广西马山县2016高考英语短文改错二轮练习（2）及答案
1.短文改错
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】1.
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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【参考答案】2.
第二句：advices改成advice；prepare后加for。
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第五句：are改成is。
第六句：Which改成As。
第七句：that改成it。
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短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】3.
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Best,Lily
短文改错（10分）
错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改
增加：在缺词出加一个漏字符号（︿），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改侯的词。
注意：只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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She praised me for that I had done.
改错
参考答案
giving—given 去掉out her---herself
they---we said----say turns---turn
too---so kind---kindly
do后加it that---what
短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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参考答案短文改错
1．farmer改为farmer,s
2． 去掉1965前面的in
3． an air force base。
4． 把hardly改为hard
5．把because改为so
6．在chosen后加as
7． manned
8． flew
9． 把circle改为circles
10． 在have后面加been
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1份，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
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【答案】第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
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1.短文改错
下面短文中有10处语法错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】1.
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短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】2.
1.usually—usual 2.find前加to 3.How—What
4.Stand—Standing 5.occurs—occurred
6.fine前a去掉 7.but—and 8.late—later
9.arrived后加at 10.us--ourselves
请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
3. 请在答题卡上指定的地方作答。
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【参考答案】3.
My friend Dick ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )was seven years old，and her (his)sister Katherine was five. One day their mother take (took)them to their aunt’s to play while she went to the city(∧to)buy some new clothes. They played for a (an)hour, and then their aunt took Dick into the kitchen. She gave him a nicely (nice)cake and a knife and said, “Dick, cut this cake in half, and give one of the piece (pieces)to your sister. But remembering (remember)to do it like a gentleman. ” “How do gentlemen do it” Dick asked. "They always give the bigger one piece to the other person, ” answered his aunt. Dick thought out (about)this for a few seconds. Then he took the cake to his sister but (and)said to her, “Cut this cake in half, !Catherine. ”
短文改错
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参考答案：
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短文改错专项训练2
此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )＼）划掉；在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉；该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）；在该行右边横线上写出该加的词；该行错一个词，在错的词下划一个横线；在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Li Ming, who has been working as postman for 1．____
two years, always wears a suit of green uniforms. 2．________
He worked with care as well as with effort. He 3．________
serves for the people heart and soul. Every day he 4．________
gets up early to deliver newspapers or magazines. 5．________
He is so careful and he has never been wrong. 6．________
One day he had to send a dead letter and it happened 7．________
to be raining hardly outside. But he set out immediately． 8．_____
He had asked nearly everybody in the district after 9．________
he tried to hand the letter to the right person. 10．________
参考答案
1．postman→ ∧ a postman
2．uniforms → uniform
3．worked→works
4．for（删去）
5．or→and
6．and→that
7．√
8．hardly→hard
9．after→before
10．tried→managed
短文改错
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Yours,
Wang Hui
参考答案：
Dear Mr. Li,
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about / over them
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Yours,
Wang Hui广西马山县2016高考英语短文改错二轮练习（6）及答案
1.短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同学之 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )间交换批改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
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【参考答案】1.
1. On→In 2. have→had 3. 在cut前加上been
4. after→until 5. the→a
6. tired→tiring 7. 去掉to 8. subject→subjects
9. 正确 10. terribly→ terrible
文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改词均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
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【参考答案】2.
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短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）。并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2． 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿）。并在其下面写出修改后的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词后划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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短文改错
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(/\)，在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】3.
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短文改错(共10小题;每小题1.5分,满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右
边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
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此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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参考答案、、短文改错
66. happily→happy 67. we后加are 68. thought→think
69. in→on 70 去are或are→be 71.正确 72.that→which
73.work→works 74. unless→if 75. it→we
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【参考答案】(五)
76．去掉which 77.are → is
78. two- fifth → two-fifths
79. whom → them 80.So → But
81. ∧harmful → more 82.for → to
83. √ 84.knowledges → knowledge 85. minds ∧ → to
短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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1．farmer改为farmer,s
2． 去掉1965前面的in
3． an air force base。
4． 把hardly改为hard
5．把because改为so
6．在chosen后加as
7． manned
8． flew
9． 把circle改为circles
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【参考答案】1.
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增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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【参考答案】2.
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3.enjoy 后加the, 4.our—their, 5.are—were,
6.but—and, 7.before—after, 8.to realize 去掉to,
9.strong—strongly, 10.pays—pay
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】3.
