2025年中考英语写作话题复习之经历感受类讲义
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书面表达
常用衔接词
类别 单词/ 短语 例句
顺序 first of all/ first (ly) / to start with/...comes first.首先 secondly/ second/ next/ then 其次 finally/ in the end/at last 最后 last but not least最后但同样重要的是 at the same time/ meanwhile同时 Last but not least, I keep on trying and never give up. 最后但同样重要的是，我一直在努力，从不放弃。 To start with, all seemed well. 开始时,一切看上去很顺利。
并列 补充 and 和；又；而且 besides 除此之外 in addition 除此之外还有, not only. . . but also不但……而且 on the one hand…，on the other hand…一方面……另一方面…… In the face of the variation of the virus, not only China but also other countries have to take action to fight against the crisis. 面对病毒的变异，不仅中国而且其他国家都不得不采取行动对抗危机。
转折对比 but 但是however 然而while 然而 Some people waste food while others suffer from hunger. 一些人浪费食物而还有人挨饿
递进 what’s more 甚至;更重要的是 what’s worse 更糟糕的是 even 甚至 especially 特别是 above all 首先；最重要的是 ①It’s important for us to study hard, especially for students. 对于我们，尤其是 青少年来说，努力学习很重要。 ②You should remember it, and what’s more, you should get it right. 你应该记住它，更重要的是，应该正确理解它。
因果 /目的 because/ as/ since/ because of/for 因为 thanks to多亏了…… as a result 结果 without 没有 with the help of. . . 在……的帮助下 therefore 所以 for this reason 因为这个原因 so that 以便于 in order that/ in order to 为了 for this purpose 为了这个目的 ①Thanks to this treatment, her physical condition has improved. 多亏了这种治疗，她的身体状况已经改善了。 ② It’s raining outside. For this reason, you have to stay at home. 外面下雨，因为这个原因，你只能待在家。 ③She spent a lot of time preparing for the speech, so that she won the first prize in the speech contest. 她花了很多时间准备演讲，结果获得了比赛一等奖。
举例 for example例如 such as. . . 比如；例如 and so on 等等 Besides success, we can also go for many other things during our lifetime, such as love, friendship, happiness and so on. 在我们一生中，除了成功，我们还应该追求很多其他的东西，比如爱、友谊、快乐等等。
观点 陈述自己观点： as far as I know 就我所知 in my opinion 依我来看 to tell the truth 说实话 to be honest 诚实地说 generally speaking 通常来说 陈述正反方不同观点： on the one hand. . . on the other hand. . . 一方面……又一方面…… some. . . while others. . . 一些人认为……而另一些人为…… Everything has two sides. 事物都具有两面性。 Some people hold the view that. . . while the others prefer the view that. . . 一些人坚持这种观点, 而另一些人更喜欢另一种观点 ①In my opinion, I think it is a wonderful country.依我看，这是一个美妙的国度。 ② Some people hold the view that young people nowadays are not as hardworking as their parents while the others prefer the view that young people still work hard. 一些人坚持认为如今的年轻人不如他们的父母那一代勤奋； 而另一些人更喜欢另一种观点——年轻人还是很努力的。
总结 in short /in a word/ all in all总之 All in all, to live a happier life we should try hard to form good habits. 总之，为了过上更加幸福的生活，我们应该努力养成好的习惯。
词汇升级
词性 基础词汇 升级词汇 基础词汇 升级词汇
名词 advantage (优点) benefit, strength, strong point disadvantage (缺点) shortcoming, weakness
development (发展) progress, become better reason (原因) cause
way (方法) method, means, approach thing (事情) matter, business, affair
problem (问题) question, trouble, issue wealth (财富) treasure, fortune
chance (机会) opportunity difficulty (困难) challenge
动词 use (使用) make good / full use of, take advantage of try (尝试) do/ try one’s best to do, make every effort to do
hope (希望) expect, look forward to know (知道) understand, come to realize
keep (保持) stick to, insist on like (喜欢) be fond of, fall in love with, be crazy about
grow (增长) raise, improve, increase cause (导致) lead to, result in
finish (完成) achieve; complete remember (记住) keep sth. in mind
face (面对) be faced with，be faced with / stand up to realize (意识到) be conscious / aware of
需要 (need) in need of meet (遇见) come across
can (能) enable, allow sb to do, make it possible to do sth. solve (解决) deal with, work out
形 容 词 good (好的) fantastic, amazing, excellent，perfect，outstanding, wonderful pleasant bad (坏的) terrible，harmful awful
happy (高兴) pleased, joyful beautiful pretty, attractive, charming
tired (累的) be worn out difficult (困难的) challenging
many/ much 许多 a (great) number of / quite a few/ a lot of / lots of / plenty of/various helpful (有帮助的) be of great help
important (重要的) be of great importance clever (聪明的) wise, bright, intelligent
连词 besides此外 moreover, in addition, what’s more and (和) as well as, along/ together with
because 因为 as a result of… but (但是) yet, on the other hand, however
so (所以) therefore, as a result, thus though (虽然) in spite of
副词 too/ also (也) as well sometimes (有时) once in a while
短语 thank sb for (感谢) be grateful to sb for =express/ show one’s gratitude to sb.
