四川省金堂县2016高考英语短文改错二轮训练（2）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中
共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I still remember my middle school life in Zhengzhou. I was then in school for student from Tibet. As we were all left home of an early age, we met lots of problems in our daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us. However, we seldom felt lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will play basketball on the playground, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. It has been three years when we graduated, but those memories are as sweet as ever before.
【参考答案】4.
I still remember my middle school life in Zhengzhou. I was then in ∧ school for
a/the student from Tibet. As we were all left home of an early age, we met lots of problems in our
students at/from
daily life. We had to do the washing, cleaning and shopping by us . However, we seldom felt
ourselves
lonely or helplessly. We enjoyed our happy life. At weekends, we will play basketball on the
helpless would/could
playground, swimming in the pool or go for a picnic in the park. We were living in a big
swim
family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters. It has been three years when we
treated since
graduated,but those memories are as sweet as ever before.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I got up early this morning, so I went to school without breakfast. I walked in so a hurry that I stepped on a banana peel dropped by an old man walk in front of me. As the result, I slipped and fell in my back. I am so angry that I wanted to blame the old man, so I controlled myself at last. I picked out the banana peel, putting it into the dustbin and ran to school. The class had begun, but I was very happy because I did that what I should do to protect our environment.
【参考答案】5.
I got up early this morning, so I went to school without breakfast. I walked in so a hurry that I
late such
stepped on a banana peel dropped by an old man walk in front of me. As the result, I slipped and
walking a
fell in my back. I am so angry that I wanted to blame the old man, so I controlled myself at last. I
on was but
picked out the banana peel, putting it into the dustbin and ran to school. The class had begun, but I
up put
was very happy because I did that what I should do to protect our environment.
短文改错:（满分10分）
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。?
增加： 在缺词处加上一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。?
删除： 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。?
修改： 在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。?
注意： 1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday, I saw the old lady fall down when I was hurrying to school. I was about to
help her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me, saying that I might be accused of knocking
her down. Heard his words, I began to hesitate and slow down my steps. At the same time,
another student, that saw everything, went up to help. The old lady said nothing but lots
of thank to the good boy. I felt ashamed.
As is known to all, help others is forever a good virtue. Even though some old people are
becoming immorally, we can’t let it to disappear. I have made my mind that I will reach out
my hand without hesitation next time.
【参考答案】6.
Yesterday, I saw the old lady fall down when I was hurrying to school. I was about to
an
help her up while suddenly a passer-by stop me, saying that I might be accused of knocking
when stopped
her down. Heard his words, I began to hesitate and slow down my steps. At the same time,
Hearing
another student, that saw everything, went up to help. The old lady said nothing but lots
who
of thank to the good boy. I felt ashamed.
thanks
As is known to all, help others is forever a good virtue. Even though some old people are
helping
becoming immorally, we can’t let it to disappear. I have made ∧my mind that I will reach out
immoral 去掉to up
my hand without hesitation next time.
