山东郓城县2016高考英语(二轮)短文改错精练（5）
短文改错
Not all people like to work and everyone likes to play. All over 76. _______
the world men and woman , boys and girls enjoy sports . Since 77. _______
long ago , many adults and children called their friends together 78. _______
to spend hours , even days play games . One of the reasons why people 79. _______
like to play is that sports help them to live happily . In other words, 80. _______
they help to keep people strong and feel good . When people are 81. _______
playing games, they move a lot. That is how sports are good activities 82. _______
for their health .Having fun with their friends make them happy. 83. _______
Many people enjoy sports by watching the others play. In American 84. _______
big cities, thousands sell tickets to watch football or basketball games. 85. _______
【参考答案】
76. and －but 77. woman－women 78. called前加had
79. play- playing 80． 正确
81. feel-feeling 82. how-why
83. make-makes 84.去掉the 85. sell-buy
短文改错(10分)
As the College Entrance Examination is drawing nearby, some students would rather expect good luck than to make every effort to study. They think success results good luck. Whether they can be admitted to key universities depend on luck. However, others insist that diligence is a mother of success. Only by working hard can they achieve what they want. Since they fail sometimes, they don’t give up, for they believe that success lies in our own hands. As for me, I’m in favor of the latter opinion. Luck doesn’t come alone. It goes hand by hand with hard working. Sometimes, some students are lucky enough to succeed, but such luck won’t last long because it is not basing on their own abilities.
【参考答案】5、
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。
This morning I was riding a bicycle on my way to school while suddenly a shower of heavy rain began to pour down. The wind is blowing hard and the road became very slippery. Just then I saw an elderly woman walking with difficult in the street. She was on her way back to home after shopping, carried a large basket full of vegetables. Suddenly she fell down in the mud. And she was very worn out that she couldn’t get up. Seeing this, I immediate rode over to her and tried my best to support her up. Then I helped picking up the vegetables, and put them into her baskets. After that, I took off my raincoat, put on her and took her home.
【参考答案】6、
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误。每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分.
To celebrate the end of our exams, my friends and I went to fast-food restaurant for some hamburgers and coca cola．When our food come．I started walking towards a table．Fortunately, I fell over and my dish slipped with my hands and the food landed on a man’s white shirt．
I was frightened and unsure how to do next, but just then all I heard was “It’s OK” after the man disappeared into the restroom．A few minute later, the man out of the restroom and my heart beat it fast．I thought he was going to ask for his parents’ telephone number．Instead, he simply smiled at me, handed me some money and said．“Buy yourself some new hamburgers”, Then he walked away without even finish his food．
【参考答案】4.
To celebrate the end of our exams, my friends and I went to(此处加a)fast-food restaurant for some hamburgers and coca cola．When our food come(came)．I started walking towards a table．Fortunately(Unfortunately), I fell over and my dish slipped with (off 或from) my hands and the food landed on a man’s white shirt．
I was frightened and unsure how (what)to do next, but just then all I heard was “It’s OK” after (before)the man disappeared into the restroom．A few minute (minutes)later, the man out of the restroom and my heart beat it (去掉it)fast．I thought he was going to ask for his (my) parents’ telephone number．Instead, he simply smiled at me, handed me some money and said．“Buy yourself some new hamburgers”, Then he walked away without even finish (finishing)his food．
短文改错
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear editor,
Next year I will go to university and becoming a college student, and I have never been away from my parents. I don’t know how to adapt myself to my university life. I hear many freshmen are at loss what to do when we are at university. They can’t take care of themselves in their everyday life, feel lonely and homesick. Clothes, money or mobile phone are sometimes gone. And because of different climates and the food, they often feel sick. Some even rented rooms outside the campus, but I don’t think it’s so safely. Could you tell me how to deal with these problems so that I will be able to get used the university life in the future
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【参考答案】5.
1. becoming改为become
2. and改为but
3. at后加a
4. we改为they
5. feel改为feeling或feel前加and
6. phone改为phones
7. 去掉the
8. rented改为rent
9. safely改为safe
10. used后加to
短文改错
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下面划一横线，并在该词的下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从11处起)不计分。
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!
【参考答案】6.
