2025届高考英语二轮复习之书面表达读后续写课件(共22张PPT)

(共22张PPT)
（人与动物类）
雪中救马
目 录
故事线
01.
范文；
下水作文
02.
类似话题对比
（人与动物类）
03.
语言表述积累
04.
01.
故事线
Ben raced out of school.Christmas holidays! When he got home, he went to check on his pony, Scout. He slipped him a candy and Scout nuzzled(用口鼻轻擦) his shoulder. Ben started toward the house and found his older brother Jack starting the snowmobile(雪地机动车)to deliver gas to Uncle Mike. Ben jumped on the back and joined him.
They set off slowly.The snow was fresh and deep on the remote mountain path. When they arived, Jack went over with the gas can. Ben looked up the mountain and saw something moving. He got binoculars(望远镜) and saw two animals. Could it be a horse Jack climbed back on the snowmobile and asked Ben to leave. When Ben told Jack he saw horses upon the snowy trees, Jack didn’t believe it. Ben looked back up the mountain, but he couldn't see anything.
At dinner Ben told his father he saw two horses up on the mountain today. "If they are horses, they must be trapped by all this snow." said his dad.“If they're trapped, we have to do something," said Ben, his voice rising.
His dad looked at Jack. “Well, in the morning go and take a look. Take the gun and some hay (干草). If they look as if they can survive, give them the hay. If not...” Jack looked serious, and slowly nodded. Ben knew what the gun was for, and his chest went cold.
In the moning they set off in the cold snow. When they got to the place where Ben had seen the horses, they stopped and looked up using binoculars. No horses. They waited for a few minutes.
"I see them. They're horses. Let's take the snowmobile up there." Ben suddenly exclaimed. They drove the snowmobile in the deep snow and finally reached the place.“Oh no!" said Ben. “They're starving!" One of the horses had lost a lot of hair, and their tails were almost gone. Their eyes were lifeless and tired.
Jack walked around the horses.
The two brothers went from door to door asking everyone to come and help.
人与自然：人与动物类
第三人称视角
主题
视角
梗概
讲述了主人公本与哥哥杰克在雪地开车时，本偶然看见了两匹山上受困的马，本回家向父亲说了这事。父亲让两兄弟第二天再开车去看马的情况，带上干草与枪，交代说马的情况不好，就使用枪。本非常同情这两匹马，他会怎么做呢？
Christmas
holiday
stasis
Ben joined his
brother’s trip
and by chance
he spotted the horses
trigger
They spotted
the trapped
horses again
climax
The two brothers went
from door to door asking
everyone to come and help.
revesal
man’s effort
to save animal
resulotion
故事线
Christmas
holiday
excited
Ben joined his
brother’s trip
and by chance
he spotted the horses
worried
They spotted
the trapped
horses again
thrilled & concerned
The two brothers went
from door to door asking
everyone to come and help.
hopeful
man’s effort
to save animal
at peace
情感线
Ben raced out of school.Christmas holidays! When he got home, he went to check on his pony, Scout. He slipped him a candy and Scout nuzzled(用口鼻轻擦) his shoulder. Ben started toward the house and found his older brother Jack starting the snowmobile(雪地机动车)to deliver gas to Uncle Mike. Ben jumped on the back and joined him.
They set off slowly.The snow was fresh and deep on the remote mountain path. When they arived, Jack went over with the gas can. Ben looked up the mountain and saw something moving. He got binoculars(望远镜) and saw two animals. Could it be a horse Jack climbed back on the snowmobile and asked Ben to leave. When Ben told Jack he saw horses upon the snowy trees, Jack didn’t believe it. Ben looked back up the mountain, but he couldn't see anything.
At dinner Ben told his father he saw two horses up on the mountain today. "If they are horses, they must be trapped by all this snow." said his dad.“If they're trapped, we have to do something," said Ben, his voice rising.
His dad looked at Jack. “Well, in the morning go and take a look. Take the gun and some hay (干草). If they look as if they can survive, give them the hay. If not...” Jack looked serious, and slowly nodded. Ben knew what the gun was for, and his chest went cold.
In the moning they set off in the cold snow. When they got to the place where Ben had seen the horses, they stopped and looked up using binoculars. No horses. They waited for a few minutes.
"I see them. They're horses. Let's take the snowmobile up there." Ben suddenly exclaimed. They drove the snowmobile in the deep snow and finally reached the place.“Oh no!" said Ben. “They're starving!" One of the horses had lost a lot of hair, and their tails were almost gone. Their eyes were lifeless and tired.
Jack walked around the horses.
The two brothers went from door to door asking everyone to come and help.
