2025年中考英语写作话题复习之做法建议类讲义
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考点3 做法建议类
话题分析
全国中考书面表达题中对“做法建议类”的话题考查比重最大。2022年版《义务教育英语课程标准》要求学生能就口语或书面语篇的内容、观点和态度作出评价，并说明理由、阐释事理。在初中阶段，“做法建议类”话题的作文主要涉及到人物行为方面、学习方面、人际交往方面、环保方面、安全方面和健康方面。
教材链接
写作角度 话题 人教教材链接 页码
人物行为方面 规则 七(下)Unit 4 ；九(全) Unit 7 P19；P49
学习方面 学会如何学习 九(全)Unit 1 P1
人际方面 人际沟通 八(下)Unit 4 P25
环保方面 保护环境 九(全) Unit 13 P97
健康方面 健康与急救 八(下)Unit 1 P1
好词佳句
词汇短语积累 relax放松；exercise锻炼；success成功；hard-working努力工作的；brave勇敢的；carefully仔细地；form good habits形成好的习惯；follow my advice遵循我的建议；remind sb of sth.提醒某人某事；deal with处理、应对；communicate with sb.与某人交流；take notes记笔记；look up查询；get on well with相处的好；remember to do sth.记得去做某事；pay attention to关注；watch out小心；What’s more再有；be upset about为....而烦恼。
话题常用句型 It’s important to do sth. … 做……是重要的。 Why not do sth...... 为什么不去做.... 3. Here are my ideas about how to do sth...... 这是我的一些想法...... 4. Doing sth. is good for......做某事是有好处的…… 5. To make it more and more beautiful, I often ........为了使它更美好，我经常... 6. You should be careful to make friends online to keep yourself safe.… 网上交友要注意安全。
写作框架
Step 1 认真审题，明确要求 审主题 做法建议类
审文体 说明文
审人称 第一、二人称为主
审时态 一般现在时为主
审要点 针对对方遇到的问题，提出合理的方法，帮助对方解决问题。
Step 2 分析要点，编制提纲 开头 开门见山，引入话题。 写作角度可以从以下几点考虑： ①开篇要直扣主题，语言准确，层次分明。②谈及对方的困难时和总述自己观点时，要选择恰当的句式使语气更加委婉、礼貌。
正文 阐述自己的看法和建议。 注意：①在提出建议的时候，我们需要考虑读者是谁，需要采用怎样的语气使对方易于接受。②针对每条建议，我们可以增加相应的细节支撑，以便对方执行或参考。③建议从不同角度提出建议。
结尾 进行总结概括，表达期望。 注意：①建议表达真挚的祝福，增强文章的人文关怀。 ②适当地采用高级表达，使文章内容的丰富性和层次性更突出，升华文章主题。
Step 3巧用词句，衔接成文 巧用“知识清单”中的衔接词，词汇升级和高级句子 以及“词汇短语积累”中的相关表达
例【2022江苏省宿迁市中考】实施“双减”政策，推行“阳光作业”，我们同学可以从繁重的课业负担中解放出来，有更多的时间培养兴趣爱好，陪伴家人、朋友。学校请你与学弟、学妹们分享如何合理安排课余生活，请根据下表提示完成一篇题为“Enjoy study, enjoy life”的英语短文。
Enjoy study, enjoy life
校园 1.参加各种活动，如：绘画、舞蹈等； 2.多做运动，有益健康； 3.……（补充一点）
家庭 1.畅说梦想，倾诉烦恼； 2.帮做家务，学会一些生活技能； 3.……（补充一点）
注意事项：
词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Enjoy study, enjoy life
Because of the “double reduction” policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Step 1认真审题，明确要求
主题 做法建议类
人称 第一人称为主
时态 一般现在时为主
文体 说明文
要点 （1）介绍在学校的安排； （2）描述在家里的生活； （3）表达美好的期许和祝福。
Step 2 列要点，编提纲
立框架 列要点 添细节
Step 3巧用词句，衔接成文
普通范文 美化范文 升级点拨
Because of the “double reduction” policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life. In school, we should actively participate in various activities, such as painting, dancing, football. Through these sports, we can make our bodies healthier and stronger. If students have difficulties, we should also actively help them. At home, we should live in peace with our parents. We should talk about our dreams with them and talk about our troubles in time. Let parents know everything about us. With their support, we will get twice the result with half the effort. At the same time, we should also help our parents do some housework and learn some life skills. If you are in a bad mood, you can listen to some music or do something you like. In a word, if we spend our free time properly, we will get a lot in both body and mind. Because of the “double reduction” policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life. In school, it is recommended that we should join in various activities such as painting, dancing, football. Through these sports, we can make our bodies and mind healthier