中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2024-2025学年度武汉市部分学校高三年级九月调研考试应用文和续写讲义
写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节(满分15分)
你是英语课代表,以词汇记忆难度为主题,对全班进行了调查(如下图所示)。请你在英语课堂上进行一次口头汇报,内容包括:
1.调查结果;
2.你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答案
Good morning, everyone !May I have your attention please
相关句式和表达:
1. 进行了一项调查 conduct a survey
2. 词汇记忆难度 the difficulty degree of memorizing vocabulary
3. 结果如下 the results are as follows
4. 如图所示 as is shown in the chart
5. 在……方面有困难 have (great)difficulty/trouble in doing sth.
6. 认为……是巨大挑战 consider...as a big challenge
7. 绝大部分 a great majority of...
8. 占比 take up
9. 我强烈建议…… I strongly recommend that...
10. 将……提升至更高水平 promote... to a more advanced level
【范例】
Recently, a survey regarding the difficulty degree of memorizing vocabulary has been conducted in our class, the results are as follows.
As is shown in the chart, about 15% of the students think memorizing single words is difficult, while 45% of the students consider word formation as the biggest challenge. In addition, an overwhelming majority of students, whose number takes up 70%, have great trouble in dealing with chunks.
As to the questions mentioned above, I strongly recommend that we should memorize words and chunks on a daily basis. Also, learning the rules of formation is of great importance. Only in this way can we expand our vocabulary bank and promote our English proficiency to a more advanced level.
第二节(满分25分)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
It was a sunny Friday afternoon. My assignment was to record the 400-meter race in the sports meet. All the students in our class were sitting anxiously except one, a tall handsome boy named Tommy who was considered the one most likely to win the race. Even, unlike other competitors, he was quite relaxed, standing beside the track and stretching himself.
"Tommy! I bet you'll win." I yelled at him. "Just wait and see!" A big smile spread across his face.
"May I have your attention, please All the athletes are requested to proceed to the registration office." A gentle voice caught our attention.
“Tommy, your show time!" I shouted and gave him a thumb-up.
Then, I saw all the athletes went to register, preparing for the game. Soon they were all on the starting line. Taking the best recording location, I raised my smartphone, ready to shoot.
With the loud sound of the starting gun, all the competitors threw themselves forwards from the starting line like arrows. Tommy quickly took the lead with his excellent explosive power from long-term training. But there was one problem for me-I had to spare every effort to control my excitement in order to keep my shooting picture stable.
"Come on, Tommy!" Still, I could hear the cheers of our classmates higher and higher. It seemed that Tommy had heard the powerful shouts and became full of strength. He kept adjusting his breath, maintaining a steady rhythm, and approaching the finish line step by step.
Finally, with the cheers of the audience, Tommy crossed the finish line almost at the same time with the second-place finisher. How I wish I could rush to him and give him a big bear hug! But I could not. I had to finish recording the whole race, so I waited until the last competitor crossed the finish line. Suddenly, I noticed there was an unusual noise from the crowd.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Tommy was ranked second on the scoreboard.
The judge admitted the error and announced Tommy was the real champion.
文本分析:
根据第一段和第二段给出的句子分析,裁判应该是错判了,Tommy 应该是第一名。“我”作为Tommy的好朋友,全程记录了此次比赛,可以作为很有力的证据。合理推断出第一段“我”对裁判的结果有异议,于是和Tommy一起去找裁判弄清事实。第二段裁判纠正错误判断,Tommy不负众望成为冠军,他的努力得到了应有的回报,我勇于修正错误的决心也为朋友带来了一个圆满的结局。
【范例】
Tommy was ranked second on the scoreboard. “No way, the judge must got it wrong.” I thought. Without hesitation, I forced my way through the crowd and grabbed Tommy by the arm. “You are the real champion, we need to fix this,” I said earnestly. Seeing that I was serious, Tommy started to dash towards the scoreboard, from behind where the judge emerged. Because of the video I just shot, it only took us a few minutes to explain the whole thing.
The judge admitted the error and announced Tommy was the real champion. The moment I heard the final announcement, I heaved a sign of relief, gave Tommy a big near hug and congratulated him on winning the champion he deserved. Grinning broadly, Tommy said, “Without your help, I might have lost the honor. Thank you so much.” Meanwhile, deafening cheers and applause exploded from the crowd with congratulations and praise showering upon Tommy. Just as the old saying goes, “All’s well that ends well.”
附试卷参考作文如下:
第一节
Good morning everyone! May I have your attention please
Last week, I conducted a survey on the difficulty degree of memorizing vocabulary. The result reveals some striking statistics. As you can see, about 45% of students consider it is difficult to memorize word formation. Chunks dominates the result, with an astonishing 70% of students opting for it, while single words are the least favored, chosen by only 15% of the participants.
The data offers precious insights. In conclusion, it is essential that we should enhance our vocabulary study and strengthen the resolve to overcome the barriers. I suggest everyone work out specific plans and keep practicing.
第二节:
Tommy was ranked second on the scoreboard. Feeling puzzled, Tommy immediately found the judge and pointed out this mistake politely. However, the second-place finisher insisted he was the winner. No one could tell exactly what had happened. Tommy was at a loss what to do, feeling frustrated. Then it suddenly occurred to me that I had recorded the whole process. Rushing to the judge, I showed him the video, which clarified the fact that it was Tommy who first arrived.
The judge admitted the error and announced Tommy was the real champion. After learning the truth, the audience broke into thunderous applause. Tommy shouldered his way through the crowd, gathering me in his arms with a proud smile on his face. We both knew this was not just a victory of a race, but also a victory of sticking to the truth and daring to fight for i in the face of injustice.
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