外研版（2019）必修第三册Unit 1 Knowing Me, Knowing You 作文 建议信 课件（共18页）
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Structure
Read para.1-3 and find out the topic sentence of each paragraph. 读1-3段，找出每个段落的主题句
para.3
But I have to say that it’s partly your fault, isn’t it
para.2
The situation here is so much worse because the “loose lips” is your best friend.
para.1
There is an old American saying, “Loose lips sink ships.”
Golden principle 黄金原则
Analysis 分析
Individual reasons个人原因
言多必失
tips: 主题句一般出现在句首或者句末
Analysis of the problem
分析问题
Structure
How to give advice 如何提建议？
Analysing problem
分析问题
Giving suggestions
给出建议
Giving encouragement
鼓励
There is an old American saying, “...”俗话说....
Here’s what you need to do.
First, …
Then, …
Thirdly, ....…
3. If you…, you will soon find everything works out.如果你……，你很快就会发现一切都解决了。
ancient
Addition.
Sentence structure to give advicce. 提建议的句型
第一人称（我建议你...)
I advise you to...
I suggest doing...
第二人称
You’d better do...
You are supposed to do...
无固定主语
It’s a good idea to do...
Doing...is a good choice.
It is important for you to do...
What you should do is that...
你最好....
你应该...
你应该要做的是...
做...对你而言是重要的
做...是不错的选择
做...是不错的主意
假定你是李华，美国交换生John刚来你校就读，他没有多少朋友，感觉非常孤独，希望得到同学们的帮助。你听说此事后，决定给他写一封信。15分
Addition.
Sentence structure to give advicce.
内容要点：
1.表达关心
2.就如何交朋友给出意见
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
1个要点
4个要点
假定你是李华，美国交换生John刚来你校就读，他没有多少朋友，感觉非常孤独，希望得到同学们的帮助。你听说此事后，决定给他写一封信。
写作思路
writing mind
Analysing problem
分析问题
Giving suggestions
给出建议
Giving encouragement
鼓励
建议信
第一段： 分析问题+ 表达关心+写作目的
第二段：建议
第三段：表达祝愿
1个要点
3个要点
1个要点
3个建议
1. 很抱歉得知你......我写信是为了给你提供建议。
2. 对于如何解决你的问题， 我想给你一些建议。
3. 得知你在....上遇到麻烦，我很乐意帮助你并且提供一些建议。
第一段
Sentence patterns 句子结构
I’m sorry.
→I’m sorry to know that.....
I write a letter to do
→I write a letter to give you suggestions.
I’m writing to give you suggestions.
I’m writing to offer you suggestions.
I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions.
I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions about it.
I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning it.
1. 很抱歉得知你......我写信是为了给你提供建议。
2. 对于如何解决你的问题， 我想给你一些建议。
3. 得知你在....上遇到麻烦，我很乐意帮助你并且提供一些建议。
第一段
Sentence patterns 句子结构
I’m sorry to know that..... and I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning it.
I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning +问题.
As for
I want to do
how to sovle your problems,
I’d like to do
As for how to sovle your problems, I’d like to offer you practical suggestions.
1. 很抱歉得知你......我写信是为了给你提供建议。
2. 对于如何解决你的问题， 我想给你一些建议。
3. 得知你在....上遇到麻烦，我想帮助你并且提供一些建议。
第一段
Sentence patterns 句子结构
I’m sorry to know that..... and I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning it.
I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning +问题.
As for how to sovle your problems, I’d like to offer you practical suggestions.
know
you have trouble in...（名词/动名词）
Knowing that you have trouble in...,
I’d like to help and offer you
practical suggestions.
1. 很抱歉得知你......我写信是为了给你提供建议。
2. 对于如何解决你的问题， 我想给你一些建议。
3. 得知你在....上遇到麻烦，我想帮助你并且提供一些建议。
第一段
写作目的→ 表达对John的关心，点名主题---得知在新的学校孤独，没有朋友。
I’m sorry to know that..... and I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning it.
I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning +问题.
As for how to sovle your problems, I’d like to offer you practical suggestions.
Knowing that you have trouble in...,
I’d like to help and offer you
practical suggestions.
1. 很抱歉得知你......我写信是为了给你提供建议。
2. 对于如何解决你的问题， 我想给你一些建议。
3. 得知你在....上遇到麻烦，我想帮助你并且提供一些建议。
第一段
写作目的→ 表达对John的关心，点名主题---得知在新的学校孤独，没有朋友。
I’m sorry to know that..... and I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning it.
I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning +问题.
As for how to sovle your problems, I’d like to offer you practical suggestions.
Knowing that you have trouble in...,
I’d like to help and offer you
practical suggestions.
第二段：建议：
具体的建议：积极参加课外活动， 展示自己的才艺， 多微笑，对人友善 ....
第二段
建议
过渡词
建议
首先：
first，firstly,
first and foremost，
to begin with，
The most impotant factor | that we have to take into consideration is...