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（全国II）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
George,
It's been a week after ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) we left your family and we are now 76._______
back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.______
your city and prov ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )iding us for the wonderful meals. After 78._______
we said goodbye to ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )you, we went to Washington D.C., 79._______
where we stayed for ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )three days. My brother was so much fond 80._______
of the museums th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ere that he begged my parents to staying 81．______
another couple of ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )day. However, my father had to return to 82.______
work on Monday so w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83．______
was really a n ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ice experience. If you'd like to make trip to 84._______
our city some ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85._______
Yours,
Mike
76.after---since 77.them---us 78.for---with 79.正确
80.去掉much 81.staying---stay 82.day----days 83.fly---flew
84.trip前a 85.better----more
一．短文改错的主要特点
1．内容大都是学生身边或社会生活中常见的话题。以记叙文为主，有时也有说明文或应用文。
2．内容相对独立、完整。命题的总原则是整篇理解、分行解题。
3．语言简单易懂，没有生僻的词汇或繁难的句法结构；短文的词数为120左右。
4．考查要点覆盖面广, 分布合理。涉及词法、句法、行文逻辑等三个方面。
二．短文改错的常见类型
纵观近几年高考题中的短文改错, 不难看出, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )其错误形式基本上为：错词占6行左右; 正确占1 行; 多词和缺词一般占3 行左右。错误类型主要涉及动词、名词、形容词、副词、冠词、代词、介词、连词、主谓一致、固定结构等语法知识。其中, 动词时态、语态、非谓语动词等是考查重点。
一、短文改错的解题基本思路
1．通读全文，掌握大意
首先，要认真阅读短文，把握全篇主旨，弄清上下文的逻辑关系，了解文章所创设的语言环境，为正确判断创造条件。
2．整句理解，逐行找错。
在读懂文章之后，要逐句逐行地找错。分析每个句子中句法、语法、行文逻辑等方面是否有错，要做到逐行分析，不可遗漏，句与句之间要注意连词的用法。
3．由易到难，各个击破
改错要从最简单、最熟悉的项目入手，先从语法的角度入手，再从逻辑方面考虑，最后推敲难题。
4．检查核对，规范改正
最后浏览改后的全文，看全篇是否语义通顺，注意正确行。 要特别注意规范改正错误, 严格按照示范规定符号和要求去改。切忌文字说明或用箭头表示。
二．短文改错的设题方式
一．错词：
错词的情况归纳起来大致可分为虚词选择错误、实词词形错误、同(近)义词、形似词选择错误等。
1．虚词错误
①介词错误。介词错误主要集中在介词的固定搭配、介词多词义的用法以及一些意义相近介词、副词和连词的混用等。
1.After five years awa ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )y in my hometown，I find that the neighborhood which I used to live in has changed a lot.(09全国卷I)
析：“从……离开，远离”应为短语 away from，不能与in搭配。应将in改为from。
② 连词错误主要表现: 句与句之间的关系混淆 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )，是并列、转折、承接、还是表原因；连词与介词、副词的混用，一些连词具有多重功能和词性以及意义相近连词的区别等。
1.I meant to g ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ive it back to you before four in the afternoon，and I was held up on my way back(09全国卷II)
析：分析前后两个句子可知，前面的句子与后面的句子存在转折关系，不是并列关系，应将 and 改为but。
③冠词错误：冠词的考查集中在：应该使用定冠词的地方使用了不定冠词；应该使用不定冠词的地方却使用了定冠词；不定冠词a与an的误用等。
1.Three men were ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) fishing when the angel appeared in the boat with them. （2009.四川卷）
析：初次提到的人或物前应该用不定冠词，因此要将第一个the改为an。
2．实词错误
① 名词错误主要集中在：名词的单复数形式，特别注意不规则名词的复数形式；可数名词和不可数名词的混用；抽象名词具体化；名词的所有格等。
1. I stayed there for ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) one and a half hour and made sure that the girl was all right. （09全国卷II）
析：one and a half 后接可数名词的复数形式，不能用单数。要将hour改为hours。
② 动词错误主要有：不规则动词的过去式 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )、过去分词形式错误；时态的不一致性；语态的错用；非谓语动词用法的选择，特别是非谓语动词作状语、表语、定语或宾语补足语时是用过去分词还是现在分词；在 to 后是用不定式还是动名词；以及在并列结构中后面动词的形式；谓语动词时态形式的错用；情态动词和 will(would), shall (should) 等助动词后面的动词形式的误用等。
1.There exist now ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) a park that has a small river running through. （09全国卷I）
析：句子中的there exis ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t相当于there be形式，exist的形式跟后面的名词a park保持一致，因此exist要用单三形式exists。
③ 形容词与副词错误主要表现在：这两类词的混用；形容词或副词的原级、比较级、最高级的混用等。
1.The Sichuan Resta ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )urant and the older fish shop across the street from our middle school are gone. （09全国卷I）
析：分析句子，句子中没有比较对象，不能用比较级，要将older改为原形old。
④ 引导词错误：在复合句中引导从句的连接词的错误运用，特别是在定语从句中关系词的错误运用，宾语从句中连接词的误用等。
1.One day I saw a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father for the money. （09辽宁卷）
析：非限制性定语从句的先行词指物时只能用which不能用that，应将that改为which。
⑤代词错误。代词考查主要集中在句子中代词的一致性、人称代词、反身代词、指示代词的混用等。
1.When I was in hi ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )gh school, most of my friends had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. （2009.辽宁卷）
析：根据句义后面句子中的it与前面句子中的bicycles是一类物，表示泛指。因此要将it改为one。
⑥思维定势干扰错误。由于受汉语思维定势影响，造成一些英语词语的搭配错误。
1.I’m glad to say t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )hat anything has worked out fine in the dorm. （09海南、宁夏卷）
析： anything意 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )思是“任何事或任何物”，而everything表示“所有的东西或物”，很显然句子强调在宿舍的所有事情，应将anything改为everything。
⑦行文逻辑错误。
高考短文改错中，涉及短文主旨大意及逻辑关系的错误这类试题的隐蔽性较强，单独看并没有错，但若放在整篇中则与全篇的意思不符。
I stayed here for ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) one and a half hours and made sure that the girl was all right.