短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
短文改错参考答案(共10小题；每小题l分，满分l0分)
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra
happen 去掉to
crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop,
when and
but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t
his
move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police
what
reached. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and
arrived sent policemen
wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
加he或去掉was
第一节：短文改错（共10小题，每小題1分，满分10分）
When my twenty birthday came, I was not at home. 76.________
In order to celebrate such important day with my 77_________
Parents, I wrote him a letter, in which I thanked them 78_________
For having raised me for twenty years, and expressed 79_________
my love to them. Later mother talked me when they 80_________
read the letter, tears were filled her eyes. But father 81________
appeared much cool. After that. he read it alone carefully, 82________
and then he put it up into a desk drawer. I can imagine the 83________
scene clear because I know father. Being a man with few 84________
word, he prefers to show his love for me in a silent way. 85________
参考答案
76.twenty-twentieth 77.such 后加an
78.him-them 79.正确
80.talked-told 81.去掉were
82.去掉much或改为very 83.up-wawy
84.clear-clearly 85.word-words
(成都检测)
My father and I am taking a camping trip in July1.________
and August. We will travel for about two months but2.________
will tour the United States and parts of the Canada. We3.________
have decided to camp because it does not spend as much4.________
as vacationing in hotels, but we had to plan carefully. I5.________
think the car what we are going to drive is very small, so6.________
we decide to take only one small suitcase for both of them7.________
and as few camping things as possibly. We will take some8.________
medicine with us prevent insects from hurting us, and also9.________
some food for picnics. I'm sure that we will have fun.10.________
答案与解析：
1．am→are 本句的主句是my father and I，所以谓语动词用复数形式。
2．but→and 此处表示的是顺承关系，而不是转折关系。
3．删去第二个the 一般情况下，表示国家的单个词语前不加冠词。
4．spend→cost 本句的主语不是人，而是it，所以用cost。
5．had→have 短文全篇叙述的都是现在和将来的情况。
6．what→that/which或删去what “that/which we are going to drive”是定语从句，修饰先行词the car，关系代词在从句中作宾语，可以省略。
7．them→us 根据文章的开头部分可知这里指的是作者本人和作者的父亲，因此应用us。
8．possibly→possible as...as possible表示“尽可能……”。
9．prevent前加to 此处是不定式短语作目的状语。
10．√四川省金堂县2016高考英语短文改错二轮训练（5）
短文改错（共10小题：每小扼l分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每旬中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、别除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个润字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线．并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均限一词．
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
A friend of mine was taking an English lesson to class of foreign adult
students. After placing quite a number of everyday objects. on a table, and he asked
them to give her the ruler, the book and”on. The class went very smooth and the
students seemed interested in the work unless my friend tuned to an Italian student
and said, "Give me the keys." The Italian looked surprising end somewhat at. a loss.
Swing this, my friend thinks that the Italian hadn't heard him clearly. However, he
repeated, "Give me the keys." The Italian then kissed him on both cheek.
【参考答案】4.
A friend of mine was taking an English lesson to ∧ class of foreign adult
giving a
students. After placing quite a number of everyday objects on a table, and he asked
them to give her the ruler, the book and so on. The class went very smooth and the
him smoothly
students seemed interested in the work unless my friend turned to an Italian student
until
and said, “Give me the keys.” The Italian looked surprising and somewhat at a loss.
surprised
Seeing this, my friend thinks that the Italian hadn’t heard him clearly. However, he
thought Therefore
repeated, “Give me the keys.” The Italian then kissed him on both cheek.
cheeks
短文改错 (共10分,每小题1分,满分10分)
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.
【参考答案】5、
短文改错（共10小题：第小题1分，满分10分）
（注意：在试卷上作答无效）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的第一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏写符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Many year ago a poor man grew an orange tree. 76. _______
On the tree there were many fine oranges. Some day he found 77. _______
one of them was so big as a football . He took it 78. _______
to the king . The king was so happy that he gave the 79. _______
poor man lots money. When a rich man heard of it , 80. _______
he said for himself ,"I'll take my gold cup to the king 81. _______
and he will give me much money . The next day the king receive 82. _______
from the cup . The king was very fond of the cup and he told 83. _______
the rich man, “I have an orange . It is beautiful than the cup, 84. _______
so I have decided to give it to you as the reward instead money”. 85. _______
【参考答案】6.
76. year→years 77. Some →One 78. so→as
79. 正确 80. lots→lots of
81. for→to 82. receive→received 83.from去掉
84. beautiful→more beautiful 85. instead→instead of
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿）。并在其下面写出修改后的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词后划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
I’m a middle school student name Li Ming. I’m writing to tell you something. Recently I
noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school. I went there too in
the other day. I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or
chat. Some students were even talking about love affairs online.
On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful informations.
The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games. The Internet
is good if we make good use of it. Otherwise, it will give us great harm. So the local
government should take measure to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively.
参考答案
I’m a middle school student name Li Ming. I’m writing to tell you something.
1．named
Recently I noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our
school. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students
2,去掉in 3.surprised
playing computer games, watching films or chat. Some students were even
4．chatting
talking about love affairs online.