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old
deeply
man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and
knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people
worse directions/all 改any
around rush to pick the money up when the old man stood there, not know what to do.
rushed knowing
Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked∧. The old man counted the
up
money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of
missing /lost
nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!
our that山东郓城县2016高考英语(二轮)短文改错精练（3）
.短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
Dear Robert,
Thank for your letter of May 12th . How glad I was when I get it. I’d be very happy to be your pen friends. Now allow me introduce myself to you. I’m a boy student aged seventeen, study in Senior Three of Binhai High School. I’m a monitor of my class. I am about to take the National Matriculation Entrance Examination after twenty days, that is, between June 7 and 8. You know. I want very much to be a doctor working for poor peasants that I try to make fully use of every hour and study far into the night every day.
Best wishes！
Yours truly,
Bob
【参考答案】2.
Dear Robert,
Thank（改为Thanks 或for 前加you） for your letter of May 12th . How glad I was when I get （改为got）it. I’d be very happy to be your pen friends (改为friend) .Now allow (加to) me introduce myself to you. I’m a boy student aged seventeen, study （改为studying） in Senior Three of Binhai High School. I’m a （去掉a） monitor of my class. I am about （去掉about）to take the National Matriculation Entrance Examination after （改为in） twenty days, that is, between June 7 and 8. You know. I want very （改为so）much to be a doctor working for poor peasants that I try to make fully（改为full） use of every hour and study far into the night every day.
Best wishes！
Yours truly,
Bob
.短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Sometimes in February, my teacher told us about the city speech contest, its topic
was “People who have overcome difficulties in their lives”. I thought of my grandma
would be my perfect topic. Then I carefully prepared for contest. A couple of weeks
later, after the first round I was choosing to be one of the seven finalists! The final was
held soon. I was the sixth to present the speech. How a relief when I finished it ! After
the last person finished, the judge made their final decisions and announced that I have
won first prize. The audience were going wildly clapping and cheering ! I was extremely
happy. It was such exciting a moment that I will always remember.
【参考答案】3、
短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
As is known by all，the Internet is playing a more and more important part on our daily life．On the Internet，we can not only read news at home or abroad but also get much information as possible．For an example，we often send e-mails and make telephone call to our families and friends．What’s more，they can go to school on the Internet，read different kinds of books and even teaches ourselves English．We can also listen to music，watching sports and play computer games．We can even do shopping without left our houses．
【参考答案】4、
1.短文改错
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在此处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出修改的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从十一处起）不计分。
Ten years ago, I had worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and could see nothing. Lucky for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late, four police car arrived at the front gate. They searched for the factory carefully, tried to find something unusual. In the end, I am told that the rain had brought about the short circuit, that caused the accident.
【参考答案】1.
Ten years ago, I had(去掉had) worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of（the） factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and(but) could see nothing. Lucky (luckily)for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three or four minutes late(later), four police car(cars) arrived at the front gate. They searched for(去掉for) the factory carefully, tried(trying) to find something unusual. In the end, I am(was) told that the rain had brought about the short circuit, that(which) caused the accident.
短文改错
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分。
In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considers competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if we stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and necessary.
Let's take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student won't make a remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. That's because competition, and rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we don't cooperate with each other, it's impossible for us learn from each other. And that's why most of the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.
To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the relationship between competition and cooperation.
【参考答案】2.
In modern society, competition is everywhere. No wonder a English philosopher considers
an
competition the source of a series of problem such as frustration and anxiety. Therefore, if we
problems However
stress cooperation too much, there would be no progress. In my opinion, all are important and
stressed both
necessary.
Let's take the competition at school for example. Even a gifted student won't make a
remarkable progress if he is in a class without competition. That's because competition, and
or
rather, challenge is a driving force made him go forward. On the other hand, if we don't
making
cooperate with each other, it's impossible for us ∧learn from each other. And that's why most of
to
the great discoveries or inventions in the modern world are the result of cooperation.
To conclude, those who laugh last are the people who can successful cope with the
successfully
relationship between competition and cooperation.
短文改错
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.
【参考答案】3.
I like eating fruit and vegetables what （改为which/that）are of great benefit to our healthy（改为health）. Not only do they prevent us from falling into（去掉into） ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow（改为following） the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going（改为goes）, “ An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike（改为disliking或前加who/that） fruit and vegetables. On（加the） contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were（改为are） crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong（改为 stronger）. In my opinion, we must take action to change them（改为 it）.山东郓城县2016高考英语(二轮)短文改错精练（8）
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Ms Tailor,
Football is my favourite sport. When it is comes to football, I always have much
to saying. Last week, I quarreled with my mother about if I could play football with my
classmates at weekends. My mother holds the view strong that I should devote all my
spare time to study all the subjects well. In my opinion, only when I try my best to
study I be able to be admitted to a university. But I really can’t accept her view. As far
as I’m concerned, playing football not only build up my strength and also makes me
full of energy every day. Could you give me some advices on how to persuade my
mother to allow me to play football at weekends
Yours
Jim
【参考答案】4.