What was Jack’s reaction towards the sick horses What did Ben say to him
伏笔点与首句解读
伏笔点
Jack must change his mind. What was the fate of these two horses
02.
范文、下水作文
Jack walked around the horses.“Well,”said Jack, sighing, picking up the gun. "I guess I better use this.” No! We should at least try!” pleaded Ben, stroking the horses gently. Jack walked around the horses again. He patted one of them on the neck. It made a sad, small groaning sound, "Maybe you're right." He sure didn't want to have to shoot these horses. Ben quickly got the hay and spread it around in piles.The horses ate hungrily. With one more pat to each horse, Jack and Ben climbed on the snowmobile and drove back down the mountain as quickly as they could to report their news. Back at home the family had a hurried meeting. After discussing all kinds of possible ways to put the horses out of their misery, they finally decided to shovel a tunnel.
The two brothers went from door to door asking evervone to come and help. They even put notices up in the streets. Then they took the snowmobile back up the mountain with more hay and water and some warm blankets. The horses seemed happy to see them. Ben and Jack started shoveling with their fingers frozen and noses numb. Fortunately, soon a group of snowmobilers arrived. For the next week, people came and shoveled every day, and a deep, narrow trench very slowly worked its way down the mountain. Jack and Ben went every day to feed and water and talk to the horses. When the big day came, Ben and Jack managed to lead the horses down the long, narrow tunnel. Everyone was celebrating and hugging each other. Ben grinned from ear to ear and gave the horses a big hug.
范文
Jack walked around the horses. He frowned as he saw their miserable conditions -- lying on the piles of snow with freezing drooped heads, feeble breath coming out of their nose. Ben immediately realized something nasty was supposed to be implemented. He strode in front of the horses and stretched out his arms in the position of protection. He protested as he fed them with hay, “No, brother, we can’t do that. Please!” Jack was stirred up by his plea then and his grasp of the gun got loose. Finally, they reached an agreement to save the trapped horses at all cost.
The two brothers went from door to door asking everyone to come and help. They appealed to their neighbors to have mercy and to do a favor for these poor creatures as a Christmas gifts to them. One by one, the adults gathered around the horses, shoveled the snow away and heaved them up to a truck, sending them to the local vet. After a month’s intensive care, they got back to their feet and started galloping as healthy horses did. The brothers felt they did a right thing for these lovely animals.
03.
类似话题对比
（人与动物类）
人与动物类续写考题内容列举
1. 2023年1月浙江高考： 主人公“我”发现一个废弃房子里有一只蜂鸟被蜘蛛网困住了，“我”把蜂鸟救了。在“我”要离开时，蜂鸟停在我面前，似乎在告别。
2. 2020年7月浙江高考：讲述了我和妻子怀揣着要给北极熊拍照的梦想，在一个研究营地做饭时，遭遇了一头饥肠辘辘的熊袭击，一场人熊之”战“一触即发”：我和妻子尝试制造各种噪音企图吓走这头熊，未果；我们想营地求救，可是最快的直升机也需要至少半个小时才会到达。我们听从经理的建议使用了胡椒粉喷雾，熊不得不去河边洗眼睛。续写的第一段首句说一会熊就回来了，第二段首句说就在那时，直升机到了。
3. 2020年1月浙江高考：主要讲述讲述了男孩要去上大学，和自己的狗Poppy道别。而没有了男孩在家里，Poppy也非常想念男孩，于是男孩父母决定给Poppy买一条小狗作伴。
4. 2018年6月浙江高考：讲述了父亲带“我”去“西部荒野”，喂鸡牧羊，体验农场生活；见父亲和叔叔骑马很是潇洒，作者心生向往，于是亲身上马体验，和父亲一同骑马走向森林，结果途中，兔子出现，马受到惊吓，“我”迷路了。
5. 2017年6月浙江高考：讲述了Mac 与朋友一起去游玩。一个朋友的自行车坏了，就让他先走，说之后他们会赶上他的。他在前行的时候，却意外被狼追赶了。于是他拼命逃，却得不到援助。这时，一辆车停在了他前面。
人与动物续写考题分析
人与动物类的续写属于人与自然话题，也是常考的题材，设置的场景大多数在户外。
人与动物类的续写常常涉及到遇到了动物，或是险情逃脱或是拯救动物，需要通过冷静思考，如何逃脱，或者经过情感变化，拯救动物。因此，该类续写内容非常考察考生的思维品质，问题是否得到解决，取决于考生对问题分析与把握，寻找合适的解决方法。
04.
语言表述积累
语言积累
一．马
人与动物续写积累
1) He frowned as he saw their miserable conditions -- lying on the piles of snow with freezing drooped heads, feeble breath coming out of their nose.
