短文改错精炼（2）
短文改错
The day before the speech contest (比赛) English teacher 1. _______
talked to me. She said that she and my schoolmate all 2. _______
wished me success, but it didn’t matter that I would 3. _______
win or not. When I was on the stage the next day, I felt 4. _______
so nervous as I shook like a leaf. There were so many 5. _______
people present! Suddenly, I caught a sight of my English 6. _______
teacher in the crowd. She was smiling but nodding at 7. _______
me. I remembered her words and calm down. 8. _______
I did a good job and won the first prize.
Now my picture and the prize is hanging in the library. 9. _______
Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. 10. ______
答案及解析
1. teacher 前加 my。根据下行 She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success， 可判断 English teacher 应是特指。
2. schoolmate 改为 schoolmates。因本句中有 all 一词， 所以 schoolmate 一词应为复数形式。
3. that 改为 whether。根据上下文， 可判断本句意为“我是否成功没有关系”， 所以这里用 whether。
4. 此行无错。
5. as 改为 that。根据句子结构， so 应与 that 构成复合句， that 引导结果状语从句， 在此不能用 as 引导。
6. 删去a。catch sight of 为固定搭配， sight 前不加任何冠词。
7. but 改为 and。smiling 和 nodding 为两个并列动作， 在逻辑上无转折关系， 故 but 改为 and。
8. calm 改为 calmed。在 and 连接的两个并列句中， remember 和 calm 为两个并列动作， 为过去时态。故 calm 改为 calmed。
9. is 改为 are。本句用 my picture 和 the prize 作主语， 是复数形式， 后谓语动词应和其主语保持一致。
10. 删去often。句首已用 whenever “无论何时”， 在句中就没必要用 often 了。
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。
Miss Li is our English teacher. One day when the first bell rang，the monitor stood up and said，“Our English teacher is going to have a operation today. It has not decided yet who will take his place. ”The class all turned silently at his words. Just at this moment，Miss Li appears at the door. She looked tiring and pale. “I have asked the doctor to put off the operation till tomorrow because I don’t want you to miss a single class. ” she said at a low voice， “A new teacher will take my place and I hope you’ll get on well with her. I’ll return back as soon as I’m well. ”Heard this，all of us were moved to tears. What a good teacher we have!
【参考答案】1.
1. a—an
2. not∧decided 加been
3. his—her
4. silently-silent
5. appears—appeared
6. tiring—tired
7. at—in
8. return back 删除back
9. well—better
10. heard—hearing
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Five years before my brother and I ended our friendship as a result of the quarrel. One day he visited the city that I was living in to see our mother. I thought for nights about what to react to his visit. Since I had done no wrong, so it was he that needed to come to me. Finally, I went to my friends for advice. He suggested I offered my apology. When I did it, I felt relieving. Today I am so grateful to my friend. Without his advice, we wouldn’t enjoy the loving relationship with my brother. I have learned a truly life lesson from the whole experience. In short, I feel I have grown since.
【参考答案】2.
Five years before my brother and I ended our friendship as a result of the quarrel. One day
ago a
he visited the city that I was living in to see our mother. I thought for nights about what to react
how
to his visit. Since I had done no wrong, so it was he that needed to come to me. Finally, I went to
去掉so
my friends for advice. He suggested I offered my apology. When I did it, I felt relieving. Today I am
friend offer relieved
so grateful to my friend. Without his advice, we wouldn’t enjoy the loving relationship with my
I
brother. I have learned a truly life lesson from the whole experience. In short, I feel I have
true
grown∧since.
up
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
One day，a blind man was sitting on street with a sign by his feet that read：“I am blind，please help me. ” A gentleman walked through and stopped to have a look at the sign，noticed only a few coin in the man's hat. He took out some bills from his wallet and put it into the hat. And then he turned the sign over again, wrote a new message and left. Several hours later，the gentleman returned. To his happy, he found the hat almost full of bills and coins. He didn't expect that the new message does work，which read: “It’s spring now, and I can't see it.”
