(共29张PPT)
Unit 4 What's the best movie theater
Section B3a-Selfcheck
写作公开课课件
教学目标：
一、语言能力
能熟练运用形容词副词最高级描述出你最喜欢的城市
及原因。
二、学习能力
学会一种写作方法—四格写作法。
三、文化意识
引导对家乡的热爱之情。
四、思维品质
培养逻辑化、结构化表达最爱之物的能力。
My hometown
What is the best movie therter in Zhaoqing
review
it’s the cheapest
/the closet to home.
it has the most comfortable seats
/the biggest screen.
it has the best sound/
it is the most popular.
it has the newest movie.
Where is your favorite place to go on weekends Why？
Mary likes going Greenwood Park
Let’s learn more.
格林伍德公园，地理位置优越，周边遍布地区著名景点，包括酒庄、海滩、艺术品和手工艺品店。公园内设汽车旅馆客房、供电营地、齐备的设施和餐厅。活动和景点包括：骑马、赛车场、赛马场、兔子岛海滩（Rabbit Island Beach）。
Greenwood Park
Read and finish 3a.(填入形容词和副词最高级形式)
crowded creative good fast quietly
Greenwood Park is _________ place to go to on weekends. I always finish my breakfast _________on Saturdays because I want to get to Greenwood Park before 10:00 a.m. to meet my friends. The park is _____________place on weekends because almost everyone goes there to see the street performers. Some people think they are boring, but I think they are _____________people. However, the place where you can enjoy your time _____________is at one of the small coffee shops near the park. You can read or relax there. There is something for everyone at Greenwood Park.
the best
(the) fastest
the most crowded
the most creative
the most quietly
1
What’s the structure of the passage
1. the topic sentence
2. the supporting sentences
3. the concluding sentence
Greenwood Park is the best place to go to on weekends.
(1) can meet_______(朋友)
(2) can see____________________________（最有创意的表演者）
(3) can enjoy ________________________（最安静的时光）
(4) can _____________（阅读和休息）
friends
the most creative performers
the time the most quietly
There is something for everyone at Greenwood Park.
主题句
支撑句
总结句
What can I do at Greenwood Park
read or relax
How to write an argumentation
最想去地方
原因
观点
M-R-O段落结构
2
Reading for structure
Beginning
Body
Ending
总
分
总
2.完整的结构
1.恰当的内容
2
The expressions in it
1.最高级
2.连词
(that)
让步：
although/ though
因果：
because (of) / that’s why / therefore
其他: (递进、选择、并列)
not only….,but also;
both… and…; also
Yanyan has become a must-visit city(网红城市) .
Write a passage to show more beauty of your hometown.
There is no place like home.
Let me show you the best place/food in my hometown.
I think the best mountain is_______. Because it is /has the _____________.
(the most popular, the highest, the most beautiful flowers, the most exciting , the most relaxing … )
七星岩
肇庆星湖
华辰玫瑰园
mountains
I think the best lake is________. Because it is /has the _____________.
(the biggest, the cleanest water, the most birds,
the most beautiful, the most peaceful… )
星湖
龙潭湖
西湖
Lakes
Food
Qiaotou Banli
Qiaotoutou tofu
I think ________ is the best. Because it tastes/is the __________.
( the most popular, the sweetest, the most water, the most delicious,the nicest… )
Lubao
Let’s practice.
文
体裁
一般 时
时态
第 人称
人称
.
话题
①审
应用
现在
一/三
几家超市的对比介绍
假设你是李华，新同学Lily写信向你询问学校附近是否有大型超市。请你写一封回信，从以下几个方面比较几家超市，并给她推荐一家最便利的超市。
提示∶1. Things 2. Price 3. Service 4. Distance （距离）
要求∶1. 包含提示信息，语言通顺，行文连贯，内容充实;
2. 80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Brainstorm
Let’s find out the writing structure.
the best supermarket
1. greeting
2. comparisons
3. opinions
4. conclusion
the best supermarket
1. greeting
2. comparisons
3. opinions
4. conclusion
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
I’m glad to hear from you.
You want to know ...
Now let me tell you ...