decide to do (决定做) be determined to do, make up one’s mind to do
ask sb. for 向某人寻求帮助 turn to sb. for help, ask a favor of sb.
prepare for 为……做准备 make preparations for/ be prepared for
be good for (对……有益) be of (great) benefit to...，be helpful to sth=be of use to sth
advise sb to do sth/ suggest doing建议 It’s suggested/ advised that sb should do sb. suggest/ advise that sb should do
we like... best... 最喜爱 one’s favorite
sb. be asked to do... 某人被要求做某事 be requested to do sth. = demand (of sb.) to do... It is required/requested/ demanded that...(should) do...)
高级句式
句子功能 句式 例句
常用开头 1. It’s well known to us that … 众所周知 2. As is known to us, 正如我们所知 3. …is a hot topic that is being widely talked about… ……是一个正在被广泛讨论的热门话题。 4. From the pictures/ charts, we can see that/ it can be seen that… 从图片/ 图表我们可以看到…… 5. As the proverb says “…” 正如谚语所说：“……” 6. Once upon a time there was… 很久以前，曾有…… 7. One day…一天 8. Long long ago, there…很久以前，有…… 9. Nowadays,…plays an important role in people’s daily life. 如今，……在人们的日常生活中起着非常重要的作用 10. With the development of..., people begin... 随着……的发展，人们开始…… ① We all know friends are important to us. As the proverb says “A friend is like a mirror.” It’s well known to us that friends are important to us. 正如谚语所说：“朋友就像镜子。”众所周知，朋友对我们来说很重要。 ② Mobile phones are important in people’s daily life. Nowadays, mobile phones play an important role in people’s daily life. 如今，手机在人们的日常生活中起着非常重要的作用。
描述现象或提出问题 1. Recently,…has become the focus of the society. 近来,……已经成为社会的焦点。 2. Nowadays, it is common to hear/see… 现如今，听到/看到……是很普遍的。 3.The fact that …has attracted our attention ……的事实已经吸引了我们的关注。 4. No one would disagree with the fact that… 没有人会不同意……的事实 The problem of pollution is serious. Recently, the problem of pollution has become the focus of the society. 近来，污染问题已经成为社会的焦点。
说明原因 1. Because I have to …, I won’t be able to… 因为我得……, 我不能…… 2. Because of…I won’t be able to … 因为……我不能…… 3. The reason for …is…that… ……的原因是…… 4. That’s why… 这就是为什么…… China has had many great achievements. We are all proud of it. China has had many great achievements and that’s why we are all proud of it. 中国已经取得了很多伟 大的成绩，那也是为什么我们全都为它而自豪。
表达看法/观点 1. Some of …think that it is necessary to… ……中的一些认为有必要…… 2. Some of… point out that it is good to… ……中的一些指出……是有好处的 3. Some of …hold the ideas that it is necessary to … ……中的一些持有……是必要的想法 4. Some of…don’t think that it is a good idea to … ……中的一些认为……不是一个好主意 5. Others don’t think it is suitable for…to do … 另一些认为……不是一个好主意 6. Some of them are against the idea that it is … 他们中的一些人反对……的想法 7. People have different opinions on this problem. 针对这个问题，人们有不同的观点， 8. Some people believe that…others argue that… 一些人认为……,其他人认为…… 9. In my opinion…我认为…… 10. As far as I am concerned…在我看来…… 11. Personally, I…就我个人来说，我…… 12. In my view…我认为…… Eating enough fruit and vegetables is important for us. In my opinion, it is important for us to eat enough fruit and vegetables. 我认为，吃足够的水果和蔬菜是很重要的。 Some people think failure leads to success. Others disagree. People have different opinions on failure. Some people believe that failure leads to success. Others are against the idea. 关于“失败”人们有不同的观点。一些人认为失败是成功之母。其他人反对这个想法。
提出建议 1. I think it is a good chance for you to… 我认为对你来说……是一个很好的机会 2. I’d like to suggest you…我想建议你…… 3. I think you might like to… 我认为你或许喜欢…… 4. I was wondering if you’d like to … 我在想你是否喜欢…… You should go abroad to get further education. I think it is a good chance for you to go abroad to get further education. 我认为对你来说，出国深 造是一个很好的机会。
表达目的 1. I…so that…我……以便于…… 2. I…in order to do …我……目的是…… I have made up my mind to do what I really want to. I can achieve my dream. I have made up my mind to do what I really want to so that I can achieve my dream. 我已经下定决心要做我想做的事以便于我能实现我的梦想。
描述计划 1. I am going to do …我将要做…… 2. I plan to do …我打算做…… 3.I make a plan to do …我制定计划做…… 4. There is going to be…将要有…… 5. I make up my mind to 我下决心…… I will study hard. I make up my mind to study hard.我下定决心好好学习。
