话题五 学校生活
一.话题写作
【学校人员与设施】
1. 教师 2. 学生
3. 班长 4. 校长
5. 同班同学 6. 小学生
7. 大学 8. 实验室
9. 操场 10. 教室
11. 班级;课 12. 图书馆
13. 办公室 14. 会议室
15. 食堂 16. 黑板
17. 粉笔 18. 座位
【学科及学习用品】
1. 学科 2. 英语
3. 中文 4. 数学
5. 音乐 6. 艺术;美术
7. 历史学 8. 地理学
9. 化学 10. 物理学
11. 科学 12. 书包
13. 铅笔 14. 笔记本
15. 字典;词典
【学习】
1. 家庭作业 2. 课
3. 考试 4. 知识
5. 报纸 6. 杂志
7. 技巧 8. 理解;明白
9. 检查 10. 练习
11. 纠正;正确的 12. 错误
13. 复习 14. 进步
【学校活动】
1. 演讲 2. 比赛
3. 活动 4. 运动会
5. 赛跑;竞赛 6. 游戏
7. 象棋
8. 篮球/排球/足球
二、佳句欣赏与运用
◆谚语类
time flies!时间飞逝!
No ,no .一分耕耘,一分收获。
◆学校和学校生活类
1. the Solar Power Club 为什么不来加入太阳能俱乐部呢
2. I often all kinds of after-school activities. 我经常参加各种各样的课外活动。
3. There are different kinds of activities during the English Week, an English book fair, speaking competition . 英语周期间有各种各样的活动, 如英语书展、英语演讲比赛等。
4. My school life is . 我的学校生活是丰富多彩和有意义的。
5. Time is valuable, and it is really important to our school life. 时间是宝贵的, 好好利用学校生活的时光真的很重要。
6. to win the first prize in the English speech competition. 在英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖真是太令人激动了。
7. It provides us with a chance to learn about the world outside school offers us a good opportunity to the local culture and history.
它不但给我们提供了了解学校之外的世界的机会, 也为我们提供了更好地了解当地文化和历史的机会。
8.How time flies! My middle school life .时间过得真快啊~我的中学生活就要结束了。
9.My middle school life is .I have .我的中学生活就要结束了。我有很多甜蜜/难忘的回忆。
10.Our school is clean and beautiful.We here.我们的学校既干净又漂亮。我们喜欢在这里学习。
11. to do volunteer work to make our school more beautiful.我们的责任是做志愿者工作,使我们的学校更美丽。
12.Last week's talent show in our school was .上周我们学校的才艺表演取得了很大的成功。
13.We can plant more trees and on campus.我们可以在校园里种更多的树和捡垃圾。
14.We should keeping our school clean.我们应该在保持学校清洁方面发挥作用。
15.In a word,my three year life in middle school is .总之,我三年的中学生活是忙碌而丰富多彩的/有意义的/难忘的。
16.I hope my school will become .我希望我的学校会变得越来越美丽。
假如你是南昌市第二十八中学的一名学生,即将中学毕业,马上就要进入高中学习,你对未来的高中生活充满了憧憬。请你以“My Life in High School”为题,根据表格提示内容,写一篇80词左右的英语短文(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
内容要点
校园 校园宁静(peaceful)而美丽,教室宽敞、明亮,是学习的好地方
老师 老师知识渊博(knowledgeable),既严格要求学生,又关爱学生
同学 与同学友好相处
学习 自主学习(learn by oneself),积极参加小组活动
课外 活动 积极参加各种课外活动(out of class activities),保持身体健康
要求:
1.短文的标题和开头部分已给出,不计入总词数;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。
My Life in High School
My three year middle school life will be over.And I'm going to enter my high school in September.I think my high school life will be colorful.
