同学写一封回信，给她提供一些建议，帮助她减轻焦虑。
写作要点 参考句型
1. plan the time properly/set up small goals It’s important to ... I think it’s a good way to ... Maybe you should try ...
2. develop good living habits/do enough sports
3. …
要求：
1. 短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点，条理清楚，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名；
3. 词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Yuan,
I’m sorry to hear about your worries in study, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Liu Ying
【答案】例文
Dear Wang Yuan,
I’m sorry to hear about your worries in study, but I believe the following three ways will help you deal with them.
Firstly, it’s important to plan your time properly before you get down to your homework. And you’d better set up some small goals first if you want to make great progress in study.
What’s more, good living habits also have an influence in your study, so maybe you should develop some good living habits and try to do enough sports when you’re free.
Lastly, I think it’s a good way to relax yourself by listening to some music you enjoy during your breaks. It can help you forget about your worries and bring out the best in you.
I hope these suggestions will help you get away from worries soon.
Yours.
Liu Ying
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文为一篇应用文，为书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：要点已给出，注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，建议对方合理计划时间并设立小目标；
第三步，建议对方养成良好的习惯并尝试在空闲时间做一些运动；
第四步，建议对方在休息时间多听音乐放松自己；
第五步，书写结语。希望自己的建议能够帮到对方。
[亮点词汇]
① deal with处理
② set up设立
③ have an influence in在……方面有影响
④ get away from摆脱
[高分句型]
① And you’d better set up some small goals first if you want to make great progress in study.（if引导的条件状语从句）
② I hope these suggestions will help you get away from worries soon.（省略that的宾语从句）
6．（23-24九年级上·福建泉州·期末）
学校举办”My Homework, My Idea”的英语演讲比赛，号召同学们畅想自己喜欢的英语课后作业。假定你是李华，请你根据以下表格提示，写一篇演讲稿参赛。词数80左右。
Content Purpose Advantage
Learn an English song To sing it in class Learn more words
Draw a mind map To review one’s English notes …
… … …
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Good afternoon, boys and girls! I am glad to be here to share my opinions with you. My topic today is “My Homework, My Idea”. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Good afternoon, boys and girls! I am glad to be here to share my opinions with you. My topic today is “My Homework, My Idea”. I have many good ideas about creative English homework because English is my favorite subject.
Firstly, we can learn to sing an English song and sing it in class. In this way, we can learn more words. Secondly, if we draw mind maps to review our English notes, we will remember them well. Thirdly, it’s also proud of us to make a video to introduce our traditional Chinese culture in English. We can post it online so that more foreigners can know about our great country. I hope we can have more creative English homework.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇点题，引出“我的作业，我的想法”的主题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“课后作业内容、目的、好处”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，表达”感谢聆听“。
[亮点词汇]
①be proud of骄傲
②make a video制作视频
③introduce介绍
[高分句型]
①Secondly, if we draw mind maps to review our English notes, we will remember them well.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I hope we can have more creative English homework.（省略that的宾语从句）
（23-24九年级上·四川达州·期末）
为了交流学习经验，提高学习效率，《英语报》正举办以“How to be a good learner”为题的征文比赛，请你踊跃投稿。
内容提示：
1. 有好的学习习惯和方法：上课前做好准备；认真听课，小组学习，相互帮助；复习（go over），认真完成家庭作业……
2. 进行体育锻炼，早点睡觉……
要求：
1. 必须用上所有的内容提示，语句通顺，书写规范；
2. 可以适当发挥，以保证内容的完整、丰富与流畅；
3. 词数80—100，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
How to be a good learner
To be a good learner, we should
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
【答案】例文
How to be a good learner
To be a good learner, we should have good habits and ways in learning.
We need to prepare our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class. After class, we must go over the lessons and finish our homework on time. It is good to study in groups and help each other. As a student, working hard is important. But don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy. We should do more reading in our free time. If we have any problem, we’d better ask others for help. We need to go to bed early.
