2024-2025学年上学期高一英语第一次月考试卷（陕西专用）
（考试时间：120分钟 试卷满分：150分）
注意事项：
1．答卷前，考生务必将自己的姓名、考生号等填写在答题卡和试卷指定位置上。
2．回答选择题时，选出每小题答案后，用铅笔把答题卡对应题目的答案标号涂黑。如需改动，用橡皮擦干净后，再选涂其他答案标号。回答非选择题时，将答案写在答题卡上。写在本试卷上无效。
3．考试结束后，将本试卷和答题卡一并交回。
第一部分 听力（共两节，满分 30 分）
第一节（共5小题；每小题1分，满分5分）
听下面5段对话。每段对话后有一个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听完每段对话后，你都有10秒钟的时间来回答有关小题和阅读下一小题。每段对话仅读一遍。
1．What’s the relationship between the two speakers
A．Brother and sister. B．Wife and husband. C．Strangers.
2．What is Counter Strike
A．A football. B．A computer game. C．A movie.
3．Who will be responsible for the accident according to the woman
A．The other driver. B．Dana. C．The man.
4．What did the Jason do last night
A．He got married to Barbara.
B．He proposed to Barbara.
C．He wanted to dance.
5．Which country may be a new destination for Chinese who want to study abroad
A．America. B．France. C．England.
第二节（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）
听下面5段对话或独白。每段对话或独白后有几个小题，从题中所给的A、B、C三个选项中选出最佳选项。听每段对话或独白前，你将有时间阅读各个小题，每小题5秒钟；听完后，各小题将给出5秒钟的作答时间。每段对话或独白读两遍。
听第6段材料，回答6~7小题。
6．Which building is a four-story one
A．The gym. B．The library. C．The fast food restaurant.
7．Where is the noodle shop
A．It’s just behind the American-style fast food restaurant.
B．It’s across the street from school.
C．It’s next to the gym.
听第7段材料，回答8~9小题。
8．Why does the man look so tired
A．He surfed the Internet in the classroom for a long time.
B．He carried the overhead projector from the basement to the fifth floor.
C．He had to go to the classroom on the fifth floor.
9．What does the man think has changed education
A．The overhead projector.
B．A multimedia classroom.
C．Modern advances.
听第8段材料，回答10~12小题。
10．When did the woman meet John and Eric
A．When she did some outdoor activities with some students.
B．When she had a meeting in the Mountain Climbing Club.
C．When she was at Pizza Hut.
11．Who comes from America
A．John. B．Eric. C．The woman.
12．What are the two speakers mainly talking about
A．The two guys—John and Eric.
B．Jade Mountain.
C．Eric and the woman’s date.
听第9段材料，回答13~16小题。
13．What is the woman’s Plan A
A．Going to travel around some countries like Thailand, Japan and Malaysia.
B．Going back to her country to see her parents and old friends.
C．Going to the States with some friends.
14．When will the woman ask her parents for the money
A．When she comes back to the States.
B．When she is probably ill.
C．When it is an emergency.
15．Why does the man think they are going to have a wonderful vacation
A．They will get together again including Zhang Hua and Li Ming during their vacation.
B．The woman will go to her hometown.
C．They will not spend too much money on their vacation.
16．What’s the probable relationship between the two speakers
A．Friends. B．Brother and sister. C．Mother and son.
听第10段材料，回答17~20小题。
17．Where does the speech take place
A．On the flight. B．In the waiting hall. C．On the bus.
18．What’s the destination of this flight
A．China. B．The States. C．Not mentioned.
19．How long will the journey be
A．20 hours and 40 minutes. B．12 hours and 30 minutes. C．20 hours and 30 minutes.
20．Where can the passengers find Dynasty magazine
A．In the seat pocket. B．Near the seat belts. C．By the windows.
第二部分 阅读(共两节, 满分50分)
第一节(共15小题:每小题2.5分, 满分37.5分)
阅读下列短文, 从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出最佳选项。
A
A river cruise (乘船游览) is an ideal opportunity to explore cities and landscapes beyond the ocean’s reach, while you are enjoying fine dining and exceptional service of waterways. The grand river destinations listed below ensure there’s a dream holiday tailored for you.
