Unit 1 Friends
单元话题满分范文必背
1.(23-24八年级上·江苏无锡·阶段练习)假如你是Tom,你有一个笔友名叫Simon,请以“My pen friend Simon”为题向全校师生介绍他的情况。
概况 Simon是一所男女混合学校的八年级学生,校Buddy Club成员之一
外貌 个高腿长,有一双笑眯眯的眼睛
个性 友好,乐于助人,……(举1例)
兴趣 对DIY很着迷,每周六去上DIY的课程,关于DIY知道的很多
梦想 做一名社会工作者,……
要求:
1. 文章条理清晰,语言连贯,必须包含以上要点,可适当发挥,但不要逐字翻译。
2. 词数80词左右(给出部分不计入总词数)。
3. 不得出现真实的校名和人名。
My pen friend Simon
I’m Tom. I have a pen friend named Simon. Today, I’d like to say something about Simon.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My pen pal Simon
I’m Tom. I have a pen pal named Simon. Today, I’d like to say something about Simon.
Simon is a grade 8 student at a mixed school. He is a member of the school Buddy Club. He has long legs, and he runs very fast. He has a pair of smiling eyes. He is friendly. And he is ready to help others. He always helps his classmates clean the classroom. His friends like him very much.
He is crazy about DIY. He has DIY courses every Saturday. He knows a lot about DIY. He wants to be a social worker when he grows up. And he wants to help the children in poor areas go to school.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇说明文,为材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生要注意不要遗漏表格提示中的概况、外貌、个性、兴趣和梦想等信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍Tom的概况、外貌和个性;
第二步,介绍Tom的兴趣和梦想。
[亮点词汇]
①be ready to do准备好做……
②be crazy about着迷于
[高分句型]
①He wants to be a social worker when he grows up.(when引导时间状语从句)
2.(22-23八年级上·江苏南通·阶段练习)假如你叫李芬,你的美国笔友Mary想在中国结交更多的朋友,你通过电子邮件,把你最好的朋友王悦介绍给她,王悦情况见下表:
姓名 王悦
年龄 15
外貌 方脸,明亮而微笑的眼睛,笔直长发。看起来不高,比我苗条得多。
个性 诚实(替朋友保守秘密,从不说人坏话) 慷慨(举一例说明) 乐于助人(举一例说明)
爱好 喜欢看外国电影,法语说得好,擅长打棒球
理想 长大后想成为一名社会工作者,这样她可以听取人们的心声,并帮助他们解决问题。
要求:1.表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2. 必须包括所有信息,可进行适当发挥;
3. 词数:80左右(开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
Dear Mary,
How are you I’m writing to introduce my best friend Wang Yue to you.
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I hope you can make friends with her as soon as you can. I believe you can be best friends.
Yours,
Li Fen
【答案】例文:
Dear Mary,
How are you I’m writing to introduce my best friend Wang Yue to you.
Wang Yue is 15 years old. She has a square face, bright and smiling eyes and long straight hair. She is much slimmer than me. She is honest. She can keep secrets and never say a bad word about others. It’s generous of her to share everything with others. Also, she is helpful. She always gives her seat to the people in need on the bus. Wang Yue likes watching foreign films. She speaks French well and she is good at playing baseball. She hopes she can have more free time for after-school activities in her ideal school. And there is a big library with a lot of books in her ideal school. She wants to be a social worker when she grows up. Then she can listen to others and help people with their problems.
I hope you can make friends with her as soon as you can. I believe you can be best friends.
Yours,
Li Fen
【详解】1. 题干解读:本文是一封电子邮件。给Mary介绍自己的好朋友王悦,需要介绍她的相关信息,具体的内容要包含所给的提示,可适当发挥。
2. 写作指导:本文采用一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主。开头和结尾已给出,中间介绍她的年龄、外貌、个性、爱好和理想。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。
3.(22-23八年级上·江苏盐城·阶段练习)青少年杂志决定举行一次以“我最好的朋友”为题的英语征文比赛。假如你最好的朋友是Daniel,请结合以下要点,写一篇短文介绍你最好的朋友。
My best friend Introduction 1. age
2. grade
3. looks
Personalities 1. helpful
2. generous
3. …
Hobbies 1. DIY
2. travelling
3. …
注意:(1)表达中必须包含所给要点,可以适当发挥。
(2)词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
(3)表达中请勿出现真实的班级及姓名。
My best friend
Daniel is my best friend.