5.in
On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful
5.in 6.where
informations. The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than
7 information
place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of it. Otherwise, it
8 a place
will give us great harm. So the local government should take measure to make
9．do 10 measures
sure that students use cyber cafes positively.
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
(2012·唐山三模）
Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some people liked to buy goods online. And I don’t like it, because online shopping is less reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to false information online. Secondly, consumers can’t feel the items that is usually presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at our own expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery.
In word, online shopping isn’t reliable at all.
答案解析******短文改错
Online shopping is increasing popular among people in recent years. Some
increasingly
people liked to buy goods online. And I don’t like it, because online shopping is less
like But
reliable than the traditional sale. Firstly, some dishonest merchant offer consumers to
merchants
false information online. Secondly, consumers can’t feel the items that is usually
are
presented by means of pictures. This means the items delivering may differ from
delivered
which consumers expect. As a result, they may risk returning the items at our own
what their
expense. Thirdly, the items might be damaged during delivery.
In ∧ word, online shopping isn’t reliable at all.
a
短文改错 (共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I was born in a farmer family in Suizhong county, Liaoning
Province in June, in 1965． When I was a child, I dreamed of flying
in the sky． I joined the army in June, 1983． In 1992, I was sent to
the air force base． In August, 1996, I was one of the first 14 members
from 1,500 pilots through the physical examination． I worked hardly,
because I was among the first astronauts of our country in 1998 .
I was chosen one of the first man space aircraft astronauts later．
On Oct．15, 2003, I successfully fly to space, circled
around the earth about 14 circle and then returned ． I was honored
to have given the chance to be the first Chinese to travel in space．
参考答案短文改错
1．farmer改为farmer,s
2． 去掉1965前面的in
3． an air force base。
4． 把hardly改为hard
5．把because改为so
6．在chosen后加as
7． manned
8． flew
9． 把circle改为circles
10． 在have后面加been四川省金堂县2016高考英语短文改错二轮训练（1）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处叫个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Internet shopping is new way of shopping. It offers shoppers a number of benefits . The most importantly advantage is convenience. You can shop as you like as the on-line shops are open 24 hours a day, but you do not have to queue with other shopper. Secondly, it is easy to find what you were looking for on the internet. Finally, it is often cheap to buy goods through the internet than in stores .
There are disadvantages too. The main disadvantage is that you can’t actually see the products what you are buying or check their quality. Also quite a little people will miss the opportunity to talk about friends while shopping . Besides, some people are worried about paying for goods use credit cards.
【参考答案】4.
1. a 2.important 3.and
4.shoppers 5.are
6.cheaper 7. that/ 去what 8. few
9.With/to 10.using
短文改错 （共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
My school life is very interesting but meaningful. I usually get up at a quarter past six. After I wash his face, I read English for about half an hour. I think what it is a good habit. I always go to school by bike, to eat lunch at school and have a short sleep in the classroom. On the afternoon school is over at 5 o’clock. After school, we often play basketball or do some other sport on the playground happy. I went home at about five forty. Have had supper, I watch TV for while, and then I do my homework. I go to bed at about 9:30.
【参考答案】5.
My school life is very interesting but meaningful. I usually get up at a quarter
and
past six. After I wash his face, I read English for about half an hour. I think what it is a
my that或删去what
good habit. I always go to school by bike, to eat lunch at school and have a short sleep in the classroom. On the afternoon school is over at 5 o’clock. After school, we often
In
play basketball or do some other sport on the playground happy. I went home at about sports happily go
five forty. Have had supper, I watch TV for ∧while, and then I do my homework. I Having a
go to bed at about 9:30.
短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1. 5分, 满分15分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改: 在错的词下画一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A friend of mine was taking an English lesson to class of foreign adult students.
After placing quite a number of everyday objects on a table, and he asked them to
give her the ruler, the book and so on. The class went very smooth and the students
seemed interested in the work unless my friend turned to an Italian student and
said, “Give me the keys. ”The Italian looked surprising and somewhat at a loss.
