(共19张PPT)
A writing lesson
Jane Xu
______ clothes
______ the floor
_____ rubbish
sweep
throw
wash
① What housework do you do
_____ dishes
____ the table
_____ flowers
_____meals
______ the room
Housework
______ pets
wash
feed
tidy up
cook
water
lay
…
② When do you do housework
I sweep the floor____________.
on weekends
every day/Friday…
in the morning/…
I sweep the floor ______ my mother is busy.
I sweep the floor ______ I finish my homework.
when
after
I ________ ________
I ________ when/after ________
Pair work
What housework do you do
When do you …
I …
I ______ ______.
/I ______ when/after______
What about you
Tip 1: Talk about “what” and “when” when you write some experiences.
I ______ ______.
/I ______ when/after______
③ How do you feel when/after you …
I feel_________ when/after I ________.
tired
tiring
It is really _________ (for me) to ________.
relaxed
relaxing
interested
interesting
excited
exciting
Tip 2: Use correct adjectives.
satisfying
satisfied
A: I think laying the table was . I felt very in it. (relax)
Practice
v
B: I think cooking meals was . It makes me feel _______ after doing it. (tire)
tiring
tired
relaxing
relaxed
How do your parents feel after they do housework
What can you learn from doing housework
Is it only parents’ job to do housework
patient
responsible
independent
a good way to…
develop life skills
understand my parents more
have a better relationship with…
④ What do you learn from doing housework
It’s a good way for me to develop life skills.
I can understand my parents more.
I become more independent and patient.
I learn a lot from doing housework.
I can understand my parents more. I become more independent and patient. It’s a good way for me to develop life skills.
④ What do you learn from doing housework
I learn a lot from doing housework.
I can understand my parents more. ______, I become more independent and patient. _______, it’s a good way for me to develop life skills.
besides
furthermore
moreover
in addition
On one hand, on the other hand
What’s more,
Apart from that,
Tip 3 : Use linking words to make passage organized.
As middle school students, we should help our parents do some housework.
I often do housework on weekends. In the morning, I sweep the floor and clean my bedroom. I feel tired but happy. I help to cook the meal and lay the table. It’s relaxing to cook the meal. Now I can cook some simple meals, like noodles and eggs. I usually wash clothes after I finish my homework.
I learn a lot from doing housework. It’s a good way for me to get life skills. Also, I am proud of what I do for my family. What’s more, I have a great sense of achievement. I like doing housework.
what
when
how
Read and find
Linking words
某英文报正在开展关于“中学生做家务劳动”的主题征文活动,请结合你日常做家务的情况,谈谈你对做家务劳动的感受。
注意:
(1)短文应包括两个要点(做家务情况和做家务的感受),可适当发挥,参考词汇仅供选择使用。
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
(3)词数:90-110词。
参考词汇:experience, housework, pleasure, skill
Writing practice
某英文报正在开展关于“中学生做家务劳动”的主题征文活动,请你结合自己做家务的情况,并阐述做家务劳动给你带来的好处。
注意:(1)短文应包括两个要点(做家务情况和做家务的好处),可适当发挥,参考词汇仅供选择使用。(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。(3)词数:90-110词。
参考词汇:experience, housework, pleasure, skill
Writing practice
Draft
Part 1:
Part 2:
Part 3:
Beginning:
Housework(what/when/how)
What you learn from doing housework
Housework
what
whenhow
Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
What you learn from doing housework
Writing structure
Make a draft of your passage.
You can choose either level A or level B.
Drafting
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Checklist
Does your passage include main points (what, when)
Have you used correct “adjectives” to show feelings
Have you used linking words to make your passage organized
every
one
should
do
housework
together
Home
1. Make a neat copy of your passage.
2. Post your writing and share it with your friends.
Homework