1. 去掉 is 2. saying---say 3. if---whether 4. strong---strongly
5. study---studying 6. my---her 7. I前加will 8. build---builds
9. and---but 10. advices---advice
2015届河南省顶级名校高三入学定位考试
Once, a man got on a bus to New York. Because he did not want to pay, so he hid in the toilet. But a passenger saw her. She tapped the person in front of her on the shoulder and say, “There’s a bum in toilet. Tell the bus driver.” The message was passing on from person to person. But somewhere along the way, it was changed. The bus driver told that there was a bomb in the toilet. He immediate stopped the bus and telephoned the police. When the police came, they told the passengers to get off the bus or stay far away. Then they closed the highway. As a result, a traffic jam of 15 mile long was soon caused. In the help of a dog, the police searched for two hours. Of course they found no tomb.
【答案】【知识点】短文改错记叙文
【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础知识的应用，注意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础知识。
【答案解析】
76.so去掉。 because为从属连词，不与并联连词so连用，故去掉so。
77. her→him 前文讲述的a man，故此处用him。
78. say→said 并列的谓语动词应用同样的时态，此句前谓语动词用过去时，此处也应用过去时，故say改为said。
79. toilet前加the 此处toilet是双方都明白的，故用定冠词the修饰。
80.passing→passed 句中的主语message为pass的动作承受者，故passing改为passed。
81. was told tell后跟双宾的及物动词，tell sb that-clause，tell后无间接宾语，故用被动语态。
82.immediate→immediately。副词修饰动词stopped，故immediate改为immediately。
83.or→and。并列的不定式，表示肯定含义用and连接。
84. mile→miles 15修饰mile，故应用复数形式。
85. in→with。 在某人的帮助之下with one’s help或者with the help of sb。
短文改错
One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as 76．___________
the telephone rang. I went to answer immediately. 77．___________
She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking 78．____________
on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the 79．____________
kitchen. The room full of smoke and beef was badly 80．____________
burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the 81．____________
windows, and then went out of the house. With my 82．____________
surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I 83．____________
was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it 84．____________
was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke. 85．____________
【参考答案】
76．as→ When 77．answer后加it 78．She→ It
79．a→ the 80． room后加was
81．opening→ opened 82．With→ To 83．√
84．去掉about 85．which→ that
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：原行没有错的不要改。
George,
It's been a week after we left your family and we are now 76._______
back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77.______
your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78._______
we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington D.C., 79._______
where we stayed for three days. My brother was so much fond 80._______
of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81．________
another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82.________
work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83．________
was really a nice experience. If you'd like to make trip to 84._______
our city some day, I will be better than happy to be your guide. 85._______
Yours,
Mike
【参考答案】
76.after---since 77.them---us 78.for---with 79.正确
80.去掉much 81.staying---stay 82.day----days 83.fly---flew
84.trip前a 85.better----more
(2013·甘肃省部分学校第二次联考)
I'm a senior student from China, aging seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With greatly interest, I'd like to apply for them. I'm an outgoing girl who like communicating with others. I could speak English well. My written English is excellent, either. I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn from more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make friend. The chance is so precious as I'm really looking forward to your approval.
【参考答案】：
I'm a senior student from China, seventeen. While surfing the Internet, I have found that your organization will hold a summer camp in Singapore. With interest, I'd like to apply for . I'm an outgoing girl who communicating with others. I speak English well. My written English is excellent, . I wish to join in the activities. For one thing, I'm willing to introduce China to other students from all over world; for another, I expect to learn more about other countries. In addition, I'd like to make . The chance is so precious I'm really looking forward to your approval.
短文改错
I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then 76.
in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home 77.
at early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We 78.
had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However , 79.
we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life . 80.
At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool 81.
or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat 82.
each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any 83.
difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out . 84.
It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories 85.
are as sweet as ever before .