My high school will be peaceful and beautiful.It must be a good place to study.The
【审题指导】这是一篇关于学生学校生活的文章,可按照常规的“三段式”来写作。首段引入写作主题(已给出);第二段按照表格提示内容逐一介绍“我”憧憬的高中生活是什么样子的;第三段表达自己想快点进入高中学习的迫切心情。
【写作导图】
【作文失分点与句子升格】
◎失分点
此类话题的作文贴合学生生活,学生相对来说比较熟悉,有话可写。结合此篇作文来说,易失分的地方主要有:
1.虽然表格中提示了要点,但是如何将信息衔接起来并过渡自然,是一大难点;
2.这是一篇讲述未来的高中生活的作文,全篇时态应以一般将来时为主。写作时,切勿脱离作文背景,盲目写作。一定要注意时态正确运用。
◎句子升格(答案均在【佳作欣赏】中加粗体现)
1.My high school will be peaceful and beautiful. There are many tall buildings in it.(用“with”将两句合并为一句)
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2.They will be strict with students. They care for them,too.(用恰当的连词将两句连成一句,使句意保持不变)
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【佳作欣赏】
My Life in High School
My three year middle school life will be over.And I'm going to enter my high school in September.I think my high school life will be colorful.
What a wonderful high school life! I can't wait!
二
作为一名初三的学生,你很快就要初中毕业了。此时此刻,对于三年的初中生活,你有何感想?请你根据下图信息,以“My School Life”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:1.短文应包括导图中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3.词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My School Life
My school life is unforgettable.__________________________________________________
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,可以提取以下信息:
1.写作时以第一人称为主;
2.文章主要用一般现在时从三个方面(我的老师,我的同学,我自己)写出初中三年“我”的成长与感受;
3.图表中的全部信息要一一列举,不要遗漏;
4.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,不能出现真实的人名和地名。
【写作模板】
【高分范文】
My School Life
My school life is unforgettable.Three years has passed by and I am leaving my school, but I can't forget the happy time that I've spent with my classmates and teachers.
My school life is meaningful and colorful.I am proud of living and studying in my school.
一
由于新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情,2020年春节结束之后,为了保证学生“停课不停学”,学校采取网上授课这一教学形式。假如你们班上周安排学生对于网上授课的优缺点进行了讨论,以下是你们班学生的讨论结果。请根据下面表格中的提示用英语写一篇短文,并表明你的观点。
Most students 1.Online education can save time.
2.The lesson videos can be watched over and over again.
A few students 1.The teachers can't make eye contact with the students.
2.The students can't discuss with each other.
You …
要求:
1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3.词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Opinions on Online Education
Last week, we had a discussion about online education. The students' opinions on online education are different.
However, the traditional teaching style is the most important.
二
你们学校的生活丰富多彩吗?请以“Colorful Weekdays”为题,并根据下面的图表信息,写一篇英语短文,介绍你们学校的课外活动。内容包括:你们学校都有哪些课外活动、你喜欢哪些活动及你喜欢它们的原因。
提示:1. 短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Colorful Weekdays
It is my honor to show you our colorful weekdays.
Hope you can join us and enjoy every moment in our school!
三
近期, 你校的《英文校刊》推出了一个名为“Suggestions For A Better School”的专栏, 向同学们广泛征求意见。假如你是李华, 请根据下表中的内容写一篇短文并向该专栏投稿。
Our School
Suggestions for a better school 1. add more books to the library 2. provide more time for art and music 3. give less homework during the holidays . . .
要求: (1) 短文必须包括表格中所有内容, 可适当增加细节; (2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息; (3)词数: 80—100。 短文首句已给出, 不计入总词数。
I’m very happy to be given the chance to offer my suggestions to make our school a better place.
真题训练
(2023·辽宁抚顺·统考中考真题)
初中三年生活转瞬即逝,如今即将毕业离开母校,此时此刻,你是否还记得升入初中第一天的情景呢?请以“My First Day in the Middle School”为题,用英语写一篇短文,描述一下你入校当天的所见所闻、经历感受,再次体验曾经的美好时光,满怀信心地去迎接新的未来!词数:80~100词。
要求:
(1)语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范。
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
(3)短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
My First Day in the Middle School
When I first walked into the middle school,
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Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me.
