Unit 1Where did you go on vacation Section B 写作课件(共18张PPT)人教版八年级上册

(共18张PPT)
How was your summer holiday
热skr人
忙skr人
熬skr人
游戏真skr
书面表达之游记
实质：用一般过去时来记录一件事情并表达自己的情感
暑假你和你的家人一起去马来西亚的槟城山旅游，请把你第一天的所见所闻写成一篇作文。
要求：
时态正确，语句通顺，书写规范；
不少于80词。
暑假你和你的家人一起去了马来西亚的槟城山旅游，请把你第一天的所见所闻写成一篇作文。
要求：
时态正确，语句通顺，书写规范；
不少于80词。
审
第一人称
主要用：一般过去时
时间
地点
人物
具体活动
感受
暑假你和你的家人一起去马来西亚的槟城山旅游，请把你第一天的所见所闻写成一篇作文。
要求：
时态正确，语句通顺，书写规范；
不少于80词。
例文
I arrived in Penang in Malaysia this morning with my family. It was sunny and hot, so we decided to go to the beach near our hotel. My sister and I tried paragliding. I felt like I was a bird. It was so exciting. For lunch, we had something very special—Malaysian yellow noodles. They were delicious. In the afternoon, we rode bicycles to Georgetown. There are a lot of new buildings now, but many of the old buildings are still there. In Weld Quay, a really old place in Georgetown, we saw the houses of the Chinese traders from 100 years ago. I wonder what life was like here in the past. I really enjoyed walking around the town.
审：分段
第一段：I arrived in Penang in Malaysia this morning with my family.
第二段：It was sunny and hot, so we decided to go to the beach near our hotel. My sister and I tried paragliding. I felt like I was a bird. It was so exciting. For lunch, we had something very special—Malaysian yellow noodles. They were delicious. In the afternoon, we rode bicycles to Georgetown. There are a lot of new buildings now, but many of the old buildings are still there. In Weld Quay, a really old place in Georgetown, we saw the houses of the Chinese traders from 100 years ago. I wonder what life was like here in the past.
第三段：I really enjoyed walking around the town.
开门见山，写出时间，地点，人物
按照时间顺序：做了什么事情，感受是什么；或原因是什么。
列举三到四个。
抒发感情，升华主题
按照时间顺序：做了什么事情，感受是什么；或原因是什么。
列举三到四个。
Topic : Holidays
在你成长的历程中，总会有些东西让你感到难忘，也许是一次小小的聚会；也许是一本回味无穷的好书；也许是一次留下美好回忆的旅行……请以“My pleasant trip”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1. 时态正确，语句通顺，书写规范；
2. 不少于80词。
审
practice
在你成长的历程中，总会有些东西让你感到难忘，也许是一次小小的聚会；也许是一本回味无穷的好书；也许是一次留下美好回忆的旅行……请以“My pleasant trip”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1. 时态正确，语句通顺，书写规范；
2. 不少于80词。
审
practice
在你成长的历程中，总会有些东西让你感到难忘，也许是一次小小的聚会；也许是一本回味无穷的好书；也许是一次留下美好回忆的旅行……请以“My pleasant trip”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1. 时态正确，语句通顺，书写规范；
2. 不少于80词。
废 话
开门见山，写出时间，地点，人物
（按照时间顺序）做了什么事情，感受是什么；或原因是什么。（可加入天气描写）
列举三到四个。
抒发感情，升华主题
结构
我上周末过的非常愉快，因为我和我的______一起去了______.
我们早上__时间__在__地点__集合。描写天气。描写心情。我们乘大巴去，路程大约一个小时。
到达之后，我们（事件1+感受）；（事件2+感受）；（事件3+感受）
我们下午_____返程回家。我们虽然很累但是很高兴。多么______的一天啊！
去了哪里？做了什么？怎么去的？
所见所闻
内容
吃了什么（特色）？感受是什么？
特殊要求：使用第一单元的重点单词和句型
1. 复合不定代词
2. arrive in/at或reach+地点或get to+地点
3. quite a few+n. (pl.)
4. wonder+宾语从句
5. decide to do
6. try to do/doing
7. feel like+从句/doing
8. 形容词+enough/enough+名词
9. Seem to do或seem to be + adj. /n或seem that +从句
1. so…that
2. 主句 because+原因状语从句
3. 感叹句
在你成长的历程中，总会有些东西让你感到难忘，也许是一次小小的聚会；也许是一本回味无穷的好书；也许是一次留下美好回忆的旅行……请以“My pleasant trip”为题写一篇英语短文。
要求：
1. 时态正确，语句通顺，书写规范；
2. 不少于80词。
1. 复合不定代词
2. arrive in/at或reach+地点或get to+地点
3. quite a few+n复数
4. wonder+宾语从句
5. decide to do
6. try to do/doing
7. feel like+从句/doing
8. 形容词+enough/enough+名词
9. seem to do或seem to be+adj/n或seem that +从句
1. so…that
2. 主句 because+原因状语从句
3. 感叹句
The visit to Beijing
Last summer, I went to the Beijing with my family. I wondered what life it was like in Beijing because I have never been there.
It was fine that day. We got there by train early in the morning. We decided to go the Great Wall first. When we got there, there were many other visitors there. we saw beautiful scenery(风景). How beautiful it was! We took quite a few photos there. And we also visited somewhere interesting. We went to a fun park. we tried paragliding there and I felt like I was a bird. No one seemed to be tired that day. We had something special ---Beijing duck. It was happy enough for me to eat Beijing duck.
I was tired after traveling, but I really enjoyed visiting Beijing!