【参考答案】
I still remember my middle school life in Tianjin yet . I was then 76. yet
in a school for students from Tibet . As we were all left home 77. were
at ∧early age , we met lots of problems in our daily life . We 78. an
had to do the washing , cleaning and shopping by us . However , 79. ourselves
we seldom felt lonely or helplessly . We enjoyed our happy life . 80. helpless
At weekends , we would play basketball , swimming in the pool 81. swim
or go for a picnic . We were living in a big family . We treat 82. treated
each other as brothers and sisters . If any one of us had any 83. √
difficulty in our life and study , the other would help him out . 84. others
It has been five years when we graduated , but those memories 85. since
are as sweet as ever before .
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上勾一个（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词；并也用斜线划摔。
此行缺一个词j在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的诃。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Mr Hill was a chicken farmer where had hundreds of chickens． 76．
He sold eggs and got quite a lot of money, so he lived in a very 77．
hot part of the country. He found his hen laid hardly any eggs 78．
in summer, and then he decided to put his air conditioner into 79．
his chicken house so that his hens would lay well all through year． 80．
The boss of the air conditioning company came to see her one day． 81．
He thought that he might be able to persuade him to buy for an air 82．
conditioner when he saw．Mr Hill's house, ‘‘Your wife would be more happier 83．
and more comfortable then ,” he said to Mr-Hill. But Mr Hill was not interesting. 84．
“My wife didn't lay eggs,” Mr Hill said． 85.
【参考答案】5.
76. where → who 77.so → but 78.hen → hens 79. √ 80.在year前加the
81.her →him 82.去掉for 83.more → much 或去掉more 84. interesting →interested
85. didn't →doesn’t
文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents their trip to Dalian. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I search the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Dalian, and some hotel informations. In the afternoon, we went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there had a long queue. After the dinner, I packed the things the suitcase, what my grandparents would need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to show them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happily for them and wished them safe journey.
【参考答案】6.
1．在their 后加with， 因为help sb. with sth.为固定用法。
2．search改为过去式，由时间状语“Last weekend”可知，这是描述过去的事情，所以用一般过去时。
3．information为不可数名词，所以不能用复数形式。
4．We改为 I，“我”去买票，应用代词I。
5．had改为was,这里表示的是存在，所以用there be 句型。
6．在the suitcase前加into.
7．引导一个定语从句，代替指物的先行词things，所以用that/which。
8．show改为see, see sb. off意为“为某人送行”，符合语境。
9．Happily改为happy , feel为系动词，后面应该用形容词作表语。
10．在safe journey前加a,具体的一次旅行。山东郓城县2016高考英语(二轮)短文改错精练（2）
短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改正后的词。
注意：每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Dear Tom,
It was greatly to receive your email. Now, I would like to tell you something that takes place in my school yesterday. We held ‘growing-up’ ceremony for our up-coming eighteenth birthdays. First, we both made promises that we would have a sense of duty. Then, we shows our thanks to our parents who have gone through hardships to bring you up and teachers who have educated us patiently. Finally, we put on wonderful performance, singing and dance happily. I think the activity is important too us, which I will remember it for the rest of my life.
Yours,
Li Ming
【参考答案】5.
Dear Tom,
It was greatly to receive your email. Now, I would like to tell you something that takes
great took
place in my school yesterday. We held ∧‘growing-up’ ceremony for our up-coming eighteenth
a
birthdays. First, we both made promises that we would have a sense of duty. Then, we shows our
all showed
thanks to our parents who have gone through hardships to bring you up and teachers who have
us
educated us patiently. Finally, we put on wonderful performance, singing and dance happily. I think
performances dancing
the activity is important too us, which I will remember it for the rest of my life.
to
Yours,
Li Ming
短文改错
文中有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The long-desired winter vacation was arrived in the end. As soon as the bell rang, announced the end of the class, we couldn’t wait to rush out of the classroom. Half an hour late, my good friend Liming and I were on the way back home. Such crowded was the train we took that they had to stand. Thinking of the coming Spring Festival and the two-weeks stay with parents, we both felt exciting. All of a sudden, I saw a man picking an old lady’s pocket. With help of Liming, I caught the thief and force him to give back the purse to the lady. The thief was taken away by the guard. Praised by other passengers, and we felt proud of what we had done．
【参考答案】6.
