四川新津县2016高考英语二轮：短文改错（十一月）周练（1）及答案
(2015·黑龙江哈六中检测)
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参考答案：
Nowadays, wit ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )h the growing popularity of computers, students paying less and less attention to handwriting.
According to a survey, many students don't want to improve their handwriting for various . 52 percent of them think that they can just use a computer, so is no need to waste time improving handwriting. 32 percent believe that they are busy with the study that they have no time to ， and 16 percent think that practicing handwriting is useless.
As the saying ， writing style shows the man. Beautiful and neat handwriting is great benefit, especially for students. Therefore, in my opinion, the more importance should be attached to handwriting from now on.
1．命题立意：考查时态。
解析：were→are 本文针对当前的现象发表观点，应为一般现在时。
2．命题立意：考查形容词与副词。
解析：recently→recent 修饰名词要用形容词。
3．命题立意：考查名词。
解析：reason→reasons various意为“各种各样的”，后接复数名词。
4．命题立意：考查句式。
解析：it→there there is no need to do sth.意为“没有必要做某事”，是固定用法。
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6．命题立意：考查连词。
解析：too→so so...that...为固定搭配，意为“如此……以至于……”，that引导结果状语从句。
7．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：practicing→practice have no time to do sth.为固定用法，意为“没有时间做某事”。
8．命题立意：考查时态。
解析：went→goes 根据上下文可知，本文时态是一般现在时。故改为goes。
9．命题立意：考查形容词。
解析：is后加of或a be of/a great benefit为固定搭配，意为“有很大益处”。
10．命题立意：考查冠词。
解析：去掉the attach importance to为固定短语，意为“重视”，importance前不加冠词。
短文改错
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【参考答案】
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作 文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的 增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A )，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线〔\〕划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】
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下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】
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短文改错
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【参考答案】
1. great —> greatly; 2. advices —> advice; 3. or —> and;
4. possible —> likely; 5.many —> much 6. such —> so;
7. in去掉; 8. were —> are; 9. my —> your; 10. in the end四川新津县2016高考英语二轮：短文改错（十一月）周练（4）及答案
(2015·四川资阳诊断)
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参考答案：
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1．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：giving→given give作后置定语修饰lesson，且两者是被动关系，故用过去分词given。
2．命题立意：考查介词。
解析：去掉in enter是及物动词，接宾语时后面不需要加介词。
3．命题立意：考查冠词。
解析：young前加a lady是可数名词，故需要加不定冠词a，表示“一个”。
4．命题立意：考查代词。
解析：they→we 根据语境可知此处指包括作者在内的学生，故改为we。
5．命题立意：考查形容词与副词。
解析：Late→Later late意为“迟到的”，later意为“后来”。根据句意可知应改为later。
6．命题立意：考查时态。
解析：said→say and连接的两个动词应该在时态上保持一致，根据前面的go可知，said应改为say。
7．命题立意：考查介词。
解析：with→in in English是固定用法，意为“用英语”。
8．命题立意：考查连词。
解析：too→so so...that...意为“如此……以至于……”，为固定句型，引导结果状语从句。
9．命题立意：考查副词。
解析：kind→kindly 修饰动词said应用副词。
10．命题立意：考查名词性从句。
解析：that→what what引导宾语从句，并在句子中作宾语。
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此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词；并也用斜线划摔。
此行缺一个词j在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的诃。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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【参考答案】
76. where → who 77.so → but 78.hen → hens 79. √
80.在year前加the
81.her →him 82.去掉for 83.more → much 或去掉more
84. interesting →interested
85. didn't →doesn’t
文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
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【参考答案】
1．在their 后加with， 因为help sb. with sth.为固定用法。
2．search改为过去式，由时间状语“Last weekend”可知，这是描述过去的事情，所以用一般过去时。
3．information为不可数名词，所以不能用复数形式。
4．We改为 I，“我”去买票，应用代词I。
5．had改为was,这里表示的是存在，所以用there be 句型。
6．在the suitcase前加into.