(2023·湖南衡阳·统考中考真题)
假如你是李强,你校即将举办的“活动周”有四个项目。请你根据下面表格的信息,写一篇英语短文,介绍你想参加的活动内容并说明其理由。
Project A Sports Day A Volunteer Day A School Trip Day A Talent Show Day
Activities ·play basketball ·run ·…… ·visit the old people’s home ·clean up Nanhu Park ·…… ·visit Hengyang Museum ·go to the countryside ·…… ·sing a song ·draw ·……
Reasons ·keep healthy ·feel relaxed ·…… ·care for the old ·protect the environment ·…… ·learn a lot ·be close to nature ·…… ·improve myself ·take up a hobby ·……
要求:
(1)根据上面表格中的信息,选择至少两个方面的内容行文,需适当发挥;
(2)文中不出现真实的校名和人名等;
(3)字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,条理清楚;(4)词数不少于80。
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(2023·湖北十堰·统考中考真题)
三年的初中生活,你一定有许多收获,也会有一些不足。展望未来,你肯定有许多美好的期待。假如你被邀请在班会上发言,请你根据以下表格信息,写一篇发言稿。
提示内容 提示词
回顾过去 1.性格上的改变 2.学习上的成就 3.反思不足 1. outgoing, get on with 2. learn from, make progress 3. waste time, not understand
展望未来 未来的期望 come true
要求:
1.发言稿需涵盖表格中所有内容,可适当发挥;
2.行文连贯,条理清楚,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不可出现真实人名和校名等相关信息:
4.词数80-100,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear students,
How time flies! Looking back at these past three years, I have improved a lot.
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Good luck!
(2023·河南·统考中考真题)
为了丰富学校大课间活动内容,学校校刊英语专栏以“最美大课间,强健青少年”为主题面向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿。
写作要求:1) 介绍学校目前30分钟大课间的活动内容,并简单谈谈你的感受;
2) 你对大课间活动内容有什么更好的建议,请写出理由;
3) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
4) 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:shuttlecock exercises 毽子操;badminton 羽毛球;rope skipping 跳绳
The colorful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier and stronger.
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(2023·江苏宿迁·统考中考真题)
“双减”政策推行之后,中学生的学习及生活发生了很大的变化。为了达成“五育”并举的培养目标,你校开展了丰富的延时服务课程并鼓励学生参与志愿服务。某报社想了解这方面的情况。假如你是李华,请你根据以下提示写一封英文邮件进行简单介绍。
延时服务 参加各种各样的课程,比如音乐、篮球等; ……(你的情况)
志愿服务 帮助他人解决问题; …… (举例说明)
你的收获 提升能力,更加自信; ……(补充1-2点)
注意事项:
1. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Dear Editor,
I am glad to tell you something about the after-school services in our school and the voluntary work we do.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【2020 四川乐山市】
近年来,在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象;为此,国家最近印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。请你结合自身的体会,就如何培养劳动精神,给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。内容包括:
1. 上劳动课,学习生活技能;
2. 参加实践活动,如:植树、种菜等;
3. 学做家务,如:整理房间、洗衣服等;
4. 养成良好的劳动习惯。
注意:
1. 词数:80词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 参考词汇:劳动课a hardworking spirit class。
A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________话题五 学校生活
一.话题写作
【学校人员与设施】
1. 教师teacher 2. 学生student
3. 班长monitor 4. 校长headmaster
5. 同班同学classmate 6. 小学生pupil
7. 大学university/college 8. 实验室lab=laboratory
9. 操场playground 10. 教室classroom
11. 班级;课class 12. 图书馆library
13. 办公室office 14. 会议室meeting room
15. 食堂dining room 16. 黑板blackboard
17. 粉笔chalk 18. 座位seat
【学科及学习用品】
1. 学科subject 2. 英语English
3. 中文Chinese 4. 数学math/maths
5. 音乐music 6. 艺术;美术art
7. 历史学history 8. 地理学geography
9. 化学chemistry 10. 物理学physics
11. 科学science 12. 书包schoolbag
13. 铅笔 pencil 14. 笔记本notebook
15. 字典;词典dictionary
【学习】
1. 家庭作业homework 2. 课lesson
3. 考试exam/examination 4. 知识knowledge
5. 报纸newspaper 6. 杂志magazine
7. 技巧skill 8. 理解;明白understand
9. 检查check 10. 练习practise/practice
11. 纠正;正确的correct 12. 错误mistake
13. 复习review 14. 进步progress
【学校活动】
1. 演讲speech 2. 比赛 match/competition
3. 活动activity 4. 运动会sports meeting
5. 赛跑;竞赛race 6. 游戏game
7. 象棋chess
8. 篮球/排球/足球basketball/volleyball/football
二、佳句欣赏与运用
◆谚语类
How time flies!时间飞逝!
