专题07 书面表达（原卷版+解析版）6年（2019-2024）中考英语真题加9套模拟试题分项汇编（安徽专用）

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6年（2019-2024）中考英语真题加9套模拟试题分项汇编（安徽专用）专题07 书面表达(解析版)
一、2024年
X. 书面表达（共1小题; 满分20分）
61. 假设你是李辉，上周你在学校举行的 “消防安全日” 活动中学会了灭火器的使用方法。请结合下图信息，写一篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿。
要点:
1. 活动目的；
2. 灭火器的使用方法；
3. 你的体会。
注意:
1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数80~100（首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）
Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
二、2023年
材料作文
61．假定你是李辉，你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站展示并获得好评。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写一篇短文向该网站浏览者简述你的制作经历。
注意：
1．短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3．词数80～100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇： poster（n. 海报）； design（v. & n. 设计）
My Experience of Making a Poster
Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三、2022年
电子邮件
81．假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。请你写封邮件，向他推荐《西游记》。要点如下：
1.风趣幽默，深受喜爱；
2.团队合作，历险克难；
3.追逐梦想，永不言弃。
注意：
1.词数80～100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：character（n.人物）；overcome（v.克服）
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
四、2021年
材料作文
61． 假定你是李华，曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括：
1.事情经过；
2.个人感悟。
注意：
1.词数80~100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：pocket money (n.零花钱); meaningful (adj.有意义的)
Once I Was Praised
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五、2020年
61． 假定你是李华。某英文报“My Hometown”专栏面向中学生招募小记者，请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下：
1.熟悉家乡；
2.乐于交流；
3.擅长英语。
注意：1.词数80-100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： journalist (n.记者)；column (n.专栏)
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
六、2019年
Ⅺ．书面表达
66.假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安，请你用英文给他写封电子邮件，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下：
1.经常做户外活动；
2.很少用电子产品；
3.坚持做眼保健操；
4. ......
注意:1.词数80-100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。
Dear Mike
I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.
________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
阜阳市第十八中学中考一模
X. 书面表达（共1 小题；满分20 分）
61. 一学期很快就要结束了，英语老师就同学们这一学期在学习和生活中出现的问题给出了一些解决的方法。下图就是这周你们学校对100名学生进行问卷调查的结果。请你结合调查结果并以“How do the students solve their problems ”为题写一篇英语短文，在下周的英语主题班会上展示你的佳作。
提示：
要求：
1. 短文必须包含提示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；
3. 词数80～100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
How do the students solve their problems
Our school asked 100 students about their ways of solving problems this week. Here are the results.
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阜阳市临泉县部分学校中考模拟
X. 书面表达（共1小题；满分20分）
61. 假如你是李辉，你所在的班级将要举行一次毕业研学旅行。请结合下面图示信息用英语给你们班的交换生Mike写一封邮件，邀请他参加。
注意：
1. 邮件须包含图示所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3. 词数80—100（邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
合肥市包河区中考一模
X.书面表达(共1小题； 满分20分)
61. 假如你是李华，近期你校英语报公布了 2023年度热词——challenge（挑战）并发起了主题征文活动。请你围绕该年度热词，根据以下图示，写一篇英文短文投稿。
注意：
1. 短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3.词数 80-100（短文首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
Word of the Year of 2023 is challenge.
