话题四 日常活动
一.话题词汇
【家庭生活】
1. 聊天 2. 打扫
3. 使……干净 4. 锻炼
5. 穿衣服;连衣裙 6. 烹饪
7. 洗;洗涤 8. 抚养;养育
9. 修理 10. 杂乱
11. 搬家 12. 家务劳动
13. 舒服的;安逸的 14. 淋浴
15. 每天的 16. 准备好
17. 可得到的;有空的 18. 私人的
19. 日常的 20. 醒着
21. 瞌睡的;困倦的
【学校生活】
1. 学习 2. 忙碌的
3. 失败;不及格 4. 紧张不安的
5. 吵闹的 6. 谈话;交谈
7. 测试 8. 课本
9. 令人厌烦的 10. 有趣的
11. 多姿多彩的
【周末活动】
1. 周末 2. 活动
3. 电影 4. 购物
5. 野餐 6. 游戏
7. 唱歌 8. 跳舞
9. 旅行 10. 从不
11. 立刻 12. 总是
13. 很少 14. 几乎不
二、佳句欣赏与运用
◆谚语类
makes Jack a dull boy.只工作不玩耍,聪明的孩子也变傻。
◆日常活动类
1. I want to know for school.
我想知道你为什么总是上学迟到。
2. We should go to bed early we can our lessons in class.
我们应该早点睡觉, 以便上课时能够集中精神听课。
3. On weekdays, I my schoolwork. On weekends, I usually my family.
在工作日, 我总是忙于我的学业。在周末, 我通常和我的家人一起度过。
4. We social activities as volunteers.
我们作为志愿者积极参加社会活动。
5. After school, I usually take exercise . 放学后, 我通常做运动保持健康。
6. kids learn to be independent, the better it is for their future. 孩子们越早学会独立, 对他们的未来就越好。
7. helps to develop children’s independence and teaches them .
做家务能帮助发展孩子们的独立性, 并且教他们如何照顾他们自己。
上周六你校为了庆祝 “五·四”青年节,特意在校内举行了一次为贫困儿童募捐的活动。假如你参加了此次周末活动,请你根据下面表格的提示写一篇英语短文,介绍这次活动的情况。
活动时间 5月4日上午
活动地点 学校操场
活动目的 帮助贫困儿童
筹到物资 各种学习用品(如书本……)
数千元钱
你的感想 ……(不少于两点)
写作要求:
1.短文内容必须包含所给要点,并适当拓展;
2.语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范;
3.文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名和地名;
4.词数不少于90。
参考词汇:playground 操场;meaningful有意义的;a donation activity 募捐活动
【审题指导】本文的体裁是一篇记叙文。写作时,以第一人称的口吻进行叙述,时态以一般过去时为主,表达自己的感想时用一般现在时。写作时一定要包含表格中的所有要点,不要遗漏信息, 尤其是需要补充的感想不少于两点。
【写作导图】
【作文失分点与句子升格】
◎失分点
日常活动类作文对学生来说比较熟悉,写作难度不大。针对此篇作文,易失分的地方主要有:
1.没有审清题意,全篇时态选用错误;
2.提示信息生拼硬凑,衔接不自然;
3.表达感想时没有注意括号内的要求,往往一句话就总结了全文。
◎句子升格(答案均在【佳作欣赏】中加粗体现)
1.Many students and teachers took an active part in the activity.They want to help poor children.(用“in order to”将两句合并为一句)
________________________________________________________________________
2.The money can make those children feel hopeful about their life,but it can't make a big difference to their life.(用“though”改写句子,使句子更具积极意义)
________________________________________________________________________
3.Our students and those children can learn something from the activity.(用“not only…but also…”升格句子)
________________________________________________________________________
【佳作欣赏】
On the morning of May 4th,our school held a donation activity on the playground to celebrate the Youth Day.
Come and join us!
二
假如下图是你班上某次课外活动中同学们的活动情况,请你根据图表,对同学们的活动情况进行描述,并谈谈你的看法。
提示:1.短文应包括导图中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3.词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计人总词数。
Hi, everyone, I made a survey about the activities the students of our class did on after-school activities.
