(共17张PPT)
Unit 1 A new start
Reading and Writing
opportunity
deal with
challenge
fail
work hard
with butterflies in one’s stomach
keep an open mind
disappointed
eagerness
curious
挑战
失败,未能做成
失望的
机会
应付,处理
努力
好奇的
愿听取别人的意见,思维开阔
渴望
情绪紧张,心里发慌
Revision:
What’s a journal entry
A journal entry can be a timeline of your daily activities, a summary of your thoughts, or simply a way to keep yourself on track while you complete an assignment.
Date
The author’s feeling.
The author’s physical class.
The author made a friend during after-class activities.
The author’s impression of the first week.
Introduction
Main body
Ending
Read and summarize the main idea of each paragraph.
layout
Activity 1
What’s the passage about
It’s about the author’s __________ during the first week at senior high.
2. What happened in her physics class
She couldn’t ______ ______ ______ and the physics teacher said that ________ was more important than note-taking and memorising.
3. What did she do after class
She hurried to the school skateboarding club, and bumped into a girl on the way. Then she tried skateboarding at the club and ______ ______ with the girl.
experiences
take everything down
thinking
Read the journal entry and answer the questions.
made friends
Activity 3
Layout
Tense
Order
Language
Excellent choices
of words
Different sentence patterns
I tried to turn on my brain but the engine wouldn’t start.
With butterflies in my stomach…
Well begun, half done.
Figure of speech
Metaphor
How to write a journal
高考应用文写作--日记
Write a journal entry about your first-day experiences at
senior high.
要点如下:
1.校园环境;
2.对老师和同学们的印象;
3.自己的感受。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
第一步:认真审题 谋篇布局
体裁 人称 时态 要点结构图 开头点题 (说明感受) 说明在校第一天的感受
日记 第一人称 一般过去时 具体描述情况(条理清晰) 1.校园环境
2.对老师和同学们的印象
3.再次说明自己的感受
第二步,由词及句,准确表达
1.今天是我高中开学的第一天,它给我留下了深刻的印象。
Today is the first day of my senior high, and it has ______ ______ ______ ______ ______ me.
2.校园特别漂亮,我迫不及待地去探索。
The campus was ___________ beautiful and I ______ ______.
3在教学楼前是个美丽的花园,空气里充满花香,这让我很放松。
In front of the teaching building was a beautiful garden and
the air ____ ____ ____ the smell of flowers, which ____ ____.
made a deep impression on
particularly
could not wait to explore it
was filled with
made me relaxed
4.我感到很幸运,新老师们都全力以赴使他们的课有条理。
I felt lucky that all my teachers ____ ____ ____ make their class organized.
5.我所有的同学都很友好,我渴望和他们交朋友。
All my classmates are very friendly, so I’m ______ ______ to make friends with them.
went all out to
in the eagerness
第三步,句式升级,创造亮点
利用so…that…句式升级句式
All my classmates are ______ ______ _ I’m in the eagerness to make friends with them.
so friendly that
第四步,合理过渡,完美卷面
1.今天是我高中开学的第一天,它给我留下了深刻的印象。
2.校园特别漂亮,我迫不及待地去探索。
3.在教学楼前是个美丽的花园,空气里充满花香,这让我很放松。
4.我感到很幸运,新老师们都全力以赴使他们的课有条理。
5.我所有的同学都很友好,我渴望和他们交朋友。
September 1st Sunny
Today is the first day of my senior high, and it has made a deep impression on me.
The campus was particularly beautiful and I could not wait to explore it. In front of the teaching building was a beautiful garden and the air was filled with the smell of flowers, which made me relaxed. Besides, I felt lucky that all my new teachers went all out to make their classes organized. In addition, all my classmates are so friendly that I’m in the eagerness to make friends with them.
How nice a day it was!
Evaluation
Evaluation form Tense simple present, simple past, past continuous, simple future… Order Time order Layout Introduction My impression of the first week Main body Enjoyable class & after school activities & How I made new friends Ending My plan and feelings Date … Language Excellent choices of words …
Figures of speech …
Different sentence patterns …
… …
Activity 5
Handwriting
良好的书写习惯:字体工整、规范、清晰;字母的大小适中;间距要匀称;卷面干净。
Homework
Write a journal entry about your first-week experiences
at senior high.