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读后续写
之情绪描写专项训练
By Liu
How do you feel after enjoying this song
Can you express the feeling with a word
喜 怒 哀 乐
学习目标：
1.学生能够学习积累一些描写情绪的单词和表达。
2.学生能够掌握四种生动表达情绪的句式。
3.学生能够将所学句式运用在作文中，并在日常生活中表达描述情绪多样化。
Task 1：Challenge！
We use adjectives to express_____________.
feelings
写下下列单词对应的形容词
happiness--
sadness--
anger--
fear--
shock--
delight--
nervousness--
happy
sad
angry
fearful
shocked
delighted
nervous
Task 2：小组合作 翻译以下单词，并将其分成四类。
①angry ②frightened ③depressed ④amused ⑤scared
⑥mad ⑦ delighted ⑧happy ⑨annoyed ⑩pleased
frustrated cheerful heartbroken sad shocked
①⑥⑨
②⑤
③
④⑦⑧⑩
①生气的 ②惊恐的 ③抑郁的 ④逗笑的 ⑤恐惧的
⑥发疯的 ⑦ 高兴的 ⑧开心的 ⑨恼怒的 ⑩高兴的，满意的 懊恼失意的 高兴的 心碎的 悲伤的 震惊的
限时积累：大声读背（堂清）
How can we express our feeling in the
continuation writing(读后续写) vividly
生动地
Task 3：学教材表达
He feels so happy that he followed his heart then choosing what to do with his life.
He is so desperate(绝望的) in the end that he even hides some meat inside the purse of a woman.
同桌互助：
1读 2译 3说学啥？
练：她激动地跳了起来。
She was ______________ she jumped to her feet.
句型1:
so excited that
sb. be so+情绪adj.+that 从句
某人如此......以至于......
Task 3：学教材表达
Happy and excited, we sat together to enjoy a big dinner, wishing
everyone a happy new year.
2.Tired but excited, I have been working on this, selecting his favourite music.
同桌互助：
1读 2译 3说学啥？
练：既激动又高兴，他跳了起来，挥(wave)舞着胳膊。
, he to his feet, his arms wildly.
Excited and delighted
jumped
waving
句型2:
情绪adj.1 and/but 情绪adj.2, 主+谓+宾, doing sth.
(感到)...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2
思考：①情绪是描述谁的？②and/but区别？
③句式中两个“做”在句中担任的句子成分一样吗？
Task 3：学教材表达
小回顾--看图写话
句型1:
sb. be so+情绪adj.+that 从句
某人如此......以至于......
句型2:
情绪adj.1+情绪adj.2, 主+谓+宾, doing sth.
(感到)...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2
2.既紧张又兴奋，她走上舞台，做演讲。
______________________,she walked onto the stage,_________a speech.
1.他如此的害怕以至于他没说一句话。
____________________________he didn't say anything.
He was so scared that
Nervous but excited
making
Task 3：学教材表达
When he looks at the menu, an astonished(吃惊的) look appears on his face.
2. A wave of nervousness washed over him.
同桌互助：
1读 2译 3说主句主语是人吗？
句型3:无灵主语句:情绪 n.+ 惯用动词(谓语) +sb.
一股/阵......的情绪/感觉...某人.
What？
Relief and delight flooded over me
练： 当大卫终于下定决心继续赛跑时,我被欣慰(relief)和开心给淹没(flood over)了。 (体会用无灵主语时，句子语态变换。)
___________________________________ when David finally became determined to continue the race.
无灵主语句：用无生命的事物来做主语
用无灵主语句扩写:
一种喜悦感抓住(seize)了我。
“I felt happy.”
例：我感到开心:
Task 3：学教材表达
“A sense of joy seized me .”
（A sense/wave/burst of）
+情绪名词
惯用动词
seize 抓住
swallow吞噬
flood over淹没
sweep over席卷
(swept过去式)
wash over 涌上心头
well up inside涌上心头
...
sb
Task 3：学教材表达
语料库
限时积累：大声读背惯用动词（堂清）
句型3:无灵主语句:情绪 n.+ 惯用动词(谓语) +sb.
一股/阵......的情绪/感觉...某人.
Task 3：学教材表达
Eyes shining with tears,she picked herself up and limped(瘸着脚走) away.
We dragged(拖，拽) ourselves down the mountain towards home, my
muscles aching(ache 痛) and knees shaking.
同桌互助：
1读 2译 3说分析句子主干 4非主干部分的逻辑主语分别是？逻辑主语与其动作之间关系是？
练：Mary独自坐在房中，眼里充满后悔的(regretful)泪水。
________________________________ , Mary sat alone in the room.
句型4:
Eyes filled with regretful tears
身体部位+非谓语动词, 主+谓+宾
某人做某事，(身体部位)感觉/... ...
独立主格结构，就是一种特殊的非谓语动词=也就是：非谓语动词的主语跟句子主语________。
旧题重练
Nervous but excited,she walked onto the stage,_________(make)a speech.
错题回顾(广东高三名校联考)
If _____(leave)alone outside,dogs and cats can be smart to look for warm shelter.
不一致
making
left
Task 3：学教材表达
语料库
Face lighting up with delight, sb did sth... 脸上洋溢着快乐,...
Eyes glittering with joy, sb did sth... 眼里闪着喜悦,...
Eyes filled with regretful tears, sb did sth...眼里充满后悔的泪水...
Eyes widening in disbelief/surprise/fear, sb did sth...
眼睛因难以置信/惊讶/恐惧而睁大,...
Heart beating/pounding wildly, sb did sth... 心砰砰直跳,...
Arms/legs/muscles aching and knees shaking, sb did sth...