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,可以提取以下信息:
1.写作时以第一或第三人称为主;
2.介绍过去的情况时用一般过去时,当时正在进行的动作用过去进行时;介绍目前的情况用一般现在时;
3.导图中的全部信息要一一列举,不要遗漏;
4.词数不少于80,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。不能出现真实的人名和地名。
【写作模板】
【高分范文】
Hi, everyone, I made a survey about the activities the students of our class did on after-school activities.
As for me, I prefer to do some exercise, because only in this way, can we enjoy a healthier life.
一
如今,国内外很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末,如下图中的Jack。请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈你的看法。以“Weekend or Not?”为题写一篇约90词的英语短文向Parents杂志投稿,让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发。
注意:文中不得出现除“Jack”以外的人名或校名。
Weekend or Not
Jack has to attend lots of classes on the weekend.He has little time for his favorite sport—soccer.Still,his parents are pushing him to do more math(s) exercises,which worries him a lot.
二
你们学校对学生的课外阅读情况做了一次问卷调查。请你根据下面表格中的信息提示,并以“Let's Read More”为题,写一篇英语短文,说明你校学生课外阅读的现状及课外阅读的意义,并就中学生应该如何更好地开展课外阅读活动提出建议。
提示:1. 短文应包括表格中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数不少于80,开头已给出,不讲入总词数。
要点 内容
调查数据
课外阅读 的意义 1. 增长知识; 2. 提高解决问题的能力; 3. 培养良好习惯,使生活丰富多彩。
你的观点 ……
Let's Read More
In order to know more about students' after class reading, ou school has done a survey.
三
予人玫瑰, 手有余香。你是否参加过志愿者活动, 帮助社会上需要帮助的人呢 或者曾经在某方面帮助过同学, 尽管是一件小事却给你留下了深刻的记忆 请你在志愿者活动和帮助同学的经历中选择其一描述过程, 并说说自己的感想。
Do volunteer work Help classmates
work as. . . hurt one’s leg while having a basketball game
have a strong feeling of satisfaction take him/her to the hospital
learn a lot from the experience feel happy to help others
. . . . . .
要求: (1)可适当增加细节和连接词, 使文章通顺连贯; (2)开头部分已给出, 不计入总词数; (3)词数: 100左右。
As the old saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand; the flavor in mine”. _______
(2023·四川眉山·统考中考真题)
劳动创造美好生活,劳动实践从我做起。作为一名中学生,请你根据下表要点,以“Labor is Glorious (劳动光荣)”为题,向校报“英语园地”栏目投稿。
劳动实践 在学校,和同学一起打扫教室和操场; 在家里,做饭、洗衣服、整理房间; 在社区,做志愿者,帮助老人或残疾人。
劳动收获 学到一些基本生活技能,学会照顾自己; 获得满足感,变得更加独立和有责任心。
发出倡议 ……
注意:
1. 词数100左右(标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Labor is Glorious
It’s well known that labor is glorious.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(2023·湖南郴州·统考中考真题)
在我们的成长过程中,自律起着重要的作用。为了加强青少年的自我约束能力、某英语杂志社正在开展以“争做自律好学生”为主题的征文比赛。请你以How to be a self-disciplined student为题,写一篇英语短文参赛。
要点如下:
(1)在学校:遵守校规,与同学相处融洽……;
(2)在家里:按时完成家庭作业,帮助父母做家务……;
(3)其他方面:多阅读,少玩电子游戏;
(4)自律的作用:使我们更健康,更快乐……;
参考词汇:self-discipline n.自律;self-disciplined adj.自律的
要求:
(1)短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息,并适当发挥;
(2)词数:80左右(短文标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名和地名。
How to be a self-disciplined student
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. We must be strict with ourselves in everyday life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________话题四 日常活动
