广西北海市2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）仿练（2）及答案
(2015·河北衡水中学一模)
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参考答案：
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Yours
Li Ming
1．命题立意：考查形容词。
解析：exciting→excited 根据主语是I，应是感到激动的，应用excited。故exciting改为excited。
2．命题立意：考查介词。
解析：agree后加with agree为不及物动词，后跟人时应加with，故agree后加with。
3．命题立意：考查时态。
解析：mention→mentioned 根据语境应用一般过去时，故mention改为mentioned。
4．命题立意：考查主谓一致。
解析：give→gives 句子的主语Cultural Express为单数，谓语动词应用单数第三人称。故give改为gives。
5．命题立意：考查名词。
解析：part→parts 根据part的修饰词是different应用part的复数形式。故part→parts。
6．命题立意：考查代词。
解析：another→other 根据词组each other“互相”。故another改为other。
7．命题立意：考查动词。
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8．命题立意：考查连词。
解析：or→and or前后的名词是并列关系，不是选择关系。故or→and。
9．命题立意：考查形容词。
解析：attractively→ ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )attractive 根据前文的are，应是形容词作表语。故attractively→ attractive。
10．命题立意：考查介词。
解析：fond前去掉to 根据词组be fond of喜欢，fond是形容词。故去掉to。
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下写出该加的词。
删除: 把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意: 1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处, 多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：把缺词处叫个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】5.
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参考答案：
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2．命题立意：考查动词的时态。
解析：had→have 根据本句的时间状语since I was nine(从我九岁起一直到现在)可知，此处应该用现在完成时。
3．命题立意：考查名词的数。
解析：leg→legs “one of＋可数名词的复数形式”为固定句型，表示“……中的一个”。
4．命题立意：考查非限制性定语从句。
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5. 命题立意：考查副词。
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6．命题立意：考查形容词。
解析：carefully→careful 根据与之并列的形容词friendly可以推知，此处应该用形容词作表语，表示“细心的”。
7．命题立意：考查动词的时态。
解析：see→saw 根据其时间状语while in hospital(在医院期间)可知，此处叙述的是过去的事实，故应该用一般过去时。
8．命题立意：考查冠词。
解析：the→a 根据句意，此处表示“一名医生”，应该用不定冠词a。
9．命题立意：考查固定搭配。
解析：need后面加of in need of为固定搭配，表示“需要”。
10．命题立意：考查短语动词。
解析：come前面的be去掉 come true为不及物动词词组，没有被动语态。
短文改错。
假如英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号∧，并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线＼划掉。
修改：在错词下面划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者从第11处不计分
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加上一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。?
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。?
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。?
注意： 1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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短文改错。
下面短文中有10处错误。请在有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1，每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2，只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】4.
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参考答案：
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1．命题立意：考查时态辨析。
解析：删除had 句意：四月十号，我们学校组织了一次爬西山的活动。根据语意学校发出组织的活动是过去，因此把had去掉。
2．命题立意：考查冠词辨析。
解析：a→the 这里的mountain指的是前面提到过的西山，故把a改为the，表示特指。
3．命题立意：考查名词形式辨析。
解析：spirit→spirits in high spirits兴高采烈；情绪高涨。故把spirit改为spirits。
4．命题立意：考查介词义辨析。
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7．命题立意：考查形容词的词义辨析。
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8．命题立意：考查not only...but also的用法。
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9．命题立意：考查引导词辨析。
解析：what→how 句意：但是我们也学习到怎样合作。cooperate合作，配合，不及物动词，故把what改为how。
10．命题立意：考查suggest的用法。
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短文改错(共10小题；每小 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )题1分，满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
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【参考答案】6.
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【参考答案】1.
【小题1】vary改成various
【小题2】spent改成took
【小题3】under改成with
【小题4】he改成we
【小题5】去掉back
【小题6】put后面加it
【小题7】annoying改成annoyed
【小题8】explained后面加to
【小题9】is改成was
【小题10】stand改成standing
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短文改错
Li Ming and Wang Ying ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com ) are two students of Senior Three. They all work hard but they have different learning method. Li Ming often sleeps in class instead of listen to the teacher. As a result, he miss lots of points that the teacher makes and it usually takes him much time to finish his homework. But he has to stay up late and doesn’t get enough sleep. However, Wang Ying has quite the different way of learning. She listens attentive and tries to catch everything that the teacher said in class. Because this, she spends less time doing her homework, which makes it is possible for her to go to bed early.
【参考答案】2.
【小题1】all 改成both
【小题2】 method.改成methods
【小题3】listen改成listening
【小题4】Miss改成misses
【小题5】 But 改成So
【小题6】the改成a
【小题7】attentive改成 attentively
【小题8】said 改成says
【小题9】Because后面加of
【小题10】去掉is
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参考答案：
Someone asks me wh ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )at on the earth happiness means I can't give you the definition of it, but I'm sure if you love and help others, you'll get it.
I'll never fo ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )rget an old lady. She lives a small house alone. It's said that her husband and her son were或in a traffic accident. How bitter her life is! But the old lady often others with a smile. it snows, she is always the first to clean the paths. She looks after several children living nearby. I am one of . I often remember the stories she told about us and her kind smile. Perhaps she is ， but I think she is a happy person. Her life full of laughter and love.