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合肥市多校联考中考一模
X.书面表达(共1小题；满分20分)
61. 假如你是李华，上个月你校举办了一次校园英语节（School English Festival）活动，请你结合下面图示信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍本次校园英语节活动。
注意：
1. 短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3. 词数80～100（短文首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
The School English Festival
Last month, we had the School English Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
合肥市肥西县中考一模
X. 书面表达(共1小题；满分20分)
61. 假如你是李华，最近你校英文报开展了以“How do students solve their problems ”为主题的问卷调查。请你根据以下调查结果用英文写一篇短文。
要点：1.介绍调查结果（如图表所示）；
2. 阐述你选择及理由（结合自身具体实例）
注意：
1. 词数80～100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4. 文 章 开 头 已 给 出 ， 不 计 入 总 词 数 。
Recently, our school has asked students about their ways of solving problems. The results are as follows. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
六安市霍邱县中考一模
Ⅹ.书面表达（共1小题；满分20分）
81. 假如你是李华，上个月你校举行了“学雷锋”志愿者活动。你的英国笔友Tony向你打听活动的相关情况。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写一封邮件，告诉他活动的目的、时间、地点以及活动的内容，并询问他们学校志愿者活动的情况。
注意：1.邮件须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3.词数80-100（邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
Dear Tony,
How is it going
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
六安市金安区六安皋城中学中考一模
Ⅹ. 书面表达（共1小题；满分20分）
61. 中考结束后的暑假，你有时间去参加各类社会实践活动。如去当一回社区志愿者，奉献一份爱心；如来一场citywalk，感受城市的脉搏，又如去找一份part-time job，积累工作的经验，又如……你最想参加什么社会实践活动？请陈述你的理由。
注意：1. 写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
In the coming summer vacation, I plan to do some social activities._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
In the coming summer vacation, I plan to do some social activities.
I want to be a volunteer, because helping other people makes me feel good. It’s also a good chance for me to improve myself. I can do many things. For example, I can help clean up the city parks. I am good at singing, so I can sing lots of songs and tell some stories for the old people at the Old People’s Home. At the same time, I can help the elderly wash their clothes. I can also hand out leaflets and put up notices.
I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求介绍自己最想参加的社会实践活动，并讲述理由，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题“暑假打算做一些社会活动”；
第二步，介绍自己最想参加的社会活动及理由；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①clean up打扫
②at the same time同时
③hand out分发
④put up张贴
[高分句型]
①I want to be a volunteer, because helping other people makes me feel good. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful. (宾语从句)
马鞍山市成功学校中考一模
X. 书面表达(共1小题；满分20分)
81. 年岁渐长临近毕业 青少年需要在生活中不断提高自我管理能力。请以“Learning to Manage Our Own Lives”为题用英语写一篇短文向校刊的School Life英文专栏投稿。要点如下：
（ 1）学习生活技能；
（ 2）遵守安全须知；
（ 3）学会合理规划。
注意：
（ 1）词数80～100；
（ 2）请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
（ 3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
（ 4）短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Learning to Manage Our Own Lives
It’s reported that we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives these days.
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芜湖市南陵县中考一模
X.书面表达（共1小题；满分20分）
61. 假如你是李华，你校英语社团将要举行“My Favorite Saying”的分享会，请你根据以下内容写一篇分享会发言稿。要点如下：
1. 你最喜欢的谚语 (从以下谚语中任选一句)：
(1) A friend in need is a friend indeed. (患难见真情。)
(2) Failure is the mother of success. (失败是成功之母。)
(3) Two heads are better than one. (三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮。)
2. 你对这条谚语的理解；
3. 你的亲身经历或感悟。
注意：
1. 词数80—100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Good morning, everyone!
It’s my great honor to have a chance to make a speech here. My favorite saying is_______________________________________________________
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
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6年（2019-2024）中考英语真题加9套模拟试题分项汇编（安徽专用）专题07 书面表达(解析版)
一、2024年
X. 书面表达（共1小题; 满分20分）
61. 假设你是李辉，上周你在学校举行的 “消防安全日” 活动中学会了灭火器的使用方法。请结合下图信息，写一篇英语短文，给校英文报投稿。
要点:
1. 活动目的；
2. 灭火器的使用方法；
3. 你的体会。
注意:
1. 短文须包含上述要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 词数80~100（首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）
Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Last week, our school carried out Fire Safety Day activities. The purpose was to draw our attention to fire safety. Among the activities, how to use a fire extinguisher interested me most.
When we use a fire extinguisher, we should first shake it after picking it up, and then pull off the safety pin quickly. As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire, we are expected to press down on the handle until we put out the fire. During the period, we should be careful enough not to get hurt.