Nile River Cruise
You’ll spend a few days in Cairo, tasting local food and visiting ancient sites with a full-day city tour that
takes in the Egyptian Museum and a visit to the famous Khan El Khalili market to pick up some local produce. Moving on, you’ll enjoy a relaxing cruise down the Nile with some short trips along the way.
Mekong River Cruise
The first few days will be spent on land where you’ll discover Ho Chi Minh City. On your cruise, you’ll make your way to Cambodia and discover floating villages, endless rice fields and breathtaking scenery. A visit to Cambodia’s Angkor Wat is uniquely included, a UNESCO World Heritage site, where you’ll have the memorable time when the sun goes down.
Rhine River Cruise
With an experienced guide, we can enjoy Amsterdam before boarding the MS Amadeus ship where we’ll discover cities like Cologne, Basel, and Strasbourg, each filled with rich history and culture. Optional short trips ashore include a visit to the famous wine region of Moselle Valley, where you can taste local wines.
Danube River Cruise
The holiday begins in Munich, followed by a conducted city tour through the German city of Passau before cruising on the MS Amadeus ship. Along the cruise, you’ll stop off in Emmer Dorf, where you’ll enjoy a guided vineyard tour. You’ll witness the operatic beauty of Vienna, the bohemian wonder of Budapest and all the fantastic Eastern European charm of Bratislava. An invite to the captain’s grand dinner awaits you as the ship cruises into Linz.
21．What can you do in Cairo
A．Restore ancient sites. B．Join in beach activities.
C．Learn to cook specials. D．Shop at a local market.
22．What highlights the Mekong River Cruise
A．Going sightseeing on land. B．Surveying floating villages.
C．Experiencing rice planting. D．Witnessing the beauty of sunset.
23．What do the last two cruises have in common
A．They offer a big dinner party. B．They serve local wine tasting.
C．They provide a guided city tour. D．They allow access to Moselle Valley.
B
The Summer Olympic Games this year are in Paris, France, which does not have an ocean. So, how do organizers plan to present competition in the sport of surfing They are taking that Olympic event in a small coastal
village called Teahupo’o in the South Pacific country of French Polynesia. Hundreds of people are expected to visit Teahupo’o to watch the sport, as the surfers go out onto the famous waves from July 27 to August 4．
Proposed preparations for the event included building temporary housing, roads, and even a large structure out on the water. The work called for drilling into a coral reef. However, opposition to the plans quickly grew. Environmentalists, locals and surfers joined forces to protect Teahupo’o’s culture, its corals and other sea life.
For locals, Teahupo’o beach was a“secret spot” with a special energy known as “mana”, and they want that special quality protected. There are concerns that a week of Olympic competition there could destroy the “mana”.“It was too much for us, a big change,” said Levy, a Tahitian surfer and a volunteere on a local environmental organization.
Some people worry that the drilling into the reef will disrupt the ecosystem and attract a dangerous algae (海藻). If fish eat the algae, people who eat the fish can become sick.“The water is where we get our dinner,” 22-year-old Maitei, a spearfisher catching fish to feed his family, said.
Local Tahitians’ worry were confirmed when a boat working on some Olympic construction hit a piece of the reef and broke it. “In Polynesian culture, gods are everywhere in nature, in the coral, in the ocean. If we break a coral, we break a home,” Cindy Otcenasek, a local official, said.
No new buildings or roads are welcome for the locals. And the organizers are adjusting their plans as a result. For example, they will not be building any Olympic housing. Instead, athletes will stay on a nearby boat. Homes of locals will serve other Olympic housing needs. Judges will watch the competition from the platform. The whole world is ready for the great events and the impact.
24．Why is the 2024 Olympics surfing to be held in Teahupo’o
A．It is the sister city of Paris. B．It is the best choice for the sport.
C．It aims to develop its tourism. D．It has favorable geographic location.
25．What makes Teahupo’o beach special to local Tahitians
A．The rich fishing resources. B．The surfing spots.
C．The power of mana. D．The unique corals.
26．Why are some local people opposed to the Olympic plans in Teahupo’o
A．They are worried the event will damage the environment.