【答案】例文:
My best friend
Daniel is my best friend. He is 13 years old. He is in Grade Eight. He has short brown hair and round face. He has bright and smiling eyes. He is very handsome. He is so helpful that he often helps with my poor English after school. He is also generous, too. Every year he donates his pocket money to the charities. In his free time, he is crazy about DIY. He likes to make and repair things. He enjoys travelling because he can visit many places of interests and learn a lot about different cultures. His dream is to be a social worker in the future because he wants to help others in need.
【详解】1.题干解读:本篇材料作文要求介绍自己最好的朋友。内容要从他的个人情况介绍、性格和爱好三个方面描写,同时要包含表格所给的要点,并可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时,先要认真阅读题目要求,确定人称使用第三人称,时态主要使用一般现在时。文章的题材为记叙文,要紧扣主题,内容要涵盖表格所给要点并做到语句通顺连贯。写完后要检查人称、时态是否一致,是否有拼写错误及标点误用,短语和句式的使用是否得当。
4.(22-23八年级上·江苏宿迁·阶段练习)假设您有一个朋友叫Daniel,请你根据表格内容写一篇文章,介绍一下他的情况。
外貌 班上最高的男生;方脸;带着小圆眼镜; 总是面带笑容,看上去很友好
性格 乐于助人,他经常……; 幽默,经常……
学校生活 学校每天8点开始,4点结束; 每天一小时的家庭作业; 最喜欢的学科……,因为……; 各种各样的课外活动和俱乐部,学生可打篮球、唱歌……
未来计划 ……
要求: 1. 短文应包括表格中的全部信息,条理清楚,行文连贯。
2. 短文中不能出现真实的姓名、学校名和地名。
3. 词数90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My friend Daniel
I have a wonderful friend named Daniel. I’d like to tell you something about him.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My friend Daniel
I have a wonderful friend named Daniel. I’d like to tell you something about him. He is the tallest boy in his class. He has a square face with small round glasses. He always wears a smile on his face which makes him look kind and patient. Everyone likes him because he is helpful. He often gives his seat to others in need on the bus. He is also humorous and is always good at telling jokes which make us laugh.
Now, he studies in a middle school. The school starts at 8:00 am and ends at 4:00 pm every day. He spends 1 hour on the homework every day. His favorite subject is Maths because he thinks Maths can make him smart. He also takes part in all kinds of activities and clubs after school. He can play basketball, sing and play chess with friends.
He also has his own future plan. He plans to travel around the world and taste all kinds of delicious food one day.
【详解】1.题干解读:题目要求根据表格内容写一篇介绍你的好朋友Daniel的短文,要求包含表格所有信息,可适当发挥,不能出现真实信息。
2.写作指导:此作文时态以一般现在时为主,采用第三人称。此作文可采用3段式格式,第一段:介绍Daniel的外貌和性格;第二段:介绍Daniel的学校生活;第三段:Daniel的未来计划。
5.(22-23八年级上·江苏泰州·阶段练习)请根据下面提示,以My best friend为题写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友Daniel。
特点 圆脸,瘦高个儿;很幽默,经常讲笑话让我们开怀大笑。
品行 愿意和朋友分享东西;对人友善;时刻准备帮助别人。
爱好 喜欢阅读,每天看英文报刊杂志。 喜欢运动,每周二和四下午放学后和同学们一起打棒球。 喜欢旅行,希望每周进行一次学校旅行。
未来计划 长大想当……
要求:
1、表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯。
2、短文必须包括所有的信息,省略号部分适当发挥1-2句。
3、词数100词左右。
My friend Daniel
I have a wonderful friend named Daniel. I’d like to tell you something about him.
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【答案】例文:
My best friend
I have a wonderful friend named Daniel. I’d like to tell you something about him. He is tall and thin and has a round face. He has a good sense of humor and often tells us funny jokes to make us laugh.
He is generous and always willing to share what he has with others. He is also kind. He is ready to help people in need any time.
He has many hobbies. He loves reading and he reads English newspapers and magazines every day. He likes doing sports too. Every Tuesday and Thursday afternoon, he plays baseball with his classmates after school. He also enjoys travelling and he hopes that he can go on a school trip every week.
