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(人教版2024)九年级
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Period 6 Writing
Unit8
It must belong to Carla.
Unit 8
Unit8
Writing
How many kinds of sound have you heard
Make up a story.
1. Grunt (呼噜声)
2. Wolf
3. First aid (急救)
4. Dog
5. Wind
1. Grunt (呼噜声)
2. Wolf
3. First aid (急救)
4. Dog
5. Wind
must / might / could / can’t
because not only…but also… so…that… while such…that… However
Last week, in a quiet neighborhood, something strange happened. Many people heard strange noise at night . The noise was _____terrible _______they couldn’t go outside.___________, a brave boy named Li Lei decided to find out the truth.
He saw an ambulance(救护车)in front of the building and several doctors stood there. So he walked up to ask one what happened. Through talking ,he knew the reasons. Two boys set off firecrackers _________a man was sleeping with grunting in his bedroom. Suddenly, he couldn’t breathe(呼吸)___________ he might have a serious heart problem. You know the dog was __________a clever friend for him _______it called 120.Everybody must be surprised.
Now the mystery is solved. People in the neighborhood feel ____________quiet ___________happy again.
Complete the passage with correct linking words.
so
that
However
because
while
such
that
not only
but also
Tip:
Use Linking language
Connect naturally
Clear structure
3a
开篇点题
概括背景
(background information)
具体描述
(specific details)
总结感受
(conclusion : feeling)
(last week, in a quiet neighborhood, something strange happened…)
(linking words; must/might/could/can’t)
描述经过
总结结尾
(People in the neighborhood feel …)
Last week, in a quiet neighborhood, something strange happened. Many people heard strange noise at night . The noise was so terrible that they couldn’t go outside. However, a brave boy named Li Lei decided to find out the truth.
He saw an ambulance(救护车)in front of the building and several doctors stood there. So he walked up to ask one what happened. Through talking ,he knew the reasons. Two boys set off firecrackers while a man was sleeping with grunting in his bedroom. Suddenly, he couldn’t breathe(呼吸)because he might have a serious heart problem. You know the dog was such a clever friend for him that it called 120.Everybody must be surprised
Now the mystery is solved. People in the neighborhood feel not only quiet but also happy again
总结感受
描述经过
开篇概括背景
3b
Look at this newspaper headline and finish the article about the strange happenings.
No More Mystery in the Neighborhood
Last week, in a quiet neighborhood, something strange happened…
We now know what was happening in the neighborhood…
Now the mystery is solved.
People in the neighborhood…
Writing tips
First part: background information about the mystery
Second part: how the mystery was solved
Third part: how the people in the neighorhood now feel
feel uneasy
One possible version
No More Mystery in the Neighborhood
Last week, in a quiet neighborhood, something strange happened. Residents heard noises in the night but no one knew why. Victor Smith thought that it was teenagers having fun while Mrs. Smith and their neighbor, Helen Jones, blamed it on animals.
We now know what was happening in the neighborhood. A ranger’s station was being built in the nearby forest. Trees had to be cut down to make space for the station. This affected some animals living in the forest.
A raccoon family lost their home and had problems finding food. The raccoons discovered food in the neighborhood’s garbage bins, so they came back every night.
Now the mystery is solved. People in the neighborhood feel sorry for the raccoons and they are trying to help them.
Last week, in a quiet neighborhood, something strange happened. What is it Let me tell you.
We now know what was happening in the neighborhood. Three monkeys ran away from the city zoo ten days ago. The monkeys were hungry but they were afraid to come out in the daytime. So they visited the homes in the neighborhood for food at night. They got into the houses through the windows. One night they heard some noises and tried to run away. But the police caught the three monkeys and took them back to the zoo.
Now the mystery is solved. People in the neighborhood don't feel afraid anymore. All in all, we should try our best to find out the truth. Seeing is believing.
Beginning
Ending
Body
Linking
words
One possible version
你在上学的路上捡到了一件校服,请根据以下要点,作出一个合理的推断,并把推断的经过和结果写出来。
内容包括:
1. Mary 和 Sally 的校服都丢了;
2. 校服上有一根长头发;
3. 校服口袋里有一张银行卡和一张宠物狗照片。
要点: 1. 推断的经过
2. 推断的结果
体裁:
说明文
Writing
On my way to school, I found a uniform. Whose might it be
First, look at the uniform. Our school name is on it. So the owner must be from our school. It's said that both Mary and Sally lost their uniforms. Could it be Mary's or Sally's There is a long hair on the uniform. But both of them have long hair. There is a photo of a pet dog in the pocket. Sally likes dogs very much, but Mary doesn't. Then, it can't belong to Mary. Also, there is a bank card. Then, it must be Sally's school uniform because she is the only student with a bank card in our school.
How great it is to find the owner!
Beginning
Body
Ending
提出问题
合理推测
发表感叹
Sample Writing