B．They want more construction and development in the area.
C．They think the event will bring too many tourists.
D．They don’t like the sport of surfing.
27．What are the organizers doing to address the local concerns in Teahupo’o
A．Building new roads and housing for the event.
B．Cancelling the Olympic surfing competition.
C．Relocating the event to a different location.
D．Adjusting their plans to minimize the impact.
C
Deceleration isn’t really in the runner’s vocabulary. For many of the people who do it, from Olympic champions to 5K enthusiasts, running is the pursuit of speed itself; a sport defined by personal bests, competition and striving. Slow That’s a four-letter word.
Until quite recently, slow running has become “A Thing”, backed not just by wellness experts on Instagram, but also by a growing number of coaches, amateur runners and exercise scientists, too. The thinking is that going slow could be a fast way to enjoy the benefits of exercise.
Slow running is usually defined as a pace at which you can comfortably hold a conversation. Think of it as an effort of 4 or 5 on a scale of 1 - 10, where 10 is an all-out sprint (冲刺). If you know your sports science, it’s referred to as ‘zone 2 exercise’ and it’s a physiological sweet spot that can improve and extend your life.
So, what makes the unhurried approach so healthful As well as improving the strength and pumping capacity of your heart, slow running can avoid metabolic diseases and encourage your body to use fat for energy. Slow runners also recover faster and are less likely to suffer tiredness or injuries from overtraining. They’re also more likely to feel good.
“There are huge positives for emotional health,” says Gordon, an exercise physiologist at Anglia Ruskin University in southeast England. “The benefits for things like mood state, depression and anxiety don’t really decrease any more if we increase the exercise intensity. And then there’s the social aspect. One of the things to emphasize with slow running is, you can actually have a conversation!” Gordon believes that promoting slow running might encourage more people to exercise and stick with it, partly because you can do it with friends and partly because there’s no pressure to perform.
28．What is the most important for a runner on the sports field
A．Speed. B．Health. C．Interest. D．Enjoyment.
29．What does the underlined word “backed” mean in Paragraph 2
A．Explained. B．Defined. C．Supported. D．Proved.
30．What are the last two paragraphs mainly about as to slow running
A．Its definition. B．Its benefits. C．The training. D．Its popularity.
31．What does Gordon say about slow running
A．It benefits a lot to mental health. B．It is key to increase the intensity.
C．It offers a chance to make friends. D．It is no easy work to stick with it.
D
There are millions — possibly billions — of ponds (池塘).Yet for a century or so, they are poorly understood and scientists have paid them very little attention. This neglect (忽视) might not have mattered if it were not for increasing evidence that ponds are extremely important habitats for wildlife.
Ponds are being shown more bio-diverse than rivers or lakes. Interestingly, this seems to be partly due to the small size of ponds, which allows them to have a wide range of conditions. The community in a pond with clear water will be very different to that in a nearby seasonal pond made cloudy by farm animals. Ponds show far greater variation than rivers and streams, as flowing water tends to equalize water chemistry.
So why have we ignored such a vital part of the natural world A key reason appears to be the bias (偏见) we humans have where we assume that if something is small, it can’t be all that important. Rather than study ponds, scientists in the past typically headed for the largest lake or river they could find.
Most of us also devalue ponds because we assume they are artificial habitats: we look at the human-made examples around us and don’t realize that these waters have a deeply ancient origin. In our new book Ponds, Pools and Puddles, we show that ponds have clearly existed on Earth as long as there has been land and water and the geological record shows they have been a constant presence.
Now, views are taking on new shapes. Last year, the Ramsar Convention, an international agreement, introduced a proposal on small wetlands, including ponds, giving crucial recognition to them. And the European Union-funded PONDER FUL project is gathering data on Europe’s ponds.
In a world where freshwater faces big challenges, creating and protecting ponds provides a ray of hope: a piece of natural ecological (生态的) engineering we can easily achieve to help support one of the most threatened bits of the environment.
32．What may contribute to the biodiversity of ponds
A．The nearby animals. B．The constant temperature water.
C．Their diverse conditions. D．Their regularly changing conditions.