其次：
second, secondly,
besides,
what’s more，
in addition，=additionally
furthermore,
moreover,
最后：
last, lastly,
last but not least,
What matters is that...最要紧的是
第二段：建议：
具体的建议：积极参加课外活动， 展示自己的才艺， 多微笑，对人友善 ....
第二段
建议
+ 理由
+ 理由
+ 理由
To begin with，建议
besides,建议
Last but not least,建议
because + 句子
since （由于） + 句子
第二段：建议：
具体的建议：积极参加课外活动， 展示自己的才艺， 多微笑，对人友善 ....
第二段
建议
+ 理由
其次， 展示自己的才艺是一个不错的主意。因为这样，会让你认识与你有相同兴趣的朋友。
Besides,
it’s a good idea to do sth.
Because,
know a friend
share same interest
Besides,it’s a good idea to show your talent. Because it will let you know people who share the same interest with you .
Letters of proposal (建议信)
Dear _____(对象)，
I am writing to give you some advice concerning ______(问题).（交代写作目的）
To begin with, it is important to ____________, because________. Besides, since____________,you'd better_________. Last but not least, you should ___________. Only in this way can you __________. （注意建议信的语篇结构及语言表达）
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Addition.
Sentence structure to give advicce.
1. 我希望我的建议对你有帮助。
2. 如果你觉得我的建议有用的话，我会很高兴的。
第三段
Sentence patterns 句子结构
I hope
I will be happy.
my suggestions
are useful/ helpful
will be of great help to you.
to you.
will be useful/ helpful to you.
If
you think my suggestions useful,
you find my suggestions useful,
Best wishes！
Letters of proposal (建议信)
Dear _____(对象)，
I am writing to give you some advice concerning ______(问题).（交代写作目的）
To begin with, it is important to ____________, because________. Besides, since____________,you'd better_________. Last but not least, you should ___________. Only in this way can you __________. （注意建议信的语篇结构及语言表达）
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. （重申写作目的）
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Addition.
Sentence structure to give advicce.
Dear John,
I’m sorry to hear that loneliness prevails in your school life. As we all know, making friends can help us establish good interpesonal relationship, and build a harmonious society. Now I’d like to offer you some suggestions.
In order to adjust to the new surroudings, you can take active part in class and after-school activities, which can help you communicate with your classmates. I think it would be more benefical if you could share what you really good at. It’s easier to make friends when you have similar interests. Besides，it’s necessary to smile to others and you are sure to get a smile in return.
In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestion useful. Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours,
Li Hua
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Structure
Read para.1-3 and find out the topic sentence of each paragraph. 读1-3段，找出每个段落的主题句
para.3
But I have to say that it’s partly your fault, isn’t it
para.2
The situation here is so much worse because the “loose lips” is your best friend.
para.1
There is an old American saying, “Loose lips sink ships.”
Golden principle 黄金原则
Analysis 分析
Individual reasons个人原因
言多必失
tips: 主题句一般出现在句首或者句末
Analysis of the problem
分析问题
Structure
How to give advice 如何提建议？
Analysing problem
分析问题
Giving suggestions
给出建议
Giving encouragement
鼓励
There is an old American saying, “...”俗话说....
Here’s what you need to do.
First, …
Then, …
Thirdly, ....…
3. If you…, you will soon find everything works out.如果你……，你很快就会发现一切都解决了。
ancient
Addition.
Sentence structure to give advicce. 提建议的句型
第一人称（我建议你...)
I advise you to...
I suggest doing...
第二人称
You’d better do...
You are supposed to do...
无固定主语
It’s a good idea to do...
Doing...is a good choice.
It is important for you to do...
What you should do is that...
你最好....
你应该...
你应该要做的是...
做...对你而言是重要的
做...是不错的选择
做...是不错的主意
假定你是李华，美国交换生John刚来你校就读，他没有多少朋友，感觉非常孤独，希望得到同学们的帮助。你听说此事后，决定给他写一封信。15分
Addition.
Sentence structure to give advicce.
内容要点：
1.表达关心
2.就如何交朋友给出意见
注意：
1.写作词数应为80个左右
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯
1个要点
4个要点
假定你是李华，美国交换生John刚来你校就读，他没有多少朋友，感觉非常孤独，希望得到同学们的帮助。你听说此事后，决定给他写一封信。
写作思路
writing mind
Analysing problem
分析问题
Giving suggestions
给出建议
Giving encouragement
鼓励
建议信
第一段： 分析问题+ 表达关心+写作目的
第二段：建议
第三段：表达祝愿
1个要点
3个要点
1个要点
3个建议
1. 很抱歉得知你......我写信是为了给你提供建议。
2. 对于如何解决你的问题， 我想给你一些建议。
3. 得知你在....上遇到麻烦，我很乐意帮助你并且提供一些建议。
第一段
Sentence patterns 句子结构
I’m sorry.
→I’m sorry to know that.....
I write a letter to do
→I write a letter to give you suggestions.
I’m writing to give you suggestions.