From the activities I’ve learned a lot and realized the importance of fire safety.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是看图作文；
②时态：一般过去时，一般现在时
③提示：结合图示信息，注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，首先介绍上周学校举行的 “消防安全日”，点明活动的目的；
第二步，具体介绍灭火器的使用方法；
最后，表达个人从这次活动中得到的感悟体会。
[亮点词汇]
①draw one’s attention 吸引某人的注意
②pick up 捡起
③pull off 拔出
④as soon as 一……就……
⑤put out 扑灭
[高分句型]
①When we use a fire extinguisher, we should first shake it after picking it up, and then pull off the safety pin quickly.（when引导时间状语从句）
②As soon as we point the tube at the root of the fire, we are expected to press down on the handle until we put out the fire.（as soon as引导时间状语从句）
二、2023年
材料作文
61．假定你是李辉，你制作的关于家乡变化的海报在某英文网站展示并获得好评。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写一篇短文向该网站浏览者简述你的制作经历。
注意：
1．短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2．文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3．词数80～100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇： poster（n. 海报）； design（v. & n. 设计）
My Experience of Making a Poster
Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
My Experience of Making a Poster
Last week, I made a poster of the great changes in my hometown. The purpose of making it is to show the rapid development of my hometown in recent years. Firstly, I asked my grandparents about their past living conditions. Then, I found some old photos online to compare the past and present of my hometown. Finally, I sorted the information that I had learned and designed a poster with relevant pictures attached.
This experience helps me know better about my hometown. With its development, people have led better lives and the environment has been improved. I am very happy to see these changes. As a member of this town, I will contribute my own efforts to its development.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“图示信息”中的各个要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接所给开头，介绍制作海报的目的；
第二步，具体阐述制作海报的过程；
第三步，表达从这次经历中学到的东西以及自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①rapid development快速发展
②living conditions生活条件
③sorted the information把信息分类
④lead a better life过上更好的生活
[高分句型]
①Finally, I sorted the information that I had learned and designed a poster with relevant pictures attached.（that引导的定语从句）
②With its development, people have led better lives and the environment has been improved.（现在完成时的被动语态）
三、2022年
电子邮件
81．假定你是李辉。你的英国朋友Mike想阅读中国经典名著。请你写封邮件，向他推荐《西游记》。要点如下：
1.风趣幽默，深受喜爱；
2.团队合作，历险克难；
3.追逐梦想，永不言弃。
注意：
1.词数80～100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：character（n.人物）；overcome（v.克服）
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
Since you want to read Chinese classic works, I’d like to recommend Journey to the West to you.
The book Journey to the West was written by Wu Cheng’en during the Ming dynasty. It tells a story about the Tang monk Xuanzang and his three disciples. The book is humorous and well received. In the book, the four main characters show teamwork as they overcame numerous difficulties. Finally, they attained the true Buddhist scriptures. This story tells us to chase our dreams and never give up.
You are bound to enjoy yourself while reading the novel and you can share with me your opinions whenever you like.
Yours,
Li Hui
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容，向Mike介绍《西游记》这本书。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段详细介绍这本书的内容以及想表达的哲理；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
四、2021年
材料作文
61． 假定你是李华，曾用攒下来的零花钱做了一件有意义的事并受到家人表扬。请你用英语写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括：
1.事情经过；
2.个人感悟。
注意：
1.词数80~100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.短文题目已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：pocket money (n.零花钱); meaningful (adj.有意义的)
Once I Was Praised
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【答案】One possible version
Once I Was Praised
Once I was praised because I did something meaningful with my pocket money.
One day, I happened to know some students in a school were hungry for knowledge but they didn’t have enough books. I decided to offer my help. With all the pocket money I saved, I bought some books online, and gave them away to the school. My parents were very happy and praised me when they heard about it. They said I did a meaningful thing.
I believe that every little bit helps. I will continue to do what I can to help others.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“Once I Was Praised”为题，结合提示进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态以一般过去时为主。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍事情经过；第三段描述个人感悟。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。
五、2020年
61． 假定你是李华。某英文报“My Hometown”专栏面向中学生招募小记者，请你用英文给报社写封自荐信。要点如下：
1.熟悉家乡；
2.乐于交流；
3.擅长英语。
注意：1.词数80-100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；
4.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇： journalist (n.记者)；column (n.专栏)
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
61．例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
I hear your newspaper needs journalists for the column My Hometown. I hope to be a member of the team.