33．What caused ponds to be neglected
A．People’s love for nature. B．Insufficient ponds for research.
C．People’s mistaken belief of ponds. D．Lacking scientific research methods.
34．Why is “PONDERFUL project” mentioned
A．To promote the Ramsar Convention.
B．To prepare for the research on ponds
C．To highlight the importance of small wetlands.
D．To show the changing attitudes towards ponds.
35．What can we conclude from the last paragraph
A．Penny wise, pound foolish. B．A small key opens a big door.
C．Small streams make great rivers D．A bird in the hand is worth two in the bush.
第二节(共5小题:每小题2. 5分, 满分12. 5分)
阅读下面短文, 从短文后的选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。选项中有两项为多余选项。
I would feel ashamed every time I receive a new package (包裹) on my doorstep. I know that buying new stuff is bad for the planet. But every time I buy something, I get some happiness that’s hard to give up.
Recently a new book has given me new insights: 36 It’s the way our brains have evolved (进化). And there may be a way to break the cycle.We are evolved from simple organisms that survived because their networks of nerve cells learned to repeat rewarding (有益的) decisions. Today, we have billions of action cells in the brain. They are always forming connections to strengthen rewarding behavior. 37 We seek out those releases in dopamine, and at the same time repeat the actions that lead to them.
38 Maybe you weren’t even thinking about buying watercolor paints. Then something reminded that you like painting, and you searched online and found they were less expensive than you expected. When they arrived on your doorstep, they were better than you thought. Your brain will be drawn to repeat the behavior that got you something unexpected and good.
The best way to break the overbuying habits is not to stop buying things completely.
39 Imagine you’ve formed a habit of eating chocolate before bed for comfort, even though you know you don’t need the calories. You can try having milk with cocoa powder as a healthier replacement, which provides similar comfort. Once you start losing weight, the reward of being able to fit into your old clothes will feel
as good as the chocolate once does. 40 Buying used items satisfies our desire to acquire. It gives us the same good feeling of an unexpected reward without consuming more resources.
A．We need that same replacement for shopping.
B．Whether that approach would work is up for debate.
C．Our brains especially like it, and release more dopamine.
D．My desire to keep buying things isn’t necessarily a personal fault.
E．In this process, dopamine is released, helping us learn how to obtain a reward.
F．The good feeling connected to unexpected rewards is partly why we like shopping.
G．A better solution may be to replace the old, long-term harmful rewards with new ones.
第三部分语言运用(共两节，满分30分)
第一节(共15小题:每小题1分，满分15分)
阅读下面短文, 从每题所给的A、B、C、D四个选项中选出可以填入空白处的最佳选项。
What can you see if you walk around the Rahway Trail in the South Mountain Reservation of Millburn You may 41 more than just leaves, trees and animals. You’ll 42 fairies (小精灵) among the leaves. Small houses are 43 in the tree trunks and branches — a surprisingly sweet 44 in an otherwise normal-looking forest.
The fairy homes were built by volunteers. The 45 to add small houses to the landscape came from a woman named Therese Ojibway. She wanted her son, who 46 from autism (自闭症), to have a safe space to explore in the 47 . “So, she found this Rahway Trail and 48 leaving small fairies here and there, creating something for her son and 49 to search for,” said Julie Gould, one of the keepers of the trail.
The South Mountain Reservation noticed the 50 houses around the forest. When they 51 that Ojibway was making the little fairies by hand, they decided to allow her to continue building her 52 kingdom, which is now known as the Fairy Trail. “She thought this was a 53 of getting little children into nature and fueling their imaginations,” said Beth Kelly, another trail 54 .
Ojibway and her son moved out of the area a few years ago, but their fairy trail legacy (遗产) 55 .