Seeing this, my friend thinks that the Italian hadn’t heard him clearly. However,
he repeated, “Give me the keys. ”The Italian then kissed him on both cheek.
【参考答案】6.
A friend of mine was taking an English lesson to ∧ class of foreign adult
giving a
students. After placing quite a number of everyday objects on a table, and he asked them
and
to give her the ruler, the book and so on. The class went very smooth and the
him smoothly
students seemed interested in the work unless my friend turned to an Italian student
until
and said, “Give me the keys. ”The Italian looked surprising and somewhat at a loss.
surprised
Seeing this, my friend thinks that the Italian hadn’t heard him clearly. However , he
thought therefore
repeated, “Give me the keys. ”The Italian then kissed him on both cheek .
cheeks
1.（陕西卷）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（___），并在该词下面写出修改的词。
注意:1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favourite actor.
making actors
I didn’t have my camera
With me at that time, but I rushed back home to get ∧. Unfortunately,
So/and it
by the time I got back, they have finished the scene and actor couldn’t
had
be seen everywhere. I was really disappointing and about to leave when
anywhere disappointed
he walked out ∧ a building. He was right there in front of me! I
of
couldn’t believe my luck-not only did I had my photo taken wuth him, but
have
he signed his name on my shirt!
（201***·四川卷）短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个沟（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词。并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改
Tom was having much troubles getting up in the 66.
Morning and was always late with work.. His boss wanted to 67.
fire him if he didn’t start coming on time,but he went to 68.
the doctor for a help. The doctor gave him some 69.
medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. 70.
The man did is told and slept.leally will,wake up before 71.
the alam had even gone off.He had time for a properly 72.
breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.”Boss,”he 73.
said ,”that medicine really works!””I’m pleasing to hear 74.
it ,”said his boss,”but where were you yesterday ”
【答案】
66、改troubles为trouble 67、改with 为for 68、改but 为so
69、去a 70、改them 为it 71、改wake为waking
72、改properly为proper 73、reach前加to 74、改pleasing为pleased
75、√
第***套
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如有错误（每行只有
一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜
线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：每行都有一个错误。
I was a honest child indeed．I didn’t dare to tell lies 76．
because of my eyes often let the secret out ．I remembered 77．
telling a lie to my parents, and I could hard fix my eyes on 78．
my father’s face, let alone my mother eyes．I glanced 79．
here and there, up or down, nervously． 80．
However, after I came to Beijing, I no longer have to 81．
worry my eyes because everything I wanted to say 82．
was sent by letter．I found myself often tell small lies．I 83．
wrote, “I’m fine in Beijing．I enjoy the food selling at the 84．
university．And at the weekends, I often buy fried chickens 85．
or pork to eat．”
参考答案
短改:
76．a改为an 77．删去of 78．hard 改为hardly 79．mother 改为mother’s 80．or改为and 81．have改为had 82．my前加about 83．tell改为telling 84．selling改为sold 85．chickens改为chicken
（201***·浙江卷）短文改错（共10题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请再有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
例如：
It was very nice to get your invitation to spend∧weekend with you. Luckily
the
I was completely tree then, so I'll say” yes". I'll arrive in Bristol at around 8:00 p. m.
am
in Friday evening.
on
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys
than I did. There was one on particular I'd always wanted. I put into my pocket when he
wasn't looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with
the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know, I'd done something wrong. Late
on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave
It back. She knows what had happened,but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.四川省金堂县2016高考英语短文改错二轮训练（3）
短文改错
注意事项：
1．请直接用0.5毫米黑色墨水签字笔在答题卡上各题的答题区域内作答。
2．答卷前将密封线内的项目填写清楚，在试题卷上作答无效。
第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误.对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
I’d love to tell you something about my vacation. I’ve been 76．
looking forward to visit the East Lake for a long time, 77．
Yesterday, with my friends, I paid a visit it. We set off at 78．
7:00 am by bus. It is 8 kilometers far away from our city, and 79．
when we got there, it was 7:20 am. There we have a wonderful 80．
time. We spent the whole morning boating sand fished on the lake. 81．
Then we had a picnic by the lake. On the afternoon, we climbed 82．
the Snake Island, picking the beautiful flowers and took a lot of pictures. 83．
Time passed very quick. Before we knew it, it was already 16:00, 84．
but we had to go back. How about your vacation Please write to 85．
me as soon as possible.
