选择性必修二Unit 2 正反观点类写作之出国留学利弊
本单元的写作主题是“表达你对出国留学的看法”,属于新课标中“正反观点类议论文”写作。正反观点类议论文一般会给出两个或两个以上的对立观点,要求发表自己的看法或见解。
一.基本框架:
1.结构:引语一正方观点一反方观点一结论”,可采用四段式或传统的三段式模式。
2.时态:此类文章多用一般现在时。论述一种现象或观点,不能因为是讨论过的内容,就用一般过去时。
3.发表自己的观点或看法时,应紧扣主题,言简意赅。既可以赞成正方观点,也可以支持反方观点,也可以有自己的看法,只要言之有理、表达准确即可。
二.正反观点相关过渡表达积累:
引出个人观点:
______________________________________________________________________依我之见(若干个)
表示递进关系:
______________________________________________________________________首先(若干个)
______________________________________________________________________此外(若干个)
______________________________________________________________________更重要的是(若干个)
______________________________________________________________________最后(若干个)
表示举例:
1._______________________________________________例如
2.___________________如下所示
3.___________________等等
4.___________________像
表示解释说明:
___________________换句话说
___________________也就是说
___________________那意味着
表示因果关系:
_________________________________________________________________________________________
因为;由于
表示总结概括:
_______________________________________________________________________________________
简言之;总之
引出话题用语:
1. Our class have had a discussion about...Opinions are mainly divided into two groups.
2. Recently the problem of .. has been brought into focus,
3. Nowadays there is a growing concern over...
4. People may have different opinions on...
5. There are different opinions among people as to...
引出赞成方观点:
1.60% of the students hold the view that it is perfectly reasonable to...
2.45% of the students approve of the idea that it makes good sense to...
引出反对方观点:
1.However, others are strongly against... They argue that...
2.Some object to the idea that...
3.... firmly oppose...
4.As the saying goes, every coin has two sides. Its negative aspects are also apparent.
引出个人观点:
1.For my part,I quite agree with the statement that...
2.From my perspective,we should attach more importance to...
3.As far as I am concerned, undoubtedly... does more harm than good.
4.Personally, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
5. In conclusion, I support the statement that ..we should look at the issue from a different angle.
参考模板:
Nowadays, there has been a heated discussion about_________. Opinions vary from person to person.
Some people who are in favor of it maintain that it has a number of benefits. To begin with, they think___________ .In addition,________. While those who are greatly opposed to it argue that it has quite a few disadvantages. For one thing,______ .For another, _____.Last but not least,_______.
Personally, we are supposed to take a cautious attitude to________.As an old saying goes: every coin has two sides. So ______is no exception.
三.关于出国留学利弊相关表达积累:
1._________________________________________________出国留学
2._________________________________________________学费
3._________________________________________________生活费
4._________________________________________________面临巨大的经济压力
5._________________________________________________使..花一大笔钱
6._________________________________________________生活在不熟悉的环境中
7._________________________________________________有限的语言知识
8._________________________________________________遭受文化冲击
9._________________________________________________足够成熟来应对挑战
10._________________________________________________遇到人身安全问题
11._________________________________________________未来可期
12._________________________________________________进一步强国
13._________________________________________________无人能否认这个事实..
14._________________________________________________个人成长
15._________________________________________________变得更独立
16._________________________________________________处理各种困难
17._________________________________________________具有全球视野
18._________________________________________________提高个人能力
19._________________________________________________充当文化使者
20._________________________________________________留学生
21._________________________________________________与来自多元文化背景的学生合作
22._________________________________________________从不同角度看待世界
23._________________________________________________让我们更深入的了解自己的文化
24._________________________________________________为祖国发展做贡献
25._________________________________________________更好的职业机遇
26._________________________________________________改变一生的经历
四.写作句式练习:
1. __________________________________________________________________________whether students can make foreign friends online or not.___________________________________________.
关于学生是否可以在网上交外国朋友,我们班进行了一场激烈的辩论。关于这个话题众说纷纭。
2. 63% of the students______________________________________ that students make foreign friends online.
