话题一 个人情况
一.话题词汇
【个人信息】
1. 名字 2. 电话
3. 号码;数字 4. 地址
5. 年龄 6. 生日
7. 经验;经历 8. 描述
9. 个人的 10. 背景
11. 结婚;婚姻 12. 天生的
【外貌】
1. 身高 2. 高的
3. 矮的 4. 苗条的
5. 瘦的 6. 胖的
7. 圆形的 8. 英俊的
9. 漂亮的 10. 丑陋的
11. 强壮的 12. 年长的
13. 年轻的 14. 中等身材
【性格】
1. 外向的 2. 幽默的
3. 严肃的 4. 羞怯的;腼腆的
5. 安静的 6. 诚实的
7. 活泼的 8. 勤奋的
9. 聪明的 10. 勇敢的
11. 懒惰的 12. 笨的;愚蠢的
13. 耐心的 14. 粗心的
15. 小心;谨慎 16. 友好的
17. 善良的 18. 优秀的;极好的
19. 可爱的 20. 自信的
21. 精力充沛的 22. 慷慨的
23. 富有创造力的
【职业】
1. 音乐家 2. 歌手
3. 艺术家 4. (女)演员
5. 教师 6. 医生
7. 经理 8. 商人
9. (女)警察 10. 司机
11. (女)服务员 12. 飞行员
13. 农民 14. 记者
15. 护士 16. 工程师
17. 科学家 18. 厨师
19. 军官 20. 邮递员
21. 秘书 22. 士兵
23. 演讲者;说话者 24. 老板
25. 总统;主席 26. 领袖;领导者
27. 牙医
二、佳句欣赏与运用
◆谚语类
1.A friend in is a friend .患难见真情。
2.God helps who help .自助者天助之。
3.Everyone has his .天生我材必有用。
◆人物介绍类
1.He and never .他意志坚强,从不放弃。
2.He's very . He is always others.他很乐于助人。他总是乐于帮助别人。
3.He math and he is also sports.他擅长数学,在体育方面也很有天赋。
4.I shy,but now I'm outgoing.我过去很害羞,但现在我很外向。
5. he is a successful teacher.毫无疑问,他是一位成功的教师。。。。
6. playing basketball and reading books. 我的爱好是打篮球和看书。
7. I swimming and playing basketball. 我擅长于游泳和打篮球。
8. She sometimes my homework. 有时她会帮助我做作业。
9. a nurse when I grow up. 我的梦想是长大后当一名护士。
10. I do the housework for about an hour . 我每天必须做大约一个小时的家务。
11. Alice is the most beautiful girl . 艾丽丝是我见过最美丽的女孩子。
12. Having a good habit our daily life. 拥有一个好习惯在我们的日常生活中很重要。
一
每到毕业季,学生们都会以各种方式表达对老师的感谢之情,如“因毕业希望老师批准永久请假”“最后一堂课唱歌送别班主任”等。悲欢的背后是老师对学生的关怀和学生对老师深深的敬意。请根据下列提示和要求,以“I Love You, My English Teacher”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:
1.What's your English teacher like
2.Why do you like him or her
要求:
1.短文须包括提示的两个问题,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3.词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
I Love You, My English Teacher
I have met many good teachers in the last three years.
【审题指导】这是一篇提纲作文。本文适合四段式写法:第一段简要点明你喜欢的老师是谁;第二段介绍你喜欢的英语老师的相关情况;第三段说明你喜爱这位老师的原因;第四段抒发你对老师的感谢之情。文章时态主要采用一般现在时,人称以第一人称为主。但是在叙述老师的相关情况时,应使用第三人称。
【写作导图】
【作文失分点与句子升格】
◎失分点
此类作文是全国各地中考的高频话题之一,对大多数学生来说比较容易写作。结合此篇作文来讲,易失分的地方主要有:
1.描述人物外貌时,be与has混淆不清;
2.不善于运用亮点短语、并列句和复合句,句式简单枯燥,缺乏趣味性。
◎句子升格(答案均在【佳作欣赏】中加粗体现)
1.He is strict with every student.He cares about every student.(改为并列句,使句意保持不变)
________________________________________________________________________
2.The students from poor families have trouble.He is always ready to help them.(用“when引导的从句”和“in trouble”升格,改为复合句)
________________________________________________________________________
3.With the help of him,many students like English.(用“fall in love with”和“because of”升格,使句意更立体)
________________________________________________________________________
【佳作欣赏】
I Love You, My English Teacher
I have met many good teachers in the last three years. My English teacher Mr.Huang is one of them. Now let me tell you something about him.