He wants to become a social worker when he grows up, because he would like to help more people.
【详解】1.题干解读:该题目属于人物介类作文,写作时应承接开头,按照所给提示,分四段分别介绍他的特点、品行、爱好和未来计划。
2.写作指导:本文应主要使用第三人称来对朋友进行介绍,时态采用一般现在时为主,按照表格提示,先描述人物外貌特征、性格特征和品质,再介绍他的兴趣爱好以及长大后的愿望。写作时语法上注意主谓一致,语言上注意条理清晰。提示所给内容较详细,写作时按要点翻译,在保证语句通顺的同时适当发挥即可。
6.(22-23八年级上·江苏盐城·阶段练习)假设你有一名叫Daniel的好朋友。请根据以下信息以“My Best Friend”为题,用英语写一篇介绍他的短文。
要点:
Looks a square face, small eyes, short hair, strong
Personality friendly, generous, share …with…, patient…
His ideal school 10 a. m.~3 p. m., choose subjects to study, love computers
Hobbies travelling, ...; reading, ...
Future plan to be a social worker, .....
要求:
1. 词数:80个左右;
2. 条理清楚、语句连贯;
3. 内容必须包括上表中的要点,并在适当地方展开合理想象,作适当发挥;
4. 文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
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【答案】例文
My Best Friend
My best friend is Daniel. He is 13 years old. He studies in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 1, Grade 8. He has a square face, small eyes and short hair. He is strong. He is friendly and generous. He loves sharing everything with me. He is patient with others. We all like him. His ideal school is that he can have class from 10 a. m. to 3 p. m. on weekdays. He can choose subjects to study and he loves computers. He likes traveling, swimming, singing and reading. He is crazy about DIY. He likes animals. He wants to be a social worker when he grows up.
【详解】1. 题干解读:该题目属于材料作文。题目要求是请根据表格内提供的信息以“My Best Friend”为题,用英语写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友Daniel。
2. 写法指导:本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要是第三人称;写作中,要包含介绍朋友的几个方面:姓名、外貌、性格、爱好、理想的学校、未来的打算;文章要紧扣题目要点,内容要完整, 条理要清楚,语句要连贯,表述要准确,语言的表述要符合语法的结构,造句要符合英语的表达习惯。
7.(22-23八年级上·江苏扬州·阶段练习)张莉的笔友Nora将要在扬州读书,想要向Nora介绍她的朋友和自己的学校,让她开心地在这里上学。
要点:1.朋友的外貌、爱好和品质……
2.学校的课程、时间安排、课外活动……
要求:1.内容必须包含所有要点,并且进行适当补充;
2.内容完整,字迹工整,字数不少于100词;
3.文中不允许出现真实的校名、班名和人名;
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【答案】例文
Dear Nora,
I am very glad to know that you will come to Yangzhou to study. I’d like to introduce something about my best friend and school life to you.
Tom is my best friend. He is tall. And he wears a pair of small round glasses. He likes football best. He is honest, kind and helpful. He always gives his seat to someone in need on the bus. Our school begins at 8 am and finishes at 4 pm. We have seven subjects. It takes us an hour to do our homework every day. Our school has many clubs, and the school life is colorful.
I hope you will come here soon.
Yours,
Zhang Li
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。要求向Nora写信介绍自己的朋友和学校生活。注意要点齐全,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍,时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段,第一段引出话题;第二段介绍朋友的外貌、爱好和品质以及学校的课程、时间安排、课外活动;第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯,无语法和拼写错误。
8.(22-23八年级上·江苏扬州·阶段练习)《青少年》杂志正举办以“My best friend”为题的英语征文活动。假如你是 Millie,请根据下表所提示的要点,用英语为该杂志写一篇短文,介绍你的好友 Amy。
基本情况 苗条,大而明亮的眼睛,一所混合学校的八年级学生。
优秀品质 1、和善礼貌,在公交车上乐意让座给有需要的人。 2、认真倾听我们的问题,并提供帮助。
兴趣爱好 1、喜欢旅游,经常参观名胜,了解不同文化。 2、对 DIY 很着迷,曾经……
个人愿望 成为……,因为……
注意:
1. 必须包含所给要点,可以适当发挥;
2. 词数 80 个左右,开头已经给出,不计入总词数;
3. 请勿出现真实校名及姓名。
My best friend
Amy is one of my best friends. She is________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
My best friend
Amy is one of my best friends. She is slim with big and bright eyes. She is a Grade 8 student in a mixed middle school.