I hope all these will be helpful to us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍如何成为一名好的学习者，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍如何成为一名好的学习者；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①go over复习
②on time准时
③forget to do sth.忘记做某事
[高分句型]
①It is good to study in groups and help each other. （it固定句型）
②If we have any problem, we’d better ask others for help. （if引导的条件状语从句）
（23-24九年级上·河南郑州·期末）
假如你是李华，你的美国朋友Tony一直在学习中文。他将要来中国旅游，但是很担心自己和他人的交流问题。请你结合下面图示信息，根据写作要求，给他写一封电子邮件，提一些建议。
写作要求：
1）文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥;
2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3）词数100左右（邮件的开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Tony,
How is everything going ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tony,
How is everything going I am very glad to learn that you are coming to China for a visit. It’s not necessary to worry about your Chinese. I’d like to offer some advice and I hope it will help you.
First, be brave enough to speak Chinese when you talk with others. It’s of great importance to be confident in yourself. Chinese people are very friendly, so you don’t need to be afraid of making mistakes. Second, you’d better speak slowly and clearly. This way you can make yourself understood more easily. What’s more, sometimes you can use drawings and pictures. And as you know, body language is also widely used in communication and it really works.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图及信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要对中文学习提供建议；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍学习中文的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①necessary有必要
②importance重要
③widely广泛地
[高分句型]
①First, be brave enough to speak Chinese when you talk with others. (祈使句；时间状语从句)
②And as you know, body language is also widely used in communication and it really works. (被动语态)
（23-24九年级上·福建泉州·期末）
假定你是李华，在学校举办的科技文化艺术节活动中，你打算参加以“Science Technology Has Improved My English”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据思维导图提示，分享你的学习经历和感悟。词数80左右。
注意事项：
1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；
3. 请勿在文中使用真实姓名、校名和地名。
Dear friends,
It’s my honor to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for your listening.
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
It’s my honor to be here to share my English learning experiences with all of you.
I used to be bad at English because I thought English was too difficult for me. I didn’t remember English words. I couldn’t understand the teacher in class. Now with the help of science technology, my English has improved a lot. When I meet new words, I can look them up in the e-dictionary. Many apps help me practice my listening and speaking. In addition, I also improve my English by taking online classes. Thanks to science technology, my English has improved. I believe that science technology will make our study more convenient.
Thank you for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：文章开头以及要点已经给出，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接书信开头，引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己曾经遇到的困难及解决方法；
第三步，书写结语，感谢聆听。
[亮点词汇]
①with the help of...在……的帮助下
②look up查阅
③thanks to多亏
[高分句型]
I believe that science technology will make our study more convenient. (宾语从句)
（23-24九年级上·山东青岛·期末）
假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Jenny想了解你备战明年4月份的英语听说考试的有关情况，请用英语给他写一封邮件，告诉她：你在备考方面都有哪些做法以及还需要她提供哪些帮助。
要求：
（1）词数80~100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入单词总数。
（2）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to receive your email. I am preparing for the listening and speaking test in April 2024.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Jenny,
I’m glad to receive your email. I am preparing for the listening and speaking test in April 2024. In order to prepare for the test, I make a lot of efforts. First, I read English newspapers every morning. Second, I spend half an hour practicing communicating skills every day. At the same time, I pay attention to the spelling of words.
I hope you can have a video call with me every day. I will talk to you. Then, I will correct my mistakes and become better.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件。
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主。
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“自己在备考方面的哪些做法以及寻求帮助”并适当补充，使文章内容充实，行文应使用第一人称。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍自己在备考。
第二步，详细介绍自己如何备考的。
第三步，寻求帮助，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①prepare for准备
②at the same time同时
[高分句型]
①I hope you can have a video call with me every day.（宾语从句）
（23-24九年级上·云南昭通·期末）
提示：假如你是Li Lin，你的笔友Mary刚来昆明不久，她的中文不好，在与他人交流的过程中遇到很多问题。Mary下决心学好中文。请你给Mary写封信，给她一些学习中文的建议。信的开头和结尾已给出，给出部分不计入总词数。
要求：
1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。
Dear Mary,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some trouble communicating with others in Kunming. I’ll give you some advice on how to learn Chinese well. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope my suggestions can help you. I’m sure you can make great progress in learning Chinese.
