2025届高三英语二轮复习专项 写人叙述写作 课件（共81页，内嵌视频）
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高中英语写人叙述写作
情景导入Let’s watch.
Who am I?
After growing up, I will become you .
Who do you want to be?
头脑风暴
You want to be the one who you respect most. Why do you respect him/her?
Let’s make a summary.
I respect XXX.
He / She is a doctor/teacher/farmer.
He / She loves his/ her job.
He / She is humorous.
He / She is helpful/ kind-hearted.
He / She encourages me.
He / She is a good man/woman.
亮点句1
I respect XXX most.
XXX is the person I respect.
When it comes to the person who I think highly of, I would say XXX.
admire
adore
think highly of
I respect XXX.
亮点句1
如何表达「最钦佩」？
When it comes to the person who I think highly of, I would say XXX without hesitation.
I respect XXX.
亮点句1
When it comes to the people I think highly of,
I would say XXX without hesitation.
亮点句2
如何介绍「身份/职业」？
He/ She is a doctor/ teacher/ farmer...
He/ She is a
doctor/teacher/farmer.
亮点句2
如何补充「身份细节」？
XXX is a doctor/ teacher/ farmer.
XXX takes a positive attitude towards life.
XXX is a doctor who takes a positive
attitude towards life.
He/ She is a
doctor/teacher/farmer.
亮点句2
He/ She is a doctor/ teacher/ farmer who takes a positive attitude towards life.
亮点句3
如何表达「对工作的态度」？
He / She loves his/ her job.
He / She loves his/ her job deeply.
He / She devotes himself/herself to his / her work.
He / She is passionate about his / her work.
He / She has fired up about her work.
He / She loves his / her job.
亮点句3
如何传达他「对工作的热爱」？
He said：“Nothing is more important than doing sth“.
He / She loves his / her job.
亮点句3
他全心全意的工作，说没有什么比XX更重要的了。
He/She devotes himself to his/her work, saying”Nothing is more important than sth“.
中
英
He / She loves his / her job.
亮点句3
He / She devotes himself to his / her work, saying “Nothing is more important than sth“.
亮点句4
如何表达「个人品质」？
He / She is full of humor.
He / She has a sense of humor.
He/ She is humorous.
亮点句4
他很幽默，总能让人发笑。
He / She has a great sense of humor. He / She makes people laugh.
He / She is so humorous that he / she makes people laugh.
He / She is so humorous that he / she always makes people laugh happily.
中
英
英
He/ She is humorous.
英
亮点句4
他很幽默，给周围的人带来阳光。
He / She has a great sense of humor. He / She brings sunshine to the people around him.
He / She is so humorous that he / she brings sunshine to the people around him.
中
英
英
He/ She is humorous.
亮点句4
He / She is so humorous that he / she always makes people laugh happily.
He / She is so humorous that he / she brings sunshine to the people around him.
亮点句5
如何表达「乐于助人」？
He / She is helpful.
He / She is helpful.
亮点句5
中
英
英
当我遇到困难，他总会帮助我。
He / She is accommodating enough to me when I am in trouble.
He / She likes to help me no matter how difficult the situation is.
He / She is helpful.
亮点句5
中
英
不论我遇到什么困难，他会耐心倾听并鼓励我勇敢地克服困难。
Whatever difficulties I encounter in my study and life, he / she will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
He / She is helpful.
亮点句5
He / She is accommodating enough to me when I am in trouble.
He / She likes to help me no matter how difficult the situation is.
Whatever difficulties I encounter in my study and life, he / she will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
亮点句6
如何表达「他鼓励我，告诉我不要放弃」？
He / She encourages me.
He/ She encourages me, telling me not to give up.
He / She encourages me.
亮点句6
如何表达
「他的鼓励给了我实现目标的勇气」？
His encouragement gives me the courage to realize my dream.
It’s his encouragement，giving me the courage to accomplish my dream.
He / She encourages me.
亮点句6
如何表达「是他的鼓励，激励我坚持不懈的实现目标」？
It’s his encouragement， inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
He / She encourages me.
亮点句6
如何表达「是他的鼓励，塑造了我的个性」？
It’s his encouragement， shaping my personalities.
He / She encourages me.
亮点句6
中
英
是他的鼓励，塑造了我的个性，激励我坚持不懈地实现我的目标。
It’s his encouragement, contributing to shaping my personalities and inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
He / She encourages me.