and stronger. If students have difficulties, we should also actively stand up to support them. Besides, we should live in peace with our parents. It would be better to talk about our dreams with them and talk about our troubles in time. Let parents know everything about us. With their support, we will get twice the result with half the effort. At the same time, we should also help our parents do some housework and master some life skills. If you are in a bad mood, you can listen to some music or do something you like. In a word, it is essential for us to make good use of our time, so that we can improve our physical fitness. I hope these tips can help you. 句型升级：改为It is recommended that引导的从句 词汇升级：将body改为body and mind搭配 词汇升级：将help改为stand up to support 结构衔接：用besides表达衔接 句型升级：使用更委婉的语气的句型It would be better to... 词汇升级：用master替换learn 意义升华：使用高级句式展示出总结和期许。
小试牛刀
组句成篇 我来美化
Nowadays, due to the “double reduction” policy, we have more free time. In order to improve our health, ①we should spend our leisure time well. Firstly,②we should take part in various activities that suit us, such as painting, dancing, and football. ③________, these sports help us to build up the spirit of team work. Moreover, if our classmates have difficulty in their studies, ④we should actively help them, ⑤______ can benefit both of us. Secondly, it is also important for us to ⑥get on well with parents. We should talk to them about our dreams and let them know our troubles. In conclusion, ⑦if we spend our free time properly, we will get a lot in both body and mind. ①试着用更高级的表达方式替换spend our leisure time well。 ②试着用It is recommended that升格本句。 ③试着填入一个恰当的衔接词。 ④试着使用更委婉的句型代替We should...... ⑤试着填入一个连接词，使其成为一个非限定性定语从句。 ⑥试着用更加高级的表达替换本短语。 _______________________ ⑦试着将本句意义升华
实战演练
【2022黑龙江省哈尔滨市中考】假如你是李平，你的英国笔友Peter因为学校和家庭中有太多的规则需要遵守而苦恼。请你根据以下信息，给他写一封回信，谈谈你的看法，并告诉他如何做一名遵守规则的中学生。
写作要点：
因他的信任而高兴。
你的看法：
(1)遵守规则是重要的；
(2)遵守规则使人受欢迎。
3.告诉他如何做一名遵守规则(obey the rules)的中学生。
写作要求：
1.不得使用其实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear Peter,
How’s it going ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
参考答案：
【小试牛刀】
①It is essential for us to make good use of our time.
②It is recommended that we should take part in various activities that suit us,
③Besides
④It would be better to actively help them.
⑤which
⑥maintain a harmonious relationship
⑦If we spend our free time properly, we will improve our physical fitness.
【实战演练】
Dear Peter,
How’s it going I am very happy for your trust and I would like to give you some advice for your problem. In my opinion, following some rules is important and even necessary.
Since rules are important, what can you do to obey the rules The most essential thing is to raise your awareness of obeying the rules. That is to say, you have to understand the importance of obeying the rules and accept them from the bottom of your heart. Rules do regulate your behavior. As long as you have the awareness, you can start from doing small things in daily life. For example, you should listen to teachers carefully in class instead of making noise or disturbing teachers. When you have different ideas from your parents, you should communicate with them patiently rather than quarrel.