当他看到他们的悲惨处境时，他皱起了眉头——躺在雪堆上，冻得低着头，鼻子里呼出微弱的气息。
After a month’s intensive care, they got back to their feet and started galloping as healthy horses did.
经过一个月的精心护理，它们重新站起来，开始像健康的马一样飞奔。
二．蜂鸟
1) A few trials later, the hummingbird appeared to be fully able to fly, steer and sip from the feeder. I considered that he might need to regain a little more strength for the long trek ahead, but that would best be done in the wild where he could exercise his wings well and get food from natural sources – so it was time to let him go.
几次试验后，蜂鸟似乎完全能够飞行、驾驶和从喂食器中啜饮。我认为，在接下来的漫长跋涉中，他可能需要恢复一点体力，但最好是在野外进行，在那里他可以很好地锻炼翅膀，从自然来源获取食物——所以是时候让他走了。
三．狗
1) Several dogs loll out their tongues. Beaks hanging open, even the black crows up in the trees are panting.
许多狗都伸出舌头来,连树上的乌鸦也张着嘴喘气。
2）The puppy began a series of short charges at the twigs, running a very little way forwards each time and a long way back, and barking hoarsely all the while.
小狗开始接二连三地扑向小树枝,每次向前跑一小步,又向后退一大截,一边不停地嘶哑地吠叫。
3） Then the dog reared up on his hind legs and clawed at the pine planks.
然后,狗用后腿站立,用爪子抓着松木板。
4） The dog thrust out her head beneath this bed just in time to be seen by his friend, and the liveliest sort of chase in the room ensued.
狗把头从床下伸出来,正好他朋友看到了,然后在房间里进行了最热闹的追逐。
四．狼
1) The three wolves rose, shook themselves, slunk off the trail into the timber （树林）, and trot ed south.
三匹狼起身,抖了抖身子,溜进林子里的小路,向南跑去。
2）The wolf came close to the man, bared its teeth, and sniffed in hunger.
那匹狼挨近他,露出利齿,饥馋地嗅着。
3） The wolf lifted his muzzle toward the blue horizon and howled.
狼抬起口鼻对着蓝色的地平线嘹叫。
4）Suddenly the wolf pricked up his ears, baring his teeth with an angry snarl.
突然间,那匹狼竖起耳朵,龇牙咧嘴愤怒地咆哮着。
五．兔子
1）Long ears twinkling, round eyes softly shining, the hares leaped lightly hither and thither, pausing every now and then to touch each other with their sensitive noses.
长长的耳朵一闪一闪的,圆圆的眼睛闪着柔和的光,野兔们轻盈地跳来跳去,时不时地停下来用灵敏的鼻子碰碰对方。
2）Round and round the court the rabbit went, like shot from' a gun.
野兔绕着院子一圈又一圈地奔跑,快得像是枪膛里射出的子弹。
3）The rabbit s at up on his haunches and looked about. His long trumpet-like ears were erect and listening.
兔子坐起身子,四下张望,竖起那长长的小号一样的耳朵倾听着。
六．老鼠
1） The mouse gave a sudden leap out of the water, and seemed to quiver all over with fright.
那只老鼠突然一下跳出水面,好像吓得浑身都在发抖。
2）The mouse looked at her rather inquisitively（好问地）and seemed to wink with one of it ts little eyes.
那只老鼠好奇地看着她,一只小眼睛好像还眨巴了一下。
3） The mouse was bristling（背部或颈部的毛因惊吓或发怒竖起） all over.
那只老鼠周身的毛都竖了起来。
4） Mice squeaked （短促而尖厉地叫,吱吱叫） in every comer, and gnawed（咬,啃,啮）whatever they could lay hold of with their teeth.
老鼠们在每个角落里吱吱地叫着,啃啮着能咬到的任何东西。
七．小鸟
1)Little wild birds came and sat on the grapevine trellis （架,棚） above, and twittered.
小野鸟来了,坐在葡萄架上面叽叽喳喳地叫着。
2) Some birds rose on whirring（机器、昆虫翅膀等发出呼呼声,嗡嗡作响）wing. "Ker … ker … ker …"they cried as they flew away.
几只鸟扑翼飞起,"嘎…嘎…嘎…"地叫着飞走了。
3) Suddenly I heard the fluttering of wings, and, looking down at my feet, saw a little lame bird. She was trying her best to walk or fly. I couldn't tell which is which. It limped （做行） badly, and one wing dragged upon the ground.
突然间,我听到翅膀扇动的声音,低头一看,只见脚边有一只瘸腿的小鸟。它在努力地走,还是在飞,我分不清楚。它瘸得很厉害,一只翅膀拖在地上。