63%的学生认为学生在网上交外国朋友是可以理解的。
3. __________________, it can________________________________ by communicating with ____________ friends.
一方面,可以通过与说英语的朋友交流来帮助他们提高英语口语水平。
4. _________________, it's a good way to_________________________________________________________.
另一方面,这是拓宽他们视野的好方法。
5. ____________________, 37% of the students____________________________________________________.
相反,37%的学生反对它。
6.They argue that it is a waste of time and energy to make foreign friends online,_________________________________________________________________________________.
他们认为在网上交外国朋友是浪费时间和精力,这肯定会影响他们的学习。
7._________________, some students may probably_______________________________________________.更糟糕的是,一些学生可能会被误导或欺骗。
8.____________________, it is wise_____________________________________________________________.
在我看来,与我们周围的人交朋友是明智的。
9.________________________,many students who ___________________ ____________________________.
首先,许多出国留学的学生面临很大的经济压力。
________________ and ______________ are _____________ more expensive than______________ and end up_________________________________________.
学费和生活费比在国内贵许多,让许多家庭花一大笔钱。
Students must learn________________________________________________________________________.
学生必须学会如何用有限的语言知识生活在不熟悉的环境中。
Some students might even__________________________________________________________________.
一些学生可能会遇到人身安全问题。
__________________, one cannot _______________________________________________________.
总之,不容否认,出国留学有缺点。
Chinese students can be seen as __________________________________________________.
中国学生可以充当文化使者弘扬中国传统文化。
________________ people from________________________ helps us_____________________________
and thus_____________________.
与来自不同文化背景的学生合作可以帮助我们从不同角度看待世界,因此,让我们对自己的文化有更好的理解。
五.实战演练:
假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Jackson最近在考虑是否要出国留学,他来信征求你的意见。请你就此用英语给他写一封电子邮件,阐述你的观点,并给出理由(不少于三个).
注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯.3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Jackson.
I'm more than delighted to share my opinion. which I hope will be of some help to you.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
主题 体裁
人称 时态
布局 第一段: 第二段: 第三段:
遣词造句:
I.用本单元所学单词或短语填空。
1.________________________adj.有道理的,合情理的
2.________________________vt.使接触;使体验;显露;使暴露于(险境)
3.________________________n.接触;体验;暴露;揭露
4________________________n.环境,背景;(小说等的)情节背景
5.________________________vt.获得,取得赢得;增加
6________________________n.洞察力;眼光
7________________________adj.舒适区:舒适范围
8.________________________首先
9________________________此外,而且
Ⅱ本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
(1). I think it is____________________________________________________ to study abroad.
我认为出国留学非常有道理。
.While we are studying abroad, we____________________________________________________ a foreign language setting and it makes the learning process engaging and effective.
出国留学时,我们会置身于外语环境中,这让学习过程变得有趣且有效。
(3).Bathed in a different culture of a foreign country, we can_______________________________________into the world.
浸润在外国的不同文化中,我们能够深人了解世界。
(4).Cross-cultural experiences can give us____________________________________________________ .
跨文化的经历能够让我们拥有国际视野。
(5).Studying abroad takes us out of our____________________________________________________ and changes us for the better.
出国学习让我们走出舒适区,使我们变得更好。
2句式升级
.用含有同位语从句的句子改写句(1).
___________________________________________________________________________________________.
.用含exposure作主语的句子改写句(2)
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
.用连词because连接句(3)和句(4)
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.