No pains,no gains.一分耕耘,一分收获。
◆学校和学校生活类
1. Why not come and join the Solar Power Club 为什么不来加入太阳能俱乐部呢
2. I often take part in all kinds of after-school activities. 我经常参加各种各样的课外活动。
3. There are different kinds of activities during the English Week, such as an English book fair, speaking competition and so on. 英语周期间有各种各样的活动, 如英语书展、英语演讲比赛等。
4. My school life is colorful and meaningful. 我的学校生活是丰富多彩和有意义的。
5. Time is valuable, and it is really important to make full use of our school life. 时间是宝贵的, 好好利用学校生活的时光真的很重要。
6. How exciting it is to win the first prize in the English speech competition. 在英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖真是太令人激动了。
7. It not only provides us with a chance to learn about the world outside school but also offers us a good opportunity to have a better understanding of the local culture and history.
它不但给我们提供了了解学校之外的世界的机会, 也为我们提供了更好地了解当地文化和历史的机会。
8.How time flies! My middle school life will be over.时间过得真快啊~我的中学生活就要结束了。
9.My middle school life is coming to an end.I have a lot of sweet/unforgettable memories.我的中学生活就要结束了。我有很多甜蜜/难忘的回忆。
10.Our school is clean and beautiful.We enjoy studying here.我们的学校既干净又漂亮。我们喜欢在这里学习。
11.It's our duty to do volunteer work to make our school more beautiful.我们的责任是做志愿者工作,使我们的学校更美丽。
12.Last week's talent show in our school was a great success.上周我们学校的才艺表演取得了很大的成功。
13.We can plant more trees and pick up rubbish on campus.我们可以在校园里种更多的树和捡垃圾。
14.We should play a part in keeping our school clean.我们应该在保持学校清洁方面发挥作用。
15.In a word,my three year life in middle school is busy and colorful/meaningful/unforgettable.总之,我三年的中学生活是忙碌而丰富多彩的/有意义的/难忘的。
16.I hope my school will become more and more beautiful.我希望我的学校会变得越来越美丽。
假如你是南昌市第二十八中学的一名学生,即将中学毕业,马上就要进入高中学习,你对未来的高中生活充满了憧憬。请你以“My Life in High School”为题,根据表格提示内容,写一篇80词左右的英语短文(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
内容要点
校园 校园宁静(peaceful)而美丽,教室宽敞、明亮,是学习的好地方
老师 老师知识渊博(knowledgeable),既严格要求学生,又关爱学生
同学 与同学友好相处
学习 自主学习(learn by oneself),积极参加小组活动
课外 活动 积极参加各种课外活动(out of class activities),保持身体健康
要求:
1.短文的标题和开头部分已给出,不计入总词数;
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范。
My Life in High School
My three year middle school life will be over.And I'm going to enter my high school in September.I think my high school life will be colorful.