亮点句6
It’s his encouragement, giving me the courage to accomplish my goals persistently.
It’s his encouragement, contributing to shaping my personalities and inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
亮点句7
如何表达「他/她是一个好人」？
XXX is a kind, patient and
knowledgeable man.
XXX is an admirable and respectable person .
He/ She is a good man.
亮点句7
如何表达「他/她树立了一个好的榜样」？
He / She has set a good example .
I model myself after him/her .
He/ She is a good man.
亮点句7
如何表达「他/她树立了一个好的榜样」？
He / She has set a good example .
I model myself after him/her .
He/ She is a good man.
亮点句7
中
英
XXX是一个令人敬佩和尊敬的人，我要学习XXX ，成为XXX那样的人。
XXX is such an admirable and respectable person that I will model myself after XXX and be a person like XXX.
He/ She is a good man.
亮点句7
XXX is such an admirable and respectable person that I will model myself after XXX and be a person like XXX.
对我的影响
It’s his encouragement, contributing to shaping my personalities and inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
表达「乐于助人」
Whatever difficulties I encounter in my study and life, he / she will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
表达「幽默」
He / She is so humorous that he / she brings sunshine to the people around him.
表达「对工作态度」
He / She devotes himself to his/her work, saying”Nothing is more important than sth“.
What do you find?
What do you find?
Level 1
Level 2
I respect /admire/adore/think highly of XXX （best）.
He / She is a doctor/ teacher/
farmer.
When it comes to the person who I respect most, I would say XXX without hesitation.
He/ She is a doctor/ teacher/ farmer who takes a positive attitude towards life.
What do you find?
Level 1
Level 2
He / She loves his / her job.
He / She devotes himself to his/her work, saying“Nothing is more important than sth“.
What do you find?
Level 1
Level 2
He/ She is humorous.
He / She is so humorous that he / she always makes people laugh happily.
He / She is so humorous that he / she brings sunshine to the people around him.
What do you find?
Level 1
Level 2
He/ She is helpful.
He / She is accommodating enough to me when I am in trouble.
He / She likes to help me no matter how difficult the situation is.
Whatever difficulties I encounter in my study and life, he / she will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
What do you find?
Level 1
Level 2
He / She encourages me.
It’s his encouragement, contributing to shaping my personalities and inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
What do you find?
Level 1
Level 2
He/ She is a good man.
XXX is such an admirable and respectable person that I will model myself after XXX and be a person like XXX.
锤炼词汇
respect
admire
think highly of
love
devote oneself to sth.
be passionate about sth.
01
02
fire up about sth.
锤炼词汇
be humorous
be full of humor/wit
help
accommodate
meet
encounter
03
04
05
a sense of humor/wit
锤炼词汇
realize one’s dream
accomplish/ fulfill one’s dream/ goals
06
07
good
knowledgeable
respectable
admirable
锤炼句式
XXX is the person I think highly of. I would say XXX without hesitation.
Learning t--t---at the person --—at I think highly of, I would say XXX without hesitation.
01
When it comes to the person who I think highly of, I would say XXX without hesitation.
锤炼句式
He / She devotes himself/herself to his / her work. I / sb’s colleagues admire him.
He / She devotes himself to his / her work, _______ by me/ his colleagues.
02
He / She devotes himself to his / her work, which is respected by me/his colleagues.
锤炼句式
He / She devotes himself to his / her work. He said：“Nothing is more important than doing sth“.
He / She devotes himself to his / her work, _____“Nothing is more important than doing sth“.
03
He /She devotes himself to his / her work, saying“Nothing is more important than doing sth“.
锤炼句式
He / She has a great sense of humor and brings sunshine to the people around him.
He / She is ___ humorous ___ he / she brings sunshine to the people around him.
04
He / She is so humorous that he / she brings sunshine to the people around him.
锤炼句式
He will help me when I am in trouble.
_____________ I encounter in my life, he will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
05
Whatever difficulties I encounter in my life, he will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
锤炼句式
It’s his encouragement, shaping my personalities and inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
It’s his encouragement, ___________ shaping my personalities and inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
06
It’s his encouragement, contributing to shaping my personalities and inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
满分句型
1. 说到我最尊敬的人，我会毫不犹豫的说我的英语老师，李老师。
When it comes to the person who I think highly of, I would say my English teacher, Miss Li without hesitation.