说明好处坏处 1.It has the following advantages. 它有如下优点 2.It does us a lot of good.它对我们有很多好处。 3. Everything divides into two. 事情要一分为二 4.It has more disadvantages than advantages.相比优点，它有更多的缺点。 5.It does us much harm.它对我们非常有害。 6.It is harmful to us. 它对我们有害。 Watching TV is interesting. Watching TV can also be harmful to us. Watching TV is interesting. However, everything divides into two. Watching TV can also be harmful to us. 看电视是有趣的。然后，事情应一分为二地看。看电视对我们也会产生危害。
表示对比 1. I had to … in the past. However, …now. 过去我必须……。然而，现在…… 2. In the past, I … But now, I… 过去，我……。但是现在，我…… 3. It’s quite different now. I used to…but now I…现在非常不一样了。我过去常常……,但是现在我…… 4. It’s not like what it used to be at all. Now I… 现在根本不像以前那样了。现在，我…… 5. Compared with A, B… 同A相比，B…… 6. There is a striking contrast between them. 它们之间有显著的差异。 I was short. Now I’m tall. It’s quite different now. I used to be short but now I’m tall.…现在非常不一样了。我过去矮,但是现在我长高了。
表达信念 期待 1. I’m looking forward to 我盼望着…… 2. I expect to …as soon as possible. 我期盼着能尽快…… 3. I can’t wait to …soon.我等不及快…… Please write to me soon. I expect to hear from you as soon as possible.我期望着尽快收到你的来信。
常用结尾 1. From what has been discussed above, we may reach the conclusion that... 根据以上讨论，我们可以得出结论… 2. We must look for all methods, because the present situation of..., if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/ result in... 我们必须立即寻找一切办法，因为……的现状，如果允许继续下去，一定会导致……的。 3.There is no perfect solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful. 没有完美解决……问题的办法，但是……可能有帮助/ 有益。 All in all, we must solve the problem of pollution. We must look for all methods, because the present situation of pollution, if permitted to continue, will sure lead to more serious problem. 我们必须立即寻找一切办法，因为污染的现状，如果允许继续下去，一定会导致更严重的问题的。
考点1 经历感受类
话题分析
描述个人经历与感受是各地中考考查的重点话题。该话题通常要求学生描述一次难忘的、有意义的事件，并且抒发个人情感，讲述自身收获。学生备考时应围绕该话题，注意积累描述事件起因、经过、结果的语言表达，关注抒发情感的各类句型结构。
教材链接
写作角度 话题 人教教材链接 页码
经历 Everyday activities(日常活动) 七(下) Unit 6 I’m watching TV. P31
School trips(校园旅行) 七(下) Unit 11 How was your school trip P61
Weekend activities(周末活动) 七(下)Unit 12 What did you do last weekend P67
Holidays and vacations(假期) 八(上)Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation P1
Unforgettable events(难忘的事情) 八(下)Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came P33
Literature and music(文学和音乐) 八(下)Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet P57
Fun places(有趣的地方) 八(下) Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum P65
Unexpected events(不可预知的事件) 九(全)Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected. P89
感受 School trips(校园旅行) 七(下)Unit 11 How was your school trip P61
Decision making(制定计划) 八(上)Unit 10 If you go to the party, you'll have a great time！ P73
好词佳句
词汇短语积累 experience经历；unforgettable难忘的；meaningful有意义的； praise表扬；give a hand帮忙；make a difference有影响，起作用； with the help of...在……的帮助下；take an active part in积极参加； prepare for为……做准备；learn...from...从……中学到……
话题常用句型 Once I was praised because I did something meaningful with... 有一次我因为用……做了一件有意义的事而受到表扬。 Though it was not easy to finish, I made up my mind to... 即使这不容易完成，但我下定决心…… From this, I’ve learned that it’s important to... 从这次经历中，我学到了……很重要。
写作框架
Step 1 认真审题，明确要求 审主题 写人叙事
审文体 记叙文
审人称 第一人称为主
审时态 一般过去时为主
审要点 5W1H—when;where;who;what;why;how
Step 2 分析要点，编制提纲 开头 引出主题，确定写作角度。 写作角度可以从以下几点考虑：①确定事件发生的人物关系，如“我”与老师、朋友；②选取自己经历的事件，让自己有话可说，具备真情实感；③该事件有教育意义，富含正能量，可从中汲取知识、收获感动、体现积极的价值观。
正文 陈述事件的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过和结果等。 注意：①选取典型事件进行叙述，选取的事件能服务书面表达的主题和立意。 ②叙述事件发展时要布局合理、详略得当、重点突出。
结尾 再次点明主题，表达自己的感受、思考、收获或启发等。注意要紧扣主题，升华全文。可以从以下两个方面考虑： ①人物精神或事迹的积极作用，对个人、社会的影响； ②人物或个人事迹对自己的启发及影响。
Step 3巧用词句，衔接成文 巧用“知识清单”中的衔接词，词汇升级和高级句子 以及“词汇短语积累”中的相关表达
例 初中学习生活就要结束了。在过去的三年里，你和同学们参加过很多学校组织的活动，例如运动会、联欢会、读书交流会、外出参观等。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文给学校英文报刊投稿，介绍一次有意义的活动，这个活动是什么，你(们)做了什么，你的感受是什么。 Step 1认真审题，明确要求
主题 介绍过去的经历
人称 第一、三人称为主
时态 一般过去时为主
文体 记叙文
要点 有意义的一次活动； 陈述事件的时间、地点、人物、目的、经过和结果； 表达自己的感受、思考、收获或启发等。
提示词语：meaningful (有意义的), celebrate, happy
Step 2 列要点，编提纲
立框架 列要点 添细节
Step 3巧用词句，衔接成文
普通范文 美化范文 升级点拨