一.话题词汇
【家庭生活】
1. 聊天chat 2. 打扫sweep
3. 使……干净clean 4. 锻炼exercise
5. 穿衣服;连衣裙dress 6. 烹饪cook
7. 洗;洗涤wash 8. 抚养;养育raise
9. 修理fix/mend 10. 杂乱mess
11. 搬家move 12. 家务劳动housework
13. 舒服的;安逸的comfortable 14. 淋浴shower
15. 每天的everyday 16. 准备好ready
17. 可得到的;有空的available 18. 私人的private
19. 日常的daily 20. 醒着awake
21. 瞌睡的;困倦的sleepy
【学校生活】
1. 学习study 2. 忙碌的busy
3. 失败;不及格 fail 4. 紧张不安的nervous
5. 吵闹的noisy 6. 谈话;交谈conversation
7. 测试test 8. 课本text
9. 令人厌烦的 boring 10. 有趣的 interesting
11. 多姿多彩的 colorful
【周末活动】
1. 周末weekend 2. 活动activity
3. 电影movie 4. 购物shop
5. 野餐picnic 6. 游戏game
7. 唱歌sing 8. 跳舞dance
9. 旅行travel 10. 从不never
11. 立刻immediately 12. 总是always
13. 很少seldom 14. 几乎不hardly
二、佳句欣赏与运用
◆谚语类
All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.只工作不玩耍,聪明的孩子也变傻。
◆日常活动类
1. I want to know why you are always late for school.
我想知道你为什么总是上学迟到。
2. We should go to bed early so that we can focus on our lessons in class.
我们应该早点睡觉, 以便上课时能够集中精神听课。
3. On weekdays, I am always busy with my schoolwork. On weekends, I usually spend time with my family.
在工作日, 我总是忙于我的学业。在周末, 我通常和我的家人一起度过。
4. We take an active part in social activities as volunteers.
我们作为志愿者积极参加社会活动。
5. After school, I usually take exercise which helps me keep healthy. 放学后, 我通常做运动保持健康。
6. The earlier kids learn to be independent, the better it is for their future. 孩子们越早学会独立, 对他们的未来就越好。
7. Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence and teaches them how to look after themselves.
做家务能帮助发展孩子们的独立性, 并且教他们如何照顾他们自己。
上周六你校为了庆祝 “五·四”青年节,特意在校内举行了一次为贫困儿童募捐的活动。假如你参加了此次周末活动,请你根据下面表格的提示写一篇英语短文,介绍这次活动的情况。
活动时间 5月4日上午
活动地点 学校操场
活动目的 帮助贫困儿童
筹到物资 各种学习用品(如书本……)
数千元钱
你的感想 ……(不少于两点)
写作要求:
1.短文内容必须包含所给要点,并适当拓展;
2.语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范;
3.文中不能出现真实的姓名、校名和地名;
4.词数不少于90。
参考词汇:playground 操场;meaningful有意义的;a donation activity 募捐活动
【审题指导】本文的体裁是一篇记叙文。写作时,以第一人称的口吻进行叙述,时态以一般过去时为主,表达自己的感想时用一般现在时。写作时一定要包含表格中的所有要点,不要遗漏信息, 尤其是需要补充的感想不少于两点。
【写作导图】
【作文失分点与句子升格】
◎失分点
日常活动类作文对学生来说比较熟悉,写作难度不大。针对此篇作文,易失分的地方主要有:
1.没有审清题意,全篇时态选用错误;
2.提示信息生拼硬凑,衔接不自然;
3.表达感想时没有注意括号内的要求,往往一句话就总结了全文。
◎句子升格(答案均在【佳作欣赏】中加粗体现)
1.Many students and teachers took an active part in the activity.They want to help poor children.(用“in order to”将两句合并为一句)
________________________________________________________________________
2.The money can make those children feel hopeful about their life,but it can't make a big difference to their life.(用“though”改写句子,使句子更具积极意义)
________________________________________________________________________
3.Our students and those children can learn something from the activity.(用“not only…but also…”升格句子)
________________________________________________________________________
【佳作欣赏】
On the morning of May 4th,our school held a donation activity on the playground to celebrate the Youth Day.
In order to help poor children,many students and teachers took an active part in the activity.We collected all kinds of things for them,such as some new books,dictionaries,clothes and schoolbags.Besides these,we also collected several thousand yuan.Though the money can't make a big difference to those children's life,it can make them feel hopeful about their life.Also,it can help more students go back to school and continue their school life.