2.说到我最尊敬的人，我会毫不犹豫的说我的爸爸。
When it comes to the person who I admire most, I would say my father without hesitation.
满分句型
3. 他全身心投入工作，他说：“没有什么比帮助孩子接受良好的教育更重要。”
He devotes himself to work, saying “Nothing is more important than helping children to receive a good education”.
满分句型
4. 他总是很幽默，给周围的人带来阳光。
He is so humorous that he brings sunshine to the people around him.
5. 不论我在生活和学习中遇到什么困难，我爸爸会耐心的听我讲，鼓励我勇敢地克服困难。
Whatever difficulties I encounter
in my life or study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
满分句型
6.是他的鼓励，塑造了我的个性，激励我坚持不懈地实现我的目标。
It’s his encouragement, contributing to shaping my personalities and inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
满分句型
7.我的父亲是一个令人敬佩和尊敬的人，我要学习他，成为他那样的人。
My father is such an admirable and respectable person that I will model myself after him and be a person like him.
真题再现
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题, 写一篇短文参赛, 内容包括：
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
审题
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题, 写一篇短文参赛, 内容包括：
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
显性要点
人物简介
受敬重原因
隐性要点
所做的事情
对我的影响
When it comes to the person I respect most, I would say my father, a senior high school teacher, is the one without hesitation.
片段构架
人物简介
受敬重原因
所做的事情
对我的影响
值得尊敬和爱戴的人
I respect / admire / adore xxx most.
职业 / 身份
He / She is a farmer / doctor / teacher.
头脑风暴
Who do you respect most in your memory? Why do you respect him / her?
所以父亲是我最敬重的人。
片段构架
态度
品质1
品质2
人物简介
受敬重原因
所做的事情
对我的影响
So my father is the person I respect most.
积极对待生活
态度
幽默
品质1
助人为乐、善良
品质2
He takes a positive attitude towards life.
态度
He is humorous.
品质1
He is helpful / kind-hearted.
品质2
对事业投入，对学生的爱和责任
把阳光带给身边的每个人
当我遇到困难时，耐心倾听，对我鼓励
片段构架
个人简介
受敬重原因
所做的事情
对我的影响
所以我会毫不犹豫地说父亲是我最敬重的人。
So I would say my father is the person
I respect most without hesitation.
He devotes himself to his students and is responsible for them.
He brings sunshine to the people around him.
He will listen to me patiently and encourage me.
He takes a positive attitude towards life.
He is humorous.
He is helpful /
kind-hearted.
片段写作
He takes a positive attitude towards life.
His students admire him because he devotes himself to his students and is responsible for them.
He is humorous.
He brings sunshine to the people around him.
He is helpful / kind-hearted.
He will listen to me patiently and encourage me.
His students admire him because he devotes himself to his students and is responsible for them.
He takes a positive attitude towards life.
It is his devotion to his students and the sense of responsibility that make all his students admire him.
片段写作
He brings sunshine to the people around him.
He is humorous.
He is so humorous that he brings sunshine to the people around him.
片段写作
He will listen to me patiently and encourage me.
He is helpful /
kind-hearted.
When I come across problems, he will listen to me patiently and encourage me to get over the difficulties bravely.
片段写作
片段写作
It is his devotion to his students and the sense of responsibility that make all his students admire him. He is so humorous that he brings sunshine to the people around him. When I come across problems, he will listen to me patiently and encourage me to get over the difficulties bravely.
影响
决心
片段构架
个人简介
受敬重原因
所做的事情
对我的影响
我很想成为一位像他一样受人尊敬的人。（首尾呼应）
如果没有他的爱和鼓励，我不可能实现我的目标。
影响
我决心也要成为像他那样受人尊敬的人。
决心
Without his love and encouragement, I wouldn’t have accomplished my goals.
影响
My father is such an admirable and respectable person that I will model myself after him and be a person like him.
决心
片段写作
Without his love and encouragement, I wouldn’t have accomplished my goals. My father is such an admirable and respectable person that I will model myself after him and be a person like him.
思考探究
成文
When it comes to the person I respect most, I would say my father, a senior high school teacher, is the one without hesitation.
成文
it is his devotion to his students and the sense of responsibility that make all his students admire him. he is so humorous that he brings sunshine to the people around him. when I come across problems, he will listen to me patiently and encourage me to get over the difficulties bravely.