So much for my advice and wait for your good news.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】
题干解读：本文为一篇书信作文。题目要求根据提示信息，就笔友Peter遇到的苦恼谈谈自己的看法并告诉Peter如何做一名遵守规则的中学生。
写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。第一段要表达因得到对方的信任而感到高兴，并谈谈对遵守规则的看法：(1)遵守规则是重要的；(2)遵守规则使人受欢迎。第二段要告诉对方具体如何做一名遵守规则的中学生，即提建议。提建议时，可用情态动词should和固定句式“You’d better not...”等，使语气更委婉。最后，总结全文、表达祝福，并署名。
话题分析
全国中考书面表达题中对“做法建议类”的话题考查比重最大。2022年版《义务教育英语课程标准》要求学生能就口语或书面语篇的内容、观点和态度作出评价，并说明理由、阐释事理。在初中阶段，“做法建议类”话题的作文主要涉及到人物行为方面、学习方面、人际交往方面、环保方面、安全方面和健康方面。
教材链接
写作角度 话题 人教教材链接 页码
人物行为方面 规则 七(下)Unit 4 ；九(全) Unit 7 P19；P49
学习方面 学会如何学习 九(全)Unit 1 P1
人际方面 人际沟通 八(下)Unit 4 P25
环保方面 保护环境 九(全) Unit 13 P97
健康方面 健康与急救 八(下)Unit 1 P1
好词佳句
词汇短语积累 relax放松；exercise锻炼；success成功；hard-working努力工作的；brave勇敢的；carefully仔细地；form good habits形成好的习惯；follow my advice遵循我的建议；remind sb of sth.提醒某人某事；deal with处理、应对；communicate with sb.与某人交流；take notes记笔记；look up查询；get on well with相处的好；remember to do sth.记得去做某事；pay attention to关注；watch out小心；What’s more再有；be upset about为....而烦恼。
话题常用句型 It’s important to do sth. … 做……是重要的。 Why not do sth...... 为什么不去做.... 3. Here are my ideas about how to do sth...... 这是我的一些想法...... 4. Doing sth. is good for......做某事是有好处的…… 5. To make it more and more beautiful, I often ........为了使它更美好，我经常... 6. You should be careful to make friends online to keep yourself safe.… 网上交友要注意安全。
写作框架
Step 1 认真审题，明确要求 审主题 做法建议类
审文体 说明文
审人称 第一、二人称为主
审时态 一般现在时为主
审要点 针对对方遇到的问题，提出合理的方法，帮助对方解决问题。
Step 2 分析要点，编制提纲 开头 开门见山，引入话题。 写作角度可以从以下几点考虑： ①开篇要直扣主题，语言准确，层次分明。②谈及对方的困难时和总述自己观点时，要选择恰当的句式使语气更加委婉、礼貌。
正文 阐述自己的看法和建议。 注意：①在提出建议的时候，我们需要考虑读者是谁，需要采用怎样的语气使对方易于接受。②针对每条建议，我们可以增加相应的细节支撑，以便对方执行或参考。③建议从不同角度提出建议。
结尾 进行总结概括，表达期望。 注意：①建议表达真挚的祝福，增强文章的人文关怀。 ②适当地采用高级表达，使文章内容的丰富性和层次性更突出，升华文章主题。
Step 3巧用词句，衔接成文 巧用“知识清单”中的衔接词，词汇升级和高级句子 以及“词汇短语积累”中的相关表达
例【2022江苏省宿迁市中考】实施“双减”政策，推行“阳光作业”，我们同学可以从繁重的课业负担中解放出来，有更多的时间培养兴趣爱好，陪伴家人、朋友。学校请你与学弟、学妹们分享如何合理安排课余生活，请根据下表提示完成一篇题为“Enjoy study, enjoy life”的英语短文。
Enjoy study, enjoy life
校园 1.参加各种活动，如：绘画、舞蹈等； 2.多做运动，有益健康； 3.……（补充一点）
家庭 1.畅说梦想，倾诉烦恼； 2.帮做家务，学会一些生活技能； 3.……（补充一点）
注意事项：
词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Enjoy study, enjoy life
Because of the “double reduction” policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Step 1认真审题，明确要求
主题 做法建议类
人称 第一人称为主
时态 一般现在时为主
文体 说明文
要点 （1）介绍在学校的安排； （2）描述在家里的生活； （3）表达美好的期许和祝福。
Step 2 列要点，编提纲
立框架 列要点 添细节
Step 3巧用词句，衔接成文
普通范文 美化范文 升级点拨
Because of the “double reduction” policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life. In school, we should actively participate in various activities, such as painting, dancing, football. Through these sports, we can make our bodies healthier and stronger. If students have difficulties, we should also actively help them. At home, we should live in peace with our parents. We should talk about our dreams with them and talk about our troubles in time. Let parents know everything about us. With their support, we will get twice the result with half the effort. At the same time, we should also help our parents do some housework and learn some life skills. If you are in a bad mood, you can listen to some music or do something you like. In a word, if we spend our free time properly, we will get a lot in both body and mind. Because of the “double reduction” policy, we have more time to do what we like to enjoy study and life. In school, it is recommended that we should join in various activities such as painting, dancing, football. Through these sports, we can make our bodies and mind healthier and stronger. If students have difficulties, we should