We have held many meaningful school activities in the past three years. One of them is the New Year Party last year. The teachers and classmates showed their talents in art on the final day to celebrate the coming new year. Some played the guitar while singing, and others danced to the music. As for me, I wanted to thank my teachers and classmates, so I played a piece of music on the violin. At the end of the party, we read a poem written by our classmates to our teachers. We all think it was a very wonderful night. This party is meaningful because we had a happy time together and it was a chance to express our thanks to our teachers. There have been many significant school activities in the past three years which the New Year Party stood out last year. In order to celebrate the coming new year, both the teachers and classmates showed their various talents in art on the final day. Some played the guitar while singing, and others danced to the music. As for me, to express my gratitude to my teachers and classmates, I played a piece of music on the violin. At the end of the party, we read a poem written by our classmates to our teachers. What a wonderful night it was! All in all, this party is meaningful not only because we had a happy time together but also it was a chance to express our gratitude to our teachers. What’s more, a closer relationship has grown between the teachers and students. 句型升级：改为there be句型 词汇升级：将meaningful替换为significant 句型升级：改为which引导的定语从句 结构衔接：用both....and联结the teachers and the students 词汇升级：增加various修饰 词汇升级：用短语express one’s gratitude to sb. 表达感谢 句型升级：改为what引导的感叹句 结构衔接：用all in all总结 句型升级：用not only... but also连接 意义升华：活动使师生关系更加密切
小试牛刀
组句成篇 我来美化
There have been many ①important school activities in the past three years. ②One of them is the New Year Party last year. ③Our school wants to promote sportsmanship, our school organized a grand Sports Day event. It was a day filled with excitement. Students participated in ④sports activities, including relay races and long jump. As for me, I joined the sprint race. When the race day finally arrived, the atmosphere was electric. The cheers and applause motivated us to give our best performance. I remember feeling a rush of adrenaline ⑤_____ I sprinted towards the finish line. ⑥The Sports Day was⑦ a highly enjoyable event, it played a crucial role in fostering unity and a sense of belonging among the students. ①试着高级词汇替代important。 ②试着用which引导的定语从句升级句型。 ③请用更适切和简练的语言替换Our school wants to... ④增加形容词修饰sports activities。 ⑤请添加一个适当的连词____ ⑥加入连接词或短语进行总结。 ⑦请用not only...but also改写本句。
实战演练
【2021安徽中考】假定你是李华，曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，内容包括：1.事情经过；2.个人感悟。
注意：1.词数80-100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：pocket money（n.零花钱）; meaningful（adj.有意义的）
Once I was Praised
参考答案
【小试牛刀】
①significant
②There have been many significant school activities in the past three years, among which the Sports Day stood out last year.
③In order to
④as/when
⑤various
⑥All in all
⑦All in all, the Sports Day was not only a highly enjoyable event, but it also played a crucial role in fostering unity and a sense of belonging among the students.
【实战演练】
Once I was Praised
I want to share with you a meaningful experience that I had recently. I hope my story can inspire others to do meaningful things .
Once I had been saving up my pocket money for a long time, and I decided to do something special with it. There was a charity organization in our community that helps children in need, so I decided to donate all my savings to them. I felt that this was a meaningful way to use my money and help others. When my family found out about my decision, they were really proud of me. Their encouragement made me feel even better about my decision. It made me realize that even small actions can make a big difference in someone else's life.
In conclusion, the experience of donating my pocket money to a charity organization was truly rewarding. It not only made me feel good about myself but also made me understand the importance of giving back to society.
