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Unit 4
I used to be afraid of the dark
Section B (3a-self check) Writing
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To know how to write their changes by using the sentence structure “...used to..., but now...”
学
习
目
标
To describe the biggest change and explain how it happened.
To encourage students to improve themselves.
Lead-in
How I have changed!
When she is a child
now
Taking notes
3a
Write notes about how you have changed in your appearance, personality and hobbies. Then talk with a partner about your changes.
expressions to describe personality
expressions to describe hobby
expressions to describe appearance
Where can we find our changes
How to describe our changes
Sentences
my biggest change
我再也不是一个小胖子了。
I’m not fat anymore.
我对英语的兴趣更浓厚了。
I’m more interested in English.
Group work
Talk about your biggest change with your partner and explain
how it happened. (讲述你最重要的一个变化及其它是如何发生的)
The biggest change in my life is that_____________
I’m not …. anymore
I become much thinner/heavier/more outgoing...
I do better/worse in...
I'm more/less interested in …
….
I made it by doing…./ Thanks to…/ ... advised me to.../ ...had a great influence on me...
Writing Practice
3b
How I have changed!
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中考模拟训练
2019中考英语作文预测:(满分20分)
初中生活中,你有些什么改变?最大的变化是什么,你是怎样改变的?请以“How I Have Changed” 为题写一篇英语小短文,描述你生活中发生的变化,写作内容可以包括外貌性格、兴趣爱好和行为习惯等方面。
要求:1. 要求80-120词;
2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁;
3. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名。
what
how
what
Polish your writing
1. 小组合作,按照《中考英语作文评分标准》互相评分,并用红笔改出错误,给出评分意见;
2. 每组挑选最佳的作文上台展示。
Group work
中考作文评分标准
Structure:divided passages, coherence
Contents: complete
Language:spelling, grammar, accuracy
Hand-writing: beautiful
My life has changed a lot in the last few years. I used to be very shy and quiet, but now I am outgoing and popular. Besides, I used to like sleeping all the time, but now I am interested in swimming.
The biggest change in my life is that I'm not fat any more. In the past, I was very heavy. My parents were very worried about me. Thanks to my best friend Kate, she advised me to swim with her every day. Although the journey was long and painful, I finally succeeded in losing weight. How I am proud of myself!
In a word(总之), I have become much better than before. I will keep improving myself.
主旨句
Change in personality
Change in hobby
How did it happen
the biggest change
Meaning of the changes
How I have changed!
Structure
Lead in your topic
Beginning
Body
Ending
Set examples to show how you have changed.
Summarize your passage.
My
change
Divided passages
Grammar mistakes
Clear hand-writing
Attention!!
appearance
(外貌)
personality
(性格)
hobby
(爱好)
shy--
serious--
clever--
silent--
careful--
polite--
lazy--
my changes
outgoing
short--
fat--
young--
ugly--
have short hair--
wear glasses
tall
like/hate/dislike doing sth.
be interested in sth.
thin
old
beautiful
have long hair
humorous
noisy
stupid
careless
impolite
hard-working
...used to..., but now....
Words
Show your writing
Are you better than you used to be
Change in good ways.
Make sure you 're trying to get better.
Summary
Unit 4 I used to be afraid of the dark.
Words: Appearance/ Personality/Hobbies...
Sentence : used to do…...but now……
Passage: Divided passages/Grammar
mistakes/Clear hand-writing
HOMEWORK
Make a survey on how your family member/friend
has changed.
2. Write a passage according to your survey.
Thanks for listening!