also actively stand up to support them. Besides, we should live in peace with our parents. It would be better to talk about our dreams with them and talk about our troubles in time. Let parents know everything about us. With their support, we will get twice the result with half the effort. At the same time, we should also help our parents do some housework and master some life skills. If you are in a bad mood, you can listen to some music or do something you like. In a word, it is essential for us to make good use of our time, so that we can improve our physical fitness. I hope these tips can help you. 句型升级：改为It is recommended that引导的从句 词汇升级：将body改为body and mind搭配 词汇升级：将help改为stand up to support 结构衔接：用besides表达衔接 句型升级：使用更委婉的语气的句型It would be better to... 词汇升级：用master替换learn 意义升华：使用高级句式展示出总结和期许。
小试牛刀
组句成篇 我来美化
Nowadays, due to the “double reduction” policy, we have more free time. In order to improve our health, ①we should spend our leisure time well. Firstly,②we should take part in various activities that suit us, such as painting, dancing, and football. ③________, these sports help us to build up the spirit of team work. Moreover, if our classmates have difficulty in their studies, ④we should actively help them, ⑤______ can benefit both of us. Secondly, it is also important for us to ⑥get on well with parents. We should talk to them about our dreams and let them know our troubles. In conclusion, ⑦if we spend our free time properly, we will get a lot in both body and mind. ①试着用更高级的表达方式替换spend our leisure time well。 ②试着用It is recommended that升格本句。 ③试着填入一个恰当的衔接词。 ④试着使用更委婉的句型代替We should...... ⑤试着填入一个连接词，使其成为一个非限定性定语从句。 ⑥试着用更加高级的表达替换本短语。 _______________________ ⑦试着将本句意义升华
实战演练
【2022黑龙江省哈尔滨市中考】假如你是李平，你的英国笔友Peter因为学校和家庭中有太多的规则需要遵守而苦恼。请你根据以下信息，给他写一封回信，谈谈你的看法，并告诉他如何做一名遵守规则的中学生。
写作要点：
因他的信任而高兴。
你的看法：
(1)遵守规则是重要的；
(2)遵守规则使人受欢迎。
3.告诉他如何做一名遵守规则(obey the rules)的中学生。
写作要求：
1.不得使用其实的姓名和学校名。
2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰。
4.至少80词。
Dear Peter,
How’s it going ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
参考答案：
【小试牛刀】
①It is essential for us to make good use of our time.
②It is recommended that we should take part in various activities that suit us,
③Besides
④It would be better to actively help them.
⑤which
⑥maintain a harmonious relationship
⑦If we spend our free time properly, we will improve our physical fitness.
【实战演练】
Dear Peter,
How’s it going I am very happy for your trust and I would like to give you some advice for your problem. In my opinion, following some rules is important and even necessary.
Since rules are important, what can you do to obey the rules The most essential thing is to raise your awareness of obeying the rules. That is to say, you have to understand the importance of obeying the rules and accept them from the bottom of your heart. Rules do regulate your behavior. As long as you have the awareness, you can start from doing small things in daily life. For example, you should listen to teachers carefully in class instead of making noise or disturbing teachers. When you have different ideas from your parents, you should communicate with them patiently rather than quarrel.
So much for my advice and wait for your good news.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】
题干解读：本文为一篇书信作文。题目要求根据提示信息，就笔友Peter遇到的苦恼谈谈自己的看法并告诉Peter如何做一名遵守规则的中学生。
写作指导：本文时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第二人称为主。第一段要表达因得到对方的信任而感到高兴，并谈谈对遵守规则的看法：(1)遵守规则是重要的；(2)遵守规则使人受欢迎。第二段要告诉对方具体如何做一名遵守规则的中学生，即提建议。提建议时，可用情态动词should和固定句式“You’d better not...”等，使语气更委婉。最后，总结全文、表达祝福，并署名。