My high school will be peaceful and beautiful.It must be a good place to study.The
【审题指导】这是一篇关于学生学校生活的文章,可按照常规的“三段式”来写作。首段引入写作主题(已给出);第二段按照表格提示内容逐一介绍“我”憧憬的高中生活是什么样子的;第三段表达自己想快点进入高中学习的迫切心情。
【写作导图】
【作文失分点与句子升格】
◎失分点
此类话题的作文贴合学生生活,学生相对来说比较熟悉,有话可写。结合此篇作文来说,易失分的地方主要有:
1.虽然表格中提示了要点,但是如何将信息衔接起来并过渡自然,是一大难点;
2.这是一篇讲述未来的高中生活的作文,全篇时态应以一般将来时为主。写作时,切勿脱离作文背景,盲目写作。一定要注意时态正确运用。
◎句子升格(答案均在【佳作欣赏】中加粗体现)
1.My high school will be peaceful and beautiful. There are many tall buildings in it.(用“with”将两句合并为一句)
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2.They will be strict with students. They care for them,too.(用恰当的连词将两句连成一句,使句意保持不变)
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【佳作欣赏】
My Life in High School
My three year middle school life will be over.And I'm going to enter my high school in September.I think my high school life will be colorful.
My high school will be peaceful and beautiful with many tall buildings in it.It must be a good place to study.The classrooms will be wide and bright.The teachers will be knowledgeable.They will be strict with students but they care for them,too.I will get along well with my classmates.I will learn by myself and take an active part in group work.And I will take part in all kinds of out of class activities and keep fit.
What a wonderful high school life! I can't wait!
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作为一名初三的学生,你很快就要初中毕业了。此时此刻,对于三年的初中生活,你有何感想?请你根据下图信息,以“My School Life”为题,写一篇短文。
提示:1.短文应包括导图中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯,段落分明;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3.词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My School Life
My school life is unforgettable.__________________________________________________
【审题指导】细读所给的文字提示,可以提取以下信息:
1.写作时以第一人称为主;
2.文章主要用一般现在时从三个方面(我的老师,我的同学,我自己)写出初中三年“我”的成长与感受;
3.图表中的全部信息要一一列举,不要遗漏;
4.词数不少于80,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,不能出现真实的人名和地名。
【写作模板】
【高分范文】
My School Life
My school life is unforgettable.Three years has passed by and I am leaving my school, but I can't forget the happy time that I've spent with my classmates and teachers.
I thank my classmates, who play with me and help me a lot with my homework.My lovely teachers, who make their classes more interesting and are kind to me, are the most important people in my life.With them, I've got more knowledge and improved my life.As for me, I am busy with my studies, and I like playing basketball and reading books.After class, I join some clubs at school.In this way, I learn how to face difficulties, and I also learn how to get on well with friends.
My school life is meaningful and colorful.I am proud of living and studying in my school.
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由于新型冠状病毒肺炎疫情,2020年春节结束之后,为了保证学生“停课不停学”,学校采取网上授课这一教学形式。假如你们班上周安排学生对于网上授课的优缺点进行了讨论,以下是你们班学生的讨论结果。请根据下面表格中的提示用英语写一篇短文,并表明你的观点。
Most students 1.Online education can save time.
2.The lesson videos can be watched over and over again.
A few students 1.The teachers can't make eye contact with the students.
2.The students can't discuss with each other.
You …
要求:
1.短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯;
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3.词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Opinions on Online Education
Last week, we had a discussion about online education. The students' opinions on online education are different.
Most students think that online education can save time which they can spend doing more meaningful things. Moreover, the lesson videos can be watched over and over again. If you have difficulty in doing your homework, online education can help you.
However, a few students believe that online education has disadvantages. On the one hand,the teachers can't make eye contact with the students.They don't know whether the students pay attention to the lessons. On the other hand, the students can't discuss with each other. In my opinion, every coin has two sides. Online education is a new teaching style. It is just a proper way to solve the problem we're facing. However, the traditional teaching style is the most important.
