湖南衡阳县2016高考英语短文改错二轮基础选练（2）及答案
短文改错
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【参考答案】4.
1.第一句：in→ of
2.第二句：careless→ carelessly
3.第四句：去掉a
4.第五句：whenever→ when
5.第五句：why与 have之间加 not
6.第六句：or→ and
7. 第六句：I→ me
8.第七句：says→ said
9.第八句：thousand→ thousands
10.第九句：hold→ holding
短文改错
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】5.
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下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】6.
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短文改错
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】2.
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3.下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】3.
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4.短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】4.
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此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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【参考答案】1.
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78. at之后加a 79. fall改为fell
80. 正确 81. important 改为importance
82. 去掉in 83. swim改为swimming
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短文改错
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此句多一个词,把多余的词用斜线( ＼ )划掉; 然后在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉;
此句缺一个词, 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ ), 然后在句子后面的横线上写出该加的词;
此句错一个词, 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该行句子后面的横线上写出改正后的词.
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80.place---places 81.such—so 82. V 83.talk—talked
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下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。
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【参考答案】3.
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短文改错 （共10 小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线（_），并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】5.
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1．5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
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【参考答案】6.
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1.短文改错
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【参考答案】1.
1.第一句：in→of 2.第二句：careless→carelessly
3.第四句：去掉a 4.第五句：whenever→when
5.第五句：why与 have之间加 not
6.第六句：or→and 7. 第六句：I→me
8.第七句：says→said 9.第八句：thousand→thousands
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1.短文改错
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( / )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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【参考答案】1.
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短文改错
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】2.
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文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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【参考答案】3.
第一处：off→on。【解题思路】由下文可知，此处是一个妇女刚上车，一个男人试图起来。
第二处：去掉had。【解题思路】文章记叙的是过去发生的事，故用一般过去时。
第三处：perfect→prefectly。【解题思路】修饰形容词应用副词。
第四处：a→the。【解题思路】特指前面提到的妇女，故用定冠词。
第五处：her→his。【解题思路】此处指妇女把她的手放在男人的肩膀上（阻止他为自己让座）。
第六处：So→But。【解题思路】男人想起来，可是妇女不让，前后是转折关系，故用but。
第七处：force→forced。【解题思路】动作发生在过去，故用一般过去时。
第八处：say→saying。【解题思路】say与句子主语是逻辑上的主谓关系，故用现在分词作伴随状语。
第九处：block→blocks。【解题思路】三个街区，所以用复数。
第十处：wanted后加to。【解题思路】want to do sth.“想要做某事”，是固定搭配。
短文改错
下面短文中有10处语言错误，请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】1.
fond 后加of later→late
took→ put start →started
a→an mile→miles
northern→north sail →sailing
for→and/so on that day 的on去掉
2.短文改错
下列文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增
加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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moment is already g ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )one but people can never be back to it. So art is always changing
and developing.
【参考答案】2.
1. part → parts 2.a → the 3.hope∧to
4.去掉it 5.thought→thinks
6.deep→deeply 7.hearing→heard 8.For→In
9. mistake→mistakes 或在mistake前加a 10.but→and
3.短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )你修改你同桌写的以下作文.。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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【参考答案】3.
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and took the old man to the nearest hospital．湖南衡阳县2016高考英语短文改错二轮基础选练（5）及答案
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.
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【参考答案】4.
To celebrate the en ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )d of our exams, my friends and I went to(此处加a)fast-food restaurant for some hamburgers and coca cola．When our food come(came)．I started walking towards a table．Fortunately(Unfortunately), I fell over and my dish slipped with (off 或from) my hands and the food landed on a man’s white shirt．
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短文改错
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear editor,
Next year I will go ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )to university and becoming a college student, and I have never been away from my parents. I don’t know how to adapt myself to my university life. I hear many freshmen are at loss what to do when we are at university. They can’t take care of themselves in their everyday life, feel lonely and homesick. Clothes, money or mobile phone are sometimes gone. And because of different climates and the food, they often feel sick. Some even rented rooms outside the campus, but I don’t think it’s so safely. Could you tell me how to deal with these problems so that I will be able to get used the university life in the future
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考答案】5.
1. becoming改为become
2. and改为but
3. at后加a
4. we改为they
5. feel改为feeling或feel前加and
6. phone改为phones
7. 去掉the
8. rented改为rent
9. safely改为safe
10. used后加to
短文改错
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
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【参考答案】6.
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短文改错
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
Ten years ago, I h ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ad worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and could see nothing. Lucky for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late, four police car arrived at the front gate. They searched for the factory carefully, tried to find something unusual. In the end, I am told that the rain had brought about the short circuit, that caused the accident.
【参考答案】3.
Ten years ago, ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )I had(去掉had) worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of（the） factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and(but) could see nothing. Lucky (luckily)for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late(later), four police car(cars) arrived at the front gate. They searched for(去掉for) the factory carefully, tried(trying) to find something unusual. In the end, I am(was) told that the rain had brought about the short circuit, that(which) caused the accident.
4.短文改错
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
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【参考答案】4.
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5.短文改错
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
I like eating fruit a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nd vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.
【参考答案】5.
I like eating f ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ruit and vegetables what （改为which/that）are of great benefit to our healthy（改为health）. Not only do they prevent us from falling into（去掉into） ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow（改为following） the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going（改为goes）, “ An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike（改为disliking或前加who/that） fruit and vegetables. On（加the） contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were（改为are） crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong（改为 stronger）. In my opinion, we must take action to change them（改为 it）.
