(共33张PPT)
Unit 1
Where did you go on vacation
Section B 3a-Self check
To complete a diary entry about a trip
To make notes about a vacation
To write a travel diary by using simple past tense
To finish the exercises in Self Check
Chinese Poem
What’s the poem about
It’s about Baijuyi’s _______ to Qiantang lake.
trip
Qiantang Lake
Think: Would these things still be beautiful if Bai Juyi had
a terrible trip
Writing technique(写作手法)?
Different Feelings, Different Things
借物抒情
Wednesday , July 12th
1. Today, I went on vacation in Zhengzhou. It was a great trip. The weather was ________________. There were ________________________. I ate stewed noodles and it tasted ______. In the afternoon, I _________________________________________.
Wednesday , July 12th
2. Today, I went on vacation in Zhengzhou. It was a terrible trip. The weather was ______________. There were __________________. I ate stewed noodles and it tasted ___________. In the afternoon, I ____________________.
rainy and wet
all kinds of delicious food
good
went to gift shop and bought many gifts
sunny and warm
too many visitors
really bad
just stay at the hotel
Different Feelings, Different Things
What are the features(特点) of a diary entry
date: in the upper right corner
tense: past simple tense
content: activity + feeling + reason
order of events: time order
Write a travel diary like Jane’s on page 5. (请用到借物抒情的手法 )
Friday, July 12th
I went to …with my family/sister.
I arrived in…
The weather was…
First…in the morning…I did/ate…
Second… in the afternoon …I ate…
Then…in the evening…I bought…
At last…There was/were
Although I felt very tired, I was happy.
I hope tp visit…again.
How great/terrible my trip is!
谚语引入:As an old saying goes, travel is a better way than to read.
A travel diary
beginning
body
ending
when
where
who
what
how
The Palace Museum
Temple of Heaven
Tian’anmen Square
Bird’s Nest
National Museum
Tsinghua University
Enjoy the video
hot and sunny
Beijing duck
take some photos
buy something special
learn something important
tired
delicious
beautiful
interesting
August
Wednesday, __________ 20th
Today the weather was _______________. I went to _____________________. It was ___________. We __________________. I liked this place because ______________
______________________. For dinner we had ____________ . It was ___________. In the evening, I felt really ______.
August
hot and sunny
The Palace Museum
beautiful
took some photos
I could buy
something special there
Beijing duck
delicious
tired
Fill in the blanks
Wednesday, August 20th
Today the weather hot and sunny. to The Palace Museum. It beautiful. We
some photos. I this place because could buy something special there. For dinner
Beijing duck . It delicious.
In the evening, I really tired.
Format: 星期,月日(序数词)
Language features:
1. 人称
2. 时态
3. 顺序
I
I
We
1. the first person
2. simple past tense
was
was
took
liked
went
had
was
felt
3. time order
Look and Summarize
Wednesday, August 20th
Today the weather was hot and sunny .
I went to the Palace Musuem . It was
We took some photos .
I like this place because I learnt something important .
For dinner we had Beijing duck . It was delicious .
In the evening, I felt really tired .
time
weather
beautiful .
place+description
feelings
activity+feeling
Beginning
Main body
Ending
Group work
Work in four to draw a mind map about the content of the diary.
Wednesday, August 20th
Today the weather was hot and sunny. I went to the Palace Museum. It was beautiful.
We took some photos. I liked this place because I could buy something special there. For dinner we had Beijing duck. It was delicious.
In the evening, I felt really tired
细节填充
We did
We ate
We thought
We enjoyed
activities
We saw/heard
...
we saw
we ate
People
The Palace Museum has many beautiful buildings, halls, and gardens. It’s like stepping into ancient China.
2
3
1
People wear clothes with Chinese traditional elements there to take photos.
We ate Beijing duck. It was delicious.
Watch and Describe
Tip 1 to be more specific by adding detailed information.
Wednesday, August 20th
过渡词句
Today the weather was hot and sunny. I went to the Palace Museum. It was beautiful.
We took some photos. The Palace Museum has many beautiful buildings, halls, and gardens. It’s like stepping into ancient China. We saw People wear clothes with Chinese traditional elements there to take photos. I liked this place because I could buy something special there. For dinner we had Beijing duck. It was delicious.
In the evening, I felt really tired
at first after that but then so
Wednesday, August 20th
Today the weather was hot and sunny. I went to the Palace Museum. It was beautiful.
1.______,we took some photos about the Palace Museum. The Palace Museum has many beautiful buildings, halls, and gardens. 2.______it was like stepping into ancient China. 3._______, I saw people wear clothes with Chinese traditional elements there to take photos. 4.________, we had Beijing duck. It was delicious.
In the evening, I felt really tired 5._______ happy.
At first
So
After that
Then
but
过渡词句
Tip 2 to be more logic by adding conjunctions.
The Palace Museum has many beautiful buildings, halls, and gardens. So it was like stepping into ancient China.
The Palace Museum has so many beautiful buildings, halls, and gardens that I felt like stepping into ancient China.
I saw people wear clothes with Chinese traditional elements there to take photos.
I wanted to experience it too .
I saw so many people wear clothes with Chinese traditional elements there to take photos that I wanted to experience it too.
多变句式
I went to the Palace Museum. It was beautiful.
Then,we had Beijing duck. It was delicious.
I went to the Palace Museum. How beautiful it is!
Then, we had Beijing duck. What delicious Beijing duck it is!
多变句式
Tip 3 to be more rich by changing sentence patterns.
Write a travel diary like Jane’s on page 5. (请用到借物抒情的手法 )
Friday, July 12th
I went to …with my family/sister.