【详解】
题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Once I Was Praised”为题，结合提示进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍事情经过；第三段描述个人感悟。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
常用衔接词
类别 单词/ 短语 例句
顺序 first of all/ first (ly) / to start with/...comes first.首先 secondly/ second/ next/ then 其次 finally/ in the end/at last 最后 last but not least最后但同样重要的是 at the same time/ meanwhile同时 Last but not least, I keep on trying and never give up. 最后但同样重要的是，我一直在努力，从不放弃。 To start with, all seemed well. 开始时,一切看上去很顺利。
并列 补充 and 和；又；而且 besides 除此之外 in addition 除此之外还有, not only. . . but also不但……而且 on the one hand…，on the other hand…一方面……另一方面…… In the face of the variation of the virus, not only China but also other countries have to take action to fight against the crisis. 面对病毒的变异，不仅中国而且其他国家都不得不采取行动对抗危机。
转折对比 but 但是however 然而while 然而 Some people waste food while others suffer from hunger. 一些人浪费食物而还有人挨饿
递进 what’s more 甚至;更重要的是 what’s worse 更糟糕的是 even 甚至 especially 特别是 above all 首先；最重要的是 ①It’s important for us to study hard, especially for students. 对于我们，尤其是 青少年来说，努力学习很重要。 ②You should remember it, and what’s more, you should get it right. 你应该记住它，更重要的是，应该正确理解它。
因果 /目的 because/ as/ since/ because of/for 因为 thanks to多亏了…… as a result 结果 without 没有 with the help of. . . 在……的帮助下 therefore 所以 for this reason 因为这个原因 so that 以便于 in order that/ in order to 为了 for this purpose 为了这个目的 ①Thanks to this treatment, her physical condition has improved. 多亏了这种治疗，她的身体状况已经改善了。 ② It’s raining outside. For this reason, you have to stay at home. 外面下雨，因为这个原因，你只能待在家。 ③She spent a lot of time preparing for the speech, so that she won the first prize in the speech contest. 她花了很多时间准备演讲，结果获得了比赛一等奖。
举例 for example例如 such as. . . 比如；例如 and so on 等等 Besides success, we can also go for many other things during our lifetime, such as love, friendship, happiness and so on. 在我们一生中，除了成功，我们还应该追求很多其他的东西，比如爱、友谊、快乐等等。
观点 陈述自己观点： as far as I know 就我所知 in my opinion 依我来看 to tell the truth 说实话 to be honest 诚实地说 generally speaking 通常来说 陈述正反方不同观点： on the one hand. . . on the other hand. . . 一方面……又一方面…… some. . . while others. . . 一些人认为……而另一些人为…… Everything has two sides. 事物都具有两面性。 Some people hold the view that. . . while the others prefer the view that. . . 一些人坚持这种观点, 而另一些人更喜欢另一种观点 ①In my opinion, I think it is a wonderful country.依我看，这是一个美妙的国度。 ② Some people hold the view that young people nowadays are not as hardworking as their parents while the others prefer the view that young people still work hard. 一些人坚持认为如今的年轻人不如他们的父母那一代勤奋； 而另一些人更喜欢另一种观点——年轻人还是很努力的。
总结 in short /in a word/ all in all总之 All in all, to live a happier life we should try hard to form good habits. 总之，为了过上更加幸福的生活，我们应该努力养成好的习惯。
词汇升级
词性 基础词汇 升级词汇 基础词汇 升级词汇
名词 advantage (优点) benefit, strength, strong point disadvantage (缺点) shortcoming, weakness
development (发展) progress, become better reason (原因) cause
way (方法) method, means, approach thing (事情) matter, business, affair
problem (问题) question, trouble, issue wealth (财富) treasure, fortune
chance (机会) opportunity difficulty (困难) challenge
动词 use (使用) make good / full use of, take advantage of try (尝试) do/ try one’s best to do, make every effort to do
hope (希望) expect, look forward to know (知道) understand, come to realize
keep (保持) stick to, insist on like (喜欢) be fond of, fall in love with, be crazy about
grow (增长) raise, improve, increase cause (导致) lead to, result in
finish (完成) achieve; complete remember (记住) keep sth. in mind
face (面对) be faced with，be faced with / stand up to realize (意识到) be conscious / aware of
需要 (need) in need of meet (遇见) come across
can (能) enable, allow sb to do, make it possible to do sth. solve (解决) deal with, work out
形 容 词 good (好的) fantastic, amazing, excellent，perfect，outstanding, wonderful pleasant bad (坏的) terrible，harmful awful
happy (高兴) pleased, joyful beautiful pretty, attractive, charming
tired (累的) be worn out difficult (困难的) challenging
many/ much 许多 a (great) number of / quite a few/ a lot of / lots of / plenty of/various helpful (有帮助的) be of great help
important (重要的) be of great importance clever (聪明的) wise, bright, intelligent
连词 besides此外 moreover, in addition, what’s more and (和) as well as, along/ together with
because 因为 as a result of… but (但是) yet, on the other hand, however
so (所以) therefore, as a result, thus though (虽然) in spite of
副词 too/ also (也) as well sometimes (有时) once in a while
短语 thank sb for (感谢) be grateful to sb for =express/ show one’s gratitude to sb.