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你们学校的生活丰富多彩吗?请以“Colorful Weekdays”为题,并根据下面的图表信息,写一篇英语短文,介绍你们学校的课外活动。内容包括:你们学校都有哪些课外活动、你喜欢哪些活动及你喜欢它们的原因。
提示:1. 短文应包括图表中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯;
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3. 词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Colorful Weekdays
It is my honor to show you our colorful weekdays. Today I mainly tell you something about the after class activities in our school.
Our school has various activities after class. The activities begin at 4:20 and end at 5:20 every afternoon. The groups on different subjects include sightseeing, speech contests, art festival, volunteer activities, sports meeting and so on. Among them, I would like to take part in the sightseeing and art festival groups the most. Because the activities are wonderful.
So I really hope that we can have less homework so that we can have more time to take the after class activities to relax ourselves. Hope you can join us and enjoy every moment in our school!
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近期, 你校的《英文校刊》推出了一个名为“Suggestions For A Better School”的专栏, 向同学们广泛征求意见。假如你是李华, 请根据下表中的内容写一篇短文并向该专栏投稿。
Our School
Suggestions for a better school 1. add more books to the library 2. provide more time for art and music 3. give less homework during the holidays . . .
要求: (1) 短文必须包括表格中所有内容, 可适当增加细节; (2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息; (3)词数: 80—100。 短文首句已给出, 不计入总词数。
I’m very happy to be given the chance to offer my suggestions to make our school a better place.
【写作范文】
I’m very happy to be given the chance to offer my suggestions to make our school a better place.
First, I suggest that our school add more interesting books to the library, as reading can open our eyes to the outside world. Next, I hope our school will provide us with more time for art and music. We also hope that teachers will give us less homework during the holidays, so that we can have more time for things like volunteering. Finally, it would be great if our school can organize more afterclass activities, because taking part in the activities can help us build up stronger friendship with each other.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful.
真题训练
(2023·辽宁抚顺·统考中考真题)
初中三年生活转瞬即逝,如今即将毕业离开母校,此时此刻,你是否还记得升入初中第一天的情景呢?请以“My First Day in the Middle School”为题,用英语写一篇短文,描述一下你入校当天的所见所闻、经历感受,再次体验曾经的美好时光,满怀信心地去迎接新的未来!词数:80~100词。
要求:
(1)语意连贯,层次清晰,书写规范。
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
(3)短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
My First Day in the Middle School
When I first walked into the middle school,
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Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me.
【答案】例文
My First Day in the Middle School
When I first walked into the middle school, I was excited as well as worried. I was excited because I was a student of junior middle school now. I was worried because I didn’t quite know about the teachers and students in this school. I was afraid I couldn’t fit in well. However, when I sat down at my desk and began to know about my teachers and classmates, I found everyone was really nice to me. Teachers were very kind and ready to help us. My classmates were active and easy to get along with. After class, I played soccer with my newly-made friends on the playground. Looking at the beautiful campus, I gradually forgot my nervousness. I felt at home. At the end of that first school day, I felt no more fear and I believed I would have lots of fun at this new school.
Now I will leave my school. I’m going to work hard in the future to make my school proud of me.
