(共23张PPT)
B2U3
On the move
On the move
ice hockey冰球
short track speed skating短道速滑
figure skating花样滑冰
freestyle skiing
ski jumping
跳台滑雪
biathlon 现代
冬季两项
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Sports in Winter Olympics
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Read the notice and post and answer the questions.
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1. What kind of stories does the website want
2. Why is the website looking for stories
3. What information is included in Nick’s story
The website wants sports lovers' stories from all over the world.
Because it wants to inspire its readers.
The information included in Nick’s story is: what kind of sport Nick plays, how he got started with the sport, how he felt about the sport, what he’s done to improve, and what he hopes to achieve in the future.
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Think of your own sports story and make notes.
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ice hockey
Being persuaded by his teacher.
Love it!/ Fell proud.
Practicing with his local teammates every evening.
His ultimate goal is to be an ice hocky teacher and help people learn hocky.
本文的语篇类型属于记叙文narration, 介绍了作者(Nick)从不会滑冰到加入冰球队并志在夺取全国比赛冠军的故事。
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Think of your own sports story and make notes.
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Writer’s feeling
How to start the sport
How to improve
Hope to achieve
What contributes to Nick’s success in his story
bravery
“I was terrified of walking or skating on ice.”
others’ help
“My teacher was great and he persuaded me to try ice hockey.”
hard work
“I was soon practising with my local team almost every evening.”
love
“I loved it.”
teamwork
I was so proud when my team won the ice hockey competition.
... practising with my local team.
We are now training for national competitions.
02
Think of your own sports story and make notes.
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02
How to write a personal stories
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02
Now write your own sports story. Use the expressions in the box to help you.
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作者在文章中先给出自己对所喜爱的运动的感受,然后时间后退到三年前记述如何一步步取得进步。这种记述方式属于倒叙法。
倒叙flashback: to start from the middle or even the end of the story with the event that is most important or most likely to arouse the reader’s interest, and then go back to the beginning.
故事重点在写事,而不在写人。但是,故事应以人为主题,讲述发生在人物身上的感人故事。故事应具有激励性,充满正能量,给人以启发,催人奋进,积极向上。语言具有趣味性,耐人寻味,同时,精炼、言简意赅。
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Write a sports story.
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1. 文体类型:写一个关于体育运动的故事,属于记叙文范畴。
2. 要点内容:
(1)开始此项运动的原因;
(2)对此项运动的感受;
(3)将来的打算和目标。
[常用词块]1.go for an outing 去远足2.in high spirits 情绪高涨3.a close game 势均力敌的比赛4.go all out 全力以赴5.break the record 打破记录6.build up one's body 增强某人的体质
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Write a sports story.
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关于体育运动的记叙文文体首段常用句式:
There are many kinds of interesting sports,such as basketball,football,
swimming and running...but the most I like is...
When I was a little child,my father took me to...
I have been a... since I was old enough to...
That’s why when...presented me with the idea of joining...I decided to...
关于体育运动的记叙文文体中段常用句式:
I never thought...I will fall in love with...
At first I only regarded...as a hobby to enhance my physical fitness.
Then,I found it’s really fun and cool when I...
Sometimes I just want to give up,but my friends encourage me to carry on,
then I feel a lot of satisfaction.
关于体育运动的记叙文文体尾段常用句式:
I was so happy for my achievement,and it proved that hard work paid off.
Not only because it makes me...,but also for...it has brought.
Doing physical exercise makes me stronger and healthier.That’s my personal experience.
请用英语写一篇自己所经历的体育故事。内容要点如下:
1.我是山东人。
2.学校游泳队队员。
3.从小就喜欢游泳,在学校里认真学习,放学后认真训练;经过努力取得了一系列的成绩。
4.我认为……
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Write a sports story.
第一步:布局谋篇很关键
审题
1.确定体裁: 本文为记叙文;
2.确定中心人称:本文主要为____________;
3.确定主题时态:______________________________。
构思
第一部分:简要介绍自己。
第二部分:________________。
第三部分:对体育运动的认识和对未来的期许。
第一人称
一般现在时或过去时
自己的故事
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Write a sports story.
第二步:核心词汇想周全
1.__________________ 是……的一员
2.__________________ 赢得一枚金牌
3.__________________ 成为冠军
4.__________________ 获得巨大成就
5.__________________ 失去信心
6.__________________ 建议某人做某事
a member of...
win a gold medal
become a champion
get great achievements
lose heart
advise sb to do sth
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Write a sports story.
第三步:由词扩句雏形现
1.I am _________________________________.
我是学校游泳队的队员。
2.I __________________ when I was a small boy.
我小的时候喜欢游泳。
3.I have got ___________________.
我已经取得了巨大成就。
4.I never ______________.我从来不放弃训练。
5.I _______________.我遇到困难。
6.I never _________.我从来不灰心丧气。
a member of school swimming team
loved swimming
great achievements
give up training
meet difficulties
lose heart
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Write a sports story.
第四步:句型升级造亮点
1.将句2改成一个含有since状语从句的句子。
__________________________________________________________________
2.将句3和句4合并成含有though引导让步状语从句的句子。
__________________________________________________________________
3.将句5和句6合并成主从复合句。
__________________________________________________________________
I have been loving swimming since I was a small boy.