I’m writing to offer you suggestions.
I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions.
I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions about it.
I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning it.
1. 很抱歉得知你......我写信是为了给你提供建议。
2. 对于如何解决你的问题， 我想给你一些建议。
3. 得知你在....上遇到麻烦，我很乐意帮助你并且提供一些建议。
第一段
Sentence patterns 句子结构
I’m sorry to know that..... and I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning it.
I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning +问题.
As for
I want to do
how to sovle your problems,
I’d like to do
As for how to sovle your problems, I’d like to offer you practical suggestions.
1. 很抱歉得知你......我写信是为了给你提供建议。
2. 对于如何解决你的问题， 我想给你一些建议。
3. 得知你在....上遇到麻烦，我想帮助你并且提供一些建议。
第一段
Sentence patterns 句子结构
I’m sorry to know that..... and I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning it.
I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning +问题.
As for how to sovle your problems, I’d like to offer you practical suggestions.
know
you have trouble in...（名词/动名词）
Knowing that you have trouble in...,
I’d like to help and offer you
practical suggestions.
1. 很抱歉得知你......我写信是为了给你提供建议。
2. 对于如何解决你的问题， 我想给你一些建议。
3. 得知你在....上遇到麻烦，我想帮助你并且提供一些建议。
第一段
写作目的→ 表达对John的关心，点名主题---得知在新的学校孤独，没有朋友。
I’m sorry to know that..... and I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning it.
I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning +问题.
As for how to sovle your problems, I’d like to offer you practical suggestions.
Knowing that you have trouble in...,
I’d like to help and offer you
practical suggestions.
1. 很抱歉得知你......我写信是为了给你提供建议。
2. 对于如何解决你的问题， 我想给你一些建议。
3. 得知你在....上遇到麻烦，我想帮助你并且提供一些建议。
第一段
写作目的→ 表达对John的关心，点名主题---得知在新的学校孤独，没有朋友。
I’m sorry to know that..... and I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning it.
I’m writing to offer you practical suggestions concerning +问题.
As for how to sovle your problems, I’d like to offer you practical suggestions.
Knowing that you have trouble in...,
I’d like to help and offer you
practical suggestions.
第二段：建议：
具体的建议：积极参加课外活动， 展示自己的才艺， 多微笑，对人友善 ....
第二段
建议
过渡词
建议
首先：
first，firstly,
first and foremost，
to begin with，
The most impotant factor | that we have to take into consideration is...
其次：
second, secondly,
besides,
what’s more，
in addition，=additionally
furthermore,
moreover,
最后：
last, lastly,
last but not least,
What matters is that...最要紧的是
第二段：建议：
具体的建议：积极参加课外活动， 展示自己的才艺， 多微笑，对人友善 ....
第二段
建议
+ 理由
+ 理由
+ 理由
To begin with，建议
besides,建议
Last but not least,建议
because + 句子
since （由于） + 句子
第二段：建议：
具体的建议：积极参加课外活动， 展示自己的才艺， 多微笑，对人友善 ....
第二段
建议
+ 理由
其次， 展示自己的才艺是一个不错的主意。因为这样，会让你认识与你有相同兴趣的朋友。
Besides,
it’s a good idea to do sth.
Because,
know a friend
share same interest
Besides,it’s a good idea to show your talent. Because it will let you know people who share the same interest with you .
Letters of proposal (建议信)
Dear _____(对象)，
I am writing to give you some advice concerning ______(问题).（交代写作目的）
To begin with, it is important to ____________, because________. Besides, since____________,you'd better_________. Last but not least, you should ___________. Only in this way can you __________. （注意建议信的语篇结构及语言表达）
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Addition.
Sentence structure to give advicce.
1. 我希望我的建议对你有帮助。
2. 如果你觉得我的建议有用的话，我会很高兴的。
第三段
Sentence patterns 句子结构
I hope
I will be happy.
my suggestions
are useful/ helpful
will be of great help to you.
to you.
will be useful/ helpful to you.
If
you think my suggestions useful,
you find my suggestions useful,
Best wishes！
Letters of proposal (建议信)
Dear _____(对象)，
I am writing to give you some advice concerning ______(问题).（交代写作目的）
To begin with, it is important to ____________, because________. Besides, since____________,you'd better_________. Last but not least, you should ___________. Only in this way can you __________. （注意建议信的语篇结构及语言表达）
I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you. （重申写作目的）
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Addition.
Sentence structure to give advicce.
Dear John,
I’m sorry to hear that loneliness prevails in your school life. As we all know, making friends can help us establish good interpesonal relationship, and build a harmonious society. Now I’d like to offer you some suggestions.
In order to adjust to the new surroudings, you can take active part in class and after-school activities, which can help you communicate with your classmates. I think it would be more benefical if you could share what you really good at. It’s easier to make friends when you have similar interests. Besides，it’s necessary to smile to others and you are sure to get a smile in return.
In the end, I will be glad if you find my suggestion useful. Looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours,
Li Hua
范文