First, I know a lot about my hometown, such as its history and culture. Besides, I used to work as a journalist for my school newspaper and I did a very good job. I'm easy-going and always ready to communicate with others. Moreover, I have a good knowledge of English, and I'm skillful at expressing myself clearly in English.
I'm sure to be the right person you are looking for. I'd be thankful if I could get this chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
1. 题干解读：本题属于书信作文，信件的开头和结尾已给出。要求根据提示要点写一封自荐信介绍自己并申请成为小记者。写作时要紧扣材料内容并进行适当发挥。适当使用副词和连词等增加亮点。写好时，再阅读一遍，减少语法错误，不要犯单词拼写上的错误。
2. 例文点评：这是一篇比较优秀的例文。例文紧扣题目要求，先表达写信目的，然后根据要点提示介绍自己，最后再次点明确信自己是最合适的人。例文简明扼要，结构清晰，语言表达到位。
3. 高分亮点：
单词和短语：hope to do sth.；a member of；such as；besides；used to do sth.；work as；do a very good job；be ready to do sth.；communicate with；moreover；have a good knowledge of；be skillful at；in English；look for。
句型：and连接并列句；省略that的定语从句；if引导的条件状语从句。
六、2019年
Ⅺ．书面表达
66.假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安，请你用英文给他写封电子邮件，谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下：
1.经常做户外活动；
2.很少用电子产品；
3.坚持做眼保健操；
4. ......
注意:1.词数80-100；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计人总词数。
Dear Mike
I'm sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker.
________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
I’m sorry to learn that your eyesight is getting weaker. I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life.
At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks. In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer. You know, the light they give off is harmful to our eyes. Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes. Lastly, I usually have my eyes examined every term to make sure my eyes stay healthy.
I hope you’ll find my ways helpful.
Yours,
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份，给自己的英国笔友Mike写信，给他介绍一下你在保护视力方面的做法。审题可知，这篇短文应使用一般现在是，第一人称来叙述，内容应包括：首先讲述题目中Mike的视力减退问题，并引出文章的主题；然后具体介绍自己在保护视力方面的做法，这一部分是文章的主体可以按照题目中所列的内容进行介绍，并对第四条进行补充；最后提出自己的希望或祝愿。写作时应注意：短文按内容表达的需要，分成三段，每一段一个主题；内容应包括题目中的所有要点，不能遗漏；课根据表达需要，增加细节内容，使文章更加充实、丰富。其次应注意文章的表达，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，句式应符合英语的表达习惯。句子结构应完整，可以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句、复合句以及其他复杂句式和结构的使用，提升作文档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的衔接成分，使行文连贯，表达流畅。
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，对Mike介绍了自己在保护视力方面的一些做法。短文有以下几个特点：首先文章内容完整，包括了题目中要求的所有内容，没有遗漏要点。短文结构清晰，共分成三段：第一段将题目中的写作背景进行了介绍，并引出了文章的话题；第二段具体介绍了自己的做法，这一段是文章的中心，所占篇幅最大。作者按照题目的提示进行表述，并对细节进行了拓展；第三段提出了自己的希望。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。句式结构比较复杂，使用了很多较高级的表达方式，包括动词短语、介词短语、宾语从句、状语从句、非谓语动词等。如I’d like to share with you some ways of protecting eyesight in my daily life、At school, I often go out of the classroom to play with my classmates or do physical exercise during the breaks.、In my free time, I also try hard to avoid using the mobile phone or computer.、Besides, doing eye exercises plays an important role in relaxing my tired eyes.等等。
阜阳市第十八中学中考一模
X. 书面表达（共1 小题；满分20 分）
61. 一学期很快就要结束了，英语老师就同学们这一学期在学习和生活中出现的问题给出了一些解决的方法。下图就是这周你们学校对100名学生进行问卷调查的结果。请你结合调查结果并以“How do the students solve their problems ”为题写一篇英语短文，在下周的英语主题班会上展示你的佳作。
提示：
要求：
1. 短文必须包含提示要点，可适当发挥；
2. 条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；
3. 词数80～100（短文题目与首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
How do the students solve their problems
Our school asked 100 students about their ways of solving problems this week. Here are the results.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
How do the students solve their problems
Our school asked 100 students about their ways of solving problems this week. Here are the results.