Though I have got great achievements,I never give up training.
Whenever I meet difficulties,I never lose heart.
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Write a sports story.
第五步:过渡衔接连成篇
I am from Shandong,a member of the school swimming team.I am 198cm in height.I have been loving swimming since I was a small boy.At 7 I became a member of the school swimming team.Five years later,I won a gold medal at the County Swimming Championship and became a champion at the National Swimming Championships later.Though I have got great achievements,I never give up training.One day I injured my arm in training,someone advised me to see a doctor,but I refused.Whenever I meet difficulties,I never lose heart.
Swimming not only builds my body but also shapes my determined character.I dream of becoming a national swimmer and taking part in the international swimming events on behalf of our country.
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Write a sports story.
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Write a favorite sport.
1.one of the best athletes in our country
2.He is good at...
3.He is even the most capable...in the world.
4.keep the best record of...until now.
5.I find myself full of passion in my heart.
6.He is the best example of making every effort to develop his sport career and break so many records.
7.This spirit is worthy to be learned by all of us.
8.With this ambition,he could defeat any difficulties.
9.Facing difficulties,he never loses heart.
10.make more progress...
【增分表达】
My favourite sport
When it comes to my favourite sport, what I would like to say is that I like swimming best.
I was often taken to the pool to practice swimming by my mother when I was younger. Whenever I saw my mother dive into the swimming pool, I couldn’t help following her bravely. Gradually, I was not afraid of water and later became interested in swimming. I like it not only because it makes me healthier and stronger, but also for the confidence and sense of achievement it has brought.
It’s time to choose your own favourite sports! Make exercise a part of your life and stay healthy!
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Write a favorite sport.
I’m a cray football fan and like playing football very much. I’ve fallen in love with football since the first time I began to play it with my classmates at senior school.
In my opinion, the football game is full of excitement and freedom. The playground is big enough for you to kick freely, even you can use all your strength. I feel I am really myself on the playground. I often played it with my classmates on the playground after class. After a game, every time I felt dynamic and energetic. At college, I go on enjoying the days with football. My football team won the champion twice. The memory is so valuable that I often miss the days and football fellows.
After graduating from college, I want to be a football teacher and teach children how to play football because football brings happiness to me. Of course, not only happiness, football also brings other much to me.
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Write a favorite sport.
I’ve been a sports nut since I was old enough to hold a ball. That’s why when my PE teacher presented me with the idea of joining the swimming team I decided to give it a shot and challenge myself a bit more. So I started going to swimming practice last June. At first I only regarded swimming as a hobby to enhance my physical fitness.
But soon I found I fell in love with it. Then, last week, I had my first swimming competition, in the 100m breaststroke. Standing tall at the head of the lane made me feel both nervous and excited. After the sound of the whistle, I dived in and began to swim with all my strength! Finally, I came in third place.
I was so happy for my achievement, and it proved that hard work pays off. I will keep on swimming, perhaps for the rest of my life. Not only because it makes me healthier and stronger, but also for the confidence and sense of achievement it has brought.
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Write a favorite sport.
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小作文
假设你是李华,你的外国朋友Jim对你校的学生活动很感兴趣。近期你校将举行趣味运动会,请你写一封信邀请他参加。内容如下:1.写信目的;2.介绍趣味运动会,包括:运动会举行的目的、时间、地点;此次运动会的项目,如滚轮胎,猜字谜等;注意事项;3.真诚邀请。参考词汇:tyre-pushing 滚轮胎。
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小作文
★精彩开头
Recently our school held a basketball game between teachers and students to improve the relationship between us.最近我们学校举办了一场师生篮球赛,目的是改善师生关系。
In order to encourage the students to take outdoor exercise,our school organized a mountain climbing on April 10.为了鼓励同学们参加户外锻炼,我们学校于4月10日组织了一次爬山活动。
★丰满主体
Bathed in the sunshine,we jumped and cheered with joy.沐浴在阳光里,我们高兴得欢呼雀跃。
The moment we won the game,an old saying hit my mind—No pains,no gains.我们一赢得比赛,我就想到了一句古老的谚语“不劳则无获”。
Everyone on the playground stood,and the cheering went on for 5 minutes.操场上所有人都站立着,欢呼声持续了5分钟。
★余味结尾
To sum up,we benefited a lot from the activity.总之,我们从这次活动中受益匪浅。
Only in this way can we have enough energy to study better.只有以这种方式我们才有足够的精力学得更好。
Not only did it give us relaxation from heavy school work,it also promoted the friendship among us.它不仅使我们从繁重的学业中放松,而且促进了我们之间的友谊。
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小作文1
Dear Jim, Learning that you are interested in our school activities, I am writing to invite you to attend our interesting sports meeting. The sports meeting is to be held on Friday from 9:00 am to 12:00 am on the playground, which is aimed at building a strong body as well as improving our better understanding of Chinese culture. During the sports meeting, we will have plenty of activities you will be interested in,including tyre-pushing, words-guessing and so on. Last but not least, do remember to take water and wear sports clothes. Will you be available during that time Please contact me at your earliest convenience.