arrived 前的was去掉;
announced 改成announcing;
late 改成later
Such改成 So
they 改成we;
two-weeks 改成two-week
exciting 改成excited;
help 前加the ;
force改成forced
and去掉
1.短文改错：（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurted my foot．I was in great pain at that moment but I tried to act as if nothing happened until the class was over． Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, but I still didn't tell anyone and even refused the offer of help from my classmates． As the result, the hurt on my foot became worse．Now I know I am wrong．we can tell other our need for help and accept their help. Someday we can help him in return．In this way, we can get along with each other happily and peacefully．
【参考答案】1、
短文改错
One day a child was playing with a vase in great value. He careless put his hand into it. Hard as he tried, he could not pull it out. His father tried his best, too, but their efforts were in a vain. They were thinking of breaking the vase whenever the father said,“now , my son, why have one more try open your hand or hold your fingers straight as you saw I doing, and then pull.”to his surprise, the child says, “I can’t hold my fingers straight like that, because I don’t want to drop my penny.” Thousand of us sometimes are so busy hold on to the world’s worthless penny that we cannot achieve liberation.
【参考答案】4.
1.第一句：in→ of
2.第二句：careless→ carelessly
3.第四句：去掉a
4.第五句：whenever→ when
5.第五句：why与 have之间加 not
6.第六句：or→ and
7. 第六句：I→ me
8.第七句：says→ said
9.第八句：thousand→ thousands
10.第九句：hold→ holding
短文改错
文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（︿），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
John's goal in life was become a successfully doctor. He knew he had to finish high school at first，so he put his heart into his studies——in particular，biology，chemistry，and maths . Because he worked hardly at these subjects，John became good at it. However，John forgot that he needed to master some other subjects beside those he had been chosen. As a result，John fails both English and Latin in the end of the second school year. But he had to review these subjects and he was almost able to graduate like planned. John learned a good lesson.
【参考答案】5.
John's goal in life was∧become a successfully doctor. He knew he had to finish high school
to successful
at first，so he put his heart into his studies——in particular，biology，chemistry，and maths .
Because he worked hardly at these subjects，John became good at it. However，John forgot
hard them
that he needed to master some other subjects beside those he had been chosen. As a result，
besides
John fails both English and Latin in the end of the second school year. But he had to review
failed at So
these subjects and he was almost able to graduate like planned. John learned a good lesson.
as
下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the mouth-to-mouth way.
Within five minute, the old man began to move a little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.
【参考答案】6.
One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike.
when
He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying the old man
him
to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him
but had
where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasn't breathing. Tom asked me to
check
call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old man's breathing, use the
删去 using
mouth-to-mouth way.
Within five minute, the old man began to move a little and doctors also arrived. They said
minutes
that∧we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first
what
aid can make a really difference.
real山东郓城县2016高考英语(二轮)短文改错精练（1）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
This morning on my way to school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man was counting his money in the front of the bank. Suddenly a young man came running and knocked him down. To make things bad, his money was lying in all direction. At once the people around rush to pick the money up, while the old man stood there, not know what to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked. The old man counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, there are now a lot of nice people in your life. It’s true what honesty is more important than money!
【参考答案】2.
1. deep—deeply, 2. the 去掉
3. bad---worse 4. direction---directions或者前面all----any
5. rush----rushed 6. knowing----knowing
7. pick后加up 8. missed---missing / lost
9. your----our 10. what---that
假定在英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文。请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There are different train ticket for people to choose from when uaveledbytrain
They may want to buy a single ticket and a return ticket,A single ticket allows them enjoy more freedom at their destination while a return one not only is cheaper but also save them the trouble of buying the ticket when they decide to return. Some people prefer hard seats to soft one. Young people like to have hard seats because enjoy the company of other passengers is what they need during a journey. Busisessmen would not like to have soft seats. They want to -have a good rest. When they get off the train, they were still energetic and can rapid go on to. do their jobs
【参考答案】3、
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个沟（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（／）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
When you are traveling abroad, it is importance to follow 66_______________
the customs of the country where you are visiting. If you are invited 67_______________
to a home in Britain, here is some advices. As soon as you are invited, 68_______________
it is good manners to refuse or accept an invitation, either by 69_______________
writing or by telephoning. When you go the party, it is polite 70_______________
to arrive at on time. It is good manners to shake hands with your 71_______________
host and any other guest. You can take a present if you like, 72_______________
possible a bottle of wine, a box of chocolates or some flowers. 73_______________
However, it was not bad manners to take nothing. It is not polite 74_______________
to stay too late before the other guests have gone. Of course, 75_______________
it is good manners to write or telephone a day or two later to thank your host.
【参考答案】4.