【参考答案】4、
短文改错(共10小題;每小題1分,满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词
注意：
1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分
Last Saturday, our school had organized an activity to visit the children at a local orphanage (孤儿院）.As one of the volunteer, I took part in it. We took many books as well many kinds of school supplies and toys for the children. 1Hiey were delighted to receive the gifts. In the morning, we played some games with them when we used to play in our childhood. Then we cooked and had a lunch there. In the afternoon, we gave them some performances. Before leaving the orphanage，we had photos take with them and gave them our contact details so that they could keep in touch with one another. Each of us had a happily time. We gave the children our care and help，but in return，they gave us their smiles and love.
【参考答案】5.
Last Saturday, our school had organized an activity to visit the children at a local orphanage
(孤儿院). As one of the volunteer, I took part in it. We took many books as well ∧ many kinds
volunteers as
of school supplies and toys for the children. They were delighted to receive the gifts. In the
to
morning, we played some games with them when we used to play in our childhood. Then we
that / which（或when）
cooked and had a lunch there. In the afternoon, we gave them some performances. Before leaving
the orphanage, we had photos take with them and gave them our contact details so that they could
taken we
keep in touch with one another. Each of us had a happily time. We gave the children our care and
happy
help, but in return, they gave us their smiles and love.
and
短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。
In the winter vacation, I paid a visit a mountain village in a suburb of Handan. No sooner had I got off the bus when I was greatly surprising to see all the changes. It was far better than I had been expected. Now every family can drink cleanly running water. The villagers needn’t carry water himself any more. Firewood is no longer used for cooking. Marsh gas, a new cheap clean energy, make it very convenient to cook and light. As all the families have color TV set, they can enjoy plays at home. It impressed me most was that the best building in a village was the school. I hope the mountain village will become better and better.
【参考答案】6.
In the winter vacation, I paid a visit∧a mountain village in a suburb of Handan. No sooner
to
had I got off the bus when I was greatly surprising to see all the changes. It was far better than I
than surprised
had been expected. Now every family can drink cleanly running water. The villagers needn’t carry
clean
water himself any more. Firewood is no longer used for cooking. Marsh gas, a new cheap clean
themselves
energy, make it very convenient to cook and light. As all the families have color TV set, they can
makes sets
enjoy plays at home. It impressed me most was that the best building in a village was the school. I
what the
hope the mountain village will become better and better.
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿）。并在其下面写出修改后的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。
修改：在错的词后划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词;
2．只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不记分。
I’m a middle school student name Li Ming. I’m writing to tell you something. Recently I
noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our school. I went there too in
the other day. I was surprising to see many students playing computer games, watching films or
chat. Some students were even talking about love affairs online.
On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful informations.
The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than place for games. The Internet
is good if we make good use of it. Otherwise, it will give us great harm. So the local
government should take measure to make sure that students use cyber cafes positively.
参考答案
I’m a middle school student name Li Ming. I’m writing to tell you something.
1．named
Recently I noticed many of my classmates often go to the cyber cafe near our
school. I went there too in the other day. I was surprising to see many students
2,去掉in 3.surprised
playing computer games, watching films or chat. Some students were even
4．chatting
talking about love affairs online.
5.in
On my opinion, cyber cafes should be a place which we can find much useful
5.in 6.where
informations. The Internet should be a window to the outside world rather than
7 information
place for games. The Internet is good if we make good use of it. Otherwise, it
8 a place
will give us great harm. So the local government should take measure to make
9．do 10 measures
sure that students use cyber cafes positively.
