2025届高考英语二轮复习之书面表达读后续写句子润色课件(共17张PPT)
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| 名称 | 2025届高考英语二轮复习之书面表达读后续写句子润色课件(共17张PPT) |  | |
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(共17张PPT)
How to polish your language in continuation writing
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1.Tom was nervous and scared and stared at the old man.
2.Nervous and scared, Tom stared at the old man.
1.The boy lay on the ground and was unable to utter a word.
2.The boy lay on the ground, unable to utter a word.
1.形容词及形容词短语作状语
(adj and adj phrases as adverbial modifier)
1.Li Jia Qi put the lipstick on and exclaimed“Oh my God”.
2.Li Jia Qi put the lipstick on, exclaiming “Oh my God”.
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2.非谓语作状语
(Non-predicate as adverbial modifier)
2.With his shoes removed, the little man stole into the room.
2.With all the guests having left, he finnaly could have a rest.
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4.独立主格结构(Absolute Structure)
1.The little man removed his shoes and stole into the room.
1.All the guests have left and he finally could have a rest.
3.with复合结构
with+宾语.+adj/n./pp/非谓语
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1.The kiwi is too sour and it makes Miss Guo scream.
2.The kiwi is too sour, which makes Miss Guo scream.
5.定语从句(Attributive clause)
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The girl feels amazed.
The girl feels amazed, mouth open and eyes twinkling with excitement.
6.情绪化虚为实
(Add vivid expressions)
Trump was quite angry and pointed at the journalist.
Quite angry, Trump pointed at the journalist.
Trump was quite angry, pointing at the journalist.
Polish the sentence
When he heard the strange rap, Jony J wore a confused look on his face.
Hearing the strange rap, Jony J wore a confused look on his face.
Jony J heard the strange rap, wearing a confused look on his face.
Polish the sentence
Little Wang held a bowl of rice and his mouth watered.
Little Wang held a bowl of rice with his mouth watering.
Little Wang held a bowl of rice, his mouth watering.
Polish the sentence
The little cute dog wagged its tail happily and its eyes twinkled with joy.
The little cute dog wagged its tail happily, (with) its eyes twinkling with joy.
Wagging its tail happily, the little cute dog's eyes twinkled with joy.
Polish the sentence
The students behaved well in class and it made Emma satisfied.
The students behaved well in class, which made Emma satisfied.
The students behaved well in class, making Emma satisfied.
The students behaving well in class, Emma was satisfied.
Polish the sentence
Make up a sentence based on the key words
key words:
Hua Hua; astonished; hear that; opened his mouth wide
Astonished to hear that, Hua Hua opened his mouth wide.
Hearing that, Hua Hua was astonished and opened his mouth wide.
Hua Hua was astonished to hear that, opening his mouth wide.
key words: the man; shout in excitement; Ao Li Gei; his lips curved into a smile
The man shoulted “Ao Li Gei” in excitement, with his lips curving into a big smile.
The man shoulted “Ao Li Gei” in excitement, his lips curving into a big smile.
Make up a sentence based on the key words
Key words: Zhong Nanshan;lost in thought; tears roll down
Zhong Nanshan was lost in thought, with tears rolling down his cheeks.
Zhong Nanshan was lost in thought, tears rolling down his cheeks.
Lost in thought, Zhong Nanshan's tears rolled down his cheeks.
Make up a sentence based on the key words
Dad opened the box and a little dog appeared. “Come and meet your friend.”Papa said. Poppy approached it and tried not to scare the puppy. The little dog was happy to see Poppy and rushed to him. Poppy were happy and then touched it. Soon, the two dogs became best friends and their barks filled the house. The parents were delighted to see this and sighed, “It seemed that we made a good choice.”
Polish Puppy for Poppy
Polished version
Dad opened the box and a little dog appeared. “Come and meet your friend.” Papa said. Poppy approached it and tried not to scare the puppy. The little dog was so happy to see Poppy and rushed to him. Poppy were happy and then touched it. Soon, the two dogs became best friends and their barks filled the house. The parents were delighted to see this and sighed, “It seemed that we made a good choice.”
Dad carefully opened the box and a little cute dog appeared in great delight. “Come and meet your friend.” Papa said with joy. Poppy cautiously approached it, trying not to scare the puppy. The little dog was so happy to see Poppy with eyes twinkling with excitement, rushing to him. Face lighting up, Poppy touched it softly and gently. Soon, the two dogs became best friends, their barks filling the house. Delighted to see this, the parents sighed in a relief, “It seemed that we made a good choice.”
…He missed his family so much and couldn't help speeding his pace. He pushed the door, went into the house and intended to give them a surprise. But he only saw a strange little dog lay on Poppy’s back and it shocked him a lot. Immediately Poppy caught sight of him. She dashed to him, as well as the little one. His parents explained that this new family member was called Puppy. The boy smiled and hugged these two guys. A warm and harmonious current enveloped this family, till the end of the time.
Missing his family so much, he couldn't help speeding his space. Pushing the door, he went into the house quietly, intending to give them a surprise. But he only saw a strange little dog lying on Poppy's back, which shocked him so much that he opened his mouth wide. Immediately Poppy caught sight of him, dashing to him with wild joy, as well as the little one. His parents explained that this new family member was called Puppy. The boy smiled from ear to ear, hugging these two guys tightly. A warm and harmonious current eveloped this family, till the end of the time.