【参考答案】3.
1.on后加the 2.through---by 3.noticed---noticing
4.coin—coins 5.it—them
6.去掉again 7.happy---happiness
8.hat后加was 9.does—did 10.and ---but
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The first time when I went on a plane was when I went to Hong Kong with my Dad.
When I saw the plane, I thought it was very big. But when there was a lot of passengers seating
on the plane, it wasn’t very big any more. It could carry lots of people and baggages. That was
so amazed! When the plane flew up into sky, my ears started to hurt. It hurt me very much
that I wanted to cry. I said to myself, “Don’t cry. I can’t cry.” But I couldn’t hold back from my
tears. “If you chewed a piece of gum, it will stop the harm,” dad said. When I heard that my dad
said, I chewed a piece of gum.
【参考答案】4.
The first time when I went on a plane was when I went to Hong Kong with my Dad.
When I saw the plane, I thought it was very big. But when there was a lot of passengers seating
were seated
on the plane, it wasn’t very big any more. It could carry lots of people and baggages. That was
baggage
so amazed! When the plane flew up into∧sky, my ears started to hurt. It hurt me very much
amazing the so
that I wanted to cry. I said to myself, “Don’t cry. I can’t cry.” But I couldn’t hold back from my
tears. “If you chewed a piece of gum, it will stop the harm,” dad said. When I heard that my dad
chew what
said, I chewed a piece of gum.短文改错精炼（3）
短文改错
I used to love science class—all of them— 1. _______
biology, chemistry ,geography, physics. I think I 2. _______
liked those classes because I felt that it helped me 3. _______
understand what the world works. For example, when 4. _______
I was a child , the rain was a mystery (奥秘). In one 5. _______
class, I learned it rained. I think science classes 6. _______
clear up mysteries. But then there is always more 7. _______
mysteries look into. What was my least favorite class 8. _______
That was maths. After learn the basics of the subject, 9. _______
nothing else seemed very practically to me . I never 10.______
saw how I could use it in my daily life.
答案及解析
1. class 改为 classes。class 为可数名词， 根据下文， 这里 class 为复数， 故改为 classes。
2. 此行无错。
3. it 改为 they。这里指代上文的 those classes。
4. what 改为 how。work 此处为不及物动词， 不可用连接代词 what 作宾语， 只可用连接副词 how 作状语。
5. 删去 rain 前的 the。此处 rain 为泛指。
6. it 前加 why。根据上下文逻辑， 此处意为“在课上， 我明白了天为什么会下雨”。
7. is 改为 are。
8. look 前加 to。需用不定式作定语。
9. learn 改为 learning。此处 after 为介词， 后需用动名词作宾语。
10. practically 改为 practical。seem 在此句中作系动词， 其后应用形容词作表语。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Fangfang,
I’m sorry to learn that you were not getting on well with your English study recently．I’d
like to give you some advice on learning English．
First of all, you should be confidently in yourself, which is first step in learning English
well．Secondly, you’d better make friends with the students who are good at English, so they
are very likely to helping you when you meet difficulties．Thirdly, learning English well is a long
process．Remember: to reward yourself when you have made progress, that will inspire you
greatly．Anyway, you must work hard on English and never give up learning it．Just believe in
yourselves．Where there is a will, there is a way．
Hope my suggestions will give you some of help．
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
【参考答案】5.