To begin with,
Besides,
More importantly,
成文
Without his love and encouragement, I wouldn’t have accomplished my goals. My father is such an admirable and respectable person that I will model myself after him and be a person like him.
成文
When it comes to the person I respect most, I would say my father, a senior high school teacher, is the one without hesitation.
To begin with, it is his devotion to his students and the sense of responsibility that make all his students admire him. Besides, He is so humorous that he brings sunshine to the people around him. More importantly, when I come across problems, he will listen to me patiently and encourage me to get over the difficulties bravely.
Without his love and encouragement, I wouldn’t have accomplished my goals. My father is such an admirable and respectable person that I will model myself after him and be a person like him.
审题
一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。
1.?家庭；
2.?工作；
3.?业余生活。
注意：1.?词数100左右；2.?可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.?开头语已为你写好。
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.?...
片段构架
I think my life will be very different in ten years.
我希望在一个电脑公司当一名程序员。
在空闲时，我会继续定期运动。
我将会拥有自己的家。
I will have my own family.
家庭
I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer.
工作
In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise.
业余生活
放假时，周游世界
On my holidays, I will travel around the world.
片段构架
I think my life will be very different in ten years.
I will have my own family.
I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer.
In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise.
会有一个可爱的孩子。
我会喜欢我的工作，并与同事相处融洽。我会做好我做的任何事情。
我将会游泳、跑步、玩各种球。
I will swim, run and play various balls.
业余生活
I will have a lovely baby.
I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I will do a good job in whatever I do.
家庭
工作
I will have a lovely baby.
I will have my own family.
I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child.
片段写作
I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I will do a good job in whatever I do.
I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer.
I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I am sure I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. Also, I will do a good job in whatever I do.
片段写作
I will swim, run and play various balls.
In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise.
In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming , running and playing various balls. On my holidays, I will travel around the world.
片段写作
片段写作
I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I am sure I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. Also, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and playing various balls. On my holidays, I will travel around the world.
成文
I often imagine what my life would be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I am sure I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. Also, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and playing various balls. On my holidays, I will travel around the world.
In a word , my life will be much richer and more colorful .
情景导入Let’s watch.
Who am I?
After growing up, I will become you .
Who do you want to be?
头脑风暴
You want to be the one who you respect most. Why do you respect him/her?
Let’s make a summary.
I respect XXX.
He / She is a doctor/teacher/farmer.
He / She loves his/ her job.
He / She is humorous.
He / She is helpful/ kind-hearted.
He / She encourages me.
He / She is a good man/woman.
亮点句1
I respect XXX most.
XXX is the person I respect.
When it comes to the person who I think highly of, I would say XXX.
admire
adore
think highly of
I respect XXX.
亮点句1
如何表达「最钦佩」？
When it comes to the person who I think highly of, I would say XXX without hesitation.
I respect XXX.
亮点句1
When it comes to the people I think highly of,
I would say XXX without hesitation.
亮点句2
如何介绍「身份/职业」？
He/ She is a doctor/ teacher/ farmer...
He/ She is a
doctor/teacher/farmer.
亮点句2
如何补充「身份细节」？
XXX is a doctor/ teacher/ farmer.
XXX takes a positive attitude towards life.
XXX is a doctor who takes a positive
attitude towards life.
He/ She is a
doctor/teacher/farmer.
亮点句2
He/ She is a doctor/ teacher/ farmer who takes a positive attitude towards life.
亮点句3
如何表达「对工作的态度」？
He / She loves his/ her job.
He / She loves his/ her job deeply.
He / She devotes himself/herself to his / her work.
He / She is passionate about his / her work.
He / She has fired up about her work.
He / She loves his / her job.
亮点句3
如何传达他「对工作的热爱」？
He said：“Nothing is more important than doing sth“.
He / She loves his / her job.
亮点句3
他全心全意的工作，说没有什么比XX更重要的了。
He/She devotes himself to his/her work, saying”Nothing is more important than sth“.
中
英
He / She loves his / her job.
亮点句3
He / She devotes himself to his / her work, saying “Nothing is more important than sth“.
亮点句4
如何表达「个人品质」？
He / She is full of humor.
He / She has a sense of humor.
He/ She is humorous.
亮点句4
他很幽默，总能让人发笑。
He / She has a great sense of humor. He / She makes people laugh.
