广西临桂县2016高考英语【二轮】短文改错精编（2）及答案
(2015·东北三省三校第二次联合模拟)
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参考答案：
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1．命题立意：考查be动词辨析。
解析：are→is The Magic Tree House series是一本书的名字，作主语，动词用单数。
2．命题立意：考查动词的过去分词。
解析：writing→written 过去分词表被动，因此writing改为written。
3．命题立意：考查非限制性定语从句。
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4．命题立意：考查冠词辨析。
解析：A→The a表泛指，the表特指。前面已经提到过的，再次提到用the表特指。
5．命题立意：考查代词辨析。
解析：him→them这里的宾语指的是Jack and his sister Annie，因此代词用them。
6．命题立意：考查时态。
解析：turned→turns叙述故事全篇都用一般现在时态，这里用第三人称单数形式turns。
7．命题立意：考查连接词辨析。
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8．命题立意：考查名词辨析。
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9．命题立意：考查动词形式辨析。
解析：go→going end up doing以……结束。
10．命题立意：考查及物动词用法。
解析：去掉to attract是及物动词，因此to删除掉。
短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误， 要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
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修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。?
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。?
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。?
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】4.
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下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】5.
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1．命题立意：考查不定式作宾语补足语。
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此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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【参考答案】4.
1．why→ how 2．try后加to 3．hearts → heart
4．去掉to 5．was→ have 6．but → and
7．writing→ written 8．With→ By
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】5.
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删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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第二句：like和tell中间加to；it去掉
第三句：wants改成want
第五句: must 前加a
第六句：care改成careful
第七句：booking改成booked；and改成but
第八句：another改成other
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
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注意：
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4．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。
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注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
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增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
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注意：原行没有错的不要改。
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students themsel ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ves all their lives. It is always important to 5. ______
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many great scientist ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )s and statesmen didn’t get anything 7. ______
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made primary s ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )chool. But they were so success that they 9. ______
made great contribut ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ions to mankind. They read a lot of 10. ______
and did thousands of experiments to test their ideas.
【参考答案】1.
1. to → for 2. 去掉from 3 many → much
4. √ 5. important → more important
6. to learn → how to learn 7. anything → everything
8. examples → exampl ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )e 9. success → successful 10. 去掉 of
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
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【参考答案】2.
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此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线(﹨)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Attention, pl ( http: / / www.21cnjy.com )ease, everyone. We’ve accepted the 1. ______
weather forecast on the radio this morning that 2. ______
there will have a heavy rain tonight. Be sure 3. ______
to shut the windows and doors until you leave 4. ______
your classrooms. The sports meet when we planned to 5. ______
hold it tomorrow will be put off. After it becomes 6. ______
fine, we’ll make other announcement. We will 7. ______
have classes on Wednesday as usually. Since it is 8. ______
colder tomorrow, please dress on more clothes in time. 9. ______
Those come to school by bike, don’t keep your 10.______
umbrellas open while riding.
【参考答案】3.
1. accepted----received 2.正确 3. have ----be
4. until---before 5. when—which
6. it 7. other—another 8. as usual
9. put on 10. those who