Yours,
Li Lin
【答案】例文
Dear Mary,
I’m sorry to hear that you have some trouble communicating with others in Kunming. I’ll give you some advice on how to learn Chinese well.
First, be brave enough to speak Chinese when you communicate with others. It’s of great importance to be confident about yourself. Chinese are very friendly so you needn’t be afraid of making mistakes. Second, it’s better to speak slowly and clearly. In this way you can make yourself understood more easily. Last but not least, sometimes you can use body language. As you know, it is also widely used across cultures and very often it works.
I hope my suggestions can help you. I’m sure you can make great progress in learning Chinese.
Yours,
Li Lin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第二人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对对方遇到的问题表达同情，并引出主题；
第二步，具体介绍学习中文的一些建议；
第三步，最后书写结尾，希望自己的建议对她有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①be confident about yourself对你自己有信心
②be afraid of害怕
③make mistakes犯错
④Last but not least最后但同样重要的是
⑤make yourself understood使自己被理解
[高分句型]
①First, be brave enough to speak Chinese when you communicate with others.（祈使句；when引导的时间状语从句）
②As you know, it is also widely used across cultures and very often it works.（as引导的非限制性定语从句；被动语态）
（22-23九年级上·河南洛阳·期末）
学校决定组织一个英语学习经验交流会，要求每位同学发言。请根据以下要点和要求，用英语写一篇发言稿。
1. 要点：
（1）谈谈你对英语学习的认识；
（2）介绍你是怎样学习英语的；
（3）你希望学校开展哪些课外活动。
2. 要求：
（1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；
（2）词数100左右。
提示词：important, useful, read, speak, English film, English song
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
English is widely used in the world. I think that English is one of my best subjects. Let me share with you how I learn English. First, it’s very useful for me to listen to the teacher carefully in class and take notes so that I can go over my lessons later. Secondly, both in and out of class. I’m not afraid of making mistakes. I try to read more English. I believe that nothing is impossible if I put my heart into it.
I’m so interested in English that I hope our school will hold an English party or an English corner for us. Then we can listen to beautiful English songs and watch interesting English films. I think we can not only improve our listening ability but also have more chances to talk with others in English.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“对英语学习的认识”；“自己是怎么学习英语的”以及“希望学校能开设的课外活动”等要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍英语的重要性。
第二步，介绍自己学习英语的方法。
第三步，收尾并表示希望学校开设关于英语的课外活动。
[亮点词汇]
①take notes记笔记
②so that以便
③be interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①I think that English is one of my best subjects.（宾语从句）
②First, it’s very useful for me to listen to the teacher carefully in class and take notes so that I can go over my lessons later.（it is adj for sb to do以及so that引导的目的状语从句）
（22-23九年级上·新疆阿克苏·期末）
假如你是李华，你的好友小伟即将参加中考。但是他的英语成绩一直不理想，另外他周末几乎被课后培训班(after-school classes)占满，他很无助，需要你的帮助。请以以下信息给他回信，请你就如何提高英语成绩和周末安排给他一些建议。
写作要点：介绍你的学习方法：和同学用英语对话/大声朗读练习发音/收听英文广播……
建议：减少课外培训；早起早睡；参加体育活动；养成良好的生活习惯。
要求：1. 词数不少于80词（文章的开头已给出，不计入词数）；2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。
Dear Xiaowei,
I’m sorry to know that you have trouble in learning English. I’d like to introduce how I learn English.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Xiaowei,
I’m sorry to know that you have trouble in learning English. I’d like to introduce how I learn English.