He / She is so humorous that he / she makes people laugh.
He / She is so humorous that he / she always makes people laugh happily.
中
英
英
He/ She is humorous.
英
亮点句4
他很幽默，给周围的人带来阳光。
He / She has a great sense of humor. He / She brings sunshine to the people around him.
He / She is so humorous that he / she brings sunshine to the people around him.
中
英
英
He/ She is humorous.
亮点句4
He / She is so humorous that he / she always makes people laugh happily.
He / She is so humorous that he / she brings sunshine to the people around him.
亮点句5
如何表达「乐于助人」？
He / She is helpful.
He / She is helpful.
亮点句5
中
英
英
当我遇到困难，他总会帮助我。
He / She is accommodating enough to me when I am in trouble.
He / She likes to help me no matter how difficult the situation is.
He / She is helpful.
亮点句5
中
英
不论我遇到什么困难，他会耐心倾听并鼓励我勇敢地克服困难。
Whatever difficulties I encounter in my study and life, he / she will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
He / She is helpful.
亮点句5
He / She is accommodating enough to me when I am in trouble.
He / She likes to help me no matter how difficult the situation is.
Whatever difficulties I encounter in my study and life, he / she will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
亮点句6
如何表达「他鼓励我，告诉我不要放弃」？
He / She encourages me.
He/ She encourages me, telling me not to give up.
He / She encourages me.
亮点句6
如何表达
「他的鼓励给了我实现目标的勇气」？
His encouragement gives me the courage to realize my dream.
It’s his encouragement，giving me the courage to accomplish my dream.
He / She encourages me.
亮点句6
如何表达「是他的鼓励，激励我坚持不懈的实现目标」？
It’s his encouragement， inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
He / She encourages me.
亮点句6
如何表达「是他的鼓励，塑造了我的个性」？
It’s his encouragement， shaping my personalities.
He / She encourages me.
亮点句6
中
英
是他的鼓励，塑造了我的个性，激励我坚持不懈地实现我的目标。
It’s his encouragement, contributing to shaping my personalities and inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
He / She encourages me.
亮点句6
It’s his encouragement, giving me the courage to accomplish my goals persistently.
It’s his encouragement, contributing to shaping my personalities and inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
亮点句7
如何表达「他/她是一个好人」？
XXX is a kind, patient and
knowledgeable man.
XXX is an admirable and respectable person .
He/ She is a good man.
亮点句7
如何表达「他/她树立了一个好的榜样」？
He / She has set a good example .
I model myself after him/her .
He/ She is a good man.
亮点句7
如何表达「他/她树立了一个好的榜样」？
He / She has set a good example .
I model myself after him/her .
He/ She is a good man.
亮点句7
中
英
XXX是一个令人敬佩和尊敬的人，我要学习XXX ，成为XXX那样的人。
XXX is such an admirable and respectable person that I will model myself after XXX and be a person like XXX.
He/ She is a good man.
亮点句7
XXX is such an admirable and respectable person that I will model myself after XXX and be a person like XXX.
对我的影响
It’s his encouragement, contributing to shaping my personalities and inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
表达「乐于助人」
Whatever difficulties I encounter in my study and life, he / she will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
表达「幽默」
He / She is so humorous that he / she brings sunshine to the people around him.
表达「对工作态度」
He / She devotes himself to his/her work, saying”Nothing is more important than sth“.
What do you find?
What do you find?
Level 1
Level 2
I respect /admire/adore/think highly of XXX （best）.
He / She is a doctor/ teacher/
farmer.
When it comes to the person who I respect most, I would say XXX without hesitation.
He/ She is a doctor/ teacher/ farmer who takes a positive attitude towards life.
What do you find?
Level 1
Level 2
He / She loves his / her job.
He / She devotes himself to his/her work, saying“Nothing is more important than sth“.
What do you find?
Level 1
Level 2
He/ She is humorous.
He / She is so humorous that he / she always makes people laugh happily.
He / She is so humorous that he / she brings sunshine to the people around him.
What do you find?
Level 1
Level 2
He/ She is helpful.
He / She is accommodating enough to me when I am in trouble.
He / She likes to help me no matter how difficult the situation is.
Whatever difficulties I encounter in my study and life, he / she will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
What do you find?
Level 1
Level 2
He / She encourages me.
It’s his encouragement, contributing to shaping my personalities and inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
What do you find?
