2024-2025学年高一英语上学期期中专题练习 07 应用文写作15篇(人教版)(原卷版+解析版)

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名称 2024-2025学年高一英语上学期期中专题练习 07 应用文写作15篇(人教版)(原卷版+解析版)
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高一上学期期中考点大串讲
应用文写作期中必刷15篇
一、书信写作
1.(23-24高一上·河北石家庄·阶段练习)假设你是高一学生李华,学校组织中外高中生交流活动,你有意参加该活动。请用英语写一份个人简介,内容包括:
1. 个人情况介绍;
2. 兴趣、爱好等情况;
3. 性格、个人技能等情况。
词数80左右;
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam
I am Li Hua, a freshman student in our school. Knowing that our school is organizing exchange activities between Chinese and foreign high school students. I am writing to apply to participate in the activity. Here is my detailed information.
Firstly, I am an outgoing person with many hobbies and interests, such as dancing and painting. In addition, I am very familiar with traditional Chinese culture, which may appeal to foreigners. Finally, I have a good command of English, which enables me to communicate fluently with foreigners.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could reply to me at your convenience.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生用英语写一份个人简介以参加中外高中生交流活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
外向的:outgoing→etrovert
此外:in addition → what’s more
精通:have a good command of→master
吸引:appeal to→ attract
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, I am an outgoing person with many hobbies and interests, such as dancing and painting.
拓展句:Firstly, I am an outgoing person, who has many hobbies and interests, such as dancing and painting.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Here is my detailed information.(运用了全部倒装)
【高分句型2】Finally, I have a good command of English, which enables me to communicate fluently with foreigners.(运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.(23-24高一上·重庆·期中)假定你是李华,你的外教Harry想利用周末去探索重庆的山水和风土人情,请给Harry写邮件推荐一个景点。邮件内容包括:
1.景点名称和推荐的理由;
2.相关建议。
注意:1.词数不少于80词;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Harry,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Harry,
How is everything progressing Having known you are eager to appreciate the charm of Chongqing and explore its culture, I strongly recommend to you Ciqikou, a perfect destination for culture lovers.
Combining traditional architecture with modern prosperity, Ciqikou attracts an enormous number of tourists all year round. The stony streets are lined with various kinds of stores, where you can enjoy wonderful performances about local handicrafts and taste a variety of delicious snacks and specialities. Wandering along the street at the bank of the Jialing River, you can feel the gentle breeze and experience an extremely pleasant life after five-day’s hard work.
If possible, please explore the fantastic place during workdays, because it is not crowded in that period. If
you have further questions about it, don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。假定你是李华,你的外教Harry想利用周末去探索重庆的山水和风土人情,请根据题目所给要求给Harry写邮件推荐一个景点。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
欣赏:appreciate→ enjoy
渴望做某事:be eager to do sth →be longing to do sth
吸引:attract→ appeal to
愉快的:pleasant→ enjoyable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Combining traditional architecture with modern prosperity, Ciqikou attracts an enormous number of tourists all year round.
拓展句:Because it combines traditional architecture with modern prosperity, Ciqikou attracts an enormous number of tourists all year round.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Wandering along the street at the bank of the Jialing River, you can feel the gentle breeze and experience an extremely pleasant life after five-day’s hard work.( 运用了现在分词充当伴随状语)
[高分句型2] If possible, please explore the fantastic place during workdays, because it is not crowded in that period. (运用了省略句和because引导的原因状语从句)
3.(23-24高一上·河南南阳·阶段练习)假如你是高一学生李华,你想通过短视频方式给国外的朋友介绍你校高中生的兴趣爱好。请你用英文写一份介绍,内容如下:
1.描述同学们的爱好以及你的爱好;
2.简述爱好对学生成长的好处。
注意:
1.词数80字左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入词数。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from China. Today, I’d like to share the hobbies of the students in my school with you.
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That’s all. Thank you for watching!
【答案】范文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from China. Today, I’d like to share the hobbies of the students in my school with you.
Currently, we Chinese students enjoy a colorful and rich life. Besides regular hobbies like badminton, calligraphy, music and so on, students are fond of more fashionable ones. Some of my classmates like cosplay, which becomes a new trend. As for me, I like playing Chinese chess, which is not only just for fun, but also enables me to have a quick mind.
As you see, we are quite enjoying our life with a wide range of choices for hobbies, which help broaden our views, and maintain our mental and physical health. Most importantly, they are helpful to achieve our great potential.
That’s all. Thank you for watching!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是高一学生李华,你想通过短视频方式给国外的朋友介绍你校高中生的兴趣爱好。请你用英文写一份介绍。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目前:currently→at present
选择:choice→option
各种各样的:a wide range of→various
有用的:helpful→useful
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:As for me, I like playing Chinese chess, which is not only just for fun, but also enables me to have a quick mind.
拓展句:As for me, I like playing Chinese chess because it enables me to have a quick mind.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As for me, I like playing Chinese chess, which is not only just for fun, but also enables me to have a quick mind. (运用了not only…but also…句型)
[高分句型2]( As you see, we are quite enjoying our life with a wide range of choices for hobbies, which help broaden our views, and maintain our mental and physical health.运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
4.(23-24高一上·河南信阳·阶段练习)你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请以 My Favorite Sport 为题写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1. 喜欢的运动项目;
2. 喜欢的原因。
注意:1. 写作词数应为 80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答
My Favorite Sport
Hello, everyone!
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【答案】My Favorite Sport
Hello, everyone. My favorite sport is swimming and here are my reasons.
First, it’s an affordable sport. Even though you have to buy an admission ticket, it isn’t pricey. Second, swimming is beneficial to your heart and lungs. In addition to its physical benefits, swimming is also an effective way to relax. Spending hours in the pool in hot summer is always my favorite pastime.
In conclusion, as a very good workout, swimming can give you peace of mind to continue with your day.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以 My Favorite Sport 为题写一篇演讲稿参加学校举办的英语演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
购买:buy →purchase
昂贵的:pricy →expensive
有益的:beneficial →of benefit
总之:in conclusion →to sum up
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:First, it’s an affordable sport.