52% of students talk to their friends when they have problems. 22% of them ask their teachers or parents for help. And 17% solve problems by themselves. And 9% choose other ways to solve their problems.
For me, asking the teachers or parents for help is the best way to solve problems. I was too shy to make friends when I was in Grade 7. So I was upset. I told my parents the problem. They advised me to join some clubs and taught me how to make friends during activities. From the experience, I know that sharing a problem is like cutting it in half. I believe that as long as we work hard, we will find a solution to the problem. I hope we can get better and better.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容陈述问卷调查结果，并向大家介绍你解决问题的方法。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，陈述问卷调查结果；
第三步，介绍自己解决问题的方法。
[亮点词汇]
①ask sb for help向某人求助
②choose to do选择做某事
[高分句型]
52% of students talk to their friends when they have problems. (when引导的时间状语从句)
阜阳市临泉县部分学校中考模拟
X. 书面表达（共1小题；满分20分）
61. 假如你是李辉，你所在的班级将要举行一次毕业研学旅行。请结合下面图示信息用英语给你们班的交换生Mike写一封邮件，邀请他参加。
注意：
1. 邮件须包含图示所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3. 词数80—100（邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
【答案】范文
Dear Mike,
How’s everything going I am writing this letter to invite you to take part in the school graduates’ study trip. With our graduation coming closer and closer, our class plans a study trip for school graduates next weekend. Our class is going to take a two-day trip to Tianzhu Mountain. During the trip, we will get to the Tianzhu Peak where we can take photos and have a picnic. To enjoy the beauty of the sunrise, we need to get up early. What’s more, the sea of clouds is really worth seeing from the top of the mountain. I believe we will have a wonderful time. I hope you will join us.
I look forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hui
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图中的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，以问候开头，接着表明写作目的；
第二步，具体介绍毕业研学旅行的时间、地点、参加者及你的计划等内容；
第三步，书写结语，期待回复。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②get to到达
③take photos拍照
④have a picnic野餐
[高分句型]
①During the trip, we will get to the Tianzhu Peak where we can take photos and have a picnic. (定语从句)
②I believe we will have a wonderful time. (宾语从句)
合肥市包河区中考一模
X.书面表达(共1小题； 满分20分)
61. 假如你是李华，近期你校英语报公布了 2023年度热词——challenge（挑战）并发起了主题征文活动。请你围绕该年度热词，根据以下图示，写一篇英文短文投稿。
注意：
1. 短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3.词数 80-100（短文首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
Word of the Year of 2023 is challenge.
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【答案】例文
Word of the Year of 2023 is challenge. It reminds me of the challenges I once had in learning English.
When I first went into junior high school, I couldn’t understand my English teacher because she only spoke English in class. I was worried and didn’t know what to do. My teacher encouraged me and gave me lots of helpful advice.
First of all, I listened to the tapes and read English aloud every morning, which helped to improve my pronunciation. Second, I improved my listening by watching English movies. In this way, I not only practiced listening but also had fun. Day by day, I could follow my teacher in class and I really enjoy the English class now.
Through the experience, I have realized that as long as we keep trying, nothing is impossible.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意适当发挥，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己曾遇到的挑战是什么；
第二步，谈谈为了解决这个挑战，自己都做了哪些事情；
第三步，谈谈自己从中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①remind sb. of 让某人想起……
②by doing sth. 通过做某事
③not only ... but also 不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①When I first went into junior high school, I couldn’t understand my English teacher because she only spoke English in class.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②First of all, I listened to the tapes and read English aloud every morning, which helped to improve my pronunciation.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
合肥市多校联考中考一模
X.书面表达(共1小题；满分20分)
61. 假如你是李华，上个月你校举办了一次校园英语节（School English Festival）活动，请你结合下面图示信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍本次校园英语节活动。
注意：
1. 短文须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3. 词数80～100（短文首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
The School English Festival
Last month, we had the School English Festival. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Last month, we had the School English Festival.