First, you need to make full use of your free time. I often talk with my classmates in English. It can improve my spoken English. Besides, I like to read aloud by myself in the morning to practice my pronunciation. And I listen to English radio in my spare time to practice listening.
I suggest you cut down on after-school classes. At the same time, you need to get up early and go to bed early. In addition, you need to take an active part in sports activities. Finally, you should develop good living habits.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，向对方介绍自己的学习方法；
第二步，给出自己的建议。
[亮点词汇]
① make full use of充分利用
② read aloud大声读
③ practice doing sth练习做某事
④ in addition此外
[高分句型]
I like to read aloud by myself in the morning to practice my pronunciation.（动词不定式作目的状语）
（23-24九年级上·河北保定·期末）
李华的表弟小刚是上海的一名九年级学生，下面是小刚给她发来的电子邮件的部分内容。请你根据所给内容，以李华的名义进行回复。
I failed my English exam last week. I don’t know what to do with the study pressure. I tried some ways to remember English words, but they didn’t work. Can you tell me how to remember English words and deal with study pressure
注意：
（1）回复邮件须回答所给邮件内容中的问题，可适当发挥。
（2）邮件中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
（3）词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Hi Xiao Gang,
I’m happy to receive your email from Shanghai.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文
Hi Xiao Gang,
I’m happy to receive your email from Shanghai. I’m sorry to hear that you failed your English exam last week. Don’t worry. I will help you deal with your problems. Here are some tips to help you remember English words and deal with study pressure.
Firstly, you can learn some spelling rules, such as the rules of letter pronunciation and the rules of letter-combination pronunciation. Secondly, speak the word while memorizing it. Thirdly, never memorize single English words, make as many associations and connections as possible. Finally, you should keep reciting every day and use flashcards to memorize words and test yourself regularly. Talk to your teachers or classmates if you have any pressure or need help. Also you can do sports to relax yourself.
If you follow these tips, I believe you will remember English words so well. Just keep trying and believe yourself, you will improve a lot every day. Come on!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是电子邮件；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的几个要点均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很抱歉听到你英语考试没考好的消息”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——如何记单词、缓解压力均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“努力尝试并相信自己，你会每天有进步”的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with处理
②learn some spelling rules学习一些拼写规则
③keep reciting坚持背诵
[高分句型]
①Thirdly, never memorize single English words, make as many associations and connections as possible.(祈使句用法)
②Talk to your teachers or classmates if you have any pressure or need help.(if引导的条件状语从句)
（23-24九年级上·河南商丘·期末）
假如你是某中学九年级学生李华，你校广播站的英文节目English Every Day邀请你在节目中给七、八年级的学生分享你学习英语的经验和心得。请你根据下面的图示信息以“How to learn English well”为题写一篇作文，向大家介绍一些有效的英语学习方法。
listen to English programs How to learn English well read English books or magazines
join an English club …
写作要求：1）文中须包含上图提示的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3）词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
How to learn English well
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. It’s a great pleasure for me to share my ways of learning English with you here. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How to learn English well
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. It’s a great pleasure for me to share my ways of learning English with you here.
Firstly, you can improve your listening skills by listening to English programs. Even if they’re too fast to understand, try to listen to key words to get the main idea. Secondly, find something you’re interested in to read, whether it’s an English book or magazine. Thirdly, join an English club so that you can speak to others in English. The more you speak, the better you’ll become at expressing yourself. Fourthly, keep an English diary. Writing down your thoughts and experiences in English, even just a few lines, can help improve your writing skills.
Remember, practice is the key to mastering English. I hope my suggestions are helpful to you.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接开头，具体介绍学习英语的方法；
第二步，总结练习是掌握英语的关键。
[亮点词汇]
① try to do sth努力做某事
② write down记下
③ be helpful to对……有帮助
[高分句型]
①Even if they’re too fast to understand, try to listen to key words to get the main idea（even if引导的让步状语从句）
②Thirdly, join an English club so that you can speak to others in English.（so that引导的目的状语从句）