How to polish your language in continuation writing
Compare and Learn
1.Tom was nervous and scared and stared at the old man.
2.Nervous and scared, Tom stared at the old man.
1.The boy lay on the ground and was unable to utter a word.
2.The boy lay on the ground, unable to utter a word.
1.形容词及形容词短语作状语
(adj and adj phrases as adverbial modifier)
1.Li Jia Qi put the lipstick on and exclaimed“Oh my God”.
2.Li Jia Qi put the lipstick on, exclaiming “Oh my God”.
Compare and Learn
2.非谓语作状语
(Non-predicate as adverbial modifier)
2.With his shoes removed, the little man stole into the room.
2.With all the guests having left, he finnaly could have a rest.
Compare and Learn
4.独立主格结构(Absolute Structure)
1.The little man removed his shoes and stole into the room.
1.All the guests have left and he finally could have a rest.
3.with复合结构
with+宾语.+adj/n./pp/非谓语
Compare and Learn
1.The kiwi is too sour and it makes Miss Guo scream.
2.The kiwi is too sour, which makes Miss Guo scream.
5.定语从句(Attributive clause)
Compare and Learn
The girl feels amazed.
The girl feels amazed, mouth open and eyes twinkling with excitement.
6.情绪化虚为实
(Add vivid expressions)
Trump was quite angry and pointed at the journalist.
Quite angry, Trump pointed at the journalist.
Trump was quite angry, pointing at the journalist.
Polish the sentence
When he heard the strange rap, Jony J wore a confused look on his face.
Hearing the strange rap, Jony J wore a confused look on his face.
Jony J heard the strange rap, wearing a confused look on his face.
Polish the sentence
Little Wang held a bowl of rice and his mouth watered.
Little Wang held a bowl of rice with his mouth watering.
Little Wang held a bowl of rice, his mouth watering.
Polish the sentence
The little cute dog wagged its tail happily and its eyes twinkled with joy.
The little cute dog wagged its tail happily, (with) its eyes twinkling with joy.
Wagging its tail happily, the little cute dog's eyes twinkled with joy.
Polish the sentence
The students behaved well in class and it made Emma satisfied.
The students behaved well in class, which made Emma satisfied.
The students behaved well in class, making Emma satisfied.
The students behaving well in class, Emma was satisfied.
Polish the sentence
Make up a sentence based on the key words
key words:
Hua Hua; astonished; hear that; opened his mouth wide
Astonished to hear that, Hua Hua opened his mouth wide.
Hearing that, Hua Hua was astonished and opened his mouth wide.
Hua Hua was astonished to hear that, opening his mouth wide.
key words: the man; shout in excitement; Ao Li Gei; his lips curved into a smile
The man shoulted “Ao Li Gei” in excitement, with his lips curving into a big smile.
The man shoulted “Ao Li Gei” in excitement, his lips curving into a big smile.
Make up a sentence based on the key words
Key words: Zhong Nanshan;lost in thought; tears roll down
Zhong Nanshan was lost in thought, with tears rolling down his cheeks.
Zhong Nanshan was lost in thought, tears rolling down his cheeks.
Lost in thought, Zhong Nanshan's tears rolled down his cheeks.
Make up a sentence based on the key words
Dad opened the box and a little dog appeared. “Come and meet your friend.”Papa said. Poppy approached it and tried not to scare the puppy. The little dog was happy to see Poppy and rushed to him. Poppy were happy and then touched it. Soon, the two dogs became best friends and their barks filled the house. The parents were delighted to see this and sighed, “It seemed that we made a good choice.”
Polish Puppy for Poppy
Polished version
Dad opened the box and a little dog appeared. “Come and meet your friend.” Papa said. Poppy approached it and tried not to scare the puppy. The little dog was so happy to see Poppy and rushed to him. Poppy were happy and then touched it. Soon, the two dogs became best friends and their barks filled the house. The parents were delighted to see this and sighed, “It seemed that we made a good choice.”
Dad carefully opened the box and a little cute dog appeared in great delight. “Come and meet your friend.” Papa said with joy. Poppy cautiously approached it, trying not to scare the puppy. The little dog was so happy to see Poppy with eyes twinkling with excitement, rushing to him. Face lighting up, Poppy touched it softly and gently. Soon, the two dogs became best friends, their barks filling the house. Delighted to see this, the parents sighed in a relief, “It seemed that we made a good choice.”
…He missed his family so much and couldn't help speeding his pace. He pushed the door, went into the house and intended to give them a surprise. But he only saw a strange little dog lay on Poppy’s back and it shocked him a lot. Immediately Poppy caught sight of him. She dashed to him, as well as the little one. His parents explained that this new family member was called Puppy. The boy smiled and hugged these two guys. A warm and harmonious current enveloped this family, till the end of the time.
Missing his family so much, he couldn't help speeding his space. Pushing the door, he went into the house quietly, intending to give them a surprise. But he only saw a strange little dog lying on Poppy's back, which shocked him so much that he opened his mouth wide. Immediately Poppy caught sight of him, dashing to him with wild joy, as well as the little one. His parents explained that this new family member was called Puppy. The boy smiled from ear to ear, hugging these two guys tightly. A warm and harmonious current eveloped this family, till the end of the time.