广西贵港市2016高考英语短文改错选编（6）及答案
(2015·陕西省质检二)
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参考答案：
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Yours，
Li Ming
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1．命题立意：考查形容词辨析。
解析：shortly→short 句意：有些学校要求学生把头发剪短。根据语意，答案用形容词short作宾语补足语。
2．命题立意：考查be动词辨析。
解析：was→is 陈述自己观点，可用一般现在时。
3．命题立意：考查介词辨析。
解析：in→on concentrate on 集中在……上。根据语意介词in应改为on。
4.命题立意：考查语法辨析。
解析：删除it 句意：事实上，简单的辫子梳起来不会花费很长时间。it在这里多余。
5．命题立意：考查动词形式辨析。
解析：wear→wearing 现在分词短语作定语，wear应改为wearing。
6．命题立意：考查形容词辨析。
解析：severely→severe cold是名词，用形容词severe修饰。
7．命题立意：考查冠词辨析。
解析：the→a the表示特指，a表示泛指。
8．命题立意：考查动词短语辨析。
解析：在insists 后面加上on insist on坚持。
9．命题立意：考查代词辨析。
解析：his→their 这里teachers是学生们的老师，his改为their。
10．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：choose→choosing 介词of后接v ing形式。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
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注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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(2015·嘉兴市二模)
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参考答案：
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文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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短文改错 (共10分,每小题1分,满分10分)
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
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【参考答案】
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此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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1．命题立意：考查介词。
解析：joined后的in去掉 join in＋某种活动，join ＋某个组织或团体，故去掉in。
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解析：teammate→teammates all the＋名词复数，故teammate→teammates。
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6．命题立意：考查介词。
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7．命题立意：考查代词用法。
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8．命题立意：考查动词时态。
解析：call→called 根据语境应该是过去时。故call→called。
9．命题立意：考查形容词。
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10．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：Play→Playing 此处是动词的 ing形式作主语。故Play→Playing。
短文改错。
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【小题1】vary改成various
【小题2】spent改成took
【小题3】under改成with
【小题4】he改成we
【小题5】去掉back
【小题6】put后面加it
【小题7】annoying改成annoyed
【小题8】explained后面加to
【小题9】is改成was
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或
修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线( \)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分
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5.work改成working too改成so times改成time on改成in
why改成how considered改成considering decided后面加to
secret改成secretly entered后面去掉into promises改成promised
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【小题1】all 改成both
【小题2】 method.改成methods
【小题3】listen改成listening
【小题4】Miss改成misses
【小题5】 But 改成So
【小题6】the改成a
【小题7】attentive改成 attentively
【小题8】said 改成says
【小题9】Because后面加of
【小题10】去掉is
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1．命题立意：考查介词。
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4．命题立意：考查句式。
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9．命题立意：考查冠词。
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10．命题立意：考查连词。
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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短文改错(每小题I分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
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【参考答案】
2.76. In---on 77. while---when 78. sides---side
79. drive---driving 80.made---make 81. she---he
82.young woman---a young woman
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短文改错：（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
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【参考答案】4.Dear Robert,
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Best wishes！
Yours truly,
Bob
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】5 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )广西贵港市2016高考英语短文改错选编（5）及答案
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6．命题立意：考查副词。
解析：calm→calmly 该句的谓语动词asked应用副词修饰，故calm改为calmly。
7．命题立意：考查动词形式。
解析：works→work 此处是不定式作状语，故works改为work。
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解析：late→later late一般跟在表示时间的名词后，later可单独使用，表示“后来”。故late →later。
9．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
解析：tearing→torn shirt是wear的动作承受者，应用过去分词修饰。故tearing→torn。
10．命题立意：考查定语从句。
解析：who→whose 根据定语从句中缺少kindness的限定词。故who→whose。
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注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
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