7．引导一个定语从句，代替指物的先行词things，所以用that/which。
8．show改为see, see sb. off意为“为某人送行”，符合语境。
9．Happily改为happy , feel为系动词，后面应该用形容词作表语。
10．在safe journey前加a,具体的一次旅行。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】
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假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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【参考答案】
1．before改为ago。这是描述过去的事情，句子用一般过去时，表示“几周之前”用ago。
2．excited改为exciting。指的是令人兴奋的晚会，所以应该用 ing形式的形容词。
3．as 改为when。表示“就在那时”，用并列连词when。
4．broke后加out。火灾的发生应该用break out。
5．So改为But。不要慌张和下文的人们慌张之间是转折关系。
6．去掉to。out为副词，不能与to搭配。find the way out“找到出路”。
7．fire前加a。找到一个灭火器。
8．coming 改为come。 “be about to do sth. when…”为固定句型，意为“刚要……就在这时……”。
9．praise改为praised。
10．luckily改为lucky。修饰名词作定语用形容词形式。四川新津县2016高考英语二轮：短文改错（十一月）周练（2）及答案
(2015·宁夏银川市三模)
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参考答案：
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1．命题立意：考查固定短语。
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2．命题立意：考查介词。
解析：Besides→Beside besides除……之外；beside在……的旁边。故Besides → Beside。
3．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
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4．命题立意：考查动词时态。
解析：occupies→occupied 根据上下文语境应用过去时。故occupies→occupied。
5．命题立意：考查副词。
解析：curious→curiously 修饰动词asking，用副词。
6．命题立意：考查宾语从句。
解析：if→that或去掉if 根据语意此处thought的宾语从句应用that引导，也可省略。故if→ that或去掉if。
7．命题立意：考查代词。
解析：her→my 根据前文的I判断此处是“出乎我的意料之外”。故her→my。
8．命题立意：考查情态动词用法。
解析：must后加be must为情态动词，其后必须跟动词原形，very tired为形容词，应加be。故must后加be。
9．命题立意：考查名词。
解析：word→words word为可数名词，根据前文所说的话，word应用复数形式。故word→words。
10．命题立意：考查连词。
解析：but→and 根据but前后是并列关系。故but→and。
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号∧ ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线﹨划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分.
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Yours truly,
Li Hua
【参考答案】
1. invite – inviting 2. your choice – my choice
3. because of – because 4. more times – more time
5. either – too 6. had been – have been 7. poorly – poor
8. is possible – possible 9. in order – in order that
10. have wonderful – have a wonderful
短文改错（满分10分）
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】
1.is（a） famous 2.was used to
3.what→where 4.in （the）1600s
5.come→coming 6.America→American
7.friend→friends 8.But→So
9.has→is 10.to→of
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )你修改你同桌写得以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ∧ ），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
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【参考答案】
Your problem is （a）common one among middle school students．Maybe the
following advices (a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )dvice )can help you．First in (of)all, believe in yourself．Your greatest problem is that you lack self-confidence．The first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmates．One smile speaks loud（louder）about your wish to make friends than any word．Your smile will show that you are friendly to him (them)．Next, trying (try)talking with a student who is as shy as you or who share (shares)the same interest as you．You can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbies．Unless(If) anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or her．Once you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possibly．(possible)
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1．5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )修改作文．请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（＿），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处
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【参考答案】
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old.
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are which
My father work in ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )a factory and my mother is a teacher. We lived a happy life together.
works live
I’m∧ cheerful boy ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ). Besides my courses, I have much hobbies, like playing football, basketball and
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yourself四川新津县2016高考英语二轮：短文改错（十一月）周练（5）及答案
(2015·山东济南市5月针对性训练)
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参考答案：
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1．命题立意：考查时态。
解析：take→took 根据语境应用一般过去时。故take→took。
2．命题立意：考查语态。
解析：we后加were 句子的主语we是give的动作承受者，应用被动语态。故we后加were。
3．命题立意：考查形容词。
解析：any→some some一些，用在肯定句中；any一些，用在否定句和疑问句中。故any→some。
4．命题立意：考查形容词。
解析：hills前的more去掉 根据上下文只有三座小山，应去掉more。故hills前的more去掉。
5．命题立意：考查副词。
解析：Lucky→Luckily 根据下文可知此处应用副词作状语。故Lucky→Luckily。
6．命题立意：考查冠词。
解析：a→the 根据前文提到compass应用定冠词the修饰。故a→the。
7．命题立意：考查代词。
解析：they→we 根据主句的主语we判断。故they→we。
8．命题立意：考查疑问词与不定式连用。
解析：what→how 根据give后有宾语first aid，不定式中缺少方式状语。故what→how。
9．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：gaining→gained 根据knowledge是gain的动作承受者，应用过去分词修饰。故gaining→gained。
10．命题立意：考查名词。
解析：problem→problems 根据problem前没有限定词，单数可数名词不能单独使用。故problem→problems。
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加： 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）,并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。 修改： 在错词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
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【参考答案】
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by them, I read widely ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) during my early age, but I’ve developed a great interest in arts and
and
sports. I’m easy-going, ∧get along well with my classmates.