胳膊/腿/肌肉酸痛,膝盖发抖,...
限时积累：大声读一读
Task 3：学教材表达
小回顾--看图写话
3.当她赢得奖赏时，一种兴奋感席卷了她。____________________________________when she won the prize.
4.她赢得奖赏，脸上洋溢着快乐。
________________________________,she won the prize.
句型3:无灵主语句:情绪 n.+ 惯用动词(谓语) +sb.
一股/阵......的情绪/感觉...某人.
句型4:
身体部位+非谓语动词, 主+谓+宾
某人做某事，(身体部位)感觉/... ...
A sense of excitement swept over her
Face lighting up with delight
同一情绪 多种表达
句型2:情绪adj.1+情绪adj.2, 主+谓+宾, doing sth.
(感到)...和...,某人做某事1,并做某事2
句型3:无灵主语句: 情绪n.+惯用动词(谓语)+sb.
一股/阵......的情绪/感觉...某人.
句型1:sb. be so+情绪adj.+that 从句
某人如此......以至于......
句型4:身体部位+非谓语动词, 主+谓+宾.
某人做某事，感觉...
Task 4：回顾所学(同桌互说 本节所学4句式)
情境创设 Last Sunday was my mother's birthday. Something special happened to me and my mother. A few days ago, I secretly ordered a bunch of flowers online for her, planning to surprise her......
Task 5：学以致用--微片段描写
We were talking happily when my mother’s phone rang---It was from the deliveryman. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
根据所给的开头，运用所学的技巧续写短文，对母女两人的情绪和动作进行描写。（至少3句）
Homework
1.续写这个故事在作文本，不少于7句。（四个句式必用） 必做
2.摘抄课堂笔记于笔记本。 必做
3.学案上翻译句子题。 选做（1-27名必做；其余选做）
28-32名选择 作业3 or 课上看图写话四句话读背默写出来。
(自抄汉语 默写英语)读后续写之情绪描写学案
Task 1：Challenge！
写下下列单词对应的形容词
happiness-- sadness-- anger--
fear-- shock-- delight-- nervousness--
Task 2：小组合作 翻译以下单词，并将其分成四类(填写序号即可)。
①angry_______ ②frightened_______③depressed_______④amused_______⑤scared_______
⑥mad_______ ⑦ delighted_______⑧happy_______⑨annoyed_______⑩pleased_______
frustrated_______ cheerful_______ heartbroken_______ sad_______ shocked_______
Task 3：学教材表达(读--译--说学啥)
1.He feels so happy that he followed his heart then choosing what to do with his life.
2.He is so desperate in the end that he even hides some meat inside the purse of a woman.
句型 1:
练：她激动地跳了起来。She was ______________ she jumped to her feet.
1.Happy and excited, we sat together to enjoy a big dinner, wishing everyone a happy new year.
2.Tired but excited, I have been working on this, selecting his favourite music.
句型2:
练：（感到）既激动又高兴，他跳起来，挥(wave)舞着胳膊。
______________ , he to his feet, his arms wildly.
小回顾--看图写话
1.他如此的害怕以至于他没说一句话。
____________________________he didn't say anything.
2.既紧张又兴奋，她走上舞台，做演讲(make a speech)。
______________________,she walked onto the stage,_________a speech.
1.When he looks at the menu, an astonished look appears on his face.
2. A wave of nervousness washed over him.
句型3：
无灵主语句：用无生命的事物来做主语
语料库：
（A sense/wave/burst of）情绪名词 + seize抓住/swallow吞噬/flood over淹没/sweep over席卷 (swept过去式)/wash over涌上心头 /well up inside涌上心头 +sb.
练：当大卫终于下定决心继续赛跑时,我被欣慰和开心给淹没(flood over)了。
_____________________________when David finally became determined to continue the race.
1. Eyes shining with tears,she picked herself up and limped away.
2. We dragged ourselves down the mountain towards home, my muscles aching and knees shaking.
句型4:
练：Mary独自坐在房中，眼里充满后悔的(regretful)泪水。
________________________________ ,Mary sat alone in the room.
Word Bank:
Face lighting up with delight, sb did sth... 脸上洋溢着快乐,...
Eyes glittering with joy, sb did sth... 眼里闪着喜悦,...
Eyes filled with regretful tears, sb did sth...眼里充满后悔的泪水...
Heart beating/pounding wildly, sb did sth... 心砰砰直跳,...
Eyes widening in disbelief/surprise/fear, sb did sth... 眼睛因难以置信/惊讶/恐惧而睁大,...
Arms/legs/muscles aching and knees shaking, sb did sth...胳膊/腿/肌肉酸痛,膝盖发抖,...
小回顾--看图写话
3.当她赢得奖赏时，一种兴奋感席卷了她。
____________________________________when she won the prize.
4.她赢得奖赏，脸上洋溢着快乐。
________________________________,she won the prize.
Task 5：学以致用--微片段描写
根据所给的开头，运用所学的技巧续写短文，对母女两人的情绪和动作进行描写。（至少3句）
We were talking happily when my mother’s phone rang---It was from the deliveryman.
翻译句子（选做）
1.我很羞愧，感觉自己的脸在燃烧。
2.坚定的和备受鼓舞的, David抬起他的头，满带感激的看着我。
3.沮丧和无助的, Eric大哭起来，想知道下一步该怎么办。
4.Mary感到一阵满足感涌上心头。
5.当Kelly把女儿紧紧抱在怀中时，高兴的泪水涌入双眼。
6.一看到他的朋友们，他就迫不及待地分享他的旅行，眼里闪烁着喜悦的光芒。