66．importance—important 67. where改为which/that或去掉
68．advices—advice 69．an—the 70． the 前加to 71．去掉at
72．∨ 73．possible—possibly 74．was—is 75．before—after
短文改错
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉,在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
My swimming experience is extreme interesting. There was 76.
a time that I swam like a rock. This went on until one day 77.
when I was fishing with a friend at pond, 78.
I fall into it. If my friend had not come to my rescue, 79.
I would have died. Ever since then, I have come 80.
to know the important of learning to swim. I haven’t 81.
attended in any training class but learned it on my own. 82.
Now I have no difficulty swim at all. Though my 83.
self-invented styles looks awkward(笨拙的), at least they 84.
can keep us floating. Thinking of this, I am very satisfied. 85.
【参考答案】1.
76. extreme 改为extremely 77. that改为when
78. at之后加a 79. fall改为fell
80. 正确 81. important 改为importance
82. 去掉in 83. swim改为swimming
84. looks改为look 85. us改为me
短文改错
此题要求改正所给句子中的错误，对每一行做出判断，如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（ √ ）；如有错误（每句只有一处错误），请按下列情况改正：
此句多一个词,把多余的词用斜线( ＼ )划掉; 然后在该行右边横线上写出该词,并也用斜线划掉;
此句缺一个词, 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧ ), 然后在句子后面的横线上写出该加的词;
此句错一个词, 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该行句子后面的横线上写出改正后的词.
Dalian, a city by sea, is quite beautiful and the air 76. _____
there is so good to breathe. It is easy to go here by 77. _____
train. Beside, you can take a bus or plane as well. 78. _____
Together with my parents, I went to Dalian for a trip in 79. _____
last month. We visited many interesting place, having 80. _____
lots of fun. Dalian is such wonderful a city that even many 81. _____
foreigners go and work there. I met some foreigners 82. _____
there and talk with them. Most of them said they 83. _____
enjoyed our stay in Dalian. After staying there for ten days 84. _____
we returned home, tired and happy. 85. _____
【参考答案】2.
76.by the ︿sea 77.here—there 78. Beside—Besides 79.去掉in
80.place---places 81.such—so 82. V 83.talk—talked
84. our—their 85.and—but
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11除起）不计分。
I was playing at my cousin house. Since his family was rich than mine, he had more toys than I did. There was one on particular I’d always wanted. I put into my pocket when he wasn’t looking. I guessed, even at that age, I would never be able to enjoy to playing with the toy or faced my cousin again; I would always know I’d done something wrong. Late on, my aunt drove me home. When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back. She knows what had happened, but she thanked me and ever mentioned it again.
【参考答案】3.
cousin – cousin’s rich – richer on --- in put ---put it/that
enjoy to --- enjoy Faced --- face Late --- Later
slow --- slowly knows --- knew ever --- never山东郓城县2016高考英语(二轮)短文改错精练（6）
短文改错----议论文
2015届河北省邯郸市馆陶县一中高三7月调研考试
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
【参考答案】
71.had改为 have 解析：考查动词的时态。句意：许多年轻人都有抽烟的习惯，尽管他们还是中学生。整个文章用一般现在时来叙述客观事实，故用一般现在时。
72. student 改为 students。解析：考查名词的单复数。句意：虽然他们还是中学生，根据they来判断用复数形式。
73.do 改为 does 解析：考查动词的时态。Do harm to 对。。有害。整篇文章用一般现在时来叙述。
74. realized 后的that去掉 解析：考查宾语从句。句意：越来越多的人意识到这个问题的严重性。Relize后面引导宾语从句由how来引导，故把that去掉。
75.boring 改为 bored 解析：考查形容词辨析。Be bored with 厌烦。。。
76. other 改为 others 解析：考查代词。与上文提到some people 相呼应。
77.himself 改为 themselves 解析：考查反身代词。句意：其它人认为抽烟能清醒自己。与others相呼应。
78. causing 改为 caused 解析：考查动词的。句意：事实上，抽烟导致了许多疾病。这是个叙述过去发生的事，故用一般过去时。
79. the waste of money 中the 改为 a 解析：考查冠词。A waste of sth浪费某物。
80. danger 改为 dangerous 解析：考查形容词。句意：而且粗心的抽烟的人可能会引发危险的火灾。
短文改错
Dear sir,
Thank you very much for your letter. I pleased to hear 76._____________
about your holiday and the people you meet in Rome. It 77. _____________
sounded great fun and how I wish I could have been with 78. _____________
you. Thank you also for the stamps you sent them to me 79._____________
for my collection. Most of them were those what I had 80. _____________
been expecting for long. You said by your letter that 81. _____________
you wish to have some photos of me. Sorry to tell you, 82. _____________
I have little photos good enough to send to others. 83. _____________
Yet I will send you a photo of your family. Please 84. _____________
write soon and tell me what you are getting on with 85. _____________
your college life.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Jason
【参考答案】
76.I后加am 77. meet →met 78.√
79.去掉them 80.what→that或去掉those