6.短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.
To celebrate the end o ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )f our exams, my friends and I went to fast-food restaurant for some hamburgers and coca cola．When our food come．I started walking towards a table．Fortunately, I fell over and my dish slipped with my hands and the food landed on a man’s white shirt．
I was frightened ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )and unsure how to do next, but just then all I heard was “It’s OK” after the man disappeared into the restroom．A few minute later, the man out of the restroom and my heart beat it fast．I thought he was going to ask for his parents’ telephone number．Instead, he simply smiled at me, handed me some money and said．“Buy yourself some new hamburgers”, Then he walked away without even finish his food．
【参考答案】6.
To celebrate the end o ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )f our exams, my friends and I went to(此处加a)fast-food restaurant for some hamburgers and coca cola．When our food come(came)．I started walking towards a table．Fortunately(Unfortunately), I fell over and my dish slipped with (off 或from) my hands and the food landed on a man’s white shirt．
I was frightened and u ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nsure how (what)to do next, but just then all I heard was “It’s OK” after (before)the man disappeared into the restroom．A few minute (minutes)later, the man out of the restroom and my heart beat it (去掉it)fast．I thought he was going to ask for his (my) parents’ telephone number．Instead, he simply smiled at me, handed me some money and said．“Buy yourself some new hamburgers”, Then he walked away without even finish (finishing)his food．湖南衡阳县2016高考英语短文改错二轮基础选练（3）及答案
1.短文改错
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】1.
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短文改错
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
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【参考答案】2.
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短文改错
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
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【参考答案】3.
I like eating frui ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )t and vegetables what （改为which/that）are of great benefit to our healthy（改为health）. Not only do they prevent us from falling into（去掉into） ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow（改为following） the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going（改为goes）, “ An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike（改为disliking或前加who/that） fruit and vegetables. On（加the） contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were（改为are） crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong（改为 stronger）. In my opinion, we must take action to change them（改为 it）.
.短文改错
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺少单词处加一个漏字符合(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划 横线，并在该下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】5.
76. thousand → thousands 77. in → on 78. waste前加a
79. carry前加to 80. few → little 门 81.Therefore → However
82.believing→believe 83. 删去been或benefited → benefiting
84. is → are 85. would → will
6.短文 改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。按下列情况改正：
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】6.
notice-noticed ; occupy-occupied ; a young couple；
clearly-clear ; on-at/by ; put-putting ;
many-much； to去掉 ; So-But ; me-I .
1.短文改错
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We're very gladly to h ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ave received your money and some reading materials. Thank you very much. We had been studying hard since we came back to school. Under the help of our teachers and classmates, we have made great progresses in our studies. So we often praised and encouraged by our teachers and parents. We have made up our minds to study hard than before to learn every subject good in order to be admitted to key universities in the future.We're looking forward to see you, but we have no chance to go to the Hangzhou ourselves. So we hope you can post us a photo of yours soon.
Best wishes,
Yours,
LiHua
【参考答案】1.
1.gladly--glad 2.had--have 3.under--with
4.progresses--progress 5.we后加are
6.hard--harder 7.good--well 8.see--seeing
9.去掉the 10.your--yours
2.短文改错
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
I like eating fruit ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.
【参考答案】2.
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短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】4.
1. 去掉 is 2. saying---say 3. if---whether 4. strong---strongly
5. study---studying 6. my---her 7. I前加will 8. build---builds
9. and---but 10. advices---advice
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上勾一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词；并也用斜线划摔。
此行缺一个词j在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的诃。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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【参考答案】5.
76. where → wh ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )o 77.so → but 78.hen → hens 79. √ 80.在year前加the
81.her →him 82 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ).去掉for 83.more → much 或去掉more 84. interesting →interested
85. didn't →doesn’t
文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
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【参考答案】6.
1．在their 后加with， 因为help sb. with sth.为固定用法。
2．search改为过去式，由时间状语“Last weekend”可知，这是描述过去的事情，所以用一般过去时。
3．information为不可数名词，所以不能用复数形式。
4．We改为 I，“我”去买票，应用代词I。
5．had改为was,这里表示的是存在，所以用there be 句型。
6．在the suitcase前加into.
7．引导一个定语从句，代替指物的先行词things，所以用that/which。
8．show改为see, see sb. off意为“为某人送行”，符合语境。
9．Happily改为happy , feel为系动词，后面应该用形容词作表语。
10．在safe journey前加a,具体的一次旅行。
短文改错：请找出下列短文中的错误，并直接在短文中改正。
改错格式（要求）
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】4.
1. left改为leaving 2. had been worked 中去掉been 3. put notice改为put a notice
4. answer改为a ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )nswers 5. accepted改为received 6. man后加who
7. give your的your改为my 8. as yours中的as改为like
9. which改为what 10. real改为really
5.短文改错
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
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【参考答案】5.
1.while→when 2.obvious→obviously
3.late→later 4.managed后加to
5.shouted→shouting 6.understand→understood
7.is →was 8.them→it
9.rushed out of中of 去掉 10.with→to
6.短文改错
文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】6.
Line 1: before—after;
Line 2: careful—carefully, her—herself,
Line 3: with—for; happen—happened,
Line 4: hung—hanging; buying—bought
Line 5: less—more; works—the wroks
Line 6: was died去掉was
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
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【参考答案】1.
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