decide to do (决定做) be determined to do, make up one’s mind to do
ask sb. for 向某人寻求帮助 turn to sb. for help, ask a favor of sb.
prepare for 为……做准备 make preparations for/ be prepared for
be good for (对……有益) be of (great) benefit to...，be helpful to sth=be of use to sth
advise sb to do sth/ suggest doing建议 It’s suggested/ advised that sb should do sb. suggest/ advise that sb should do
we like... best... 最喜爱 one’s favorite
sb. be asked to do... 某人被要求做某事 be requested to do sth. = demand (of sb.) to do... It is required/requested/ demanded that...(should) do...)
高级句式
句子功能 句式 例句
常用开头 1. It’s well known to us that … 众所周知 2. As is known to us, 正如我们所知 3. …is a hot topic that is being widely talked about… ……是一个正在被广泛讨论的热门话题。 4. From the pictures/ charts, we can see that/ it can be seen that… 从图片/ 图表我们可以看到…… 5. As the proverb says “…” 正如谚语所说：“……” 6. Once upon a time there was… 很久以前，曾有…… 7. One day…一天 8. Long long ago, there…很久以前，有…… 9. Nowadays,…plays an important role in people’s daily life. 如今，……在人们的日常生活中起着非常重要的作用 10. With the development of..., people begin... 随着……的发展，人们开始…… ① We all know friends are important to us. As the proverb says “A friend is like a mirror.” It’s well known to us that friends are important to us. 正如谚语所说：“朋友就像镜子。”众所周知，朋友对我们来说很重要。 ② Mobile phones are important in people’s daily life. Nowadays, mobile phones play an important role in people’s daily life. 如今，手机在人们的日常生活中起着非常重要的作用。
描述现象或提出问题 1. Recently,…has become the focus of the society. 近来,……已经成为社会的焦点。 2. Nowadays, it is common to hear/see… 现如今，听到/看到……是很普遍的。 3.The fact that …has attracted our attention ……的事实已经吸引了我们的关注。 4. No one would disagree with the fact that… 没有人会不同意……的事实 The problem of pollution is serious. Recently, the problem of pollution has become the focus of the society. 近来，污染问题已经成为社会的焦点。
说明原因 1. Because I have to …, I won’t be able to… 因为我得……, 我不能…… 2. Because of…I won’t be able to … 因为……我不能…… 3. The reason for …is…that… ……的原因是…… 4. That’s why… 这就是为什么…… China has had many great achievements. We are all proud of it. China has had many great achievements and that’s why we are all proud of it. 中国已经取得了很多伟 大的成绩，那也是为什么我们全都为它而自豪。
表达看法/观点 1. Some of …think that it is necessary to… ……中的一些认为有必要…… 2. Some of… point out that it is good to… ……中的一些指出……是有好处的 3. Some of …hold the ideas that it is necessary to … ……中的一些持有……是必要的想法 4. Some of…don’t think that it is a good idea to … ……中的一些认为……不是一个好主意 5. Others don’t think it is suitable for…to do … 另一些认为……不是一个好主意 6. Some of them are against the idea that it is … 他们中的一些人反对……的想法 7. People have different opinions on this problem. 针对这个问题，人们有不同的观点， 8. Some people believe that…others argue that… 一些人认为……,其他人认为…… 9. In my opinion…我认为…… 10. As far as I am concerned…在我看来…… 11. Personally, I…就我个人来说，我…… 12. In my view…我认为…… Eating enough fruit and vegetables is important for us. In my opinion, it is important for us to eat enough fruit and vegetables. 我认为，吃足够的水果和蔬菜是很重要的。 Some people think failure leads to success. Others disagree. People have different opinions on failure. Some people believe that failure leads to success. Others are against the idea. 关于“失败”人们有不同的观点。一些人认为失败是成功之母。其他人反对这个想法。
提出建议 1. I think it is a good chance for you to… 我认为对你来说……是一个很好的机会 2. I’d like to suggest you…我想建议你…… 3. I think you might like to… 我认为你或许喜欢…… 4. I was wondering if you’d like to … 我在想你是否喜欢…… You should go abroad to get further education. I think it is a good chance for you to go abroad to get further education. 我认为对你来说，出国深 造是一个很好的机会。
表达目的 1. I…so that…我……以便于…… 2. I…in order to do …我……目的是…… I have made up my mind to do what I really want to. I can achieve my dream. I have made up my mind to do what I really want to so that I can achieve my dream. 我已经下定决心要做我想做的事以便于我能实现我的梦想。
描述计划 1. I am going to do …我将要做…… 2. I plan to do …我打算做…… 3.I make a plan to do …我制定计划做…… 4. There is going to be…将要有…… 5. I make up my mind to 我下决心…… I will study hard. I make up my mind to study hard.我下定决心好好学习。