拓展句:First, it’s an affordable sport, which I think is the main reason why most people like it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Even though you have to buy an admission ticket, it isn’t pricey.(运用了even though引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】Spending hours in the pool in hot summer is always my favorite pastime.(运用了动名词短语作主语)
5.(23-24高一上·福建福州·期中)假定你是王明,暑假即将来临,你打算和家人去厦门。你们计划去鼓浪屿、植物园参观;还打算逛逛中山路和环岛路等等。请你给你的好友李华写一封email,分享你的出行计划。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:
Zhongshan Walking Street 中山路; The Xiamen Botanical Garden 植物园; Gulangyu Island 鼓浪屿
Dear Li Hua,
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Yours,
Wang Ming
【答案】Dear Li Hua,
As the summer holiday is approaching, I am going to have a three-day trip to Xiamen with my family.
First, we’re planning to visit the Zhongshan Walking Street, which is famous for its food and shopping. It’s a perfect place for any shopping goer. Then, we intend to go to the Island Ring Road. I can’t wait to cycle there! On the second day, we are going to visit the Nanputuo Temple and the Xiamen Botanical Garden. After that, we are going to visit Hulishan Fortress. Built in the Qing Dynasty, it is really worth a visit for every history lover. On the
third day, we will go to Gulangyu Island and enjoy a wonderful view at the seaside.
Do you have any plans for your holiday Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给你的好友李华写一封email,分享你暑假去厦门的出行计划。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:first→to begin with
著名的:famous→renowned
打算做:intend to do→plan/mean to do
令人赞叹的:wonderful→breathtaking
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Then, we intend to go to the Island Ring Road. I can’t wait to cycle there!
拓展句:Then, we intend to go to the Island Ring Road, where I can’t wait to cycle!
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, we’re planning to visit the Zhongshan Walking Street, which is famous for its food and shopping. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Built in the Qing Dynasty, it is really worth a visit for every history lover. (运用了过去分词作状语)
6.(23-24高一上·河北保定·期中)假定你是李华,你急需一台高质量相机来为即将举办的秋季运动会拍照摄像,听说外教Chris有一台符合要求的相机, 请用英语给他写一封邮件来借用,内容包括:
1.写信目的;2.表示会及时原样归还;3.表达感谢。
注意: 1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to inquire if I could borrow your high-quality camera for our upcoming autumn sports meet.
As the event organizer, I would like to capture the exciting moments and memories of the sports meet. Your camera would be perfect for the task as it has the features and quality that I need. I assure you that I will take good care of the camera and return it to you in its original condition as soon as the sports meet is over.
Thank you for your consideration and support. I greatly appreciate your kindness and willingness to help.
Yours,
Li hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的信件。要求考生给外教Chris写信,向其借用相机用来为即将举办的秋季运动会拍照摄像。
【详解】1.词汇积累
即将来临的:upcoming→ approaching
想要:would like → want
体贴:consideration → thoughtfulness
非常:greatly→ extremely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As the event organizer, I would like to capture the exciting moments and memories of the sports meet.
拓展句:Since I am the event organizer, I would like to capture the exciting moments and memories of the sports meet.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to inquire if I could borrow your high-quality camera for our upcoming autumn sports meet.(运用了if引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Your camera would be perfect for the task as it has the features and quality that I need.(运用了as引导的状语从句和that引导的定语从句)
7.(23-24高一上·安徽滁州·期中)假定你是李华, 本周末你校将组织郊游活动, 请给你的美国朋友 Ashley 写封邮件邀请她参加。内容包括:
1. 活动时间和地点;
2. 活动内容安排;
3. 欢迎 Ashley 参加。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ashley,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Ashley,
How are you doing Learning that an outing to the National Forest Park will be held in our school, I am writing to invite you to participate.
As scheduled, we’ll meet at the school gate at 6:30 this Saturday morning and then go to the park by bus. In this tour, not only can you enjoy the unique rocks, ancient and precious trees around you, but also you can admire the beautiful scenery on the way. I highly recommend you to participate in this meaningful activity, in which you can enrich your knowledge and make more friends.
I’m looking forward to your arrival.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。本周末学校将组织郊游活动, 要求考生给美国朋友 Ashley写封邮件邀请她参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold→launch
独特的:unique→ distinctive
参加:participate in→take part in
珍贵的:precious→ valuable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Learning that an outing to the National Forest Park will be held in our school, I am writing to invite you to participate.
拓展句:Because I learn that an outing to the National Forest Park will be held in our school, I am writing to invite you to participate.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In this tour, not only can you enjoy the unique rocks, ancient and precious trees around you, but also you can admire the beautiful scenery on the way. (运用了部分倒装的结构)
【高分句型2】I highly recommend you to participate in this meaningful activity, in which you can enrich your knowledge and make more friends.(运用了介词+关系代词引导的定语从句结构)
8.(23-24高一·全国·假期作业)假定你是李华,在意大利留学期间,你在网上看到一家公司招聘兼职销售员,请你给该公司负责人Kelly写一封邮件,申请这个职位。
内容包括:1.写信目的;2.你的条件;3.表示愿望。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Kelly,
I am writing in response to the job advertisement on your website for the position of salesperson.
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I think I’m qualified for this job. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Kelly,
I am writing in response to the job advertisement on your website for the position of salesperson.
I am a business student and have had a three-month sales experience. During this time, I developed
strong customer service skills and learned how to effectively communicate with customers to understand their needs and recommend products. Besides, I have good communication skills and I can speak Italian, English and Chinese so that I can deal with various potential customers. At last, I am a quick learner and am always eager to learn new skills. I am confident that I can quickly adapt to your company’s policies and procedures and provide excellent service to your customers.
I think I’m qualified for this job. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。就“在意大利留学期间,你在网上看到一家公司招聘兼职销售员”一事,要求考生给该公司负责人Kelly写一封邮件,申请这个职位。
【详解】1.词汇积累
了解:understand→have an understanding of
此外:besides→what’s more
各种各样的:various→a variety of
卓越的:excellent→extraordinary
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:At last, I am a quick learner and am always eager to learn new skills.