It lasted three days on the fifth floor of our student theatre. Not only the students but also the teachers and parents enjoyed the festival together. To make us enjoy the beauty of English and enrich our school life, there were all kinds of activities. We enjoyed classic English movies and watched performances by students from the English Play Club. What impressed me most was the English speech competition. The speech of my classmate Linda, who won the first place, was fluent and moving.
The School English Festival is so wonderful that I can’t forget it at all. It also makes me fall in love with English and our school deeply.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍时间及师生评价。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，介绍英语节的内容。
第三步，书写结语表达感受。
[亮点词汇]
①beauty美丽
②all kinds of各式各样的
③classic经典的
[高分句型]
①The speech of my classmate Linda, who won the first place, was fluent and moving.（定语从句）
②What impressed me most was the English speech competition. （主语从句）
合肥市肥西县中考一模
X. 书面表达(共1小题；满分20分)
61. 假如你是李华，最近你校英文报开展了以“How do students solve their problems ”为主题的问卷调查。请你根据以下调查结果用英文写一篇短文。
要点：1.介绍调查结果（如图表所示）；
2. 阐述你选择及理由（结合自身具体实例）
注意：
1. 词数80～100；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
4. 文 章 开 头 已 给 出 ， 不 计 入 总 词 数 。
Recently, our school has asked students about their ways of solving problems. The results are as follows. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How do students solve their problems
Recently, our school has asked students about their ways of solving problems. The results are as follows.
52% of the students choose to talk to their friends about their problems. 22% of them ask their teachers or parents for help. And 17% of the students try to solve problems by themselves. Only 9% of the students have other ways of solving problems.
I prefer to ask my teachers for help, because they have rich experience in life and can give me much useful advice. Once, I had a fight with my friend. I felt very upset and told this to my head teacher. She comforted me and encouraged me a lot. I felt much better after talking to her. She also gave me some advice on how to get on well with others. From then on, when I’m in trouble, I like to ask my teachers for help.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍调查结果；
第二步，具体阐述你的选择及理由，注意要结合具体事例。
[亮点词汇]
①prefer to do更喜欢做某事
②have rich experience in life生活经验丰富
③get on well with相处愉快
[高分句型]
①I prefer to ask my teachers for help, because they have rich experience in life and can give me much useful advice.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②She also gave me some advice on how to get on well with others. （宾语从句）
六安市霍邱县中考一模
Ⅹ.书面表达（共1小题；满分20分）
81. 假如你是李华，上个月你校举行了“学雷锋”志愿者活动。你的英国笔友Tony向你打听活动的相关情况。请结合下面图示信息，用英语写一封邮件，告诉他活动的目的、时间、地点以及活动的内容，并询问他们学校志愿者活动的情况。
注意：1.邮件须包含上图所有信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和地名；
3.词数80-100（邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数）。
Dear Tony,
How is it going
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Tony,
How is it going I’m writing this email to tell you about the volunteer activity held in our school last month.
Last Saturday, all of the students in Class 2 went to the park near our school to pick up rubbish and put up posters about protecting the environment. Last Sunday, we paid a visit to the elderly in the old people’s home. We swept the floor, tidied the room and talked with them as we planned. What a fantastic time we had! These activities can not only help us develop a sense of responsibility but also improve our communication skills. What’s more, it helps the people who are in need.
What about your school’s volunteer activity Please write to me.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己写这封电子邮件的目的；
第二步，从活动的目的、时间、地点以及活动的内容等方面具体介绍志愿者活动；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①tell sb about sth.告诉某人关于某事
②develop a sense of responsibility培养责任感
③improve our communication skills提高我们的沟通能力
④what’s more此外
[高分句型]
①What a fantastic time we had!(感叹句)
②What’s more, it helps the people who are in need.(定语从句)
六安市金安区六安皋城中学中考一模
Ⅹ. 书面表达（共1小题；满分20分）
61. 中考结束后的暑假，你有时间去参加各类社会实践活动。如去当一回社区志愿者，奉献一份爱心；如来一场citywalk，感受城市的脉搏，又如去找一份part-time job，积累工作的经验，又如……你最想参加什么社会实践活动？请陈述你的理由。
注意：1. 写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
In the coming summer vacation, I plan to do some social activities._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
In the coming summer vacation, I plan to do some social activities.