连句成篇:
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
六.巩固练习:
假设你是李华,你打算利用假期出国旅游。请你就此给你的美国笔友 Michael写一封信,谈论一
下你出国旅游的原因。要点如下:
1.开阔眼界,了解国外的风俗和历史;
2.和来自不同文化背景的人交朋友,学习外语;
3.放松身心,欣赏美景。
注意:1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
参考答案:
正反观点类相应过渡表达积累
引出个人观点:1. in my opinion/ as far as I am concerned/ Personally/ As far as I know/ From my point of view
表示递进关系: 1. to begin with/in the first place/ first and foremost/ first of all 2. additionally/ moreover/in addition/besides/furthermore/ what’s more3. more importantly/ what is more important is that..4.Last but not least/eventually/ at last/ finally/ ultimately/in closing/ at length
举例:1. for example/ for instance/ such as/take --for example 2.as follows 3. and so on 4. like
4.解释说明:1. in other words2. that is (to say),/ namely 3. that means
5.因果关系: because/ since/for/as/ so/thus/ hence/therefore/ as a result/ thanks to/ owing to/ on account of/ due to
6.总结概括: in short/ all in all/ to sum up/ on the whole/ in brief/ in conclusion/ in summary/ to conclude/ in general/ overall
三.关于出国留学利弊相关表达积累:
1. study abroad 2. tuition fee3.living expense 4.face great economic pressure 5. cost sb an arm and a leg 6.live in an unfamiliar environment 7.limited language skills 8. suffer from culture shock 9. be mature enough to handle the challenge 10.encounter problems with personal safety 11.have a great future to look forward to 12. further strengthen our country 13. One can not deny the fact that 14. personal growth 15.become more independent 16. deal with all kinds of difficulties 17. gain a global perspective 18. improve your general competence 19. act as cultural envoys 20. international student 21. cooperate with students from diverse cultural backgrounds 22. view the world from different angles 23. give us more insight into our own culture 24. contribute to the development of our motherland 25. better career opportunities 26. life-changing experience
四.写作句式练习:
A heated debate has been held in our class about;Opinions vary on this topic 2. find it understandable 3. For one thing;help them improve their English ;English-speaking 4.For another; broaden their horizons 5.On the contrary; are against it 6. which will certainly affect their studies 7. What’s worse;get misled or cheated 8. From my point of view;to make friends with those around us 9. To begin with;study abroad;face great economic pressure 10.Tuition fees; living expense ;much;at home;costing most families an arm and a leg 11.how to live in an unfamiliar environment with limited language skills 12. encounter problems with personal safety 13. To sum up,deny the fact that studying abroad has its disadvantages 14. cultural envoys promoting traditional Chinese culture 15. Cooperating with;diverse cultural backgrounds; view the world from different angles; gives us more insight into our own culture
五思路点拨参考答案:
主题:出国留学的好处或弊端;体裁:应用文 时态:以一般现在时为主;人称:以第一,三人称为主
布局:第一段: 个人观点; 第二段:陈述理由; 第三段:希望采纳
遣词造句答案
1 reasonable2.expose3.exposure 4.setting 5. gain 6.insight 7.comfort zone8. to begin/start with9.In addition/what's' more
1.完成句子参考答案
(1)perfectly reasonable (2)expose ourselves to (3)gain great insights (4)a global perspective (5)comfort zone
2句式升级答案(6).I hold the view that it is perfectly reasonable to study abroad.(7)Exposure to a foreign language setting while we are studying abroad makes the learning process engaging and effective.(8) Bathed in a different culture of a foreign country, we can gain great insights into the world because cross-cultural experiences can give us a global perspective.
实战演练参考范文
Dear Jackson,
I'm more than delighted to share my opinion, which I hope will be of some help to you. Frankly, I hold the view that it is perfectly reasonable to study abroad. The reasons are as follows.
To begin with, exposure to a foreign language setting while we are studying abroad makes the learning process engaging and effective,Moreover ,bathed in a different culture of a foreign country, we can gain great insights into the world because cross-cultural experiences can give us a global perspective. Studying abroad takes us out of our comfort zone and changes us for the better.
All things considered, I hope you can choose to study abroad and start a new life.
Yours
Li Hua
六.巩固练习参考答案:
Dear Michael
These days,I am planning to travel abroad during the vacation, because I think traveling abroad is very meaningful.
Firstly, it can broaden my horizons. When I visit a foreign country, I can get a better understanding of its customs and history. Meanwhile, I can make some foreign friends there. Besides, communicating with the local people will give me the chance to pick up the language. Most importantly, I can relax myself and admire the beautiful scenery outside China.
Welcome to China when you are free. I do hope you can witness the great changes in China.
Best wishes!
Yours truly,
Li Hua