81. by →in 82.wish→wished 83.little→few
84.your→my 84.what→how
【短文改错】
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. 1___
Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in 2_____
English. My pronunciation was terribly. I could 3____
only speak a few words. But one and a half year later, 4____
I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot from your 5___
encouraging words. I will always remember what you 6____
said, “If you try to, you can be No 1 !”I hope you`ve 7、___
had pleasant journey home and will come to china 8、___
again sometimes in the future. I will write again 9____
and send you the photos we take together 10____
【参考答案】
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1.短文改错
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线( / )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last evening, I went to a teahouse with my best friends Susan. Before the tea was serving, we talked to each other happily. When the waiter came to us with the tea, we didn't see him. Unfortunately Susan raises her hand to comb her hair just when the waiter bent to put the plate on the table. Her hand hit on the cup, and the tea was spattered(溅洒) on her trousers. In my surprise, instead complaining, Susan smiled, “So lucky that it's not on my white shirt, and I can't even clean it.”His words were very inspired. We couldn't foresee what would happen, but looking at it in a positive way could make we always happy.
【参考答案】1.
Last evening, I went to a teahouse with my best friends (friend) Susan. Before the tea was serving (served), we talked to each other happily. When the waiter came to us with the tea, we didn't see him. Unfortunately Susan raises (raised) her hand to comb her hair just when the waiter bent to put the plate on the table. Her hand hit on(\) the cup, and the tea was spattered(溅洒) on her trousers. In (To) my surprise, instead (∧of) complaining, Susan smiled, “So lucky that it's not on my white shirt, and (or) I can't even clean it.” His (Her) words were very inspired (inspiring). We couldn't foresee what would happen, but looking at it in a positive way could make we (us ) always happy.
短文改错
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在下面加上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Uncle Marion was one of my mother’s younger brother. He has been died for a year. When I was a teenager, he taught us how to hunt in the New Jersey woods used the hours before dawn. We usually left home at three o’clock in the morning, stayed in local restaurant for breakfast, and then travel on to one of his hunting destinations. Just after dawn, he would find the right spot in the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never hunted an animal successfully, but I learned to be brave and patiently through the experience.
【参考答案】2.
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brothers dead
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traveled(travelled) before
spot the woods. He would show me how not to make a sound and a movement. Though I never
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hunted an animal successfully, but I learned to be brave and patiently through the
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experience.
文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\ )划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线（一），并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
There were many people on the bus and no vacant seats. When a woman got off, a man near the door attempted to rise, but she had forced him back into his seat. “thank you,” she said, “but please don’t do that. I am perfect able to stand.” “But, madam, let me…” began the man. “I ask you to keep your seat,” interrupted a woman with the hands on her shoulders. So the man tried to rise, and said: “Madam, will you kindly permit me to… ” “No, no,” said the woman and again force him back. At last the man managed to get up, say: “ Madam, you carried me three block beyond my house. I wanted get off.”
【参考答案】3.
第一处：off→on。【解题思路】由下文可知，此处是一个妇女刚上车，一个男人试图起来。
第二处：去掉had。【解题思路】文章记叙的是过去发生的事，故用一般过去时。
第三处：perfect→prefectly。【解题思路】修饰形容词应用副词。
第四处：a→the。【解题思路】特指前面提到的妇女，故用定冠词。
第五处：her→his。【解题思路】此处指妇女把她的手放在男人的肩膀上（阻止他为自己让座）。
第六处：So→But。【解题思路】男人想起来，可是妇女不让，前后是转折关系，故用but。
第七处：force→forced。【解题思路】动作发生在过去，故用一般过去时。
第八处：say→saying。【解题思路】say与句子主语是逻辑上的主谓关系，故用现在分词作伴随状语。
第九处：block→blocks。【解题思路】三个街区，所以用复数。
第十处：wanted后加to。【解题思路】want to do sth.“想要做某事”，是固定搭配。