Dear Fangfang,
I’m sorry to learn that you were not getting on well with your English study recently．I’d
are
like to give you some advice on learning English．
First of all, you should be confidently in yourself, which is ∧ first step in learning English
confident the
well．Secondly, you’d better make friends with the students who are good at English, so ∧ they
for / because / and或that
are very likely to helping you when you meet difficulties．Thirdly, learning English well is a long
help
process．Remember: to reward yourself when you have made progress, that will inspire you
which
greatly．Anyway, you must work hard on English and never give up learning it．Just believe in
at
yourselves．Where there is a will, there is a way．
yourself
Hope my suggestions will give you some of help．
Sincerely yours,
Li Ming
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文,文中共有l0处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Nowadays, it is very easily to find a student who is nearsighted. What’s worse, the
number of nearsighted students are still increasing. From my point of view, there are
many reason that can cause nearsightedness. First and foremost, the wrong posture will
easily result from nearsightedness. Read in the dark places can lead to nearsightedness as
well as. Moreover, too much reading without a rest can be other important reason. My
dear friends, it is high time that we paid attention to protect our eyes. The most
useful method is do eye exercises more often and relax for a while after reading.
Watching green trees could also do good to the eyes.
【参考答案】6.
Nowadays, it is very easily to find a student who is nearsighted. What’s worse, the
easy
number of nearsighted students are still increasing. From my point of view, there are
is
many reason that can cause nearsightedness. First and foremost, the wrong posture will
reasons
easily result from nearsightedness. Read in the dark places can lead to nearsightedness as
in Reading
well as. Moreover, too much reading without a rest can be other important reason. My
another
dear friends, it is high time that we paid attention to protect our eyes. The most
protecting
useful method is∧ do eye exercises more often and relax for a while after reading.
to/或改为doing
Watching green trees could also do good to the eyes.
can
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Many people go to school education. School education is 1. ______
important and useful, but no one learn from everything 2. ______
at school. No matter how many you learn at school, it is 3. ______
limited. So much more is to be learned outside school by 4. ______
students themselves all their lives. It is always important to 5. ______
to know to learn something that to get a good exam result. 6. ______
many great scientists and statesmen didn’t get anything 7. ______
from school. For examples, Edison and Lincoln didn’t even 8. ______
made primary school. But they were so success that they 9. ______
made great contributions to mankind. They read a lot of 10. ______
and did thousands of experiments to test their ideas.
【参考答案】1.
1. to → for 2. 去掉from 3 many → much
4. √ 5. important → more important
6. to learn → how to learn 7. anything → everything
8. examples → example 9. success → successful 10. 去掉 of短文改错精炼（5）
短文改错
My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy.
He did not want share things with other people. For 1._______
example, when he bought a chocolate cake, he put them 2._______
in a secret place where I couldn’ t find it. Then he 3. _______
ate it all by himself. He never helped other. 4. _______
He said he is busy. That is, a game of 5. _______
tennis making him very busy. He did not care 6. _______
if something he did made people angry. For 7. _______
instance, on one night he played strong and 8. _______
loudly music till four o’clock in the morning. But 9. _______
he is difference now. He often helps grandma 10.______
with housework, helps mom with cooking and helps his
classmates with their lessons.
答案及解析
1. want 后加 to。want to do sth. 为固定搭配。
2. them 改为 it。依据上下文， 前句 a chocolate cake 为可数名词单数， 后边的代词显然用 it， 而不是 them。
3. where 改为 which/that 或删去 where。此为定语从句， 先行词 place在从句中作 find 的宾语， 只能用关系代词 which 或 that 或省略。
4. other 改为 others 。不定代词 other 指另一个， 而 others 指另一些。
5. 第一个 is 改为 was。此题考查动词的时态。
6.making 改为 made。本句缺少谓语， 需要把making 改为 make 的一般过去时态。
7. 此行无错。
8. 删去 on。one night 前不需要任何介词。
9. loudly 改为 loud。loudly 是副词， 此处修饰名词 music， 应用形容词。
10. difference 改为 different。应用形容词与系动词一起构成系表结构。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It was a foggy day. The fog was such thick that it was impossible to see far. People were
trying to find their way but was lost in the fog. Mr. Smith had important meeting but no one
could take him there. He had to walk there but found himself lost. Suddenly a stranger told to him
that he will take him there. Mr. Smith thanked him but they started to walk there. The fog was
getting thick, but the stranger had no difficulty in find the way. Mr. Smith couldn’t understand why,
so he asked her, “How do you find the way in the fog ” “It is no troubles to me,” said the stranger, “I
am blind.”
