Self-check
Do you write down all important points about your invention
Do you use different sentence patterns
Do you use proper linking words
Do you add a topic sentence
Do you pay attention to the structure in the text
Do you make your text better with good expressions and beautiful sentences (共10张PPT)
Unit6 Writing
Special Inventions
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Inventions make our life more convenient ...
looks:
It has four wheels./ It looks …
materials:
It’s made of steel…
usage:
It’s used for taking people to other places very quickly.
Invention
Don’t want to get up.
A special bed shaker
Problem:
New Invention:
It’s used for waking up people.
When will it begin to shake
A special bed shaker
When it’s time for you to get up, the bed will start shaking.
It will______ stop _______ you leave the bed.
shake
= It’s used to ________people.
not until
wake up
It’s mainly made of wood and cotton.
It looks nice/ strange/special.
The special bed is not only nice but also useful. It’s mainly made of wood and cotton. It’s used for waking up people and it can help them get up on time. When it’s time for you to get up, the bed will start shaking. It will not stop until you leave the bed.
It’s one of the best ways for people to get up earlier. I think it will be widely used.
It’s_____ cold in winter_____many people have difficulties getting
up.
______________ deal with the problem, a bed shaker was invented.
so
that
To / In order to
It’s so cold in winter that many people have difficulties getting up. In order to deal with the problem, a bed shaker was invented.
a passage
beginning
body
ending
Topic sentence:___________________________
The bed is special and useful.
The bed is ________special ________useful.
not only
but also
As we all know, winter really comes. The weather is so cold that many people have difficulties getting up in the morning. In order to deal with the problem, a bed shaker was invented.
This bed is not only special, but also useful. The bed is made of wood. It’s used for waking up people so that they won’t get up late anymore. If they don’t get up on time, the bed will keep shaking all the time. And it won’t stop until they leave their beds.
Without doubt, it’s one of the best ways for these people to get up earlier. I’m sure this special bed will be widely used.
Beginning (problem)
Body ( introduction to the invention)
Ending(feelings)
A special bed shaker
What other problems do you have in your daily life
What do you want to invent
problem
invention
materials
looks
usage
how it works
beginning
body
ending
Let’s draw a mind map.
My Invention: __________
feelings
Checklist
Self-check Do you write down all important points about your invention
Do you use different sentence patterns
Do you use proper linking words
Do you add a topic sentence
Do you pay attention to the structure in the text
Do you make your text better with good expressions and beautiful sentences
Homework
Polish your writing.
Ask your classmates to check your articles according to the checklist.
Send me your articles via e-mail.
