鞍山市2016高考英语二轮：短文改错选练（1）及答案
(2015·商丘市一模)
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参考答案：
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1．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：plan前加to plan应用不定式作宾语，故buy前加to。
2．命题立意：考查副词。
解析：删除back give back归还。此处应是“给”，而不是归还，故去掉back。
3．命题立意：考查状语从句。
解析：but→since/because but后的句子是前面分句的原因，故but → since/because。
4．命题立意：考查副词。
解析：hardly→hard hardly几乎不，简直不；hard辛苦地。work hard辛勤工作。
5．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：spent→spending 该句的谓语动词是work，此处应用spend的现在分词作伴随状语。故spent改为spending。
6．命题立意：考查动词形式。
解析：buried→buries bu ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ried与前面的loves是并列的谓语动词，在人称和时态上应保持一致，故buried改为buries。
7．命题立意：考查代词用法。
解析：all→both 此处提到的是父母两个人应用both，故all→both。
8．命题立意：考查名词。
解析：thank→thanks express one's thanks表达某人的感激之情，此处的thank常用复数。
9．命题立意：考查形容词。
解析：relaxing→relaxed 根据本句的主语是they，应用relaxed感到放松的。
10．命题立意：考查介词。
解析：with→of 根据固定短语take care of照顾。
短文改错。
Li Ming and Wang ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )Ying are two students of Senior Three. They all work hard but they have different learning method. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher. As a result, he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework. But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning. She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class. Because this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.
【参考答案】2.
【小题1】all 改成both
【小题2】 method.改成methods
【小题3】listen改成listening
【小题4】Miss改成misses
【小题5】 But 改成So
【小题6】the改成a
【小题7】attentive改成 attentively
【小题8】said 改成says
【小题9】Because后面加of
【小题10】去掉is
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短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或
修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。
Dear sir,
Last night I got ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )caught in the heavy rain on the way home. As the result, I got a bad cold with a headache. I felt very tiring. My mother took me see the doctor. After the examination, the doctor told me to make it easy. He said it was nothing seriously. He also told me to have a good rest for a couple of days, take the medicines on time and drunk more boiled water. So I have to ask you a three-day leave. After I recover, I would try to make up the missing lessons. If there are anything I do not understand, could I turn to you for help
Yours ,
Mike
【参考答案】3.
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短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分
My mother is a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )teacher work in a key high school. She is too busy that she often has to get up early and stay up late. In addition to this, she hardly has any times to take exercise. She has been on poor health for some time. My father and I are worried that she may fall ill if she works too hard. These days I’m thinking why to develop my mother’s interest in playing sports. Considered that today is Mother’s Day, I decided buy a pair of jogging shoes for her. I secret put them on the desk in her study. When my mother entered into her study this evening, she looked surprised, but she immediately realized my intention. She promises that she would go jogging every evening.
【参考答案】4.
work改成working too改成so times改成time on改成in
why改成how considered改成considering decided后面加to
secret改成secretly entered后面去掉into promises改成promised
短文改错(共l0小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)
(注意：在试题卷上作答无效)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )文，请你修改你同桌写的一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is known to all th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )at our students of today have to fix our attention on our lessons, so we know few of society. A holiday is the best time and the best chance to make up for that. Take a part-time job is a good form of social practice. That we have learned in books and in class can’t have the same important effect us as what we have learned through personal practice. In social practice, we can surely make a progress in both knowledge or practical ability. Beside, when we take a part-time job, we may got paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say senior school students should take part-time jobs in their holidays, if possibly.
【参考答案】5.
It is known to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) all that we students of today have to fix our attention on our lessons, so we know little of society. A holiday is the best time and the best chance to make up for that. Taking a part-time job is a good form of social practice. What we have learned in books and in class can’t have the same important effect 加on us as what we have learned through personal practice. In social practice, we can surely make 去掉a progress in both knowledge and practical ability. Besides, when we take a part-time job, we may get paid more or less to help our family. Thus, I will say senior school students should take part-time jobs in their holidays, if possible.鞍山市2016高考英语二轮：短文改错选练（3）及答案
(2015·黑龙江佳木斯重点中学一模)
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As scheduled, we had E ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nglish Talent Show today. The purpose of this programme is develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and spoken. The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story told and so on. The Show will begin at two o'clock this afternoon at the Student Center. Dear guests, you are welcome to take a part in our activities. I hope we students will benefit great from your presence.
I sincerely hope you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.
参考答案：
Dear American guests，
On behalf our schoo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )l, I would like to express our welcome to you. We are lucky to have here in the middle of our English Week activities.
As scheduled, we English Talent Show today. The purpose of this programme is develop our interest in English learning and practical abilities in listening and . The programme consists of the following activities: recitation, singing, word spelling, story and so on. The Show will begin at two o'clock this afternoon at the Student Center. Dear guests, you are welcome to take a part in our activities. I hope we students will benefit from your presence.
I sincerely you a pleasant time with us. Thank you.