41．A．pick up B．come across C．take away D．watch for
42．A．explore B．search C．frighten D．discover
43．A．hidden B．rested C．hung D．left
44．A．show B．memory C．sight D．place
45．A．goal B．idea C．imagination D．design
46．A．suffered B．died C．recovered D．escaped
47．A．river B．valley C．house D．forest
48．A．enjoyed B．allowed C．started D．advised
49．A．parents B．others C．fairies D．herself
50．A．extra B．similar C．little D．old
51．A．warned B．learned C．responded D．advertised
52．A．magical B．distant C．lonely D．romantic
53．A．part B．matter C．result D．way
54．A．keeper B．member C．owner D．visitor
55．A．catches on B．shows up C．lives on D．goes up
第二节(共10小题:每小题1.5分，满分15分)
阅读下面短文，在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。
Thanks to a series of protection 56 (measure), the Dabry’s sturgeon (达氏鲟), an endangered species under China’s first-class national protection, can now be spotted again in the Yangtze River.
The Dabry’s sturgeon is also known as the Yangtze sturgeon, 57 (name) after its habitat, the upper Yangtze River. Since 2000, it had lost its natural ability to reproduce 58 a result of over fishing and water pollution, among other factors. The International Union for Conservation of Nature declared the species extinct in the wild in July 2022.
According to the Ministry of Agriculture and Rural Affairs, underwater cameras have recently shot the natural spawning (产卵) of the Yangtze sturgeon, 59 (indicate) that mature individuals in the artificial Yangtze sturgeon population have the ability to reproduce in the wild.
Overfishing was once a serious challenge, 60 endangered the Yangtze sturgeon and other fish species in the Yangtze River. 61 (recover) the biodiversity along the river, China 62 (carry) out a full fishing ban (禁令) in 332 conservation areas of the Yangtze River basin in January 2020.
63 (surprising), many fishermen have now become protectors of fish in the Yangtze River. Zhang Song, who had depended on fishing for 64 living since 2000, volunteered to become a member of the fish protection team in Wanzhou District. The Yangtze River Protection Law came into force on March 1,2021. With this law, Zhang’s work became much 65 (easy) than before.
第四部分 写作(共两节, 满分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
66．假设你校英文网站征集运动故事，鼓励学生参与体育运动。请以“My Sports Story”为题分享你的运动故事，内容包括：
1.你的爱好；
2.运动故事；
3.你的收获。
注意: 1.词数应为80词左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
My Sports Story
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第二节(满分25分)
67．阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
36-year-old Mary was a single mother living in a small town in Cleveland, Ohio with her 3-year-old twin sons, Jack and James. She worked hard to provide for her children, doing a few part-time jobs to make ends meet. In spite of the challenges, Mary managed to give them a happy and stable (稳定的) childhood.
One Saturday morning, Mary was at home with her children, preparing breakfast for them. Jack was beside her while James was playing alone in the bedroom next to the kitchen. It was a typical weekend, filled with laughter and warmth. Little did they know something unexpected was just around the comer.
As Mary was busy with the food, a fire broke out in the kitchen. Panicked, Mary took hold of Jack and rushed towards the front door. They made it to safety only to find James remained stuck inside. Mary put Jack down and turned back to get James out, but in such a hurry and panic, she missed a step and fell on the ground. Her right ankle got sprained (扭伤) so seriously that she couldn’t stand up. Mary sat on the ground helplessly, her tears mixed with screams, “My kid is still in the house. Somebody, help me!”
At that very moment, Simon, 52, a former army soldier in the same community as Mary, happened to pass her house and saw the terrible scene. He immediately ran across the yard to ask the crying mother where her kid exactly was. In a shaking voice, Mary responded, “In the bedroom next to the kitchen.” The fire spread quickly and the house was filled with thick smoke. Simon looked around and saw a blanket hanging beside a pool full of water in the middle of the yard.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Without hesitation, Simon took action.
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Simon rushed out of the burning house with James in his arms.
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参考答案
英语·答案及评分标准
第一部分 听力（共两节，满分30分）
1—5 CBABB 6—10 BABCA 11—15 AABCA 16—20 AABBA
第二部分 阅读（共两节，满分50分）
第一节（共15小题；每小题2.5分，满分37.5分）
21．D 22．D 23．C
24．D 25．C 26．A 27.D
28．A 29．C 30．B 31．A
32．C 33．C 34．D 35．B
第二节（共5小题；每小题2.5分，满分12.5分）
36．D 37．E 38．F 39．G 40．A
第三部分 语言运用（共两节，满分30分）
第一节（共15小题；每小题1分，满分15分）
41．B 42．D 43．A 44．C 45．B 46．A 47．D 48．C 49．B 50．C 51．B 52．A 53．D 54．A 55．C
第二节 （共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
56．measures 57．named 58．as 59．indicating 60．which 61．To recover 62．carried 63．Surprisingly 64．a 65．easier
第四部分 写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节（满分15分）
【参考范文】
My Sports Story
Among all sports I like swimming best. I fell in love with it quite by accident.