Mr.Huang is of medium height and a little thin. He always wears a pair of glasses.
I like my English teacher because he has many good ways to make our class lively.
I love you, my English teacher! I will never forget you forever.
二
假如你叫李华,是光明中学初三(1)班的一名学生,你校学生会(Student Union)正在招募学生干部,你很想加入,请根据下图提供的信息,用英语给学生会主席(Chairman)写一封自荐信。
提示:1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明,可适当发挥;
2.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。不能出现真实的人名和
地名。
Dear Chairman,
I am Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 3 in Guangming Middle School.I'd like to be a member of Student Union.
Yours,
Li Hua
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,可以提取以下信息:
1.写作时以第一人称为主;
2.图表中的全部信息要一一列举,不要遗漏;
3.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。不能出现真实的人名和地名。
【写作模板】
【高分范文】
Dear Chairman,
I hope I can be received. Look forward to your answer.
Yours,
Li Hua
一
在经历了疫情、抗洪抢险等大灾难后,很多人对“英雄”有了新的认识,不再是一味地追捧流量明星,而是对那些奋战在一线的医护人员、战士、志愿者等表现出了极高的敬仰之情。请根据下列提示和要求,以“The Hero in My Heart”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:
1.Who is the hero in your heart
2.What did he/she do
3.What do you think of him/her
要求:
1.短文须包括提示的三个问题,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3.词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
The Hero in My Heart
There are many heroes in our life. Among them,Doctor Zhong Nanshan is one of the heroes I look up to most.
I'll study hard and be a useful person like him in the future.
二
医生是一种伟大而又崇高的职业。为了拯救生命,医生们付出了异于常人的时间和精力,所以他们是当之无愧的“白衣天使”。请以“I Want to Be a Doctor”为题,并根据下面的图表信息,写一篇英语短文。内容包括:你想成为医生的原因、怎么样才能成为医生。
提示:1. 短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I Want to Be a Doctor
When I grow up, I want to be a doctor.
If I stick to my dream, I believe I will realize it one day.
三
是您, 启迪我们的心智; 是您, 传播我们的知识; 是您, 播种我们的希望……这就是我的老师。请根据下面的提示给你的好友Paul回一封电子邮件, 介绍一下你最喜爱的老师。
Name Wang Lin
Age around 30
From Shanghai
Personality kind—get along well with all; strict—students well-behaved in class; patient—help students; creative—interesting classes, easy to understand.
Your ideas . . .
要求: (1)词数100左右(开头句和结尾句已给出, 不计入总词数); (2)请不要逐句翻译, 可适当发挥; (3) 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。
Dear Paul,
Thank you for your e-mail. Now let me tell you something about my favorite teacher.
In a word, I think she is one of the best teachers in our school. We all love her and respect her.
Yours,
__________(落款)
(2023·黑龙江牡丹江·统考中考真题)
榜样的力量是无穷的。你校九年六班的赵宇同学在学校2023年“榜样的力量” 评选活动中,荣获“新时代好少年” 的称号。作为校报记者,请你根据以下信息,用英语写一篇短文,向同学们介绍他的事迹,并呼吁大家向他学习。
要求:
1. 内容全面,语言流畅,层次清晰,可适当发挥;
2. 词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 至少含有两个复合句。
Zhao Yu won the 2023 New Times’ Good Teenager award. Now, I’ll introduce him to you.