【参考答案】6.
It was a foggy day. The fog was such thick that it was impossible to see far. People were
so
trying to find their way but was lost in the fog. Mr. Smith had∧ important meeting but no one
were an
could take him there. He had to walk there but found himself lost. Suddenly a stranger told to him
that he will take him there. Mr. Smith thanked him but they started to walk there. The fog was
would and
getting thick, but the stranger had no difficulty in find the way. Mr. Smith couldn’t understand why,
thicker finding
so he asked her, “How do you find the way in the fog ” “It is no troubles to me,” said the stranger, “I
him trouble
am blind.”
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! I’d like tell you something about the holiday we have arranged it for you. For those who wants to ski, you can rent skis on the spot, and boots too. Surely it is better if you have your own boots. Don’t forget it can get quite cold in the day, so warm clothes are must. The ski-poles are often very hot when it is sunny, so be care not to get burnet. The hotel booking for you is very comfortable, and the nights do get very cold sometimes, so be prepared. For those looking for another activities, there are lovely walks, good views and interesting birds up the hill. Finally, I’d like to mention what we offer excellent opportunities to try delicious and unusually food.
【参考答案】1.
第二句：like和tell中间加to；it去掉
第三句：wants改成want
第五句: must 前加a
第六句：care改成careful
第七句：booking改成booked；and改成but
第八句：another改成other
第九句：what改成that; unusually 改为 unusual
略
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
Today I was having a PE lessons when I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at
that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had
difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help
of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I’m wrong. We
can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in
return. In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.
【参考答案】2.
Today I was having a PE lessons when I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that
lesson great
moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had
had
difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help
walking and
of my classmates. As∧ result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I’m wrong. We
a worse
can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can not help others in
their
return. In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.
With
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend /\ weekend with you．Luckily I was
the am
completely free then, so I’ll to say “yes”．I’ll arrive in Bristol at around 8 pm in Friday
on
evening．
A Frenchman was once visiting London．He wished to take a walk to see a city．But he was afraid he might get lost because he knew no words of English．So before he left his hotel, he stopped in the first corner and carefully copied in his notebook the names of the street that he was staying．Then he walked on．At last, he got being lost．After several hours he found a policeman．The Frenchman tried his best to explain the policeman that he didn’t know the name of his hotel, and he knew the name of the street．He then showed the policeman that he copied in his notebook．It was read: “One-way street”．
【参考答案】3短文改错精炼（4）
短文改错
Like most of my schoolmates, I have neither brothers 1._______
nor sisters—in any other words, I am an only child. 2._______
My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can 3._______
make sure that I get a good education. They did not want 4._______
me to do any work at family; they want me to 5._______
devote all my time to my studies so that
I’ll get good marks in all my subject. 6. _______
We may be one family and live under a same roof, but we do 7._______
not seem to get much time to talk about together. It looks 8._______
as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. Do they 9._______
really understand their own daughter What things are in 10._______
other homes, I wonder.
答案及解析
1. 此行无错。
2. 删去 other 前的 any。in other words 为固定搭配， 意为“换句话说”。
3. can 后加 to。此处不定式为目的状语。
4. did 改为do。纵观全文， 应用一般现在时态。
5. family 改为 home。family 多指由家庭成员、 婚姻维系的“家”， 而 home 则多指“住所”。另外， at home 为固定搭配。
6. subject 改为 subjects。subject 属可数名词， all 后应用其复数。
7. a 改为the 。same 作定语时前面一般用定冠词。
8. 删去 talk 后的 about。
9. and 改为or。a visitor 和 a guest 属不同类的两种人， 故不可用 and 连接， 需用or表示选其一。
10. What 改为 How。此处是 I wonder 引导的宾语从句， 意为“我想知道在别人家里的情况是怎样的”。
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last evening, I went to teahouse with my best friend Susan. Before the tea was serving，
we talked to each other happily．When the waiter went to us with the tea, we didn’t see him
Unfortunately, Susan raises her hand to comb her hair just while the waiter bent to put the
plate on the table. His hand hit the cup，and the tea was spattered(溅)on her trousers. In my
surprise，instead of complaining，Susan smiled，“So lucky that it’s not on my shirt，and I can’t
even clean it” Her words were very inspired. We cannot foresee what will happen，but looking
at it in a positive way can make us always be happy．
【参考答案】2.