(绵阳诊断)
Tom is a little boy, but he is only seven years old. One day he1.________
went to the cinema. It was the first time for him to do that. He2.________
bought a ticket and then went out. But after two or three minutes3.________
he came out and bought the second ticket and went in again. After a4.________
few minutes he comes out again and bought a third ticket. Two5.________
or three minutes later he came out and asked another ticket.6.________
Then the girl in the ticket office who asked him, “Why do you7.________
buy so many ticket How many friends do you meet？” Tom8.________
answered，” No, I have not friends here. But a big boy always 9.________
stops me at the door and tear my ticket to pieces.”10.________
答案与解析：
1．but改为and 依据语境，这里前后句之间是并列关系而不是转折关系。
2．√
3．out改为in 依据语境，男孩买票走进电影院。
4．the改为a 下文bought a third ticket有暗示。序数词前用不定冠词，表示“再一，又一”。
5．comes改为came 结合行文逻辑，这里应用一般过去时。男孩进去又出来了。
6．asked后加for ask for sth.表示“要求得到……”。
7．去掉who 这里不是定语从句，假如是定语从句，原句缺少主句。
8．ticket改为tickets so many后接复数名词。
9．not改为no not是副词，不能修饰名词，应改为no。
10．tear改为tears 这里stop和tear是并列谓语动词，要用第三人称单数的一般现在时。
第一节 短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
We live on the earth, but we are not alone in the world.
Everyone know we should keep the balance of nature, 76. ____________
or we don’t always do as we say . 77. ____________
A species can become endangered with different reasons. 78. ____________
But the very important one is their living places are ruined. We 79. ____________
cut down trees without plant new ones, and we pollute the place 80. ____________
where animal live. Because of this, they have no home and 81. ____________
they are going to be die out. 82. ____________
Other reason is money. Many tigers are killed by those 83. ____________
who want to sell our fur and use their bones for medicine. 84. ____________
We should do everything which can be done to change the 85. ____________
situation, or wild animals can only exist in our memories.
第一节 短文改错(共10小题; 每小题1分, 满分10分)
We live on the earth, but we are not alone in the world.
Everyone know we should keep the balance of nature, 76. knows
or we don’t always do as we say . 77. but
A species can become endangered with different reasons. 78. for
But the very important one is∧ their living places are ruined. We 79. that
cut down trees without plant new ones, and we pollute the place 80. planting
where animal live. Because of this, they have no home and 81. animals
they are going to be die out. 82. be
Other reason is money. Many tigers are killed by those 83. Another
who want to sell our fur and use their bones for medicine. 84. their
We should do everything which can be done to change the 85. that
situation, or wild animals can only exist in our memories.四川省金堂县2016高考英语短文改错二轮训练（6）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（＾），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
Dear Peter,
Thanks very much for invite me to your birthday 76.
party on Sunday. I’d like very much come but 77.
I had an examination on Monday morning. It is 78.
a very important exam but I can’t afford to 79.
fail it. I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading 80.
and prepare for it. So I’m really sorry that 81.
I won’t be able to come in this time. I hope you 82.
can understand. I’ll take this chance to wishing 83.
you a wonderful time in your birthday. Happy 84.
birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day! 85.
Yours,
Li Ming
【参考答案】4、
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
In my hometown there used to a temple with a 76.
history of more than four hundred years. It lies in a 77.
valley with green hills around it. It was such beautiful 78.
and famous that many tourists came visit it every day. 79.
They took photo; they wrote down their names on 80.
the walls; they were brought food and drink and left rubbish 81.
everywhere. One day some tourists did a fire to cook 82.
food near the temple. All of sudden, a strong wind 83.
blew. The wooden temple caught fire. Soon the wholly 84.
temple was burned out and only a little walls remained. 85.
The beautiful temple disappeared.
【参考答案】5.
76．to后加 be 77．lies→lay 78．such→so
79．came后加to 80．photo→photos
81．去掉were 82．did→made 83．of后加a
84．wholly→whole 85．little→few
短文改错。
To everyone in the world, money was a sensitive topic. 76.
Not one can live without money in modern society. People 77.
has different opinions on it. Some people think one should 78.
live to make money, when others make money to live. 79.
In my opinion, the latter should reasonable. 80.