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(2023·福建·统考中考真题)
某地“美丽乡村(Beautiful Village)”项目吸引了不少外宾,暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游。假定你是李华,希望成为其中的一员。请你结合以下表格提示,给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文自荐信。词数80左右。
What kind of person you are friendly, active…
What you are good at speak English, tell stories…
What you can do introduce local culture, help foreigners…
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(2021·湖南怀化市·中考真题)
假定你是李华,2022年亚运会将在杭州举行,你想成为一名志愿者,请用英语给组委会写一封信,内容包括:
1. 擅长英语,口语很棒;
2. 性格外向,乐于助人;
3. 爱好运动,了解亚运会等。
要求:
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名;
2. 包含以上所有信息,可适当发挥;
3. 词数:80词左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:be good at/I do well in擅长 spoken English口语 outgoing外向的
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student. I’m glad to know that the Asian Games will be held in Hangzhou in 2022. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua话题一 个人情况
一.话题词汇
【个人信息】
1. 名字name 2. 电话telephone
3. 号码;数字number 4. 地址address
5. 年龄age 6. 生日birthday
7. 经验;经历experience 8. 描述 describe
9. 个人的personal 10. 背景background
11. 结婚;婚姻marriage 12. 天生的born
【外貌】
1. 身高height 2. 高的tall
3. 矮的short 4. 苗条的slim
5. 瘦的thin 6. 胖的fat
7. 圆形的round 8. 英俊的handsome
9. 漂亮的beautiful/pretty 10. 丑陋的ugly
11. 强壮的strong 12. 年长的old
13. 年轻的young 14. 中等身材medium build
【性格】
1. 外向的outgoing 2. 幽默的humorous
3. 严肃的serious 4. 羞怯的;腼腆的shy
5. 安静的quiet 6. 诚实的 honest
7. 活泼的lively 8. 勤奋的hard working
9. 聪明的clever/smart 10. 勇敢的brave
11. 懒惰的lazy 12. 笨的;愚蠢的stupid
13. 耐心的patient 14. 粗心的careless
15. 小心;谨慎careful 16. 友好的friendly
17. 善良的kind 18. 优秀的;极好的excellent
19. 可爱的 lovely/cute 20. 自信的 confident
21. 精力充沛的 energetic 22. 慷慨的 generous
23. 富有创造力的 creative
【职业】
1. 音乐家musician 2. 歌手singer
3. 艺术家artist 4. (女)演员actress/actor
5. 教师teacher 6. 医生doctor
7. 经理manager 8. 商人businessman
9. (女)警察policewoman/policeman 10. 司机driver
11. (女)服务员waitress/waiter 12. 飞行员pilot
13. 农民farmer 14. 记者 reporter
15. 护士nurse 16. 工程师engineer
17. 科学家scientist 18. 厨师cook
19. 军官officer 20. 邮递员postman
21. 秘书secretary 22. 士兵soldier
23. 演讲者;说话者speaker 24. 老板boss
25. 总统;主席president 26. 领袖;领导者leader
27. 牙医dentist
二、佳句欣赏与运用
◆谚语类
1.A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难见真情。
2.God helps those who help themselves.自助者天助之。
3.Everyone has his price.天生我材必有用。
◆人物介绍类
1.He has a strong will and never gives up.他意志坚强,从不放弃。
2.He's very helpful. He is always ready to help others.他很乐于助人。他总是乐于帮助别人。
3.He is good at math and he is also talented in sports.他擅长数学,在体育方面也很有天赋。
4.I used to be shy,but now I'm outgoing.我过去很害羞,但现在我很外向。
5.There is no doubt that he is a successful teacher.毫无疑问,他是一位成功的教师。。。。
6. My hobbies are playing basketball and reading books. 我的爱好是打篮球和看书。
7. I am good at swimming and playing basketball. 我擅长于游泳和打篮球。
8. She sometimes helps me with my homework. 有时她会帮助我做作业。
9. My dream is to be a nurse when I grow up. 我的梦想是长大后当一名护士。
10. I have to do the housework for about an hour every day. 我每天必须做大约一个小时的家务。
11. Alice is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen. 艾丽丝是我见过最美丽的女孩子。
12. Having a good habit plays an important role in our daily life. 拥有一个好习惯在我们的日常生活中很重要。
一
每到毕业季,学生们都会以各种方式表达对老师的感谢之情,如“因毕业希望老师批准永久请假”“最后一堂课唱歌送别班主任”等。悲欢的背后是老师对学生的关怀和学生对老师深深的敬意。请根据下列提示和要求,以“I Love You, My English Teacher”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:
1.What's your English teacher like
2.Why do you like him or her
要求:
1.短文须包括提示的两个问题,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3.词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
I Love You, My English Teacher
I have met many good teachers in the last three years.