拓展句:At last, I am a quick learner, who is always eager to learn new skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, I have good communication skills and I can speak Italian, English and Chinese so that I can deal with various potential customers. (运用了so that引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】I am confident that I can quickly adapt to your company’s policies and procedures and provide excellent service to your customers. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
9.(23-24高一·全国·假期作业)为了传承和弘扬中国传统文化并让师生领略非物质文化遗产(intangible cultural heritage)的魅力,市文化馆在你校开展了“非遗进校园”活动。请你用英文写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动宗旨;
2.活动内容及方式;
3.活动影响及师生体会。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.题目已为你写好。
An Event of the Intangible Cultural Heritage
Today, our school held an event named “Intangible Cultural Heritage into School”, which was to promote traditional Chinese culture and inspire the interest of teachers and students.
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【答案】An Event of the Intangible Cultural Heritage
Today, our school held an event named “Intangible Cultural Heritage into School”, which was to promote traditional Chinese culture and inspire the interest of teachers and students.
There were many activities in the event, such as paper cutting, lion dance and sugar painting. The teachers and students, who were excited and full of curiosity, interacted actively through watching, listening and touching during these activities.
In general, the successful event was quite popular with the teachers and students. They did feel the charm of the intangible cultural heritage of China, which raised their recognition and strengthened their confidence.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文写一篇报道,报道市文化馆在你校开展的“非遗进校园”活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:excited→exhilarated/thrilled
充满:be full of→be filled with
总的来说:in general→on the whole
魅力:charm→glamour
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:There were many activities in the event, such as paper cutting, lion dance and sugar painting.
拓展句:There were many activities in the event, which include paper cutting, lion dance and sugar painting.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The teachers and students, who were excited and full of curiosity, interacted actively
through watching, listening and touching during these activities. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】They did feel the charm of the intangible cultural heritage of China, which raised their recognition and strengthened their confidence. (运用了“did+动词原形”强调谓语动词和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
10.(23-24高一·全国·假期作业)你校将举办英文演讲比赛,请你以“How to Live Green”为题写一篇演讲稿参赛。内容包括:
1.你对绿色生活的理解;
2.你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
How to Live Green
Hello everyone!
As is known to all, living Green is very important for everyone. For us students, we should create a green school in order to contribute to a comfortable studying environment.
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Therefore, everyone, let's take action immediately. Thanks for listening.
【答案】How to Live Green
Hello everyone!
As is known to all, living Green is very important for everyone. For us students, we should create a green school in order to contribute to a comfortable studying environment.
Firstly, we should arrange a series of lectures related to environmental protection, thus arousing students’ awareness of establishing a green school and living a low carbon life. Secondly, we are willing to attach great importance to saving water, paper and electricity and planting trees and put them into practice. Thirdly, we must have good habits so that we can keep every corner tidy in our school.
Therefore, everyone, let’s take action immediately. Thanks for listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“How to Live Green”为题写一篇演讲稿参加校英文演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:firstly→to begin with
应该:should→be supposed to
乐意做某事:be willing to do sth.→be pleased to do sth.
重要性:importance→significance
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:Firstly, we should arrange a series of lectures related to environmental protection, thus arousing students’ awareness of establishing a green school and living a low carbon life.
拓展句:Firstly, we should arrange a series of lectures which are related to environmental protection, thus arousing students’ awareness of establishing a green school and living a low carbon life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, we should arrange a series of lectures related to environmental protection, thus arousing students’ awareness of establishing a green school and living a low carbon life. (运用了过去分词短语作后置定语和现在分词作结果状语)
【高分句型2】Thirdly, we must have good habits so that we can keep every corner tidy in our school. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
11.(23-24高一上·陕西安康·期中)假定你是校英语俱乐部主席李华,为了帮助高一新生提高英语学习的效率,请你在校英文报上给高一新生写一封关于英语学习方法指导的建议信,内容包括:
1. 你对英语学习方法的理解;2. 你的建议;3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Freshmen,
I am Li Hua, president of the English Club in our school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Freshmen,
I am Li Hua, president of the English Club in our school. I am more than glad to share with you my understanding of efficient English learning methods and give some helpful advice.
First of all, it is of great importance to know that interest comes first, efficient learning involves a persevering and enjoyable process. Admittedly, learning methods vary from person to person. Whichever method you choose, find a workable method that suits you best. Personally, I strongly recommend that we spare no effort to enrich our vocabulary and improve our reading comprehension. To achieve this, we can join a study group, read English books or listen to English programs. In addition, just as the saying goes, practice makes perfect. If you practice English as much as possible and learn from mistakes, you are sure to be an efficient English learner.
Best luck with your English study.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于帮助高一新生提高英语学习的效率这一情况,在校英文报上给高一新生写一封关于英语学习方法指导的建议信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→ happy
方法:methods→ ways
此外:In addition→ What’s more
提高,改善:improve→ enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am Li Hua, president of the English Club in our school.
拓展句:I am Li Hua, who is president of the English Club in our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Personally, I strongly recommend that we spare no effort to enrich our vocabulary and improve our reading comprehension.(运用了动词recommend表示“建议”后接从属连词that引导宾语从句以及从句需用虚拟语气用法。)
【高分句型2】If you practice English as much as possible and learn from mistakes, you are sure to be an efficient English learner.(运用了连词If引导的条件状语从句。)
12.(23-24高一上·河南安阳·期中)假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展,请给他写封邮件。
内容包括:1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容。
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【答案】Dear Henry,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students in your class. I know you’re interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms — papercutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
It’ll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9:00 am to 7:00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon I will meet you at 2:00 pm at the teaching building if you like.