I think this activity is very meaningful.It can help poor children get the things that they want.More importantly,not only our students but also those children can learn something from the activity.Come and join us!
二
假如下图是你班上某次课外活动中同学们的活动情况,请你根据图表,对同学们的活动情况进行描述,并谈谈你的看法。
提示:1.短文应包括导图中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3.词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计人总词数。
Hi, everyone, I made a survey about the activities the students of our class did on after-school activities.
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,可以提取以下信息:
1.写作时以第一或第三人称为主;
2.介绍过去的情况时用一般过去时,当时正在进行的动作用过去进行时;介绍目前的情况用一般现在时;
3.导图中的全部信息要一一列举,不要遗漏;
4.词数不少于80,开头已经给出,不计入总词数。不能出现真实的人名和地名。
【写作模板】
【高分范文】
Hi, everyone, I made a survey about the activities the students of our class did on after-school activities.Let's look at the results.Many students, about 40 percent, were playing basketball. Most of them are boys.28 percent of the students were talking with each other.And about 20 percent of the students were doing their homework.The rest of the students were cleaning the classroom.
From the results, we can see that different students like doing different activities after school.As for me, I prefer to do some exercise, because only in this way, can we enjoy a healthier life.
一
如今,国内外很多孩子在父母的安排下没有了自己的周末,如下图中的Jack。请分析图中的这种现象并谈谈你的看法。以“Weekend or Not?”为题写一篇约90词的英语短文向Parents杂志投稿,让父母们通过阅读你的文章能有所启发。
注意:文中不得出现除“Jack”以外的人名或校名。
Weekend or Not
Jack has to attend lots of classes on the weekend.He has little time for his favorite sport—soccer.Still,his parents are pushing him to do more math(s) exercises,which worries him a lot.
Nowadays,many students are under much pressure like Jack.Their parents think it necessary for them to make full use of the weekends and learn as much as possible.As a result,some students are stressed out and therefore lose interest in learning anything.What's worse,they may not be able to learn to manage their own life.
I do hope all the children can have the freedom to choose what they like to do and enjoy their weekends.
二
你们学校对学生的课外阅读情况做了一次问卷调查。请你根据下面表格中的信息提示,并以“Let's Read More”为题,写一篇英语短文,说明你校学生课外阅读的现状及课外阅读的意义,并就中学生应该如何更好地开展课外阅读活动提出建议。
提示:1. 短文应包括表格中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数不少于80,开头已给出,不讲入总词数。
要点 内容
调查数据
课外阅读 的意义 1. 增长知识; 2. 提高解决问题的能力; 3. 培养良好习惯,使生活丰富多彩。
你的观点 ……
Let's Read More
In order to know more about students' after class reading, ou school has done a survey. The survey result shows that 56% of the students spend less than one hour reading each day while 33% read for one to two hours, and only 11% read for over three hours.
As we all know, reading can not only increase our knowledge but also improve our ability to solve problems. What's more, it can help us form a good habit and make our life colorful.
I think it's time for us students to read more. Let's start reading clubs. Also, it's a good idea to organize some reading competitions so that we can do better in reading.
三
予人玫瑰, 手有余香。你是否参加过志愿者活动, 帮助社会上需要帮助的人呢 或者曾经在某方面帮助过同学, 尽管是一件小事却给你留下了深刻的记忆 请你在志愿者活动和帮助同学的经历中选择其一描述过程, 并说说自己的感想。
Do volunteer work Help classmates
work as. . . hurt one’s leg while having a basketball game
have a strong feeling of satisfaction take him/her to the hospital
learn a lot from the experience feel happy to help others
. . . . . .
要求: (1)可适当增加细节和连接词, 使文章通顺连贯; (2)开头部分已给出, 不计入总词数; (3)词数: 100左右。
As the old saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand; the flavor in mine”. _______
【写作范文】
Possible version 1:
As the old saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand; the flavor in mine”. In my spare time, I often work as a volunteer. I still remember that on a cold winter afternoon, I went to the Children’s Hospital to visit sick children. My classmates and I prepared some gifts for them. When the children got the gifts, they were so excited that they couldn’t help laughing happily. To make them happy, we also sang songs for them and played games with them. At that time, I had a strong feeling of satisfaction.
