2016高考二轮英语：短文改错训练（5）及答案
(2015·沈阳市郊联体二模)
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参考答案：
Mr. Smith is a traffic ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) policeman， works very hard. One day, Mr. Smith as well as his wife taking a walk along the seashore. Suddenly he heard cry. “Help! Help！” Following the direction of the cry, he saw a man struggling in the water. Without ， he threw off his coat, jumped into the waves, and swam to the man fast as he could. Finally he was able to grasp the man by the arm and pulled him the waves until he reached the shore. His wife ran up to help the man. He was excited to say a word. All the people there around Mr. Smith. They cheered him up and raised him in the air.
1.命题立意：考查定语从句。
解析：which→who 定语从句的先行词是policeman，应用who引导非限制性定语从句。故which改为who。
2．命题立意：考查主谓一致。
解析：were→was as well as连接主语时，谓语动词与as well as前的名词或代词保持一致。故were改为was。
3.命题立意：考查冠词。
解析：cry前加a cry为名词，前应加不定冠词，故在其前加a。
4.命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：drown→drowning 此处是正在溺水的男士，drown应用现在分词形式，故drown改为drowning。
5.命题立意：考查名词。
解析：hesitate→hesitati ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )on without为介词，后跟名词、代词、动名词作宾语，故hesitate改为hesitation。
6．命题立意：考查副词。
解析：so→as as...as one can/could某人尽可能……，应将so改为as。
7.命题立意：考查介词。
解析：from→through through the waves穿越海浪，故from改为through。
8.命题立意：考查句式。
解析：very→too too...to do...太……而不能做……。
9.命题立意：考查时态。
解析：crowd→crowded 这是发生在过去的事情，crowd应用过去时。故crowd改为crowded。
10.命题立意：考查副词。
解析：and前的up去掉 cheer欢呼，cheer up加油，故将up去掉。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】5.
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短文改错
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【参考答案】6.
1. going→ go. 2. look— looking 3. losing→ lost.
4. 去掉to. 5. that→ which. 6. the→ a.
7. more→ much. 8. climb→ climbed. 9. by→ with. 10. done→ doing.
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此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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【参考答案】
76．√ 77. there→ where 78. surprised→ surprise
79. were→ was 80. me→ mine 81. But→ So/And
82. practise—practising 83. 删除from”
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下文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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(2015·江西省上饶市三模)
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参考答案：
When I first to write in English, I ran into difficulties. The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate into my own language everything I came across while I was reading. My teacher advised to keep a diary. I followed his and put down 100 words or so each day.
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1．命题立意：考查时态。
解析：learn→learned 根据前文的first和下文应是用过去时。故learn改为learned。
2．命题立意：考查限定词。
解析：much→many 根据difficulties是复数形式，应用many修饰，故much改为many。
3．命题立意：考查定语从句。
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4．命题立意：考查代词。
解析：myself→me 根据该句的主语是my teacher。故myself改为me。
5．命题立意：考查名词。
解析：advices→advice 根据advice是不可数名词判断。故advices改为advice。
6．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：talk→talking 根据enjoy后跟动词的 ing形式作宾语。故talk改为talking。
7．命题立意：考查比较级。
解析：with→in 根据短语in English用英语，故with改为in。
8．命题立意：考查代词。
解析：showed后加it 根据show是及物动词，后跟双宾语，根据前文的a story判断加it。故showed后加it。
9．命题立意：考查固定句型。
解析：very→so 根据句型：so＋形容词＋that，如此……以至于。故very改为so。
10．命题立意：考查冠词。
解析：an→a 根据great以辅音因素开头。故an改为a。
短文改错
下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】4.
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假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】5.
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短文改错
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】6.
1.ask—asked 2. the—a 3. Comparing—Compared 4. hard—harder
5.expensively—expensive 6.删with 7.Therefore—However
8.house—houses 9.we—us 10.efforts后加to2016高考二轮英语：短文改错训练（1）及答案
(2015·九江市二模)
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From this experience，I will ready to help others in the future.
参考答案：
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From this experience，I will ready to help others in the future.
1．命题立意：考查名词的所有格。
解析：mom→mom's mum应该使用所有格修饰后面的名词birthday。
2．命题立意：考查冠词。
解析：the→a the表示特指，a表示泛指，一个。
3．命题立意：考查宾语从句的时态。
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4．命题立意：考查关系代词。
解析：whom→who 先行词an old man ，引导词应该用who, who在所引导的句子中作主语。
5．命题立意：考查名词复数。
解析：bag→bags 可数名词bag前面有two，bag应用复数形式bags。
6．命题立意：考查形容词辨析。
解析：tiring→tired tiring令人累的，tired人感觉累的。根据语意应是tired。
7．命题立意：考查动词短语的辨析。
解析：删除for thank sb. a lot 非常感谢某人，thanks for sth.为某事而感谢。
8．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：Seen→Seeing see的逻辑主语跟后面句子的主语一致的情况下，应用现在分词形式。
9．命题立意：考查形容词和副词的辨析。
解析：happily→happy feel是系动词，后面接形容词作表语。故改为happy。
10．命题立意：考查动词。
解析：will后加be动词 ready是形容词，“be＋形容词”组成系表结构。因此will后加be动词。
文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
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Lihua
【参考答案】2.
1. prevent→ prevent ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ion 2. aware∧ of 3.what → which 4.kill →killing
5.specie →species ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) 6. result of → result 7. responsible →responsibility
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
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文章大意：本文讲述作者对于网络购物的三点质疑。
1．命题立意：考查副词。
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10．命题立意：考查名词。
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下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1． 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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下面短文中共有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 没处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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