说明好处坏处 1.It has the following advantages. 它有如下优点 2.It does us a lot of good.它对我们有很多好处。 3. Everything divides into two. 事情要一分为二 4.It has more disadvantages than advantages.相比优点，它有更多的缺点。 5.It does us much harm.它对我们非常有害。 6.It is harmful to us. 它对我们有害。 Watching TV is interesting. Watching TV can also be harmful to us. Watching TV is interesting. However, everything divides into two. Watching TV can also be harmful to us. 看电视是有趣的。然后，事情应一分为二地看。看电视对我们也会产生危害。
表示对比 1. I had to … in the past. However, …now. 过去我必须……。然而，现在…… 2. In the past, I … But now, I… 过去，我……。但是现在，我…… 3. It’s quite different now. I used to…but now I…现在非常不一样了。我过去常常……,但是现在我…… 4. It’s not like what it used to be at all. Now I… 现在根本不像以前那样了。现在，我…… 5. Compared with A, B… 同A相比，B…… 6. There is a striking contrast between them. 它们之间有显著的差异。 I was short. Now I’m tall. It’s quite different now. I used to be short but now I’m tall.…现在非常不一样了。我过去矮,但是现在我长高了。
表达信念 期待 1. I’m looking forward to 我盼望着…… 2. I expect to …as soon as possible. 我期盼着能尽快…… 3. I can’t wait to …soon.我等不及快…… Please write to me soon. I expect to hear from you as soon as possible.我期望着尽快收到你的来信。
常用结尾 1. From what has been discussed above, we may reach the conclusion that... 根据以上讨论，我们可以得出结论… 2. We must look for all methods, because the present situation of..., if permitted to continue, will sure lead to/ result in... 我们必须立即寻找一切办法，因为……的现状，如果允许继续下去，一定会导致……的。 3.There is no perfect solution to the problem of..., but... might be helpful. 没有完美解决……问题的办法，但是……可能有帮助/ 有益。 All in all, we must solve the problem of pollution. We must look for all methods, because the present situation of pollution, if permitted to continue, will sure lead to more serious problem. 我们必须立即寻找一切办法，因为污染的现状，如果允许继续下去，一定会导致更严重的问题的。
考点1 经历感受类
话题分析
描述个人经历与感受是各地中考考查的重点话题。该话题通常要求学生描述一次难忘的、有意义的事件，并且抒发个人情感，讲述自身收获。学生备考时应围绕该话题，注意积累描述事件起因、经过、结果的语言表达，关注抒发情感的各类句型结构。
教材链接
写作角度 话题 人教教材链接 页码
经历 Everyday activities(日常活动) 七(下) Unit 6 I’m watching TV. P31
School trips(校园旅行) 七(下) Unit 11 How was your school trip P61
Weekend activities(周末活动) 七(下)Unit 12 What did you do last weekend P67
Holidays and vacations(假期) 八(上)Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation P1
Unforgettable events(难忘的事情) 八(下)Unit 5 What were you doing when the rainstorm came P33
Literature and music(文学和音乐) 八(下)Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet P57
Fun places(有趣的地方) 八(下) Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum P65
Unexpected events(不可预知的事件) 九(全)Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected. P89
感受 School trips(校园旅行) 七(下)Unit 11 How was your school trip P61
Decision making(制定计划) 八(上)Unit 10 If you go to the party, you'll have a great time！ P73
好词佳句
词汇短语积累 experience经历；unforgettable难忘的；meaningful有意义的； praise表扬；give a hand帮忙；make a difference有影响，起作用； with the help of...在……的帮助下；take an active part in积极参加； prepare for为……做准备；learn...from...从……中学到……
话题常用句型 Once I was praised because I did something meaningful with... 有一次我因为用……做了一件有意义的事而受到表扬。 Though it was not easy to finish, I made up my mind to... 即使这不容易完成，但我下定决心…… From this, I’ve learned that it’s important to... 从这次经历中，我学到了……很重要。
写作框架
Step 1 认真审题，明确要求 审主题 写人叙事
审文体 记叙文
审人称 第一人称为主
审时态 一般过去时为主
审要点 5W1H—when;where;who;what;why;how
Step 2 分析要点，编制提纲 开头 引出主题，确定写作角度。 写作角度可以从以下几点考虑：①确定事件发生的人物关系，如“我”与老师、朋友；②选取自己经历的事件，让自己有话可说，具备真情实感；③该事件有教育意义，富含正能量，可从中汲取知识、收获感动、体现积极的价值观。
正文 陈述事件的时间、地点、人物、起因、经过和结果等。 注意：①选取典型事件进行叙述，选取的事件能服务书面表达的主题和立意。 ②叙述事件发展时要布局合理、详略得当、重点突出。
结尾 再次点明主题，表达自己的感受、思考、收获或启发等。注意要紧扣主题，升华全文。可以从以下两个方面考虑： ①人物精神或事迹的积极作用，对个人、社会的影响； ②人物或个人事迹对自己的启发及影响。
Step 3巧用词句，衔接成文 巧用“知识清单”中的衔接词，词汇升级和高级句子 以及“词汇短语积累”中的相关表达
例 初中学习生活就要结束了。在过去的三年里，你和同学们参加过很多学校组织的活动，例如运动会、联欢会、读书交流会、外出参观等。假如你是李华，请你用英语写一篇短文给学校英文报刊投稿，介绍一次有意义的活动，这个活动是什么，你(们)做了什么，你的感受是什么。 Step 1认真审题，明确要求
主题 介绍过去的经历
人称 第一、三人称为主
时态 一般过去时为主
文体 记叙文
要点 有意义的一次活动； 陈述事件的时间、地点、人物、目的、经过和结果； 表达自己的感受、思考、收获或启发等。
提示词语：meaningful (有意义的), celebrate, happy
Step 2 列要点，编提纲
立框架 列要点 添细节
Step 3巧用词句，衔接成文
普通范文 美化范文 升级点拨