12.(2023·湖南衡阳·统考中考真题)
假如你是李强,你校即将举办的“活动周”有四个项目。请你根据下面表格的信息,写一篇英语短文,介绍你想参加的活动内容并说明其理由。
Project A Sports Day A Volunteer Day A School Trip Day A Talent Show Day
Activities ·play basketball ·run ·…… ·visit the old people’s home ·clean up Nanhu Park ·…… ·visit Hengyang Museum ·go to the countryside ·…… ·sing a song ·draw ·……
Reasons ·keep healthy ·feel relaxed ·…… ·care for the old ·protect the environment ·…… ·learn a lot ·be close to nature ·…… ·improve myself ·take up a hobby ·……
要求:
(1)根据上面表格中的信息,选择至少两个方面的内容行文,需适当发挥;
(2)文中不出现真实的校名和人名等;
(3)字迹工整,语言流畅,表达正确,条理清楚;(4)词数不少于80。
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【答案】例文
Our school is going to hold an “activity week”. I want to join “A Sports Day” and “A Volunteer Day”. In the first project, there are many activities, such as playing basketball, running, jumping and so on. I think these sports can help me keep healthy and at the same time can make me feel relaxed. In the second project, I will visit the old people’s home, because I want to care for the old and bring them joy. What’s more, I will also clean Nanhu Park. It will help protect the environment and make our life more pleasant.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为材料作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③ 提示:根据所给提示完成写作,不能遗漏信息,以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步,从所给的四个项目中至少选择两个活动;
第二步,具体介绍想参加的活动和原因。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③at the same time同时
④what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①I think these sports can help me keep healthy and at the same time can make me feel relaxed. (省略that的宾语从句)
②I will visit the old people’s home, because I want to care for the old and bring them joy.(because引导的原因状语从句)
(2023·湖北十堰·统考中考真题)
三年的初中生活,你一定有许多收获,也会有一些不足。展望未来,你肯定有许多美好的期待。假如你被邀请在班会上发言,请你根据以下表格信息,写一篇发言稿。
提示内容 提示词
回顾过去 1.性格上的改变 2.学习上的成就 3.反思不足 1. outgoing, get on with 2. learn from, make progress 3. waste time, not understand
展望未来 未来的期望 come true
要求:
1.发言稿需涵盖表格中所有内容,可适当发挥;
2.行文连贯,条理清楚,语句通顺,语法正确,书写规范;
3.文中不可出现真实人名和校名等相关信息:
4.词数80-100,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear students,
How time flies! Looking back at these past three years, I have improved a lot.
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Good luck!
【答案】例文:
Dear students,
How time flies! Looking back at these past three years, I have improved a lot.
I used to be very shy, not daring to express myself in public. But with the encouragement from my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me. Besides, I often learn from my classmates so I have made great progress in my study. However, I also wasted much valuable time in playing computer games. What’s worse, I couldn’t really understand my parents, always talking back to them loudly. But now, everything has changed. I make a decision to study harder to make my parents proud of me. I believe that my dream will come true and I will have a bright future.
Good luck!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇演讲稿;
②时态:时态综合使用“一般过去时”,“一般现在时”和“现在完成时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,总述过去的三年有很大的变化;
第二步,回顾过去,包括性格、学习的变化并反思自己的不足;
第三步,展望未来,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①in public在公共场合
②get on well with与……相处融洽
③make great progress取得很大进步
④make a decision做决定
[高分句型]
①But with the encouragement from my teachers, I not only become more outgoing but also get on well with all the people around me.(not only...but also,,,结构)
②I believe that my dream will come true and I will have a bright future.(that引导的宾语从句)
(2023·河南·统考中考真题)
为了丰富学校大课间活动内容,学校校刊英语专栏以“最美大课间,强健青少年”为主题面向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,向专栏投稿。
写作要求:1) 介绍学校目前30分钟大课间的活动内容,并简单谈谈你的感受;
2) 你对大课间活动内容有什么更好的建议,请写出理由;
3) 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称;
4) 词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:shuttlecock exercises 毽子操;badminton 羽毛球;rope skipping 跳绳
The colorful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier and stronger.
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【答案】例文
The colorful activities during the 30-minute break help make teenagers healthier and stronger.
In our school, we usually do running during the 30-minute break. When the bell rings, students walk out of the classroom to the playground. Then we are lined up and run together. I think it is quite boring. In my opinion, we need different kinds of activities at break, such as shuttlecock exercises, rope skipping and so on. Through these activities, we can really relax ourselves and experience the joy of sports. Also, we will be more energetic in class.
