2025届高考英语二轮复习之书面表达历险类续写课件(共29张PPT)
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(共29张PPT)
历险类续写
登山篇
写作整理
审题
衔接
结尾
话题类语料
历险类语料整理
受伤
1）脸部流血
2）身体疼痛
3）因为疼痛尖叫
4）衣服破烂
5）呼叫帮助
救援
1）救援到达
2）被送进救护车
3）在我身边安抚
句型翻译
1）我的衣服破烂
2）我的腿感到剧烈的疼痛
3）脸部因为擦伤在流血
4）救援立刻到达了。
5）我被安全地送进救护车
救火篇
火灾类历险语料
火警响起
火焰串起
火势蔓延
用湿布护住口鼻
用脚踢开门
救援到达
扑灭大火
死里逃生
The fire alarm sounded.
The flame shot out of +sp.
The fire spread.
…covered the mouth and nose with the wet cloth
Kicked the door wide open
The rescue reached +sb.
… put out the fire.
… escaped narrowly.
续写小练
落水篇
About a half-mile behind our Minnesota farm lay a pond. In summer, my brother Harry and I would run through a stand of oak trees to skip stones there. The pond wore a collar of black mud. It was not a place for swimming.
In late summer, the pond would be covered by a green and bubbly scum（起泡的浮渣）. Sometimes a strong, unpleasant smell rose from it. We stayed away.
When winter came, the pond was once again an inviting place. One day when ice covered it, Harry said to me, “Try walking across.”
The ice looked solid. No water showed through it, but I hesitated. “Go ahead.” Harry urged. “Try it. You’re lighter than I am. If the ice holds, we can run and slide carefully on it. It’ll be fun.” I wanted to please Harry, and I thought about the fun of a long slide on the ice. I began to slide across the pond.
In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack! I stretched out my arms. The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched on the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in icy water. I thought of the bottom of the pond. I knew it would be black and awful down there, full of mud and maybe rotting creatures.
I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass. Again and again I tried to get out. Again and again the ice broke into pieces. The hole widened. I was wearing a coat of heavy material. As it became completely wet, it dragged me down. I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.
I looked at Harry on shore. He seemed rooted to the spot. “I can’t get out!” I screamed when I caught some breath.
Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran from the pond.
Paragraph 2:The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over.
审题
是否有主题
结尾定基调
（首尾呼应？主旨升华？动作留白？引用名言？)
确认各段落主人公
根据情绪变化描写主人公动作
段落开头要写好
首段结尾是关键
React to a fall into the ice hole
3
Keep as calm
as possible.
5
Roll your body across the ice once you're out.
4
Focus your energy on getting out immediately.
1
Brace yourself.
2
React to a fall into the ice hole
Get horizontal
and kick your legs.
3
1
2
What should you do once You're Out
Retrace your footsteps back to safety.
Take off wet clothes.
Get warmed up.
第一段情节的心里变化过程
worried
calm
relieved
glad
hopeful
despair
When “I” saw Harry
run away.
Brother was trapped in the ice
He turned and ran from the pond to look for a way.
After brother was saved.
When “I” saw Harry came back again.
“I” was rescued.
Emotional change
lesson
心情 相关词汇
worried
frightened
despair
relieved
happy
衔接
I looked at Harry on shore. He seemed rooted to the spot. “I can’t get out!” I screamed when I caught some breath.
Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran from the pond.
Paragraph 2:The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over.
结尾
Para1：
About a half-mile behind our Minnesota farm lay a pond. In summer, my brother Harry and I would run through a stand of oak trees to skip stones there. The pond wore a collar of black mud. It was not a place for swimming.
Para. 1
He turned and ran from the pond.
My heart ached, tears streaming down my cheeks when staring at his familiar figure out of sight.
I worked my fingers to the bones to crawl out by myself , but nothing came of it.
I was thrown into a black world, crying desperately.
It was at this moment that I saw Harry ran towards to me with a large, black, V-shaped oak branch.
My worry gave way to relief in no time.
He lay on his stomach, pushing the branch before him and wound his way towards me.
I grabbed the branch with care and was ultimately dragged out of the icy water by Harry.
What a narrow escape! We staggered shiveringly home, with my wet clothes dripping and my shoes squishing and squirting water.
a possible version（每段≈7句原则）
Para. 1
He turned and ran from the pond.
Watching him walk out on me, I was seized by a strong sense of horror.
The icy water made me shiver with coldness and fear, and I cannot resist crying with my eyes closed, reckoning that I would die .
However, survival instinct made me compose myself.
Failed as I had many times, my mind began to race, trying to think of a good solution.
With my arms still stretching out on the ice, I discreetly fumbled for something that is hard with my foot under the ice.
Supported by the hard objects, I moved inch by inch.
As if a century had passed, Ultimately, I crawled out of the ice hole.
Staying flat on the ice, I rolled on it and survived.
At this time, Harry came back with a oak limb in his hand.
Looking at me rolling on the ice safe and sound, he stood there, rooted to the spot with his mouth open wide.
“欧亨利式结尾”
a possible version
Para. 2:
I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over.