We have held many meaningful school activities in the past three years. One of them is the New Year Party last year. The teachers and classmates showed their talents in art on the final day to celebrate the coming new year. Some played the guitar while singing, and others danced to the music. As for me, I wanted to thank my teachers and classmates, so I played a piece of music on the violin. At the end of the party, we read a poem written by our classmates to our teachers. We all think it was a very wonderful night. This party is meaningful because we had a happy time together and it was a chance to express our thanks to our teachers. There have been many significant school activities in the past three years which the New Year Party stood out last year. In order to celebrate the coming new year, both the teachers and classmates showed their various talents in art on the final day. Some played the guitar while singing, and others danced to the music. As for me, to express my gratitude to my teachers and classmates, I played a piece of music on the violin. At the end of the party, we read a poem written by our classmates to our teachers. What a wonderful night it was! All in all, this party is meaningful not only because we had a happy time together but also it was a chance to express our gratitude to our teachers. What’s more, a closer relationship has grown between the teachers and students. 句型升级：改为there be句型 词汇升级：将meaningful替换为significant 句型升级：改为which引导的定语从句 结构衔接：用both....and联结the teachers and the students 词汇升级：增加various修饰 词汇升级：用短语express one’s gratitude to sb. 表达感谢 句型升级：改为what引导的感叹句 结构衔接：用all in all总结 句型升级：用not only... but also连接 意义升华：活动使师生关系更加密切
小试牛刀
组句成篇 我来美化
There have been many ①important school activities in the past three years. ②One of them is the New Year Party last year. ③Our school wants to promote sportsmanship, our school organized a grand Sports Day event. It was a day filled with excitement. Students participated in ④sports activities, including relay races and long jump. As for me, I joined the sprint race. When the race day finally arrived, the atmosphere was electric. The cheers and applause motivated us to give our best performance. I remember feeling a rush of adrenaline ⑤_____ I sprinted towards the finish line. ⑥The Sports Day was⑦ a highly enjoyable event, it played a crucial role in fostering unity and a sense of belonging among the students. ①试着高级词汇替代important。 ②试着用which引导的定语从句升级句型。 ③请用更适切和简练的语言替换Our school wants to... ④增加形容词修饰sports activities。 ⑤请添加一个适当的连词____ ⑥加入连接词或短语进行总结。 ⑦请用not only...but also改写本句。
实战演练
【2021安徽中考】假定你是李华，曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿，内容包括：1.事情经过；2.个人感悟。
注意：1.词数80-100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：pocket money（n.零花钱）; meaningful（adj.有意义的）
Once I was Praised
参考答案
【小试牛刀】
①significant
②There have been many significant school activities in the past three years, among which the Sports Day stood out last year.
③In order to
④as/when
⑤various
⑥All in all
⑦All in all, the Sports Day was not only a highly enjoyable event, but it also played a crucial role in fostering unity and a sense of belonging among the students.
【实战演练】
Once I was Praised
I want to share with you a meaningful experience that I had recently. I hope my story can inspire others to do meaningful things .
Once I had been saving up my pocket money for a long time, and I decided to do something special with it. There was a charity organization in our community that helps children in need, so I decided to donate all my savings to them. I felt that this was a meaningful way to use my money and help others. When my family found out about my decision, they were really proud of me. Their encouragement made me feel even better about my decision. It made me realize that even small actions can make a big difference in someone else's life.
In conclusion, the experience of donating my pocket money to a charity organization was truly rewarding. It not only made me feel good about myself but also made me understand the importance of giving back to society.
【详解】
题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Once I Was Praised”为题，结合提示进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍事情经过；第三段描述个人感悟。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。