I arrived in…
The weather was…
First…in the morning…I did/ate…
Second… in the afternoon …I ate…
Then…in the evening…I bought…
At last…There was/were
Although I felt very tired, I was happy.
I hope tp visit…again.
How great/terrible my trip is!
谚语引入:As an old saying goes, travel is a better way than to read.
A travel diary
beginning
body
ending
when
where
who
what
how
评分标准及分值 得分
Format/日记格式(3分)
Tense/时态(3分)
Content/内容要求: 查看要求描述的信息是否完整。 Who(2分)
When(2分)
Where(2分)
What(2分)
How(feeling)(2分)
Writing/书写(2分)
Good words/phrases/sentences 好词,短语,结构,句式波浪线画出。(2分)
Evaluation(评价)
Content and frame
(内容和结构)
Correct grammar
(语法)
Good language
(语言)
Good writing
(书写)
Content and frame
(内容和结构)
Good sentences,
phrases, words
(好词,好句)
Missing words
(漏词)
Mistakes
(错误)
总体评价
Good
More than 12
Come on!
Less than 12
Beginning:
Main body:
Ending:
﹋
Excellent
More than 16
小组写作互评表
Sunday, May 25th
I arrived in Chengdu this morning with my parents. It was sunny and warm, so we decided to go for a walk near our hotel. We saw many pretty buildings and lots of good restaurants . For lunch, we had hot pot. It was very spicy but delicious. I love Sichuan food! In the afternoon, we went to see pandas in the zoo. Pandas are my favorite animal because they’re so cute. I was happy to know people are trying their best to save this endangered animal. In the evening, we went shopping along Chunxi Road and bought many things.
1. A: Did ________ go on vacation with you last month
B: Yes, my family went to the countryside with me.
1. Complete the conversations with the correct words in the box.
anything, everything, nothing, anyone, everyone, no one
anyone
2. A: Did your family go to the beach with you last weekend
B: No. ________ from my family went, but my friend went with me.
No one
3. A: I didn’t bring back anything from Malaysia.
B: _________ at all Why not
Nothing
带回来
anything, everything, nothing, anyone, everyone, no one
4. A: Did you buy __________ in the shopping center
B: No, I didn’t. ____________ was very expensive.
5. A: How was the volleyball game yesterday
B: Great! ___________ had a fun time!
anything
Everything
过得很开心;玩得非常愉快
在购物中心
Everyone
Last August, our class _______ (do) something very special on our school trip. We _______ (go) to Mount Tai. We ________ (start) our trip at 12:00 at night. Everyone in our class ________ (take) a bag with some food and water. After three hours, someone looked at the map and ________ (find) out we ________________ (be, not) anywhere near the top.
did
went
started
took
found
weren’t / were not
find out 查明;弄清
2. Complete the passage with the correct forms of the verbs in brackets.
My legs ________ (be) so tired that I wanted to stop. My classmates ________ (tell) me to keep going, so I ________ (go) on. At 5:00 a.m., we got to the top! Everyone ________ (jump) up and down in excitement. Twenty minutes later, the sun ________ (start) to come up. It was so beautiful that we ________ (forget) about the last five hours!
were
told
went
jumped
started
forgot
come up
升起
jump up and down in excitement 兴奋地跳来跳去
Did you dislike anything?
有你不喜欢的东西吗?
dislike v. & n. 不喜爱(的事物);厌恶(的事物)
dislike是由动词like加否定前缀dis- 构成的派生词
【常用结构】dislike doing sth. 不喜欢做某事
e.g. He disliked being away from his family.
他讨厌远离家人。
_______________ 查明; 弄清
_______________ 上升; 升起
_______________ 带回来
jump up and down in excitement _________________
find out
come up
bring back
兴奋地跳来跳去
________________________学一些重要的东西
________________________过得很愉快;玩得非常开心
in the shopping center __________________
learn something important
have a fun time
在购物中心
根据短文内容, 从方框中选择恰当的单词填空, 注意形式变化。
top, what, bird, fish, wonderful, seem, dislike, wait, hungry, decide
Saturday, April 3rd
Today my parents and I paid a visit to Mount Hua, one of the five most famous mountains in China.
When we arrived at the foot of Mount Hua at 9:10 a.m., it was too cloudy and (1)________ to rain. We were unhappy
seemed
because we (2)______________ climbing mountains on rainy days. Luckily, half an hour later, the sun came out and we went on climbing the mountain. On the way, we enjoyed the beautiful scenery (风景) and heard (3)_______ singing in the trees. After six hours of hard climb, we arrived at the (4) ____ of the mountain. We could see other peaks (山峰) far away. They looked (5)__________. We also took lots of photos. At 6:00 p.m., we all felt very (6)_______, so we walked into a restaurant nearby. We didn't (7)_______ long for the dinner.
top, what, bird, fish, wonderful, seem, dislike, wait, hungry, decide
disliked/dislike
birds
top
wonderful
hungry
wait
We had some (8)_______ and vegetables. It was late when we finished our dinner. To watch the sunrise (日出) the next morning, we (9)________ to stay at a hotel in the mountain. (10)_______ a great day we had! I think it will be more interesting tomorrow.
top, what, bird, fish, wonderful, seem, dislike, wait, hungry, decide
fish
decided
What
请你根据以下提示,分享你和家人出去游玩的一次经历。词数不少于100。
提示:
1. Where did you go
2. What did you do
3. What did you see or hear
4. What did you think of the trip
You and me
From one world
We are family
Travel dream
A thousand miles
Meeting in Beijing
Come together
Put your hand in mine
You and me
From one world
We are family
Sing-along