You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which papercutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of papercuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作,要求考生给外教Henry写一封邮件,邀请他一起参观中国剪纸艺术展,告知展览时间、地点、内容。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
对……感兴趣:be interested in→have interest in
欣赏:enjoy→appreciate
许多种:many kinds of→many sorts of
期待:look forward to→long for
2. 句式拓展
合并句子
原句:I know you’re interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms — papercutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
拓展句:Knowing you’re interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms — papercutting, I am writing to invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I will meet you at 2:00 pm at the teaching building if you like.(使用了if引导条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which papercutting is one of the most popular. (使用了省略that的宾语从句,“介词+which引导非限制性定语从句”)
13.(23-24高一上·湖北黄冈·期中)假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Frank写信询问你在第十九届杭州亚运会上的志愿者经历。请你给他写一封回信。要点如下:
1. 介绍服务内容;
2. 分享感受;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
亚运会 Asian Game
Dear Frank,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Frank,
This September, I was lucky to be a volunteer for the19th Asian Games in Hangzhou, which will be the most unforgettable experience in my life.
My job as a volunteer was to organize the audience to enter the stadium and guide them to watch the game in a civilized way. Although it was a very simple task, I was very proud of it because it played an important role in maintaining the order of the scene.
This volunteer activity made me more responsible and benefited me a lot. Not only has it improved my spoken English, but it has also enhanced my ability to deal with foreigners. I will always be grateful for this experience.
How are you doing I hope you had a good winter holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生回复笔友Frank的信,分享自己在第十九届杭州亚运会上的志愿者经历,需介绍服务内容,分享感受,并表达祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
幸运的:lucky→fortunate
难忘的:unforgettable→memorable, impressive
提高:improve→sharpen, enhance
感激的:grateful→thankful
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Although it was a very simple task, I was very proud of it because it played an important role in maintaining the order of the scene.
拓展句:Very simple as the task was, I was very proud of it because of its important role in maintaining the order of the scene.
【点睛】[高分句型1] This September, I was lucky to be a volunteer for the19th Asian Games in Hangzhou, which will be the most unforgettable experience in my life. (运用了关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Although it was a very simple task, I was very proud of it because it played an important role in maintaining the order of the scene. (运用了从属连词although引导让步状语从句、从属连词because引导原因状语从句)
14.(23-24高一上·安徽阜阳·期中)当今社会,以瘦为美,很多中学生为了保持体形经常不吃饭。假定你
是李华,对此有感而发,遂决定撰文投稿校英文报Pioneer,内容包括:
1. 你对此现象的看法;
2. 理由(至少两点);
3. 表达期望。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】 Nowadays, we live in a society where being thin is seen as being beautiful. In order to keep a slim figure, many teenagers skip meals on a regular basis. I feel deeply worried about this phenomenon.
In my opinion, skipping meals is harmful to our physical and mental health. If we can’t take in enough nutrition, we will feel weak and get ill easily. What’s worse, we may have trouble concentrating and it will have a negative influence on our study. On the other hand, beauty comes from within. With confidence and a positive attitude towards life, we are the most beautiful in the world, regardless of our body shape.
Hopefully, we teenagers can keep a balanced diet and live healthily.
【导语】本文是应用文。当今社会,以瘦为美,很多中学生为了保持体形经常不吃饭。假定你是李华,对此有感而发,遂决定撰文投稿校英文报Pioneer。
【详解】1.词汇积累
瘦的:thin→lean
把…当做:see…as→regard…as
担心的:worried→concerned
在我看来:in my opinion→in my view
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to keep a slim figure, many teenagers skip meals on a regular basis. I feel deeply worried about this phenomenon.
拓展句:In order to keep a slim figure, many teenagers skip meals on a regular basis, which makes me feel
deeply worried about.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Nowadays, we live in a society where being thin is seen as being beautiful.(由where引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】If we can’t take in enough nutrition, we will feel weak and get ill easily.(由If引导的条件状语从句)
15.(23-24高一上·广东汕头·阶段练习)假如你是李华,你的好友David因为在最近一次考试中成绩下降,感到非常焦虑,并且不敢面对父母和老师。请你用英语给他写封信,表示对他的现状表示担忧,并提出你的建议。要点如下:
1. 建立信心;
2. 向父母或老师寻求帮助;
3. 改变学习策略等。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear David,
Hearing/Learning/Knowing that you are anxious about your falling grades, I understand quite well how worried and upset you feel. Therefore, I am writing to offer you some suggestions, which I hope will be of some help to you.
First, it is your attitude towards your grades that has a great effect/influence on your study. As we know, confidence is the key to success, so it is recommended that you should gradually build up confidence in yourself. What’s more, whenever you have bad feelings or troubles, you can turn to your teachers or parents. In addition,
it would be better if you could consider changing your learning strategies, which is beneficial to your study.
I believe that getting rid of your pressure/stress and working hard will enable you to make progress and achieve/reach/realize your goal(s). I am looking forward to your good news. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给因考试成绩下降而焦虑的好友David写信,表示对他的现状表示担忧,并提出自己的建议,建议需包括建立信心,向父母或老师寻求帮助,以及改变学习策略等。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议:suggestion→advice
对……很关键:be the key to→be crucial to
此外:what’s more→in addition, additionally, moreover
改变:change→alter
摆脱:get rid of→rid oneself of
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:As we know, confidence is the key to success, so it is recommended that you should gradually build up confidence in yourself.
拓展句:It is known to us that confidence is the key to success, so it is advisable to gradually build up confidence in yourself.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing/Learning/Knowing that you are anxious about your falling grades, I understand quite well how worried and upset you feel. (运用了现在分词作状语、that引导宾语从句、how引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] First, it is your attitude towards your grades that has a great effect/influence on your study. (运用了it is…that…强调句型)
[高分句型3] In addition, it would be better if you could consider changing your learning strategies, which is beneficial to your study. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)高一上学期期中考点大串讲
应用文写作期中必刷15篇
一、书信写作
1.(23-24高一上·河北石家庄·阶段练习)假设你是高一学生李华,学校组织中外高中生交流活动,你有意参加该活动。请用英语写一份个人简介,内容包括:
1. 个人情况介绍;
2. 兴趣、爱好等情况;
3. 性格、个人技能等情况。
词数80左右;
可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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2.(23-24高一上·重庆·期中)假定你是李华,你的外教Harry想利用周末去探索重庆的山水和风土人情,请给Harry写邮件推荐一个景点。邮件内容包括:
1.景点名称和推荐的理由;
2.相关建议。
注意:1.词数不少于80词;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Harry,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3.(23-24高一上·河南南阳·阶段练习)假如你是高一学生李华,你想通过短视频方式给国外的朋友介绍你校高中生的兴趣爱好。请你用英文写一份介绍,内容如下:
1.描述同学们的爱好以及你的爱好;
2.简述爱好对学生成长的好处。
注意:
1.词数80字左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入词数。
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from China. Today, I’d like to share the hobbies of the students in my school with you.
