Unit 4 Why don't you talk to your parents? 写作（含范文）人教版英语八年级下册

unit 4单元写作
写作主题：如何写烦恼和沟通的相关文章
1 话题分析
本单元的话题是青少年在成长过程中遇到的问题或烦恼，包括与父母、同学之间的问题，并涉及处理这些问题或烦恼的方法。写作时，我们可以先描述问题，然后说说你解决该问题或烦恼的方法，最后再表达一下自己的感想。
2经典名题
在成长过程中，青少年面临越来越多的烦恼，主要体现在精神压力太大。请以此为话题写一篇 80 词左右的短文。
要点提示：
1.导致青少年精神压力大的主要原因：(1)学业 ；(2)与他人相处
2.减少压力的措施：(1)积极参加课外活动；(2)多与他人交流沟通
3.简要谈谈你对压力利弊的看法。(至少一点)
注意：
1.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2.文章必须包含所给要点提示，要求语句通顺，行文连贯。
3.不可逐词翻译，应有独自的见解并适当发挥。
4.文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up.
3.写作思维导图
审题 体裁 说明文 话题 青少年的压力
时态 一般现在时 人称 第一人称
段落布局 our schoolwork is heavy 原因 getting on with other people 措施 taking part in after-school activities more communication try our best to deal with the stress and 看法 keep healthy in body and mind
参考词汇：
be stressed out 有压力的；get on with 和睦相处；take part in 参加
communicate with sb.与某人交流；be good for 对……有好处；deal with 处理
参考句子：
1. I'm worried about my schoolwork. 我担心我的学业。
2. I have too much homework to do every day. 我每天有太多的家庭作业要做。
3. It's hard for me to communicate with my parents. 对我来说，和父母交流很困难。
4. I hope I can get on well with others. 我希望我能和他人相处得好。
5. How to deal with the pressure 如何应对压力呢
4.高分例文
We teenagers have more and more pressure while growing up.
①Here are two main reasons. ② One is our schoolwork is heavy and the other is the problems of getting on with other people. However, too much pressure is not good for teenagers’ development. ③So how to deal with the pressure ④Taking part in after- school activities is a very useful way. ⑤Besides, more communication often works.
⑥All in all, we should try our best to deal with the stress and keep healthy in body and mind.
例文分析：
本文按照"分析原因→解决措施→表达观点"的思路展开，条理清晰、语言简洁、过渡自然流畅，是一篇不错的范文。
①句用倒装的形式，点明有两个主要原因；
②句运用 One... the other...结构说明两个原因是什么；
③句承上启下，引出解决措施；
④句动词-ing 短语作主语，点明第一个措施；
⑤句巧妙使用 work(奏效)一词点明第 二个措施；
⑥句使用 try one's best to do sth.结构,表达了自己的观点。
5.佳句集锦
1. The most basic and powerful way to communicate with others is to listen.
与他人沟通最基本、也最有效的方法是聆听。
2. Think like a wise man but communicate in the simple language.
像智者一样去思考，但要用朴实的语言去交流。
3. When people talk, listen carefully. 当人们发言时, 认真聆听。
4. Reading itself is already communication. Although silent, it is very pure.
阅读本身已经是沟通,虽然无声，却很纯粹。
6.实战练习
(2020·衢州中考)假设你是 Daming,以下是你的英国朋友 Tony发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给他回一封邮件。
To: Daming
From: Tony
Subject: Life with family
Hi Daming, Long time no see. I've never spent so much time staying at home like this holiday. So I have more chances to stay with my family. I have a deep feeling of their love. And I want to do something for them, but I have no idea about it. What do you often do to show your love to your family And what's the best way to spend your time together Hope to get your reply soon! Yours, Tony
要求：
1.考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件；
2.邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；
3.词数90—110。

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参考答案：
To: Tony
From: Daming
Subject: Living with family
Hi Tony,
How's everything going I'm glad that we both have a wonderful family time these days. Deeply touched by their love, I try to do something to show my love too. As you know, I'm a lazy boy. But now things change a lot. I often help Mom with housework, such as sweeping, washing the dishes and so on. Can you believe I can cook now My parents are proud to see I'm growing up.
As for the way to spend time with the family, I think the best way is to do something alike. Yesterday, Dad and I enjoyed a wonderful film together, and then we shared our feelings. Why don't you watch a film with your family You can also play sports with them. Playing sports is also good for our bodies.
Hope this helps!
Yours,
Daming