and或get改为getting
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to
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happily
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dreams
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
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【参考答案】
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4. decided 后加to 5.get---got 6.student---students
7. which 前的and 取掉 8．him--- me 9. tell—tells 10 for---of
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1.5分，满分15分）
下面短文中共有10个错误, 请找出并按要求在文中标记并改正在短文下。
如多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉。
如缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在下边写出该加的词。
如错一个词：在错的词下划一横线, 并在下边写出改正后的词。
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【参考答案】
what—that an---a differ---- differs so is----so are
because---why many—much you have---you will have
familiar to—familiar with our---their
if it necessary----if necessary或if it is necessary
短文改错 （共10分,每小题1分,满分10分）
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者（从第11处起） 不计分。
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【参考答案】
56. on→ at 57. passes→ passing 58. which→ that
59. after→ since 60. many→ much 61. terribly→ terrible
62. bad →worse 63. had→ has 64.used to后加be 65. 去掉the
Composition四川新津县2016高考英语二轮：短文改错（十一月）周练（3）及答案
(2015·山东省临沂市二模)
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参考答案：
Dear Linda，
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In addition，please remember me to your parents.
Best wishes!
Yours，
Yu Lei
1．命题立意：考查形容词。
解析：tiredly→tired 根据下文的and happy应用tired与happy并列。故tiredly→tired。
2．命题立意：考查介词。
解析：there前的to去掉 根据there是副词，故there前的to去掉。
3．命题立意：考查固定句型。
解析：hard前加it 根据句型find it hard to do sth.发现做某事困难。故hard前加it。
4．命题立意：考查名词。
解析：great前的a去掉 progress是不可数名词。故great前的a去掉。
5．命题立意：考查副词。
解析：fluent→fluently 根据前文的speak判断应用副词修饰。故fluent→fluently。
6．命题立意：考查比较级。
解析：large→larger 根据下文的than before可知应用比较级，故large→larger。
7．命题立意：考查时态。
解析：am→was 根据该句的语境，应用一般过去时。故am→was。
8．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：showed→showing 根据chatting，playing和showing是并列方式状语。故showed→ showing。
9．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：felt→feel 根据make后用省去to的不定式作宾补。故felt→feel。
10．命题立意：考查形容词。
解析：much→many 根据memories判断应用many修饰。故much→many。
短文改错
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】
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a but
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with the report already signed by his father.
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文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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第一处：off→on。【解题思路】由下文可知，此处是一个妇女刚上车，一个男人试图起来。
第二处：去掉had。【解题思路】文章记叙的是过去发生的事，故用一般过去时。
第三处：perfect→prefectly。【解题思路】修饰形容词应用副词。
第四处：a→the。【解题思路】特指前面提到的妇女，故用定冠词。
第五处：her→his。【解题思路】此处指妇女把她的手放在男人的肩膀上（阻止他为自己让座）。
第六处：So→But。【解题思路】男人想起来，可是妇女不让，前后是转折关系，故用but。
第七处：force→forced。【解题思路】动作发生在过去，故用一般过去时。
第八处：say→saying。【解题思路】say与句子主语是逻辑上的主谓关系，故用现在分词作伴随状语。
第九处：block→blocks。【解题思路】三个街区，所以用复数。
第十处：wanted后加to。【解题思路】want to do sth.“想要做某事”，是固定搭配。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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Yours
Jim
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1. 去掉 is 2. saying---say 3. if---whether 4. strong---strongly
5. study---studying 6. my---her 7. I前加will 8. build---builds
9. and---but 10. advices---advice