1. greeting
3. opinions
the best supermarket
1. greeting
2. comparisons
4. conclusion
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
I’m glad to hear from you.
You want to know ...
Now let me tell you ...
2. comparisons
Things:
Price:
Service:
Distance:
best/fresh ...
sth. is cheap/expensive ...
good/bad/terrible
be far from/be close to …
3. opinions
the best supermarket
1. greeting
2. comparisons
4. conclusion
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
I’m glad to hear from you.
You want to know ...
Now let me tell you ...
Things:
Price:
Service:
Distance:
best/fresh ...
sth. is cheap/expensive ...
good/bad/terrible
be far from/be close to …
3. opinions
I think ... is the best of all.
In my opinion/In my view, ... is the best of all.
3. opinions
the best supermarket
1. greeting
2. comparisons
4. conclusion
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
I’m glad to hear from you.
You want to know ...
Now let me tell you ...
Things:
Price:
Service:
Distance:
best/fresh ...
sth. is cheap/expensive ...
good/bad/terrible
be far from/be close to …
I think ... is the best of all.
In my opinion/In my view, ... is the best of all.
4. conclusion
I hope you will enjoy shopping there.
Hope what I said is useful to you. Best wishes.
I hope it can help you.
3. opinions
the best supermarket
1. greeting
2. comparisons
4. conclusion
Let’s draft
What sentences can we use to describe this paragraph
I’m glad to hear from you.
You want to know ...
Now let me tell you ...
Things:
Price:
Service:
Distance:
best/fresh ...
sth. is cheap/expensive ...
good/bad/terrible
be far from/be close to …
I think ... is the best of all.
In my opinion/In my view, ... is the best of all.
I hope you will enjoy shopping there.
Hope what I said is useful to you. Best wishes.
I hope it can help you.
Let’s proofread
One possible version.
Dear Lily,
I’m glad to hear from you. Let me tell you something about the supermarkets near our school.
Yongxing Supermarket is large, and it has all kinds of things. It is the closest to our school. But students hardly ever shop there because things are pretty expensive. Tiny Supermarket is the cheapest. However, it is a little far from our school and the service is the worst. Xinhua Supermarket is more popular than the other two. It has the best service, and the food is both fresh and cheap.
I think Xinhua Supermarket is the best of the three. I hope you'll enjoy shopping there.
Yours,
Li Hua
Self-check and peer-check.
Let’s proofread
check
Check for mistakes:
spelling
grammar
polish
□你分段了吗？
□你的每一段都有主旨吗？
□你包含介绍的基本信息了吗？
□ 你有拼写错误吗？
□ 你有语法错误吗？
□ 你使用连词and了吗？
Let’s evaluate
Let’s edit
评分原则
本题总分15分，按各档次给分。评分时先根据文章的内容、语言质量初步确定档次，然后以档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分；
评分时应考虑：内容要点是否完整；时态，语态及人称是否正确；词汇和句式的多样性以及语言的准确性；上下文的连贯性；
如书写较差，影响表达，应视其影响程度，降低一到两个档次；英美两种拼法及词汇用法都可接受；
内容要点可用不同方式表达，应紧扣主题，可适当发挥。
Self Check 1
Fill in the blanks with the superlative forms of the words in the box.
Dumpling House is restaurant in the city. You can get a big plate of dumplings for only five yuan.
Spring Park is place in the city on weekends. Many families go there with their young children. Lots of old people like to take walks there, too.
You can rest at Flower Hotel. Their rooms are clean and big.
109.9 FM plays music. The songs are always boring and too loud.
PEP High School is school in this town. They have big classrooms, fantastic teachers and an excellent sports center.
the cheapest
good cheap popular comfortably bad
the most comfortably
the most popular
the worst
the best
2
Read the information. Then correct the mistakes in the sentences below.
A movie ticket at Town Cinema is ＄12.00. It
is ＄10.50 at Screen City, and ＄10.00 at
Movie World.
Screen City is always very crowded. Many
people go to Movie World, too. But you can
always get a ticket at Town Cinema.
The seats at Movie World are very comfortable.
The seats at Movie World are a little hard.
The Town Cinema seats are very comfortable.
Thank you for listening