析：直接分析该句，没有任何错误，但结合上下文可看出句子是在转述过去发生的事情，不能用here，因此应将here改为there。广西马山县2016高考英语短文改错二轮练习（3）及答案
1.短文改错
文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
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【参考答案】1.
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短文改错。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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wonderfully time d ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )uring the past summer holiday. Last summer I take a trip to the
countryside w ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ith some of my friend. Country life, in my opinion, gave me peace and
quite, which is what I ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) can’t enjoy in big cities. There was river nearby, in that we went
swimming every now ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )and then. You can never imagine how fun it was to swim
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them every day as they always reminds me of my stay in the country。
Yours
Li Ping
【参考答案】2.
1.exciting → excited 2. wonderfully → wonderful 3.take → took
4. friend →friends 5.river前加a
6.that →which 7.how →what 8.去掉been
9.plenty of 10. reminds →remind
短文改错。
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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Yours
LuoWei
【参考答案】3.
1. ask → asking 2.had →have 3.that → which
4. Unluckily → Luckily
5. carefully → careful 6.去掉it 7.see → saw
8.in need of 9.去掉be 10. whether →if
(内江、广安模拟)
Last Saturday ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) we had a party at home. Dad's friends come 1.________
along with th ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )eir families. Since Mom was not at home, Dad 2.________
and I had to prepare e ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )verything, so it turned out such a miracle3.________
that they did make it ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )! Everything went perfectly fine. 4.________
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like me. We had a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )lot of things by common. The time seemed 7.________
short to me, and I ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) wished we could have had some more time 8.________
to continue t ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )he conversation. Hopeful we're going on 9.________
a trip together nex ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t summer, and also summer after next. 10.________
答案与解析：
1．come→came 整篇文章为一般过去时，应把come改为came。
2．√
3．so→but 前后语境为转折关系，应把so改为but。
4．they→we 根据上文可知作者使用了第一人称，此处指作者和父亲俩人，因此应把they改为we。
5．去掉who 本句为简单句，去掉who。
6．amazed→amazing 主语为it，应用amazing作表语，表示“令人惊异的”。
7．by→in 固定短语have...in common表示“有……相同之处”。
8．去掉had wish后的宾语从句用虚拟语气，谓语应用情态动词＋动词原形，因此把had去掉。
9．Hopeful→Hopefully 副词hopefully放在句首，表示“希望”副词作状语修饰整个句子。
10．在also后加the next summer指明年夏天，the summer after next指后年夏天。
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Mrs Winthorp,
So my first week at c ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ollege is over! No lectures this morning so I think I’d email you and let you know what things are going. I’m glad to say that anything has worked out fine in the dorm. I remember asking for a room as far away from the lifts as possible and they find me a comfortable one on second floor. There are two girls from my course here and I plan to make friend with them so that we can help each other on the course work. Everyone else seems very nice and warmly here. Well, I had better to stop now. I’m going to attend mine first lesson this afternoon, for I’ve got some preparations to make. Keep in touch.
Best,
Carol
参考答案
短文改错:
what-----how
anything----everything
find----found
on second-----on the second
friend----friends
on----with
warmly----warm
to stop----stop
mine----my
for-----so
(郑州质检)
We all know that healthy is very important to us. Both1.________
study and work depend by strong bodies. Doing sports2.________
and games helps us keep strong and healthy. If we do not3.________
take any exercise, we may feel tired but get sick easily.4.________
There's many different kinds of sports we can do them，5.________
such as playing ball games, running, walking and swim.6.________
However, now we have too much homework to do in7.________
every day. We hope that we'll be giving less homework8.________
and have more time take part in sports. We also hope9.________
that our school can hold a sports meeting every term. 10.________
答案与解析：
1．healthy→health 这里是句子的主语，因此用名词形式。
2．by→on/upon depend on/upon是固定搭配。
3．help→helps 这句话的主语是动 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )名词短语doing sports and games。动名词短语作主语表示一件事时，谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。
4．but→and feel tired和get sick是并列关系，不表示转折，因此将but改为and。
5．去掉them 这是一个定语从句，从句中作动词do的宾语的关系代词that(或which)被省略了，因此them是多余的。
6．swim→swimming 应用动名词与前面的running，walking并列，故应用swimming。
7．去掉in every day可以单独作状语，前面不需要加介词。
8．giving→given 这里是被动语态，因此用过去分词。
9．take前加to 此处考查的是have time to do sth.的结构。
10．√