She is very kind and polite to others. She is always willing to give up her seat to someone in need on the bus. She likes listening to our questions and she is ready to offer us help.
She likes travelling. She often visits places of interest, enjoys natural beauty and understands local culture. In addition, she is crazy about DIY and enjoys making new things. She once won the first prize in a DIY competition.
When she grows up, she wants to be a social worker, for she wants to help more people in trouble. I hope her dream can come true.
【详解】题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文,题目为“My best friend”;要求包含表格所给要点,可适当发挥。
写作指导:本文是介绍朋友的情况,人称要用第三人称;时态主要用一般现在时;写作时,要按照题目要求对她的长相、品质、爱好和愿望进行逐一描述,做到内容全面、结构清晰、无语法和拼写错误。
9.(22-23八年级上·江苏盐城·阶段练习)根据表格提示,以“My Best Friend”为题,写一篇短文。
Name Nancy School No.1 Middle School Grade 8
Appearance 方脸,扎着马尾辫,有双笑眯眯的眼睛,脸上总是带着微笑
Personality 善良,乐于助人...;有幽默感
School life 男女混合的学校,学校每天8 点开始,5点结束
学校需要穿校服,但是不需要戴领带
学习语文、数学、英语、物理等课程 有时间参加各种各样的课外活动和俱乐部,每月进行一次学校组织的旅行
Future plan ….
注意:
1.词数80左右。开头已经给出,不计入总词数内;2.内容必须包括上表中的要点;
3.条理清楚、语句连续; 4.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名等信息。
My Best Friend
Everyone has good friends ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
My Best Friend
Everyone has good friends. I want to introduce my best friend Nancy to you.
She has a square face with a ponytail. She has smiling eyes and always has a smile on her face. she is not only kind but also helpful. Further more, she has a good sense of humor.
Her school is a mixed school which starts at 8 a.m. and ends at 5 p.m. every day. The students need to wear uniforms, but they don’t need to wear ties. She studies Chinese, math, English, physics and other courses at school. She also participates in various after-school activities and clubs, and takes a school trip once a month.
She wants to be a teacher when she grows up. I hope she can realize her dream.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,要求以“My Best Friend”为题,根据图表提示的内容,从外貌、性格、学校生活、未来计划这些方面写一篇介绍你最好的朋友Nancy的作文,注意必须包括所有表中的要点,可适当发挥。
2.写作指导:本文要采取第三人称来写作,时态用一般现在时。动笔写作前要认真审题,明确字数;写作时要涵盖所有表格列出的要点,并且在结尾“未来计划”方面适当发挥并表达美好祝愿,注意过程中要准确使用语法、词汇、短语和句型等,同时做到层次分明,条理清楚。
10.(22-23八年级上·江苏扬州·阶段练习)你有一个好朋友叫Sandy,请根据以下提示,写一篇100词左右的英语作文,介绍一下Sandy。
提示:
1.外貌:高,苗条,留长发,一双笑眼……
2.个性和爱好:有幽默感,慷慨,乐于助人,喜爱读书……(各举例说明)
3.将来的计划:喜欢和孩子打交道,做一名教师……
要求:
1.短文需包括提示内容,可以适当添加细节。
2.写作时应该思路清晰,语句通顺,注意段落。
3.短文标题和开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
My friend-Sandy
I have a good friend called Sandy.
【答案】例文:
My friend-Sandy
I have a good friend called Sandy. She is tall and thin with long hair and a pair of smiling eyes. We often play with each other. Sand is very humorous, and she often tells jokes. She is very generous, because she always brings some snacks to others. Besides, Sandy is helpful, too. I often see her help classmates when they are in need. She likes reading books. There are a lot of books in her home.
Sandy likes playing with kids, so she want to be a teacher. She thinks being a teacher is her dream. This is my good friend, Sandy.
【详解】1.题干解读:本文是一篇材料作文,围绕自己的朋友写一篇作文。
2.写作指导:本文主要采用一般现在时,人称以第三人称为主,按照提示来介绍好朋友,可以适当扩充,写作时候主语主谓一致性,做到无单词语法和标点错误。