We should not be the slave of money. Although money 81.
means a lot in our life, but it doesnot mean everything. 82.
We can't exchange it for friendship or love. Money indeed can 83.
made a person enjoy his life for a while but not all his life. 84.
On a word, money is something but not everything. 85.
(三)
76．was → is 77.Not → No
78. has → have 79. when → while
80. should∧→ be 81.slave → slaves
82. 去掉 but 83. √
84. made→ make 85.On → In
第一节：短文改错(共10小题)
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有十处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个词。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改十处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop, but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
参考答案、、 短文改错(共10小题)
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra
happen 去掉to
crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl but tried to stop,
when and
but he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was bad hurt and couldn’t
his badly
move. The young man didn’t know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police
what
arrived. They send her to the nearest hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and
sent policemen
wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.
加he或去掉was
短文改错。
Coffee houses can be seen anywhere in America. 76.
People from European brought the idea with them. Soon 77.
coffee became the leading drink. Today people in United 78.
States drink more coffee than people in any country. 79.
People who drink coffee at breakfast, at lunch, and 80.
between meals. They drink them at work and at home. 81.
Coffee is drunk by people around the world. Some 82.
people like coffee what is very black and very strong. 83.
Another people like coffee with cream or sugar, or, cream 84.
and sugar with it. Now coffee has become a world-wide drink. 85.
76．anywhere → everywhere 77.European → Europe
78. in ∧→ the
79. any ∧→ other 80. 去掉who 81.them → it
82. √
83.what → that/which 84. Another → Other
85.with → in
【重庆南开中学高】
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
请对标有题号的每一行作出判断，每一行只有一个错误，按下列情况改下。
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Dear Mrs. Smith,
I appreciate your help very well. On the first day of 76．
the camp, you came up to myself while I was sitting alone. 77．
After that, you always gave me specially attention and 78．
inspired me to join in activity. As a result, I gradually 79．
got to know other campers. Because the help you gave me 80．
that summer, my .life changed. I gain so much confidence that 81．
I went back to school as new person. My grades improved. I 82．
became active but made new friends. Yesterday, I got a letter 83．
that was said I was admitted to a college. I am proud of it. I just 84．
want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person. 85．
Yours
Bob
改错
76．well改为much 77．myself改为me 78．specially改为special
79．activity改为activities/在activity前面加the
80．because的后面加of
81．gain改为gained 82．new前面加a
83．but改为and 84．去掉was 85．becoming改为become
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear John,
I am extremely sorry to tell you that I am unable to go to your party on this Sunday. It is very kind for you to invite me to your house and I really look forward to going to your party and share your happy experience abroad. Many to my regret, I will be absent from your party owing to the fact that the College Entrance Exam is just around corner, for which I am now really busy preparing.
What’s more, I have caught a bad cold lately and I was really not myself.
Anyway, we will have many more chances to get together. Shall we make it after the Exam
I am true sorry. I hope you will forgive me and receive my sincere apologies. I look forward to your reply.
Yours truly,
Li Hua四川省金堂县2016高考英语短文改错二轮训练（4）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第l1处起）不计分。
【参考答案】4.
Last weekend, my mother and I went to ∧ shoe shop to buy a pair of new
a
shoe for me. When we got there, I noticed a foreign lady talk to a salesgirl. But the
shoes talking
salesgirl didn’t understand that the foreigner was saying. They looked very
what
worrying. So I decided to help them. I went up to the foreign lady and talked to her
worried
by English. I learned that the lady came from Australia and want to buy a pair of
in wanted
running shoes. I told this to the salesgirl. The lady was very much glad when she
took her shoes. All of them expressed their thanks to me. And I felt happily that I
Both happy
could help others.
短文改错（满分15分）
文中共有十处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除，或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^)，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2．只允许修改10处，多者从第11处起不计分。
【参考答案】5.
66-70. accept/take, view, appearance,
defeat, Conclusion.