I think it’s quite meaningful to visit sick children because it not only brings them joy but also helps me learn a lot from the experience.
Possible version 2:
As the old saying goes, “The rose’s in her hand; the flavor in mine”. I am always ready to help others. Two months ago, one of my classmates Jack hurt his leg while having a basketball game. I found that he fell down on the floor and seemed painful. So I took him to the hospital nearby. Luckily, the doctor said it was not very serious but Jack couldn’t walk for several days. Therefore, I decided to take care of him at school. For example, I brought meals to him every day. And I felt quite happy to help him. In addition, our friendship was deepened in this way.
(2023·四川眉山·统考中考真题)
劳动创造美好生活,劳动实践从我做起。作为一名中学生,请你根据下表要点,以“Labor is Glorious (劳动光荣)”为题,向校报“英语园地”栏目投稿。
劳动实践 在学校,和同学一起打扫教室和操场; 在家里,做饭、洗衣服、整理房间; 在社区,做志愿者,帮助老人或残疾人。
劳动收获 学到一些基本生活技能,学会照顾自己; 获得满足感,变得更加独立和有责任心。
发出倡议 ……
注意:
1. 词数100左右(标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Labor is Glorious
It’s well known that labor is glorious.
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【答案】例文
Labor is Glorious
It’s well known that labor is glorious. As a middle school student, I often do some labor activities in everyday life. For example, I clean the classroom and playground with my classmates at school. I cook dishes, wash clothes and tidy rooms at home. And in the community, I work as a volunteer to help the old or disabled.
By doing these, I’ve learnt some basic life skills to take care of myself. Besides, I have not only got the strong feeling of satisfaction but also become more and more independent and responsible.
All in all, labor creates a better life so let’s take an active part in doing the daily labor.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题干中的提示内容进行写作,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,根据表格内容介绍一些劳动实践;
第三步,介绍从劳动中的收获;
第四步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①work as充当
②all in all总的来说
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①And in the community, I work as a volunteer to help the old or disabled.(动词不定式作目的状语)
②All in all, labor creates a better life so let’s take an active part in doing the daily labor.(so引导的并列句)
(2023·湖南郴州·统考中考真题)
在我们的成长过程中,自律起着重要的作用。为了加强青少年的自我约束能力、某英语杂志社正在开展以“争做自律好学生”为主题的征文比赛。请你以How to be a self-disciplined student为题,写一篇英语短文参赛。
要点如下:
(1)在学校:遵守校规,与同学相处融洽……;
(2)在家里:按时完成家庭作业,帮助父母做家务……;
(3)其他方面:多阅读,少玩电子游戏;
(4)自律的作用:使我们更健康,更快乐……;
参考词汇:self-discipline n.自律;self-disciplined adj.自律的
要求:
(1)短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息,并适当发挥;
(2)词数:80左右(短文标题和开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(3)文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名和地名。
How to be a self-disciplined student
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. We must be strict with ourselves in everyday life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How to be a self-disciplined student
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. We must be strict with ourselves in everyday life. How can we be self-disciplined students
First of all, we should follow school rules and get on well with our classmates at school. Secondly, we should finish our homework on time and help our parents with housework at home. Thirdly, we should read more and play computer games less.
Self-discipline is good for us in many ways. It makes our life easier, happier and healthier. Our life and study are so well organized that we can save a lot of time. What’s more, being self-disciplined helps us prepare for a better and brighter future.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:要求以How to be a self-disciplined student为题,结合提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出如何成为自律的学生;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。从“在学校、在家里和其他方面”重点介绍;
第三步,介绍自律的作用。
[亮点词汇]
①First of all首先
②get on well with与……相处融洽
③on time按时
④prepare for为……做准备
[高分句型]
What’s more, being self-disciplined helps us prepare for a better and brighter future.(动名词作主语)