Last evening, I went to∧teahouse with my best friend Susan. Before the tea was serving，
a served
we talked to each other happily．When the waiter went to us with the tea, we didn’t see him
came
Unfortunately, Susan raises her hand to comb her hair just while the waiter bent to put the
raised when
plate on the table. His hand hit the cup，and the tea was spattered(溅)on her trousers. In my
Her To
surprise，instead of complaining，Susan smiled，“So lucky that it’s not on my shirt，and I can’t
or
even clean it” Her words were very inspired. We cannot foresee what will happen，but looking
inspiring
at it in a positive way can make us always be happy．
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Attention, please, everyone. We’ve accepted the 1. ______
weather forecast on the radio this morning that 2. ______
there will have a heavy rain tonight. Be sure 3. ______
to shut the windows and doors until you leave 4. ______
your classrooms. The sports meet when we planned to 5. ______
hold it tomorrow will be put off. After it becomes 6. ______
fine, we’ll make other announcement. We will 7. ______
have classes on Wednesday as usually. Since it is 8. ______
colder tomorrow, please dress on more clothes in time. 9. ______
Those come to school by bike, don’t keep your 10.______
umbrellas open while riding.
【参考答案】3.
1. accepted----received 2.正确 3. have ----be
4. until---before 5. when—which
6. it 7. other—another 8. as usual
9. put on 10. those who
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear classmates ,
Now I’d like to tell you why I learn English ．I often 76． 1.
read English aloud and try learn something important by 2．
hearts , which helps me remember it easily and form 3．
the good habit of thinking in English ．I listen to a lot and 4．
talk with others in English ．In this way , I was improved 5．
my spoken English ．I keep a diary in English every day but 6．
my writing English is becoming better and better ．I also try 7．
my best to master the necessary grammar ．With this means , 8．
I can express myself in English correct ．That’s the way I 9．
have been learning English ．I hope it will be useful to you 10．
That’s all ．Thank you ．
Yours ,
Wang Gang
【参考答案】4.
1．why→ how 2．try后加to 3．hearts → heart
4．去掉to 5．was→ have 6．but → and
7．writing→ written 8．With→ By
9．correct→ correctly 10．正确
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。
In the winter vacation, I paid a visit a mountain village in a suburb of Handan. No sooner had I got off the bus when I was greatly surprising to see all the changes. It was far better than I had been expected. Now every family can drink cleanly running water. The villagers needn’t carry water himself any more. Firewood is no longer used for cooking. Marsh gas, a new cheap clean energy, make it very convenient to cook and light. As all the families have color TV set, they can enjoy plays at home. It impressed me most was that the best building in a village was the school. I hope the mountain village will become better and better.
【参考答案】5.
In the winter vacation, I paid a visit∧a mountain village in a suburb of Handan. No sooner
to
had I got off the bus when I was greatly surprising to see all the changes. It was far better than I
than surprised
had been expected. Now every family can drink cleanly running water. The villagers needn’t carry
clean
water himself any more. Firewood is no longer used for cooking. Marsh gas, a new cheap clean
themselves
energy, make it very convenient to cook and light. As all the families have color TV set, they can
makes sets
enjoy plays at home. It impressed me most was that the best building in a village was the school. I
what the
hope the mountain village will become better and better.
