Unit 5 What are the shirts made of? Section B Writing 课件（21张PPT） 人教版英语九年级全册

(共16张PPT)
Unit 5　What are the shirts made of
Writing　
Read aloud
1. 它需要花费几周的时间来完成所有的事情。
2. 当处于困境时，他们放出天灯来求救。
It takes several weeks to complete everything.
They sent out sky lanterns to ask for help when in trouble.
3. 天灯是用竹子制成的，外面覆盖一层纸。
The sky lanterns are made of bamboo and covered with paper.
4. 它们被看作是一种鲜明的幸福及美好祝福的标志。
They are seen as bright symbols of happiness and good wishes.
Read aloud
1. 它需要花费几周的时间来完成所有的事情。
2. 当处于困境时，他们放出天灯来求救。
It takes several weeks to complete everything.
They sent out sky lanterns to ask for help when in trouble.
3. 天灯是用竹子制成的，外面覆盖一层纸。
4. 它们被看作是一种鲜明的幸福及美好祝福的标志。
They are seen as bright symbols of happiness and good wishes.
The sky lanterns are made of bamboo and covered with paper.
由哪里制造的
因……而出名
由……制成的
被...覆盖
由谁制造的
被用来做……
被视为……
……的象征
Match and read the phrases！
Matching
be used for doing sth/be used to do sth
be famous for
the symbol of…
be made by
be covered with
be made of /from
be seen as…/be regarded as
be made in
Do you know where it is
Can you think of some famous or special things
in Ningnan
dried bean curd
buckwheat cake
[ b k wi t]
Can you think of some famous or special things
in Ningnan
silk quilt
tobacco烟草制品
[t b k ]
What the product is
What it is made of / from
Who it is made by
Where it is made
What it can do
Why it is special
Ningnan
made of pure silk and it is soft, light and comfortable
silk quilt
pure silk
silk factory workers
keep you warm and comfortable
Do you know
How to write the beginning of the article
1.My city is famous for ...It is a kind of traditional ...I'll tell you something about it.
2. ...is one of the most famous...in my city. More and more people like....Do you want to know something about it
while-writing
3.As we all know, it is a tradition to …
4. … has its own special forms of traditional art.
5.In my city, one of the most famous … is …
Write the body of your article
Body
while-writing
How to write the ending of the article
1.It is seen as a symbol of ...
while-writing
4. … play(s) an important role/part in…
2. … has/have become a symbol of …
3. More and more foreigners are interested in...
Name: silk quilt
Where:Ningnan
Materials: pure silk
Usage（用途）: Keep you warm and comfortable...
Symbols: good wishes, health,happiness
请根据所给材料，以蚕丝被为题写一篇文章。80词左右。
History : more than 3000 years
while-writing
Maker: silk factory workers
通读自己的文章，并从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。
自我欣赏与修正
post-writing
Unit 5　What are the shirts made of writing
详写
写
后
凝
练
图：
具体描述
概括介绍：________is one of the most famous product in my town / city ./My city is famous for….
点滴评价:It is special because…
/be seen as a symbol of…
be made of/from…
be made in…
be made by…
be used for…
post-writing
佳篇品读
Pre-writing
My city Ningnan is famous for its silk quilts. It has a long history of more than 3000 years.
These quilts are made of pure silk. They are made by workers in many silk factories in the city. The silk quilts are used for keeping people warm and comfortable in bed. They are special because they are light and soft to touch.
Many people from all over the world come to Ningnan to visit the silk factories and buy not only the silk quilts but also many other silk products.would you like to come to my city If you come to Ningnan, I will show you around the city.You can buy all kinds of silk products.
中考评分标准:
第五档:(14-15分)圆满地完成了规定的写作任务，包含提示中的所有要点，结构合理，语言流畅，语句优美，思路清晰，逻辑性强。能使用较为丰富的句子结构和词汇，基本上无语法和词汇错误，书写规范工整。
第四档:(l1-13分)较好地完成了规定的写作任务，包含提示中的所有要点，中心明确，结构较为合理，语宫较为流畅。意思表述清楚，虽有个别语法和词汇错误但不影响理解，书写较为规范工整。
第三档:(8-10分)基本完成了规定的写作任务，包含提示中的所有要点，但结构欠合理，少数语句意思表述不够清楚，语法和词汇错误较少但不影响理解，书写基本规范。
第二档:(5-7分)未能按要求完成规定的写作任务，只包含提示中的部分要点，结构不合理，多数语句意思表述不够清楚，语法和词汇错误较多，影响理解，书写欠规范。
第一档:(0-4分)只写出个别词语，结构不完整，多数语句不完整或意思不明，内容不可读，语法和词汇错误很多，书写混乱。
评分要求:1以上所给的例文仅供样式参考，阅卷教师不要受例文中所述内容的限制，文章表述合理即可。