【审题指导】这是一篇提纲作文。本文适合四段式写法:第一段简要点明你喜欢的老师是谁;第二段介绍你喜欢的英语老师的相关情况;第三段说明你喜爱这位老师的原因;第四段抒发你对老师的感谢之情。文章时态主要采用一般现在时,人称以第一人称为主。但是在叙述老师的相关情况时,应使用第三人称。
【写作导图】
【作文失分点与句子升格】
◎失分点
此类作文是全国各地中考的高频话题之一,对大多数学生来说比较容易写作。结合此篇作文来讲,易失分的地方主要有:
1.描述人物外貌时,be与has混淆不清;
2.不善于运用亮点短语、并列句和复合句,句式简单枯燥,缺乏趣味性。
◎句子升格(答案均在【佳作欣赏】中加粗体现)
1.He is strict with every student.He cares about every student.(改为并列句,使句意保持不变)
________________________________________________________________________
2.The students from poor families have trouble.He is always ready to help them.(用“when引导的从句”和“in trouble”升格,改为复合句)
________________________________________________________________________
3.With the help of him,many students like English.(用“fall in love with”和“because of”升格,使句意更立体)
________________________________________________________________________
【佳作欣赏】
I Love You, My English Teacher
I have met many good teachers in the last three years. My English teacher Mr.Huang is one of them. Now let me tell you something about him.
Mr.Huang is of medium height and a little thin. He always wears a pair of glasses. He is very strict with us but cares about every student. When the students from poor families are in trouble, he is always ready to help them.
I like my English teacher because he has many good ways to make our class lively. Many students fall in love with English because of him.
I love you, my English teacher! I will never forget you forever.
二
假如你叫李华,是光明中学初三(1)班的一名学生,你校学生会(Student Union)正在招募学生干部,你很想加入,请根据下图提供的信息,用英语给学生会主席(Chairman)写一封自荐信。
提示:1.短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明,可适当发挥;
2.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。不能出现真实的人名和
地名。
Dear Chairman,
I am Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 3 in Guangming Middle School.I'd like to be a member of Student Union.
Yours,
Li Hua
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,可以提取以下信息:
1.写作时以第一人称为主;
2.图表中的全部信息要一一列举,不要遗漏;
3.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。不能出现真实的人名和地名。
【写作模板】
【高分范文】
Dear Chairman,
I am Li Hua, a student from Class 1, Grade 3 in Guangming Middle School.I'd like to be a member of Student Union.I like doing sports so I am quite healthy and fit.I like studying very much and often help my classmates with their lessons.I get on well with others, so I have many municating with others is one of my abilities.I think it's very important as a member of Student Union.And I'd like to help others, too.
If I can be a member of Student Union, I'll be able to make more friends.And I can do more for others.
I hope I can be received. Look forward to your answer.
Yours,
Li Hua
一
在经历了疫情、抗洪抢险等大灾难后,很多人对“英雄”有了新的认识,不再是一味地追捧流量明星,而是对那些奋战在一线的医护人员、战士、志愿者等表现出了极高的敬仰之情。请根据下列提示和要求,以“The Hero in My Heart”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:
1.Who is the hero in your heart
2.What did he/she do
3.What do you think of him/her
要求:
1.短文须包括提示的三个问题,可适当发挥;
2.短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
3.词数80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
The Hero in My Heart
There are many heroes in our life. Among them,Doctor Zhong Nanshan is one of the heroes I look up to most.