短文改错 ( 本大题 共 1 题, 共计 10 分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误, 在该行右边横线上画一个钩（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误）， 则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意： 原行没有错的不要改。
We had guests last night who have not stayed 76. __________
in a B&B hotel ago. They did not want breakfast 77. __________
Because that they were going out early in the 78. __________
morning. They came back lately and had some 79. __________
tea. I came into the living room and saw one of 80. __________
them just go through the kitchen door but turn 81. __________
on the light. He was looking for a glass the 82. __________
cupboard. He had no ideas that the kitchen was 83. __________
not for guests. I just smiled to me and thought, 84. __________
“What can I do We are guests after all.” 85. __________
【参考答案】6.
76. have→had 77. ago→before 78. 去掉that
79. lately→late 80. √
81. but→and 82. 在glass后加in 83. ideas→idea
84. me→myself 85. We→They
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右
边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：?
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。?
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。?
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。?
注意：原行没有错的不要改。?
A foreign university exhibition fair held at Zhijiang
1._____
Hotel on March 18.Over 50 universities from 10 countries
2._____
open their doors to students who eager to go abroad to
3._____
continuing their further study. More and more middle school
4._____
students have joined in the tide of going abroad. The
5._____
lower-aged group have become the new highlight of this tide.
6._____
And whether early entry into international education means
7._____
better education nor it pushes the young to leave their family
8._____
too early to discipline himself is discussed a lot by both
9._____
parents and educators. How do you think of this tide of
10._____
going abroad
参考答案
1. exhibition是held的承受者,应该用被动语态,因此须在之前加was。
2. 本题是正确的。
3. be eager to do sth.为固定搭配,意为“渴望做某事”．故在eager之前加are。
4. to continue their further study是动词不定式做目的状语，之后应用动词原型，故
将continuing改成continue。
5. join in 通常用来表示加入正在进行的某一项活动， 而join意指加入到某一行列中来
，故去掉in。
6. group为单数名词，故把have改成has。
7. 根据上下文的逻辑意义判断，此处是转折关系而非并列关系，故把and改成but。
8. whether…or为固定搭配，故把nor改成or。
9. 前文the young是指“年轻人们”，是复数，故把himself改成themselves。
10. 问你觉得什么怎么样应用what do you think of，而不用 how．故把how改成what。
短文改错
Born in Oct. 28, 1955, Bill Gates grew up in Seattle with his two sisters. Bill Gates attended public elementary school or the private Lakeside School, there he discovered his interest in software and begin programming computers at age 13. In 1973, Gates entered into Harvard University as a freshman. In her junior year, Gates left Harvard to devote himself to develop Microsoft, guiding by a belief that the computer would be a tool of great valuable on every office desktop. He proved to be success in the IT field.
参考答案：
Born in Oct. 28, 1955, Bill Gates grew up in Seattle with his two sisters. Bill Gates attended public
on
elementary school or the private Lakeside School, there he discovered his interest in software and begin
and where began
programming computers at age 13. In 1973, Gates entered into Harvard University as a freshman. In her junior
his
year, Gates left Harvard to devote himself to develop Microsoft, guiding by a belief that the computer would
developing guided
be a tool of great valuable on every office desktop. He proved to be ∧success in the IT field.
value a
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第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．对标题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边的横线上划（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（︿），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
Time is valuable but limit. There’s a famous saying,
“Time is money”,this shows the importance of time. When 76．
time has gone, it will never return back. It is a pity 77．
when many people make poor u se of time. They spend their 78．
precious time oversleeping, drinking and traveling. We don’t 79．
realized wasting time equal to wasting part of their life. 80．
They always regret having made a little achievement so far. 81．
Therefore, we should form the habit of value time. Do not 82．
put off what can be done today until tomorrow. Lazy 83．
will not only bring us failure, but also lead us on the road 84．
of poverty and even death. 85．
Many of Marcos’s stories were about China and it’s people．He told stories about the towns, cities and populations in greatly detail. He describes the amazing things what he saw in China such as paper money and black stone that burned (coal). For very little contact between China and the West, it is not surprised that people were in a rich powerful place like Venice could not believe his stories, nor in the idea of huge, rich states inhabit by million of people. There could surely be not comparison with Venice.