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That’s all. Thank you for watching!
4.(23-24高一上·河南信阳·阶段练习)你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请以 My Favorite Sport 为题写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1. 喜欢的运动项目;
2. 喜欢的原因。
注意:1. 写作词数应为 80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在相应位置作答
My Favorite Sport
Hello, everyone!
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5.(23-24高一上·福建福州·期中)假定你是王明,暑假即将来临,你打算和家人去厦门。你们计划去鼓浪屿、植物园参观;还打算逛逛中山路和环岛路等等。请你给你的好友李华写一封email,分享你的出行计划。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:
Zhongshan Walking Street 中山路; The Xiamen Botanical Garden 植物园; Gulangyu Island 鼓浪屿
Dear Li Hua,
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Yours,
Wang Ming
6.(23-24高一上·河北保定·期中)假定你是李华,你急需一台高质量相机来为即将举办的秋季运动会拍照摄像,听说外教Chris有一台符合要求的相机, 请用英语给他写一封邮件来借用,内容包括:
1.写信目的;2.表示会及时原样归还;3.表达感谢。
注意: 1.词数80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Chris,
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Yours,
Li hua
7.(23-24高一上·安徽滁州·期中)假定你是李华, 本周末你校将组织郊游活动, 请给你的美国朋友 Ashley 写封邮件邀请她参加。内容包括:
1. 活动时间和地点;
2. 活动内容安排;
3. 欢迎 Ashley 参加。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Ashley,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8.(23-24高一·全国·假期作业)假定你是李华,在意大利留学期间,你在网上看到一家公司招聘兼职销售员,请你给该公司负责人Kelly写一封邮件,申请这个职位。
内容包括:1.写信目的;2.你的条件;3.表示愿望。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Kelly,
I am writing in response to the job advertisement on your website for the position of salesperson.
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I think I’m qualified for this job. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
9.(23-24高一·全国·假期作业)为了传承和弘扬中国传统文化并让师生领略非物质文化遗产(intangible cultural heritage)的魅力,市文化馆在你校开展了“非遗进校园”活动。请你用英文写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.活动宗旨;
2.活动内容及方式;
3.活动影响及师生体会。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.题目已为你写好。
An Event of the Intangible Cultural Heritage
Today, our school held an event named “Intangible Cultural Heritage into School”, which was to promote traditional Chinese culture and inspire the interest of teachers and students.
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10.(23-24高一·全国·假期作业)你校将举办英文演讲比赛,请你以“How to Live Green”为题写一篇演讲稿参赛。内容包括:
1.你对绿色生活的理解;
2.你的建议。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
How to Live Green
Hello everyone!
As is known to all, living Green is very important for everyone. For us students, we should create a green school in order to contribute to a comfortable studying environment.
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Therefore, everyone, let's take action immediately. Thanks for listening.
11.(23-24高一上·陕西安康·期中)假定你是校英语俱乐部主席李华,为了帮助高一新生提高英语学习的效率,请你在校英文报上给高一新生写一封关于英语学习方法指导的建议信,内容包括:
1. 你对英语学习方法的理解;2. 你的建议;3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Freshmen,
I am Li Hua, president of the English Club in our school.
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Yours,
Li Hua
12.(23-24高一上·河南安阳·期中)假定你是李华,想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展,请给他写封邮件。
内容包括:1.展览时间、地点;
2.展览内容。
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13.(23-24高一上·湖北黄冈·期中)假定你是李华。你的英国笔友Frank写信询问你在第十九届杭州亚运会上的志愿者经历。请你给他写一封回信。要点如下:
1. 介绍服务内容;
2. 分享感受;
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
亚运会 Asian Game
Dear Frank,
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Yours,
Li Hua
14.(23-24高一上·安徽阜阳·期中)当今社会,以瘦为美,很多中学生为了保持体形经常不吃饭。假定你是李华,对此有感而发,遂决定撰文投稿校英文报Pioneer,内容包括:
1. 你对此现象的看法;
2. 理由(至少两点);
3. 表达期望。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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15.(23-24高一上·广东汕头·阶段练习)假如你是李华,你的好友David因为在最近一次考试中成绩下降,感到非常焦虑,并且不敢面对父母和老师。请你用英语给他写封信,表示对他的现状表示担忧,并提出你的建议。要点如下:
1. 建立信心;
2. 向父母或老师寻求帮助;
3. 改变学习策略等。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear David,
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Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案:
1.Dear Sir/ Madam
I am Li Hua, a freshman student in our school. Knowing that our school is organizing exchange activities between Chinese and foreign high school students. I am writing to apply to participate in the activity. Here is my detailed information.
Firstly, I am an outgoing person with many hobbies and interests, such as dancing and painting. In addition, I am very familiar with traditional Chinese culture, which may appeal to foreigners. Finally, I have a good command of English, which enables me to communicate fluently with foreigners.
I would greatly appreciate it if you could reply to me at your convenience.
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生用英语写一份个人简介以参加中外高中生交流活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
外向的:outgoing→etrovert
此外:in addition → what’s more
精通:have a good command of→master
吸引:appeal to→ attract
简单句变复合句
原句:Firstly, I am an outgoing person with many hobbies and interests, such as dancing and painting.
拓展句:Firstly, I am an outgoing person, who has many hobbies and interests, such as dancing and painting.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Here is my detailed information.(运用了全部倒装)
【高分句型2】Finally, I have a good command of English, which enables me to communicate fluently with foreigners.(运用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句)
2.Dear Harry,
How is everything progressing Having known you are eager to appreciate the charm of Chongqing and explore its culture, I strongly recommend to you Ciqikou, a perfect destination for culture lovers.