Level 1
Level 2
He/ She is a good man.
XXX is such an admirable and respectable person that I will model myself after XXX and be a person like XXX.
锤炼词汇
respect
admire
think highly of
love
devote oneself to sth.
be passionate about sth.
01
02
fire up about sth.
锤炼词汇
be humorous
be full of humor/wit
help
accommodate
meet
encounter
03
04
05
a sense of humor/wit
锤炼词汇
realize one’s dream
accomplish/ fulfill one’s dream/ goals
06
07
good
knowledgeable
respectable
admirable
锤炼句式
XXX is the person I think highly of. I would say XXX without hesitation.
Learning t--t---at the person --—at I think highly of, I would say XXX without hesitation.
01
When it comes to the person who I think highly of, I would say XXX without hesitation.
锤炼句式
He / She devotes himself/herself to his / her work. I / sb’s colleagues admire him.
He / She devotes himself to his / her work, _______ by me/ his colleagues.
02
He / She devotes himself to his / her work, which is respected by me/his colleagues.
锤炼句式
He / She devotes himself to his / her work. He said：“Nothing is more important than doing sth“.
He / She devotes himself to his / her work, _____“Nothing is more important than doing sth“.
03
He /She devotes himself to his / her work, saying“Nothing is more important than doing sth“.
锤炼句式
He / She has a great sense of humor and brings sunshine to the people around him.
He / She is ___ humorous ___ he / she brings sunshine to the people around him.
04
He / She is so humorous that he / she brings sunshine to the people around him.
锤炼句式
He will help me when I am in trouble.
_____________ I encounter in my life, he will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
05
Whatever difficulties I encounter in my life, he will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
锤炼句式
It’s his encouragement, shaping my personalities and inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
It’s his encouragement, ___________ shaping my personalities and inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
06
It’s his encouragement, contributing to shaping my personalities and inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
满分句型
1. 说到我最尊敬的人，我会毫不犹豫的说我的英语老师，李老师。
When it comes to the person who I think highly of, I would say my English teacher, Miss Li without hesitation.
2.说到我最尊敬的人，我会毫不犹豫的说我的爸爸。
When it comes to the person who I admire most, I would say my father without hesitation.
满分句型
3. 他全身心投入工作，他说：“没有什么比帮助孩子接受良好的教育更重要。”
He devotes himself to work, saying “Nothing is more important than helping children to receive a good education”.
满分句型
4. 他总是很幽默，给周围的人带来阳光。
He is so humorous that he brings sunshine to the people around him.
5. 不论我在生活和学习中遇到什么困难，我爸爸会耐心的听我讲，鼓励我勇敢地克服困难。
Whatever difficulties I encounter
in my life or study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely.
满分句型
6.是他的鼓励，塑造了我的个性，激励我坚持不懈地实现我的目标。
It’s his encouragement, contributing to shaping my personalities and inspiring me to accomplish my goals persistently.
满分句型
7.我的父亲是一个令人敬佩和尊敬的人，我要学习他，成为他那样的人。
My father is such an admirable and respectable person that I will model myself after him and be a person like him.
真题再现
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题, 写一篇短文参赛, 内容包括：
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
审题
你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题, 写一篇短文参赛, 内容包括：
1. 人物简介；
2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。
显性要点
人物简介
受敬重原因
隐性要点
所做的事情
对我的影响
When it comes to the person I respect most, I would say my father, a senior high school teacher, is the one without hesitation.
片段构架
人物简介
受敬重原因
所做的事情
对我的影响
值得尊敬和爱戴的人
I respect / admire / adore xxx most.
职业 / 身份
He / She is a farmer / doctor / teacher.
头脑风暴
Who do you respect most in your memory? Why do you respect him / her?
所以父亲是我最敬重的人。
片段构架
态度
品质1
品质2
人物简介
受敬重原因
所做的事情
对我的影响
So my father is the person I respect most.
积极对待生活
态度
幽默
品质1
助人为乐、善良
品质2
He takes a positive attitude towards life.
态度
He is humorous.
品质1
He is helpful / kind-hearted.
品质2
对事业投入，对学生的爱和责任
把阳光带给身边的每个人
当我遇到困难时，耐心倾听，对我鼓励
片段构架
个人简介
受敬重原因
所做的事情
对我的影响
所以我会毫不犹豫地说父亲是我最敬重的人。
So I would say my father is the person
I respect most without hesitation.