Looking at me shivering with coldness, She asked me in surprise, “what had happened ”
Before I answered, she quickly took off my wet coat and gave me a hot bath.
I sobbed out my grievances to her.
Fuming with rage, she told Harry off.
So ashamed was he that he could feel the blood rush to his face.
After that, the pond put a brand in my heart that I could never erase.
It was “the pond” that made me understand at times we should say “No” to others in the first place. I didn't try to please others any more to put my ass on the line. For the rest of my life, I myself am the most expensive.
读后续写原文载自典范英语
“心情”驿站
关于“worried”
的表达积累：
关于“despair”
的表达积累：
A gave B a concerned look.
There was a concerned look on A’s face.
A glimpse of one’s face would tell that he was worried.
1. I was thrown into a dark world and sank into hopelessness.
2. She felt seized by a burst of despair and couldn’t help crying bitterly.
3. A flood of despair took hold of me.
BrainStorm
关于“happy”
的表达积累：
关于“relieved”
的表达积累：
My worry gave way to relief.
A feeling of relief slowly crept up on me.
1. His face beamed and his bright smile lit up.
2. He danced with joy and sweetness. (欢欣雀跃)
3. I was on the top of the world/ over the moon 欣喜若狂
“心情”驿站
BrainStorm
关于“afraid”的表达积累：
1. I was struck with horror. 我被吓呆了。
2. I was choked by fear. 我被吓得透不过气来。
3. I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. (吓呆了，不敢动弹)
4. I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
(嗓子发紧，膝盖发软)
5. I was scared to death with eyes full of horror. 被吓得要死，眼睛里充满了恐惧。
6. I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating.
(我被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗)
“心情”驿站
续写写作句式整理（每段7句，打乱顺序使用）
对话
时间
动作
情感
“ … ”, 主语 v. （+adv.） ， “ … ”
2. 1）立刻
2）一…就
3) 不久之后
4) 很久之后
5）直到…才…
非谓语动词作状语
1) 同时做
2）先后做
Instantly, …
The moment A did sth, B did sth.
It was not long before…
After what seems centuries,
It was not until… that…
Doing , 主语…
Having done…,
续写写作句式整理（每段7句，打乱顺序使用）
4. 情感
1）sb. was seized by +n.
A flood/ wave / sense of +n. swept over sb.
rose up inside sb.
enveloped/ ruled sb.
3) 通过身体部位表现
开心：脸/眼睛亮了
伤心：埋头哭泣/ 低垂着脑袋
害怕：手心出汗/ 全身颤抖/嗓子发紧，膝盖发软
历险类续写
登山篇
写作整理
审题
衔接
结尾
话题类语料
历险类语料整理
受伤
1）脸部流血
2）身体疼痛
3）因为疼痛尖叫
4）衣服破烂
5）呼叫帮助
救援
1）救援到达
2）被送进救护车
3）在我身边安抚
句型翻译
1）我的衣服破烂
2）我的腿感到剧烈的疼痛
3）脸部因为擦伤在流血
4）救援立刻到达了。
5）我被安全地送进救护车
救火篇
火灾类历险语料
火警响起
火焰串起
火势蔓延
用湿布护住口鼻
用脚踢开门
救援到达
扑灭大火
死里逃生
The fire alarm sounded.
The flame shot out of +sp.
The fire spread.
…covered the mouth and nose with the wet cloth
Kicked the door wide open
The rescue reached +sb.
… put out the fire.
… escaped narrowly.
续写小练
落水篇
About a half-mile behind our Minnesota farm lay a pond. In summer, my brother Harry and I would run through a stand of oak trees to skip stones there. The pond wore a collar of black mud. It was not a place for swimming.
In late summer, the pond would be covered by a green and bubbly scum（起泡的浮渣）. Sometimes a strong, unpleasant smell rose from it. We stayed away.
When winter came, the pond was once again an inviting place. One day when ice covered it, Harry said to me, “Try walking across.”
The ice looked solid. No water showed through it, but I hesitated. “Go ahead.” Harry urged. “Try it. You’re lighter than I am. If the ice holds, we can run and slide carefully on it. It’ll be fun.” I wanted to please Harry, and I thought about the fun of a long slide on the ice. I began to slide across the pond.
In the middle of the pond, the ice gave way with a sudden crack! I stretched out my arms. The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched on the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in icy water. I thought of the bottom of the pond. I knew it would be black and awful down there, full of mud and maybe rotting creatures.
I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass. Again and again I tried to get out. Again and again the ice broke into pieces. The hole widened. I was wearing a coat of heavy material. As it became completely wet, it dragged me down. I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.
I looked at Harry on shore. He seemed rooted to the spot. “I can’t get out!” I screamed when I caught some breath.
Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran from the pond.
Paragraph 2:The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over.
审题
是否有主题
结尾定基调
（首尾呼应？主旨升华？动作留白？引用名言？)
确认各段落主人公
根据情绪变化描写主人公动作
段落开头要写好
首段结尾是关键
React to a fall into the ice hole
3
Keep as calm
as possible.
5
Roll your body across the ice once you're out.
4
Focus your energy on getting out immediately.