He fought against the terrible virus twice without thinking about his own safety. In 2003,he led his medical workers to fight against SARS successfully.17 years later,although he is already 84,he led his team to Wuhan to fight against COVID 19.With his knowledge,he gave lots of useful advice on what to do to avoid the virus.His advice saved thousands of people.He is a good doctor in the eyes of Chinese people.
I'll study hard and be a useful person like him in the future.
二
医生是一种伟大而又崇高的职业。为了拯救生命,医生们付出了异于常人的时间和精力,所以他们是当之无愧的“白衣天使”。请以“I Want to Be a Doctor”为题,并根据下面的图表信息,写一篇英语短文。内容包括:你想成为医生的原因、怎么样才能成为医生。
提示:1. 短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I Want to Be a Doctor
When I grow up, I want to be a doctor. I like to help the sick, because I want to pull them through and see smiles coming from the bottom of their hearts.
To make my dream come true, I am going to study hard now and get into a university to study medicine. At university, I am going to use my spare time to volunteer in the local hospital so that I can get some experience. After graduation, I will find a job as a doctor in a hospital. If I can start working as a doctor, I would like to try my best to help the sick.
If I stick to my dream, I believe I will realize it one day.
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是您, 启迪我们的心智; 是您, 传播我们的知识; 是您, 播种我们的希望……这就是我的老师。请根据下面的提示给你的好友Paul回一封电子邮件, 介绍一下你最喜爱的老师。
Name Wang Lin
Age around 30
From Shanghai
Personality kind—get along well with all; strict—students well-behaved in class; patient—help students; creative—interesting classes, easy to understand.
Your ideas . . .
要求: (1)词数100左右(开头句和结尾句已给出, 不计入总词数); (2)请不要逐句翻译, 可适当发挥; (3) 文中不能出现真实的校名和人名。
Dear Paul,
Thank you for your e-mail. Now let me tell you something about my favorite teacher.
In a word, I think she is one of the best teachers in our school. We all love her and respect her.
Yours,
__________(落款)
【写作范文】
Dear Paul,
Thank you for your e-mail. Now let me tell you something about my favorite teacher.
Wang Lin, my favorite teacher, is from Shanghai, and she is around 30 years old. She teaches me English. She has long black hair and she always wears a pair of glasses.
She is strict with us in our study, so all the students are well-behaved in her class. However, she can get along well with all the students because she is very kind and patient. She will help us to deal with the problems when we have difficulties. We all like her lessons a lot. That’s because she is very creative. Her teaching style is quite different from that of the others. She prepares her lessons well and corrects our homework carefully. In class she always encourages us to think hard and develop our ability to study on our own.
In a word, I think she is one of the best teachers in our school. We all love her and respect her.
Yours,
______(落款)
(2023·黑龙江牡丹江·统考中考真题)
榜样的力量是无穷的。你校九年六班的赵宇同学在学校2023年“榜样的力量” 评选活动中,荣获“新时代好少年” 的称号。作为校报记者,请你根据以下信息,用英语写一篇短文,向同学们介绍他的事迹,并呼吁大家向他学习。
要求:
1. 内容全面,语言流畅,层次清晰,可适当发挥;
2. 词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
3. 至少含有两个复合句。
Zhao Yu won the 2023 New Times’ Good Teenager award. Now, I’ll introduce him to you.
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【答案】例文
Zhao Yu won the 2023 New Times’ Good Teenager award. Now, I’ll introduce him to you. Zhao Yu is 15 years old. He is in Class Six, Grade Nine. He has some hobbies. He likes playing ping-pong. He thinks it’s relaxing. He is also good at playing the erhu.