He devotes himself to his students and is responsible for them.
He brings sunshine to the people around him.
He will listen to me patiently and encourage me.
He takes a positive attitude towards life.
He is humorous.
He is helpful /
kind-hearted.
片段写作
He takes a positive attitude towards life.
His students admire him because he devotes himself to his students and is responsible for them.
He is humorous.
He brings sunshine to the people around him.
He is helpful / kind-hearted.
He will listen to me patiently and encourage me.
His students admire him because he devotes himself to his students and is responsible for them.
He takes a positive attitude towards life.
It is his devotion to his students and the sense of responsibility that make all his students admire him.
片段写作
He brings sunshine to the people around him.
He is humorous.
He is so humorous that he brings sunshine to the people around him.
片段写作
He will listen to me patiently and encourage me.
He is helpful /
kind-hearted.
When I come across problems, he will listen to me patiently and encourage me to get over the difficulties bravely.
片段写作
片段写作
It is his devotion to his students and the sense of responsibility that make all his students admire him. He is so humorous that he brings sunshine to the people around him. When I come across problems, he will listen to me patiently and encourage me to get over the difficulties bravely.
影响
决心
片段构架
个人简介
受敬重原因
所做的事情
对我的影响
我很想成为一位像他一样受人尊敬的人。（首尾呼应）
如果没有他的爱和鼓励，我不可能实现我的目标。
影响
我决心也要成为像他那样受人尊敬的人。
决心
Without his love and encouragement, I wouldn’t have accomplished my goals.
影响
My father is such an admirable and respectable person that I will model myself after him and be a person like him.
决心
片段写作
Without his love and encouragement, I wouldn’t have accomplished my goals. My father is such an admirable and respectable person that I will model myself after him and be a person like him.
思考探究
成文
When it comes to the person I respect most, I would say my father, a senior high school teacher, is the one without hesitation.
成文
it is his devotion to his students and the sense of responsibility that make all his students admire him. he is so humorous that he brings sunshine to the people around him. when I come across problems, he will listen to me patiently and encourage me to get over the difficulties bravely.
To begin with,
Besides,
More importantly,
成文
Without his love and encouragement, I wouldn’t have accomplished my goals. My father is such an admirable and respectable person that I will model myself after him and be a person like him.
成文
When it comes to the person I respect most, I would say my father, a senior high school teacher, is the one without hesitation.
To begin with, it is his devotion to his students and the sense of responsibility that make all his students admire him. Besides, He is so humorous that he brings sunshine to the people around him. More importantly, when I come across problems, he will listen to me patiently and encourage me to get over the difficulties bravely.
Without his love and encouragement, I wouldn’t have accomplished my goals. My father is such an admirable and respectable person that I will model myself after him and be a person like him.
审题
一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”。请根据下列要点和你的畅想完成短文。
1.?家庭；
2.?工作；
3.?业余生活。
注意：1.?词数100左右；2.?可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.?开头语已为你写好。
I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.?...
片段构架
I think my life will be very different in ten years.
我希望在一个电脑公司当一名程序员。
在空闲时，我会继续定期运动。
我将会拥有自己的家。
I will have my own family.
家庭
I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer.
工作
In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise.
业余生活
放假时，周游世界
On my holidays, I will travel around the world.
片段构架
I think my life will be very different in ten years.
I will have my own family.
I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer.
In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise.
会有一个可爱的孩子。
我会喜欢我的工作，并与同事相处融洽。我会做好我做的任何事情。
我将会游泳、跑步、玩各种球。
I will swim, run and play various balls.
业余生活
I will have a lovely baby.
I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I will do a good job in whatever I do.
家庭
工作
I will have a lovely baby.
I will have my own family.
I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child.
片段写作
I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. I will do a good job in whatever I do.
I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer.
I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I am sure I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. Also, I will do a good job in whatever I do.
片段写作
I will swim, run and play various balls.
In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise.
In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming , running and playing various balls. On my holidays, I will travel around the world.
片段写作
片段写作
I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I am sure I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. Also, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and playing various balls. On my holidays, I will travel around the world.
成文
I often imagine what my life would be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family, probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I am sure I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues. Also, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and playing various balls. On my holidays, I will travel around the world.
In a word , my life will be much richer and more colorful .