Combining traditional architecture with modern prosperity, Ciqikou attracts an enormous number of tourists all year round. The stony streets are lined with various kinds of stores, where you can enjoy wonderful performances about local handicrafts and taste a variety of delicious snacks and specialities. Wandering along the street at the bank of the Jialing River, you can feel the gentle breeze and experience an extremely pleasant life
after five-day’s hard work.
If possible, please explore the fantastic place during workdays, because it is not crowded in that period. If you have further questions about it, don’t hesitate to contact me.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。假定你是李华,你的外教Harry想利用周末去探索重庆的山水和风土人情,请根据题目所给要求给Harry写邮件推荐一个景点。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
欣赏:appreciate→ enjoy
渴望做某事:be eager to do sth →be longing to do sth
吸引:attract→ appeal to
愉快的:pleasant→ enjoyable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Combining traditional architecture with modern prosperity, Ciqikou attracts an enormous number of tourists all year round.
拓展句:Because it combines traditional architecture with modern prosperity, Ciqikou attracts an enormous number of tourists all year round.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Wandering along the street at the bank of the Jialing River, you can feel the gentle breeze and experience an extremely pleasant life after five-day’s hard work.( 运用了现在分词充当伴随状语)
[高分句型2] If possible, please explore the fantastic place during workdays, because it is not crowded in that period. (运用了省略句和because引导的原因状语从句)
3.范文
Hello, everyone! I’m Li Hua from China. Today, I’d like to share the hobbies of the students in my school with you.
Currently, we Chinese students enjoy a colorful and rich life. Besides regular hobbies like badminton, calligraphy, music and so on, students are fond of more fashionable ones. Some of my classmates like cosplay, which becomes a new trend. As for me, I like playing Chinese chess, which is not only just for fun, but also enables me to have a quick mind.
As you see, we are quite enjoying our life with a wide range of choices for hobbies, which help broaden our
views, and maintain our mental and physical health. Most importantly, they are helpful to achieve our great potential.
That’s all. Thank you for watching!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是高一学生李华,你想通过短视频方式给国外的朋友介绍你校高中生的兴趣爱好。请你用英文写一份介绍。
【详解】1.词汇积累
目前:currently→at present
选择:choice→option
各种各样的:a wide range of→various
有用的:helpful→useful
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:As for me, I like playing Chinese chess, which is not only just for fun, but also enables me to have a quick mind.
拓展句:As for me, I like playing Chinese chess because it enables me to have a quick mind.
【点睛】[高分句型1] As for me, I like playing Chinese chess, which is not only just for fun, but also enables me to have a quick mind. (运用了not only…but also…句型)
[高分句型2]( As you see, we are quite enjoying our life with a wide range of choices for hobbies, which help broaden our views, and maintain our mental and physical health.运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
4.My Favorite Sport
Hello, everyone. My favorite sport is swimming and here are my reasons.
First, it’s an affordable sport. Even though you have to buy an admission ticket, it isn’t pricey. Second, swimming is beneficial to your heart and lungs. In addition to its physical benefits, swimming is also an effective way to relax. Spending hours in the pool in hot summer is always my favorite pastime.
In conclusion, as a very good workout, swimming can give you peace of mind to continue with your day.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以 My Favorite Sport 为题写一篇演讲稿参加学校举办的英语演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
购买:buy →purchase
昂贵的:pricy →expensive
有益的:beneficial →of benefit
总之:in conclusion →to sum up
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:First, it’s an affordable sport.
拓展句:First, it’s an affordable sport, which I think is the main reason why most people like it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Even though you have to buy an admission ticket, it isn’t pricey.(运用了even though引导的让步状语从句)
【高分句型2】Spending hours in the pool in hot summer is always my favorite pastime.(运用了动名词短语作主语)
5.Dear Li Hua,
As the summer holiday is approaching, I am going to have a three-day trip to Xiamen with my family.
First, we’re planning to visit the Zhongshan Walking Street, which is famous for its food and shopping. It’s a perfect place for any shopping goer. Then, we intend to go to the Island Ring Road. I can’t wait to cycle there! On the second day, we are going to visit the Nanputuo Temple and the Xiamen Botanical Garden. After that, we are going to visit Hulishan Fortress. Built in the Qing Dynasty, it is really worth a visit for every history lover. On the third day, we will go to Gulangyu Island and enjoy a wonderful view at the seaside.
Do you have any plans for your holiday Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Wang Ming
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给你的好友李华写一封email,分享你暑假去厦门的出行计划。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:first→to begin with
著名的:famous→renowned
打算做:intend to do→plan/mean to do
令人赞叹的:wonderful→breathtaking
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Then, we intend to go to the Island Ring Road. I can’t wait to cycle there!
拓展句:Then, we intend to go to the Island Ring Road, where I can’t wait to cycle!
【点睛】【高分句型1】First, we’re planning to visit the Zhongshan Walking Street, which is famous for its food and shopping. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Built in the Qing Dynasty, it is really worth a visit for every history lover. (运用了过去分词作状语)
6.Dear Chris,
I hope this email finds you well. I am writing to inquire if I could borrow your high-quality camera for our upcoming autumn sports meet.
As the event organizer, I would like to capture the exciting moments and memories of the sports meet. Your camera would be perfect for the task as it has the features and quality that I need. I assure you that I will take good care of the camera and return it to you in its original condition as soon as the sports meet is over.
Thank you for your consideration and support. I greatly appreciate your kindness and willingness to help.
Yours,
Li hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的信件。要求考生给外教Chris写信,向其借用相机用来为即将举办的秋季运动会拍照摄像。
【详解】1.词汇积累
即将来临的:upcoming→ approaching
想要:would like → want
体贴:consideration → thoughtfulness
非常:greatly→ extremely
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:As the event organizer, I would like to capture the exciting moments and memories of the sports meet.
拓展句:Since I am the event organizer, I would like to capture the exciting moments and memories of the sports meet.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I am writing to inquire if I could borrow your high-quality camera for our upcoming autumn sports meet.(运用了if引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】Your camera would be perfect for the task as it has the features and quality that I need.(运用了as引导的状语从句和that引导的定语从句)
7.One possible version:
Dear Ashley,
How are you doing Learning that an outing to the National Forest Park will be held in our school, I am writing to invite you to participate.