I want to be a volunteer, because helping other people makes me feel good. It’s also a good chance for me to improve myself. I can do many things. For example, I can help clean up the city parks. I am good at singing, so I can sing lots of songs and tell some stories for the old people at the Old People’s Home. At the same time, I can help the elderly wash their clothes. I can also hand out leaflets and put up notices.
I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求介绍自己最想参加的社会实践活动，并讲述理由，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，并突出重点写作。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题“暑假打算做一些社会活动”；
第二步，介绍自己最想参加的社会活动及理由；
第三步，表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①clean up打扫
②at the same time同时
③hand out分发
④put up张贴
[高分句型]
①I want to be a volunteer, because helping other people makes me feel good. (because引导原因状语从句)
②I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful. (宾语从句)
马鞍山市成功学校中考一模
X. 书面表达(共1小题；满分20分)
81. 年岁渐长临近毕业 青少年需要在生活中不断提高自我管理能力。请以“Learning to Manage Our Own Lives”为题用英语写一篇短文向校刊的School Life英文专栏投稿。要点如下：
（ 1）学习生活技能；
（ 2）遵守安全须知；
（ 3）学会合理规划。
注意：
（ 1）词数80～100；
（ 2）请不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
（ 3）文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名；
（ 4）短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Learning to Manage Our Own Lives
It’s reported that we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives these days.
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【答案】例文
Learning to Manage Our Own Lives
It’s reported that we Chinese teenagers often depend on our parents in our daily lives these days. We can’t deal with difficulties by ourselves. So it’s important for us to learn to manage our own lives.
First, it is necessary for teenagers to learn the life skills. It can not only improve our independence but also let us learn how to take care of ourselves. Second, we must follow safety instructions. In this way, we can do our best to make sure we are safe. Third, it is also useful to learn to plan your life properly. For example, we’d better make a schedule so that we can study better.
In a word, if we learn to manage our lives from now on, we will have a better future.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己的观点——学会管理自己的生活对青少年来说很重要；
第二步，从学习生活技能、遵守安全须知以及学会合理规划等方面具体阐述应该怎么做；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①depend on依赖
②deal with处理
③in this way用这种方法
④for example例如
[高分句型]
①First, it is necessary for teenagers to learn the life skills.(it固定句型)
②In a word, if we learn to manage our lives from now on, we will have a better future.(if引导的条件状语从句)
芜湖市南陵县中考一模
X.书面表达（共1小题；满分20分）
61. 假如你是李华，你校英语社团将要举行“My Favorite Saying”的分享会，请你根据以下内容写一篇分享会发言稿。要点如下：
1. 你最喜欢的谚语 (从以下谚语中任选一句)：
(1) A friend in need is a friend indeed. (患难见真情。)
(2) Failure is the mother of success. (失败是成功之母。)
(3) Two heads are better than one. (三个臭皮匠，顶个诸葛亮。)
2. 你对这条谚语的理解；
3. 你的亲身经历或感悟。
注意：
1. 词数80—100，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Good morning, everyone!
It’s my great honor to have a chance to make a speech here. My favorite saying is_______________________________________________________
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【答案】例文
Good morning, everyone!
It’s my great honor to have a chance to make a speech here. My favorite saying is “A friend in need is a friend indeed”. A life without friends is a life without sunshine! True friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.
Once I doubted the usefulness of study, losing my interests and direction, even confident. Finally, I decided to stop studying. After knowing the news, my friend Kate encouraged me patiently. She kept on cheering me up until I promised to give up this thought. Later, I made up my mind to study hard in order to enter my dream senior high school. Thanks to her, now I’m on my way to my dream.
Many people will be in and out of your life, but only true friends will be always there. True friends always come to you when you need help.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，从给出的谚语中选出自己最喜欢的谚语；
第二步，介绍自己对这条谚语的理解；
第三步，描述自己的的亲身经历或感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①decide to do sth.决定做某事
②study hard努力学习
③in order to为了
[高分句型]
①True friends try their best to help you without thinking of what they can get from it.（what引导的宾语从句）
②True friends always come to you when you need help.（when引导的时间状语从句）
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