1
Brace yourself.
2
React to a fall into the ice hole
Get horizontal
and kick your legs.
3
1
2
What should you do once You're Out
Retrace your footsteps back to safety.
Take off wet clothes.
Get warmed up.
第一段情节的心里变化过程
worried
calm
relieved
glad
hopeful
despair
When “I” saw Harry
run away.
Brother was trapped in the ice
He turned and ran from the pond to look for a way.
After brother was saved.
When “I” saw Harry came back again.
“I” was rescued.
Emotional change
lesson
心情 相关词汇
worried
frightened
despair
relieved
happy
衔接
I looked at Harry on shore. He seemed rooted to the spot. “I can’t get out!” I screamed when I caught some breath.
Paragraph 1: Harry turned and ran from the pond.
Paragraph 2:The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over.
结尾
Para1：
About a half-mile behind our Minnesota farm lay a pond. In summer, my brother Harry and I would run through a stand of oak trees to skip stones there. The pond wore a collar of black mud. It was not a place for swimming.
Para. 1
He turned and ran from the pond.
My heart ached, tears streaming down my cheeks when staring at his familiar figure out of sight.
I worked my fingers to the bones to crawl out by myself , but nothing came of it.
I was thrown into a black world, crying desperately.
It was at this moment that I saw Harry ran towards to me with a large, black, V-shaped oak branch.
My worry gave way to relief in no time.
He lay on his stomach, pushing the branch before him and wound his way towards me.
I grabbed the branch with care and was ultimately dragged out of the icy water by Harry.
What a narrow escape! We staggered shiveringly home, with my wet clothes dripping and my shoes squishing and squirting water.
a possible version（每段≈7句原则）
Para. 1
He turned and ran from the pond.
Watching him walk out on me, I was seized by a strong sense of horror.
The icy water made me shiver with coldness and fear, and I cannot resist crying with my eyes closed, reckoning that I would die .
However, survival instinct made me compose myself.
Failed as I had many times, my mind began to race, trying to think of a good solution.
With my arms still stretching out on the ice, I discreetly fumbled for something that is hard with my foot under the ice.
Supported by the hard objects, I moved inch by inch.
As if a century had passed, Ultimately, I crawled out of the ice hole.
Staying flat on the ice, I rolled on it and survived.
At this time, Harry came back with a oak limb in his hand.
Looking at me rolling on the ice safe and sound, he stood there, rooted to the spot with his mouth open wide.
“欧亨利式结尾”
a possible version
Para. 2:
I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over.
Looking at me shivering with coldness, She asked me in surprise, “what had happened ”
Before I answered, she quickly took off my wet coat and gave me a hot bath.
I sobbed out my grievances to her.
Fuming with rage, she told Harry off.
So ashamed was he that he could feel the blood rush to his face.
After that, the pond put a brand in my heart that I could never erase.
It was “the pond” that made me understand at times we should say “No” to others in the first place. I didn't try to please others any more to put my ass on the line. For the rest of my life, I myself am the most expensive.
读后续写原文载自典范英语
“心情”驿站
关于“worried”
的表达积累：
关于“despair”
的表达积累：
A gave B a concerned look.
There was a concerned look on A’s face.
A glimpse of one’s face would tell that he was worried.
1. I was thrown into a dark world and sank into hopelessness.
2. She felt seized by a burst of despair and couldn’t help crying bitterly.
3. A flood of despair took hold of me.
BrainStorm
关于“happy”
的表达积累：
关于“relieved”
的表达积累：
My worry gave way to relief.
A feeling of relief slowly crept up on me.
1. His face beamed and his bright smile lit up.
2. He danced with joy and sweetness. (欢欣雀跃)
3. I was on the top of the world/ over the moon 欣喜若狂
“心情”驿站
BrainStorm
关于“afraid”的表达积累：
1. I was struck with horror. 我被吓呆了。
2. I was choked by fear. 我被吓得透不过气来。
3. I froze with terror, too scared to move an inch. (吓呆了，不敢动弹)
4. I felt so scared that my throat tightened and my knees felt weak.
(嗓子发紧，膝盖发软)
5. I was scared to death with eyes full of horror. 被吓得要死，眼睛里充满了恐惧。
6. I was seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating.
(我被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗)
“心情”驿站
续写写作句式整理（每段7句，打乱顺序使用）
对话
时间
动作
情感
“ … ”, 主语 v. （+adv.） ， “ … ”
2. 1）立刻
2）一…就
3) 不久之后
4) 很久之后
5）直到…才…
非谓语动词作状语
1) 同时做
2）先后做
Instantly, …
The moment A did sth, B did sth.
It was not long before…
After what seems centuries,
It was not until… that…
Doing , 主语…
Having done…,
续写写作句式整理（每段7句，打乱顺序使用）
4. 情感
1）sb. was seized by +n.
A flood/ wave / sense of +n. swept over sb.
rose up inside sb.
enveloped/ ruled sb.
3) 通过身体部位表现
开心：脸/眼睛亮了
伤心：埋头哭泣/ 低垂着脑袋
害怕：手心出汗/ 全身颤抖/嗓子发紧，膝盖发软