人教版八年级上册英语Unit 8 单元写作指导
【话题剖析】
本单元的写作内容是描述食物的制作过程。写此类文章首先应交代清楚你要制作的食物是什么以及需要的材料,然后介绍做食物的步骤和方法。注意在写作时应使用相关表示顺序的词,如first,next,then,finally等,同时也要注意祈使句的运用。
写作积累
(一)相关短语积累
1.cut up 切碎
2.put...into 把……放进
3.add ...to 把……加到
4.mix up 混合
(二)相关句型积累
你需要一些水果和酸奶。
You need some fruit and yogurt.
2.首先,清选所有水果并切碎,然后放入碗里。
First, wash and cut up all the fruit, and put it into a bowl.
3.接下来,在水果里加西句蜂蜜和一杯酸奶。
Next, add two spoons of honey and a cup of yogurt to the fruit.
4.然后,把所有东西混合起来。
Then, mix up everything.
5.最后,和朋友一起享用它吧。
Finally, serve the fruit salad and enjoy it with your friends.
经典范例
假设你是李华,请根据以下邮件内容及所 出给信息,给你的美国笔友汤姆(Tom)回一封80词左右电子邮件。
Dear Li Hua,
How are you
I'm writing to ask you something about cooking. My good friends want to spend this weekend with me.I want to make fruit salad for them. But I don't know how to make it well. Can you help me Please tell me what I need and what I should do.
I hope to hear from you as soon as possible.
Yours,
Tom
原料:4根香蕉、3个苹果、半个西瓜或者其他水果、蜂蜜、酸奶。
步骤:1.将水果全部切碎并放进碗里;
2.加蜂蜜和酸奶;
3.搅拌均匀。
【思路点拨】:
这是一篇关于食物制作的文章。写作时,先写原料和设备,再写制作过程。写作时可用表示步骤的first,next,then与finally等词;最后写出评价和总结。
必背范文
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to hear from you.Let me tell you how to make fruit salad. You need four bananas, three apples and half a watermelon or other fruit, and you also need some honey and yogurt.
First,wash and cut up all the fruit, and put it into a bowl. Next, add two spoons of honey and a cup of yogurt to the bowl. Then, mix up everything. Finally,serve the fruit salad and enjoy it with your friends.
I hope it's helpful to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
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