人教版（2019）选择性必修 第三册Unit 4 Adversity and Courage writing学案（含答案）

选择性必修三Unit 4 The Story of Shackleton and His men on the Ship Endurance
谋篇章结构绘写作脉络
1.审篇章结构，定写作方向：
Part1: Summary of the whole story(who,what,when,where,why ,how).
Who:____________________________________________________________________________
What:____________________________________________________________________________
When:____________________________________________________________________________
Where:___________________________________________________________________________
Why:_____________________________________________________________________________
How:_____________________________________________________________________________
Part 2: What I think about the characters in the story(struggles they faced, their actions and motives ,my comments).
Part3: How the story made me feel and my overall impressions of the expedition.
2.抽丝剥茧，汇写作要点
（1).The author described Shackleton as:__________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________ .
The author described the crew’s members as:___________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________.
（2).The relationship between Shackleton and his crew:________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________.
（3).The struggles they face:_____________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________.
（4).The motives for their actions:_________________________________________________________________.
（5).The part of the story you like most:_____________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________.
借思维导图梳理故事脉络
三.连词成句，完美成篇
This story is about the 1914-1916 (1).__________________（远征）by Ernest Shackleton to (2)._______________________(第一次横穿）of Antarctic. For this task he used (3).____________(“坚韧号”轮船）, Endurance, with a 28-man(4).___________(船员）,including one stowaway.
Shackleton is described as (5).____________ （沉着）and (6)._____________（不屈不挠的）and takes his crew’s (7).__________(安全）(8)._____________(serious). The rest of the crew are also (9).___________(勇敢无畏）， though a few are not very (10).___________(乐观）， and all were at times understandably (11)._________________(担忧的）and (12)._______________(绝望）about their situation. (13)._________________________(总之）， they (14).________________(仍然乐观）.This was helped by (15).____________________________________________(Shackleton 与他船员的良好关系） who (16).___________________________(信任他）and knew (17)._______________________________________(他会竭尽所能拯救他们）.
The crew (18)._______________________________________________(遇到很大困难）once Endurance (19).___________________(被困在冰层）.Soon they had to (20).__________________(弃船）and camped on the ice.They had to (21)._______________________(面对极端天气）and cold as well as a dangerous environment and all with (22).________________(有限的给养）.All of this (23).___________________________________(增添了船员们的心理压力）,so they had to (24)._____________________________________(保持积极的心态）.Shackleton’s motive was always to (25)._____________________________(保证他的船员存活下来）， and theirs was to last until he had found help.
(26).__________________________________________________(这个故事我最喜欢的部分是）is that (27).________________________________________________(尽管他们的远征没能实现目标）,They obtained a lot during their struggle for survival. This was (28).___________________________________________(由于Shackleton 的那种一定会获得帮助的恒心）and (29)._______________________________(船员们的勇敢）in surviving for so long. (30)._______________________________(我对的他们的印象是）is very positive as (31).__________________________________________________________(在这样的困境下他们一定吃尽苦头.）(32).________________________________________________(当我得知全体船员幸存下来时，感到非常激动.)
参考答案
审篇章结构绘写作脉络：
Who:Shackleton ;the crew members
What: attempt to make the first land crossing of Antarctica by ship Endurance ,got stuck on the Elephant Island
When: 1914~1916
Where: Elephant Island
Why: The ship got stuck in the ice
How : Shackleton left to seek help
抽丝剥茧汇写作要点:
（1）.Shackleton: brave; optimistic;positive;responsible;calm; perseverant;discipline;team spirit ....The crew’s members:a few are not very positive; worried/concerned;desperate; most of them remained optimistic;team spirit..(2)The crew trusted Shackleton firmly (3).had to abandon the ship;camped on the ice; faced extreme weather; were short of food and drinking water, fell ill and so on (4). have faith in Shackleton,do what they can to survive (5) Although they failed to achieve their goal,the perseverance they showed in survival and trust in each other impressed me most.
借思维导图梳理故事脉络:
1.look for rescue;2.stayed on the island; 3.got drinking water ;4.made fire; 5.food problem; 6.were ill;7. melted ;8. animal fat;9. sea animals ; 10.outside ; 11. discipline; 12. team spirit ; 13.celebration; 14.They were finally rescued
连词成句，完美成篇：
Paragraph 1: (1)expedition; (2).make the first land crossing ; (3).the ship; (4).crew;
Paragraph2: (5)calm;(6).perseverant; (7).safety; (8).seriously; (9).brave ; (10).optimistic; (11).concerned; (12).desperate; (13).Overall; (14).remained optimistic; (15).the good relationship Shackleton had with his crew; (16).trusted him firmly;(17).he would do what he could do to rescue them;
Paragraph3: (18).faced great trouble;(19).got stuck in the ice; (20).abandon the ship(21).;face the extreme weather ; (22).limited supplies; (23).added to the mental challenge;(24).maintain a positive state of mind; (25).make sure his crew survive;
Paragraph 4: (26).What I like most about this story ; (27).although their expedition failed to achieve its goal; (28).due to Shackleton’s perseverance in getting help ; (29).the crew’s bravery;(30）.My impression of them ; (31).they must have struggled greatly in such a position of adversity;(32).I felt quite thrilled when I learnt that the whole crew survived.