Different kinds of activities at break time will surely benefit us a lot. I really hope our school can organize more of them to ensure the overall development of us students.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据题干中的提示内容进行写作,适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出话题;
第二步,介绍学校目前30分钟大课间的活动内容,并简单谈谈你的感受;
第三步,介绍你对大课间活动内容有什么更好的建议,请写出理由。
[亮点词汇]
①walk out of走出
②in my opinion依我来看
③different kinds of不同种类的
[高分句型]
①When the bell rings, students walk out of the classroom to the playground.(when引导的时间状语从句)
②I really hope our school can organize more of them to ensure the overall development of us students.(宾语从句)
(2023·江苏宿迁·统考中考真题)
“双减”政策推行之后,中学生的学习及生活发生了很大的变化。为了达成“五育”并举的培养目标,你校开展了丰富的延时服务课程并鼓励学生参与志愿服务。某报社想了解这方面的情况。假如你是李华,请你根据以下提示写一封英文邮件进行简单介绍。
延时服务 参加各种各样的课程,比如音乐、篮球等; ……(你的情况)
志愿服务 帮助他人解决问题; …… (举例说明)
你的收获 提升能力,更加自信; ……(补充1-2点)
注意事项:
1. 词数90左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
Dear Editor,
I am glad to tell you something about the after-school services in our school and the voluntary work we do.
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Editor,
I am glad to tell you something about the after-school services in our school and the voluntary work we do.
Our school provides various after-school services, such as music, basketball, and more. I enjoy taking part in the art club where I can express my creativity.
In addition to these services, we also have opportunities for voluntary work. By helping others solve problems and assisting in community service events, we gain valuable experience and develop important skills.
Through these activities, I have gained confidence and improved my abilities. I believe that these experiences will benefit me greatly in the future.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容介绍学校的课后服务和志愿工作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出对课后服务和志愿工作的介绍;
第二步,具体阐述写作内容,从课后服务和志愿工作两个方面重点介绍;
第三步,表达自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②take part in参加
③In addition to另外
④in the future在未来
[高分句型]
①By helping others solve problems and assisting in community service events, we gain valuable experience and develop important skills.(动名词作宾语)
②I believe that these experiences will benefit me greatly in the future.(that引导的宾语从句)
【2020 四川乐山市】
近年来,在一些学生中出现了不珍惜劳动成果、不想劳动、不会劳动的现象;为此,国家最近印发了《关于全面加强新时代大中小学劳动教育的意见》。请你结合自身的体会,就如何培养劳动精神,给校报英语专栏写一篇短文。内容包括:
1. 上劳动课,学习生活技能;
2. 参加实践活动,如:植树、种菜等;
3. 学做家务,如:整理房间、洗衣服等;
4. 养成良好的劳动习惯。
注意:
1. 词数:80词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2. 可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;
3. 参考词汇:劳动课a hardworking spirit class。
A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【写作思路】
这是一篇材料作文,要点已全部给出,学生按照逻辑将其连接起来即可。时态应用一般现在时,人称应以第一人称为主。
【参考范文】
A guideline on hardworking spirit education came out recently in order to help more students of different ages to get working spirit. As a middle school student, I welcome it warmly.
Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. Secondly, we can take part in out-of-class activities such as planting trees or growing vegetables to enrich our real-world work experience. Also, we need try to do some chores at home, like tidying rooms, washing clothes or cooking some dishes. Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience.
In a word, the hardworking spirit education is necessary and it helps to build us up.
【名师点评】
1.例文点评:例文先是直奔主题,表明自己对培养劳动精神的热烈欢迎;然后从4个方面分别说明了如何培养劳动精神分别是上课、参加活动、做家务以及养成良好习惯;最后总结点题,表明培养劳动精神的重要性。语言流畅,要点齐全,无语法错误。
2.高分亮点:
take part in 参加
such as 例如
try to do sth. 尽力做某事
the importance of ……的重要性
In a word 简而言之
helps to do sth. 帮助做某事
Firstly, we should have hardworking spirit classes to learn some basic life skills at school every week. 不定式作目的状语
Above all, we could form good working habits and value the importance of working hard through our experience. 表示连接关系的并列句