As scheduled, we’ll meet at the school gate at 6:30 this Saturday morning and then go to the park by bus. In this tour, not only can you enjoy the unique rocks, ancient and precious trees around you, but also you can admire the beautiful scenery on the way. I highly recommend you to participate in this meaningful activity, in which you can enrich your knowledge and make more friends.
I’m looking forward to your arrival.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。本周末学校将组织郊游活动, 要求考生给美国朋友 Ashley写封邮件邀请她参加。
【详解】1.词汇积累
举办:hold→launch
独特的:unique→ distinctive
参加:participate in→take part in
珍贵的:precious→ valuable
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Learning that an outing to the National Forest Park will be held in our school, I am writing to invite you to participate.
拓展句:Because I learn that an outing to the National Forest Park will be held in our school, I am writing to invite you to participate.
【点睛】【高分句型1】In this tour, not only can you enjoy the unique rocks, ancient and precious trees around you, but also you can admire the beautiful scenery on the way. (运用了部分倒装的结构)
【高分句型2】I highly recommend you to participate in this meaningful activity, in which you can enrich your knowledge and make more friends.(运用了介词+关系代词引导的定语从句结构)
8.Dear Kelly,
I am writing in response to the job advertisement on your website for the position of salesperson.
I am a business student and have had a three-month sales experience. During this time, I developed strong customer service skills and learned how to effectively communicate with customers to understand their needs and recommend products. Besides, I have good communication skills and I can speak Italian, English and Chinese so that I can deal with various potential customers. At last, I am a quick learner and am always eager to learn new skills. I am confident that I can quickly adapt to your company’s policies and procedures and provide excellent service to your customers.
I think I’m qualified for this job. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。就“在意大利留学期间,你在网上看到一家公司招聘兼职销售员”一事,要求考生给该公司负责人Kelly写一封邮件,申请这个职位。
【详解】1.词汇积累
了解:understand→have an understanding of
此外:besides→what’s more
各种各样的:various→a variety of
卓越的:excellent→extraordinary
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:At last, I am a quick learner and am always eager to learn new skills.
拓展句:At last, I am a quick learner, who is always eager to learn new skills.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Besides, I have good communication skills and I can speak Italian, English and Chinese so that I can deal with various potential customers. (运用了so that引导的结果状语从句)
【高分句型2】I am confident that I can quickly adapt to your company’s policies and procedures and provide excellent service to your customers. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
9.An Event of the Intangible Cultural Heritage
Today, our school held an event named “Intangible Cultural Heritage into School”, which was to promote traditional Chinese culture and inspire the interest of teachers and students.
There were many activities in the event, such as paper cutting, lion dance and sugar painting. The teachers and students, who were excited and full of curiosity, interacted actively through watching, listening and touching during these activities.
In general, the successful event was quite popular with the teachers and students. They did feel the charm of the intangible cultural heritage of China, which raised their recognition and strengthened their confidence.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英文写一篇报道,报道市文化馆在你校开展的“非遗进校园”活动。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:excited→exhilarated/thrilled
充满:be full of→be filled with
总的来说:in general→on the whole
魅力:charm→glamour
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:There were many activities in the event, such as paper cutting, lion dance and sugar painting.
拓展句:There were many activities in the event, which include paper cutting, lion dance and sugar painting.
【点睛】【高分句型1】The teachers and students, who were excited and full of curiosity, interacted actively through watching, listening and touching during these activities. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】They did feel the charm of the intangible cultural heritage of China, which raised their recognition and strengthened their confidence. (运用了“did+动词原形”强调谓语动词和which引导的非限制性定语从句)
10.How to Live Green
Hello everyone!
As is known to all, living Green is very important for everyone. For us students, we should create a green school in order to contribute to a comfortable studying environment.
Firstly, we should arrange a series of lectures related to environmental protection, thus arousing students’ awareness of establishing a green school and living a low carbon life. Secondly, we are willing to attach great importance to saving water, paper and electricity and planting trees and put them into practice. Thirdly, we must have good habits so that we can keep every corner tidy in our school.
Therefore, everyone, let’s take action immediately. Thanks for listening.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“How to Live Green”为题写一篇演讲稿参加校英文演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
首先:firstly→to begin with
应该:should→be supposed to
乐意做某事:be willing to do sth.→be pleased to do sth.
重要性:importance→significance
2.句式拓展
同义句转化
原句:Firstly, we should arrange a series of lectures related to environmental protection, thus arousing students’ awareness of establishing a green school and living a low carbon life.
拓展句:Firstly, we should arrange a series of lectures which are related to environmental protection, thus arousing students’ awareness of establishing a green school and living a low carbon life.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly, we should arrange a series of lectures related to environmental protection, thus arousing students’ awareness of establishing a green school and living a low carbon life. (运用了过去分词短语作后置定语和现在分词作结果状语)
【高分句型2】Thirdly, we must have good habits so that we can keep every corner tidy in our school. (运用了so that引导的目的状语从句)
11.Dear Freshmen,
I am Li Hua, president of the English Club in our school. I am more than glad to share with you my understanding of efficient English learning methods and give some helpful advice.
First of all, it is of great importance to know that interest comes first, efficient learning involves a persevering and enjoyable process. Admittedly, learning methods vary from person to person. Whichever method you choose, find a workable method that suits you best. Personally, I strongly recommend that we spare no effort to enrich our vocabulary and improve our reading comprehension. To achieve this, we can join a study group, read English books or listen to English programs. In addition, just as the saying goes, practice makes perfect. If you practice English as much as possible and learn from mistakes, you are sure to be an efficient English learner.
Best luck with your English study.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于帮助高一新生提高英语学习的效率这一情况,在校英文报上给高一新生写一封关于英语学习方法指导的建议信。
【详解】1.词汇积累
高兴的:glad→ happy
方法:methods→ ways
此外:In addition→ What’s more
提高,改善:improve→ enhance
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I am Li Hua, president of the English Club in our school.