1．命题立意：考查固定短语。
解析：去掉on the earth中的the 根据on earth究竟＝in the world。故on the earth去掉the。
2．命题立意：考查形容词。
解析：exactly→exact 根据definition是名词，需要形容词修饰。故exactly→exact。
3．命题立意：考查介词。
解析：lives后加in 根据lives是不及物动词，应加介词in。
4．命题立意：考查语态。
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5．命题立意：考查时态。
解析：helped→helps 根据上下文的时态，应用一般现在时，主语是the old lady。故helped→helps。
6．命题立意：考查连词。
解析：Wherever→Whenever 根据从句的谓语动词snow判断应是“无论何时”，故Wherever→Whenever。
7．命题立意：考查代词。
解析：those→them 根据前文的children。故those→them。
8．命题立意：考查介词。
解析：去掉about 根据短语tell sb. a story给某人讲故事。故去掉about。
9．命题立意：考查形容词。
解析：lucky→unlucky 根据前文是不幸的。故lucky→unlucky。
10．命题立意：考查系动词。
解析：full前加is 根据full of laughter判断需要系动词。
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
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【参考答案】1
.76. accept—receive 77. 加 a 78. follows
79. 去掉of 80. Besides 81. 正确
82. that ---what 83. 加 am 84. and—but 85. parents’
短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( ∧ )，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
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【参考答案】2
.76.study--studying或study加and 77.fairly—rather
78.去掉is 79.class—classes 80. 去掉第一个to 81.our—us
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
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此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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in a B&B hotel ago . They did not want breakfast 67．
because that they were going out early in the 68．
morning . They came back lately and had some 69．
tea . I came into the living room and saw one of 70．
them just go through the kitchen door but turn 71．
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【参考答案】3.
We had guests last night who have not stayed 66． had
in a B&B hotel ago . They did not want breakfast 67． before
because that they were going out early in the 68． that
morning . They came back lately and had some 69． late
tea . I came into the living room and saw one of 70． √
them just go through the kitchen door but turn 71． and
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单句改错（共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分）
此题要求改正所给单句中的错误。对标有题号的每一句做出判断：如有错误（每句只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此句多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在该句右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此句缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（ ），在该句右边的横线上写出该加的词。
此句错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该句右边横线上写出改正后的词。
1. Everyone of us i ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s working hard in the factory. 1. _________________
2. I have caught a bad cold for a week and I can’t get rid of it. 2. _________________
3. This is the steel plant where we visited last week. 3. _________________
4. Following the road and you will find the store. 4. __________________
5. This is all what Dr. Smith said at the meeting. 5. __________________
6. He promised to come and see us after the supper. 6. __________________
7. John came here to see you, but he had left five minutes ago. 7. __________________
8. My mother is busy preparing for supper. 8. __________________
9. I’ve heard him but I never know him. 9. ___________________
10. We got on the school bus and which took us straight to the People’s Park. 10 .________
【参考答案】4.
1.Everyone-Every one 2.caught-had
3 .where-which /that / 去掉where 4.Following-Follow
5.what-that / 去掉all 6. 去掉the 7. 去掉had
8. 去掉for 9.heard 后加 of 10.which-it广西北海市2016高考英语短文改错（二轮）仿练（4）及答案
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参考答案：
Alexander was a mil ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )itary genius great explorer. But he also had a great ambition. He wanted to rule a country people couldlive in peace with one another. From 330 to 327 B．C. , Alexander led his east, through Afghanistan and into Central Asia. As he ， he built more cities. He ordered soldiers, merchants, and scholars from many lands to settle .
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1．命题立意：考查连词。
解析：or→and 根据句意military genius和great explorer是并列关系。故改为and。
2．命题立意：考查定语从句。
解析：that→where 此处为where引导的定语从句，从句中不缺主宾，故用where引导，在从句中作地点状语。故改为where。
3．命题立意：考查名词。
解析：soldier→soldiers soldier是可数名词，亚历山大的士兵不可能只有一个，故用复数。
4．命题立意：考查时态。
解析：travel→travelled 本文讲述过去发生的事情，此处时态应与上下文保持一致，故用一般过去时。
5．命题立意：考查副词。
解析：here→there 根据句意可知此处为远指，故用there。
6．命题立意：考查副词。
解析：now→then 根据前句中的in 326 B．C.可知此处应为by then。
7．命题立意：考查固定短语。
解析：far后加from far from是固定短语，意为“距……很远”。
8．命题立意：考查介词。
解析：去掉for reach是及物动词，不用加介词。
9．命题立意：考查冠词。
解析：the→a catch a fever是固定短语，意为“发烧”。
10．命题立意：考查介词。
解析：between→among 根据his generals以及常识可知应为三者或三者以上，故用among。
短文改错 (共10分,每小题1分,满分10分)
该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ＼）划掉。
修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。
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【参考答案】5.
I like eating fruit ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )and vegetables what （改为which/that）are of great benefit to our healthy（改为health）. Not only do they prevent us from falling into（去掉into） ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow（改为following） the doctor’s advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going（改为goes）, “ An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike（改为disliking） fruit and vegetables. On（加the） contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were（改为are） crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong（改为 stronger）. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.（改为 it）
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】1.
1. of---about 2. of---/ 3. unusual 4. opinions
5. meant 6. them—it 7. when---while 8. listening
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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间 ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 (∧) ，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 ( \ ) 划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2. 只允许修改10处，多者 (从第11处起) 不计分。
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短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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