Zhao Yu is very creative and he has invented some small things. He even won two prizes for his inventions. Zhao Yu is helpful. When he is free, he usually works as a volunteer in the community. Also, he is active. He often takes part in many meaningful activities. Zhao Yu is so kind that all his classmates like him.
Zhao Yu is an excellent boy. Let’s learn from him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏“新时代好少年”赵宇同学的介绍要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点;注意文中要包含两个以上的复合句。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图(已给出);
第二步,具体介绍赵宇的个人信息和事迹;
第三步,做出评价,并呼吁大家一起向他学习。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②work as以……身份而工作
③take part in参加
④learn from sb向某人学习
[高分句型]
①He thinks it’s relaxing. (宾语从句)
②When he is free, he usually works as a volunteer in the community.(when引导的时间状语从句)
③Zhao Yu is so kind that all his classmates like him.(so...that引导的结果状语从句)
(2023·福建·统考中考真题)
某地“美丽乡村(Beautiful Village)”项目吸引了不少外宾,暑假期间需要数名擅长英语的小导游。假定你是李华,希望成为其中的一员。请你结合以下表格提示,给该项目的外事负责人王先生写一封英文自荐信。词数80左右。
What kind of person you are friendly, active…
What you are good at speak English, tell stories…
What you can do introduce local culture, help foreigners…
注意事项:
1. 必须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;
3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am Li Hua. I am glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides. I’d like to be one of them. I think I am suitable for the job.
First of all, I am friendly and patient. I am active in many activities. Besides, I speak English well and have won several prizes in English speaking competitions. I am also good at telling stories. So I can introduce local culture to foreigners in English. Most importantly, I have visited the beautiful village many times and I can help foreigners better understand the life of the village.
I would be thankful if I could be given the chance.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为一封自荐信;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,介绍自己想成为“美丽乡村”项目的英语小导游;
第二步,具体阐述自己具备的品质和擅长做的事;
第三步,最后书写结尾,再次表达希望成为小导游中的一员。
[亮点词汇]
①be suitable for适合于……
②introduce sth to sb向某人介绍某物
③Most importantly最重要的是
[高分句型]
①I think I am suitable for the job.(省略that的宾语从句)
②I would be thankful if I could be given the chance.(if引导的条件状语从句;被动语态)
(2021·湖南怀化市·中考真题)
假定你是李华,2022年亚运会将在杭州举行,你想成为一名志愿者,请用英语给组委会写一封信,内容包括:
1. 擅长英语,口语很棒;
2. 性格外向,乐于助人;
3. 爱好运动,了解亚运会等。
要求:
1. 文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名;
2. 包含以上所有信息,可适当发挥;
3. 词数:80词左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
参考词汇:be good at/I do well in擅长 spoken English口语 outgoing外向的
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student. I’m glad to know that the Asian Games will be held in Hangzhou in 2022. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Li Hua, a middle school student. I’m glad to know that the Asian Games will be held in Hangzhou in 2022. I’m writing to apply to be a volunteer.
Firstly, I’m good at English, especially spoken English, which will be useful to communicate with foreigners. Secondly, I am an outgoing girl and I’m ready to help others. So I can cooperate with others well. Last but not the least, I like sports. I want to know more about the Asian Games. I hope to take part in the Asian Games one day.
I would be grateful if you give me the opportunity. I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读:这篇作文要求学生们以李华的身份写一篇申请信,申请成为杭州亚运会的志愿者。题目中给出了具体的写作内容,文中应包括:介绍自己想成为亚运会志愿者的三个理由,应添加一个适当的结尾,如表达自己的期盼以及如果获得这个机会会非常感激等等。
2.写作指导:审题可知,这篇作文应用一般现在时叙述,人称为第一人称。写作时应根据题目中给出的要点进行适当的拓展,使文章内容更丰富、具体。应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同,以简单句结构为基础,穿插并列句、复合句及其他复杂句式的使用,提升作文档次。同时注意上下文的衔接,使文意连贯。