拓展句:I am Li Hua, who is president of the English Club in our school.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Personally, I strongly recommend that we spare no effort to enrich our vocabulary and improve our reading comprehension.(运用了动词recommend表示“建议”后接从属连词that引导宾语从句以及从句需用虚拟语气用法。)
【高分句型2】If you practice English as much as possible and learn from mistakes, you are sure to be an efficient English learner.(运用了连词If引导的条件状语从句。)
12.Dear Henry,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students in your class. I know you’re interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms — papercutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
It’ll be held from June 10 to July 10 this year and the opening time is from 9:00 am to 7:00 pm from Monday to Saturday and the place of the exhibition is at the City Gallery. Shall we go there together this Friday afternoon I will meet you at 2:00 pm at the teaching building if you like.
You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which papercutting is one of the most popular. In the exhibition, you will enjoy many special kinds of papercuttings. Maybe you can learn one or two skills of the cutting.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作,要求考生给外教Henry写一封邮件,邀请他一起参观中国剪纸艺术展,告知展览时间、地点、内容。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
对……感兴趣:be interested in→have interest in
欣赏:enjoy→appreciate
许多种:many kinds of→many sorts of
期待:look forward to→long for
2. 句式拓展
合并句子
原句:I know you’re interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms — papercutting. So I invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
拓展句:Knowing you’re interested in one of Chinese traditional art forms — papercutting, I am writing to invite you to attend an exhibition of it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I will meet you at 2:00 pm at the teaching building if you like.(使用了if引导条件状语从句)
【高分句型2】You know we Chinese have a lot of traditional art forms, of which papercutting is one of the most popular. (使用了省略that的宾语从句,“介词+which引导非限制性定语从句”)
13.One possible version:
Dear Frank,
This September, I was lucky to be a volunteer for the19th Asian Games in Hangzhou, which will be the most unforgettable experience in my life.
My job as a volunteer was to organize the audience to enter the stadium and guide them to watch the game in a civilized way. Although it was a very simple task, I was very proud of it because it played an important role in maintaining the order of the scene.
This volunteer activity made me more responsible and benefited me a lot. Not only has it improved my spoken English, but it has also enhanced my ability to deal with foreigners. I will always be grateful for this experience.
How are you doing I hope you had a good winter holiday.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生回复笔友Frank的信,分享自己在第十九届杭州亚运会上的志愿者经历,需介绍服务内容,分享感受,并表达祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
幸运的:lucky→fortunate
难忘的:unforgettable→memorable, impressive
提高:improve→sharpen, enhance
感激的:grateful→thankful
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Although it was a very simple task, I was very proud of it because it played an important role in maintaining the order of the scene.
拓展句:Very simple as the task was, I was very proud of it because of its important role in maintaining the order of the scene.
【点睛】[高分句型1] This September, I was lucky to be a volunteer for the19th Asian Games in Hangzhou, which will be the most unforgettable experience in my life. (运用了关系代词which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] Although it was a very simple task, I was very proud of it because it played an important role in maintaining the order of the scene. (运用了从属连词although引导让步状语从句、从属连词because引导原因状语从句)
14. Nowadays, we live in a society where being thin is seen as being beautiful. In order to keep a slim figure, many teenagers skip meals on a regular basis. I feel deeply worried about this phenomenon.
In my opinion, skipping meals is harmful to our physical and mental health. If we can’t take in enough nutrition, we will feel weak and get ill easily. What’s worse, we may have trouble concentrating and it will have a negative influence on our study. On the other hand, beauty comes from within. With confidence and a positive attitude towards life, we are the most beautiful in the world, regardless of our body shape.
Hopefully, we teenagers can keep a balanced diet and live healthily.
【导语】本文是应用文。当今社会,以瘦为美,很多中学生为了保持体形经常不吃饭。假定你是李华,对此有感而发,遂决定撰文投稿校英文报Pioneer。
【详解】1.词汇积累
瘦的:thin→lean
把…当做:see…as→regard…as
担心的:worried→concerned
在我看来:in my opinion→in my view
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:In order to keep a slim figure, many teenagers skip meals on a regular basis. I feel deeply worried about this phenomenon.
拓展句:In order to keep a slim figure, many teenagers skip meals on a regular basis, which makes me feel deeply worried about.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Nowadays, we live in a society where being thin is seen as being beautiful.(由where引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】If we can’t take in enough nutrition, we will feel weak and get ill easily.(由If引导的条件状语从句)
15.One possible version:
Dear David,
Hearing/Learning/Knowing that you are anxious about your falling grades, I understand quite well how worried and upset you feel. Therefore, I am writing to offer you some suggestions, which I hope will be of some help to you.
First, it is your attitude towards your grades that has a great effect/influence on your study. As we know, confidence is the key to success, so it is recommended that you should gradually build up confidence in yourself. What’s more, whenever you have bad feelings or troubles, you can turn to your teachers or parents. In addition, it would be better if you could consider changing your learning strategies, which is beneficial to your study.
I believe that getting rid of your pressure/stress and working hard will enable you to make progress and achieve/reach/realize your goal(s). I am looking forward to your good news. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求考生给因考试成绩下降而焦虑的好友David写信,表示对他的现状表示担忧,并提出自己的建议,建议需包括建立信心,向父母或老师寻求帮助,以及改变学习策略等。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
建议:suggestion→advice
对……很关键:be the key to→be crucial to
此外:what’s more→in addition, additionally, moreover
改变:change→alter
摆脱:get rid of→rid oneself of
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:As we know, confidence is the key to success, so it is recommended that you should gradually build up confidence in yourself.
拓展句:It is known to us that confidence is the key to success, so it is advisable to gradually build up confidence in yourself.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing/Learning/Knowing that you are anxious about your falling grades, I understand quite well how worried and upset you feel. (运用了现在分词作状语、that引导宾语从句、how引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] First, it is your attitude towards your grades that has a great effect/influence on your study. (运用了it is…that…强调句型)
[高分句型3] In addition, it would be better if you could consider changing your learning strategies, which is beneficial to your study. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)