When I was younger, I never thought I would meet a drowning child needing my help. But I couldn’t swim at that time. Although I was very nervous, I managed to draw him out of the river with a long stick. I thought if I
could swim, I would have helped him more easily and quickly. From then on, I have paid special attention to swimming. Every afternoon, I go swimming and I always ask my PE teacher to instruct me to practice in a right way.
Now, besides swimming, I like football, basketball, running, cycling and so on. Sports help me keep healthy, happy, and energetic.
应用文写作评分标准
一、评分原则
1. 本题总分为15分，按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 词数少于60和多于100的，从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差，以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
档次 描述
第五档 (13～15分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 - 覆盖所有内容要点。 - 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 - 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但因尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 - 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档 (10～12分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 - 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。 - 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 - 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语
法结构或词汇所致。 - 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档 (7～9分) 基本完成了试题规定的任务。 - 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。 - 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。 - 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。 - 应用简单的语句间连接成分，使全文内容连贯。 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档 (4～6分) 未适当完成试题规定的任务。 - 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。 - 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 - 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。 - 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档 (1～3分) 未完成试题规定的任务。 - 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。 - 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。 - 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。 - 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。 信息未能传达给读者。
0分 未能传达给读者任何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。
第二节（满分25分）
【参考范文】
Without hesitation, Simon took action. Dipping the blanket in the water pool and covering his head with it for necessary protection, he rushed into the house. Unable to see things clearly through the smoke and fire, Simon
lowered himself to the ground, stretched his hands and felt his way forward until he reached the bedroom. Just then, a faint voice of a child caught his attention. Following the sound, he finally found James lying in a comer, frightened and helpless. He grabbed James, wrapped him in the blanket and made his way back towards the open door.
Simon rushed out of the burning house with James in his arms. Seeing James carried to safety, Mary breathed a sigh of relief. At that moment, firefighters arrived at the scene and put out the fire. Then Simon, Mary and her children were all sent to a nearby hospital, where they received timely medical care. Simon’s heroic act saved James’ life. Mary couldn’t thank him enough for his selflessness and bravery. But Simon said smilingly, “It was no big deal. I just did what I was supposed to do.” This experience brought the community closer, and Simon’s courageous act inspired others to consider what they would do in similar situations.
读后续写评分原则
一、评分标准
1. 本题总分为25分，按七个档次进行评分。
2. 评分时，主要从续写内容、语言表达、篇章结构三个方面考虑，具体为：
（1）创造内容的质量，续写的完整性及与原文情景的融洽度。
（2）所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。
（3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
3. 评分时，应先根据作答的具体情况确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
4. 评分时还应注意：
（1）词数少于120的，酌情扣分；
（2）书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分；
（3）单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求
第七档（22—25分）
创造了新颖、丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高；
使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响理解；
自然有效地使用了段落间、语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。
第六档（18—21分）
创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原文情境融洽度较高；
使用了比较多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达比较流畅，有个别错误，但不影响理解；
比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，意义比较连贯。
第五档（15—17分）
创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文情境相关；
使用了比较恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达方式不够多样性，表达有些许错误，但基本不影响理解；
使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。
第四档（11—14分）
创造了基本完整的故事内容，但有的情节不够合理或逻辑性不强，与原文情境基本相关；
使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有部分语言错误和不恰当之处，个别部分影响理解；
有语句衔接的意识，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。
第三档（6—10分）
内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文有一定程度脱节；
所用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多且比较低级，影响理解；
未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义欠连贯。
第二档（1—5分）
内容和逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原文情境基本脱节；
所使用的词汇非常有限，语法结构单调，错误极多，严重影响理解。
几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。
第一档（0分）
未作答；所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判；所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完全不相关。