1．命题立意：考查介词短语。
解析：for→of on behalf of “代表”是固定搭配。
2．命题立意：考查形容词。
解析：warmly→warm welcome这儿是名词，应当用warm作定语。
3．命题立意：考查代词。
解析：us→you 逻辑错误；这儿应当用you代指American guests。
4．命题立意：考查时态。
解析：had→have today表示“现在”的时间状语，故应用一般现在时态。
5．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：develop前加to 不定式作表语；不可以用动词原形直接作表语。
6．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：spoken→speaking 介词后应当用动名词作宾语，speaking与listening并列。
7．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：told→telling 最简单的办法是，看看前面的word spelling。
8．命题立意：考查冠词。
解析：去掉a take part in 参加是固定短语，当part前有定语修饰时，定语前加不定冠词。
9．命题立意：考查副词。
解析：great→greatly greatly作状语，修饰benefit。
10．命题立意：考查动词。
解析：hope→wish hope不能接双宾语，用wish。
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词；
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】5
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短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（__），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】6.
troubles改为trouble;
arrive后加in 或at;
Therefore改为However;
alone改为lonely, he改为they;
quick改为quickly, may be depend on中删去be；
other前加the;
began改为begin, satisfying改为satisfied.
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】1.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】2.
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(2015·长春市质量检测二)
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Yours respectfully，
Wang Yong
参考答案：
Dear manager,
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I am a 25 yea ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )r old young man graduatedfrom the Foreign Languages Department of Jilin University. I have been English guide for two years after graduation. As a result, my oral English is pretty . I have great interest the job. I much confidence in myself. If I am given to the job, I can assure you I will do my best to do it well. I'd like to meet you at your to discuss the possibility of working in your company. An early reply to my application will be appreciated.
Yours respectfully，
Wang Yong
1.命题立意： 考查名词单复数的使用。
解析：positions→position 作者申请的是一份工作，所以应用单数名词position。
2.命题立意：考查反身代词。
解析：me→myself introduce的宾语与主语I是同一人，应用反身代词。故me改为myself。
3.命题立意：考查非谓语动词/定语从句。
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4.命题立意：考查冠词。
解析：English前a改为an English一词的发音最前面是元音，所以应用an。
5. 命题立意：考查形容词。
解析：well→good 此处应用good作表语，well做形容词表示“身体健康的”。故well改为good。
6.命题立意：考查介词。
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8.命题立意：考查代词。
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10. 命题立意：考查副词。
解析：high→highly appreciated是过去分词，应用副词形式来修饰。故将high改为highly。
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线， 并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者 ( 从第11处起 ) 不计分。
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Friday.
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【参考答案】2
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.短文改错
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只充许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】4.
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短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除；把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】6.
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【参考答案】1.
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2．命题立意：考查连词。
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短文改错（10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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【参考答案】3.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】5.
devoted改为devotes, class改为classes, deeply改为deep,
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came up改为came up with, relaxing改为relaxed,
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。
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【参考答案】1.
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Dear Mandy，
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1. 命题立意：考查副词。
解析：especial→especially 此处应由副词修饰介词短语in maths。故especial改为especially。
2. 命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：go前加to want后跟不定式作宾补。故go前加to。
3.命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：study→studying studying作work hard的伴随状语。故将study改为studying。
4.命题立意：考查时态。
解析：said→says 根据前后语境应用一般现在时，故said改为says。
5.命题立意：考查状语从句。
解析：like→as like前有as，as...as...连接比较状语从句，故like改为as。
6.命题立意：考查连词。
解析：and→but 前后分句是转折关系，应将and改为but。
7.命题立意：考查定语从句。
解析：去掉it I like是thing的定语从句，引导词that作like的宾语已经省略，不能再出现it作宾语，故去掉it。
8．命题立意：考查名词。
解析：year→years for years好多年。故将year改为years。
9．命题立意：考查介词。
解析：in→on/over waste time on/over sth.在某事上浪费时间。故in改为on/over。
10．命题立意：考查形容词。
解析：puzzling→puzzled 主语是I，应用puzzled作表语，“感到迷惑的”，故将puzzling改为puzzled。
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】6
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
请你修改以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As we all know, tr ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )avelling can be an excited experience. Let me give you some advices that you have to pay attention. You can find out more about your destination by surf the internet before you set out. You needn’t take too many cash. Since it can be very convenient to pay in cash, using cheques is much more reliable. In additional, it will be wise of you to take an umbrella in case of it should rain. And if you are to travel abroad, you’d better understand the cultural diversity. Keep this in mind that being polite in foreign countries can help you had a wonderful trip.
【参考答案】2.改错：
1: excited-exciting 2: advices-advice 3.attention 后面加 to
4: surf-surfing 5.many-much 6. Since—Though
7. additional-addition 8.in case of去掉of 9. this-it 10. had-have
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分
On Saturday ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )afternoon, Li Hua and Wang Ping, members of “Green Eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground. They picked it out and found it wounded. Think it might die without timely help, they took it to home. They made a nest for it but fed it on rice and water. The lucky birds recovered soon. When it was time for the bird fly away, they felt pity but were very delighted. I think it’s worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respect for nature. Only by changing the way that we treat the environment can we get along good with it.
【参考答案】3.
was---were catch---caught out---up Think---Thinking
to home---home but---and birds---bird
fly---to fly him---them good---well
短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
As is kn ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )own, that it is interesting to teach children to swim while they are still babies. Most large town in Florida and California have already run particularly lessons for babies. The idea has quickly spread to Europe which, in several countries, special courses were now offered to children who are from 7 to 24 months old. The first step is to have child get rid of the fear with water. Next, he is teaching to float in water. Once he can do that naturally and can swim with fear, the child can master the technique and push him forward through water.
【参考答案】4.
第一句：去掉that
第二句：towns
第三句：particular
第四句：which改成where
第五句：were改成are
第六句：have与child之间加a
第七句：with water 改成 of water
第八句：taught
第九句：without
第十句：himself
