应用文--Problem to solution博客写作指南
一、写作框架
时态:文章应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。
人称:第一和第二人称。
要点:给出记单词的建议;提出自己的问题并寻求建议。
二、语言组织
核心词汇
advice/suggestion 建议
offer/give 提供
enlarge 扩大
vocabulary 词汇
view/opinion 观点
context 语境
phrase 短语
in addition 另外
what's more 而且
instead of 而不是
make up sentences 造句
核心句式
提出问题
1. My biggest problem is that... 我最大的问题就是……
2. I have difficulty in... 我在……方面遇到困难。
3. I have no idea how I should... 我不知道我该如何……
4. This is something I failed to... 这是我无法……的事情。
5. It is very difficult for me to... 对我来说,……非常难。
6. I also have trouble with... 我在……方面也遇到了困难。
解决问题
1. There are three ways to improve your... 有三种方法可以提升你的……
2. In my opinion, you'd better... 在我看来,你最好……
3. It is better for you to... 你还是……比较好。
4. When it comes to..., I suggest that... 当涉及……时,我建议……
5. You might try to... 你或许可以尝试……
6. This worked for me. 这对我来说是奏效的。
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在英语学习的博客上,你看到Susan说她读英语文章很慢。请你写一篇博客,给
她提供一些建议。要点如下:
1. 你的建议;
2. 你的问题,并寻求建议。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考答案:
I'll give some suggestions on improving your English reading speed. One is to divide the text into some sections and read the text in each section as one thing.Another suggestion is to skim the main idea first. Take reading a novel as an example. Taking advantage of the title, the table of contents, subtitles, captions under pictures, and the first paragraph, we can easily piece them together and grasp the gist of the story. With these reading techniques, you will absorb more information while reading and get reading done faster.I sometimes have trouble with English speaking. Any advice 应用文--驳论型议论文写作指南
一、素材导背
语篇功能 高频表达
引入 (Introduction) It is widely believed that... 普遍认为…… There is a common misconception that... 有一个常见误解,即…… In today's society, there is a growing concern about... 在当今社会,人们越来越担心…… It is undeniable that... 不可否认的是…… With the rapid development of..., ... 随着……的快速发展,……
提出观点 (State the thesis) My firm belief is that... 我坚信…… I am of the opinion that... 我认为…… From my point of view... 从我的观点来看…… It is my contention that... 我的观点是…… The evidence suggests that... 证据表明……
引用权威观点 (Quote authoritative sources) According to... 根据…… ...argue that... ……认为…… In a study conducted by... 根据……进行的研究…… ...state that... ……表示…… Research has shown that... 研究表明……
提供证据 (Present evidence) Statistical data demonstrates that... 统计数据显示…… For example, a survey conducted among...revealed that... 例如,对……进行的一项调查显示…… It is clear from the research findings that... 从研究结果可以明显看出…… Studies have found that... 研究发现…… A significant body of evidence supports the claim that... 大量证据支持……的观点。
引出对立观点 (Introduce opposing views) However, it is argued that... 然而,有人认为…… Critics contend that... 批评者认为…… Some people may argue that... 有些人可能认为…… It is commonly believed that... 普遍认为…… One might object by saying that... 有人可能反驳说……
反驳对立观点 (Challenge opposing views) This argument overlooks the fact that... 这个观点忽视了一个事实,即…… Contrary to what the critics believe, ... 与批评者所认为的相反,…… While it is true that..., it does not necessarily mean that... 虽然……是真的,但并不意味着…… However, a closer examination reveals that... 然而,进一步的调查表明…… The proposed counter-argument fails to consider the fact that... 提出的反论点未能考虑到的一个事实是……
总结观点 (Summarize the argument) In conclusion, it can be said that... 总结起来,可以说…… Based on the evidence presented, it is clear that... 根据提供的证据,可以明显看出…… The arguments above demonstrate that... 以上的论据表明…… Taking all the factors into consideration, I agree/disagree that... 综合考虑所有因素,我同意/不同意…… Ultimately, the weight of the evidence supports the argument that... 最终,证据的分量支持……的观点。 This could lead to further advancements in... 这可能会导致……的进一步发展。
二、写作实践
近期,你校因认为社交媒体损害学生的心理健康,发布了禁止学生使用社交媒体
的校规。对此,你表示反对。请你用英语写一篇短文,说明反对的理由。
写作要点:
1. 反对的理由;
2. 你的希望。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考答案:
While our school may think that social media is the murderer of students mental health, social media should not be banned for us students, who rely on it for more knowledge. Actually, social media can also have many positive benefits for us. Banning it outright would be overly restrictive, preventing us from accessing its benefits like connecting with friends and family, sharing information and ideas, and
accessing educational resources. Instead of banning social media, our school should
focus on educating us about responsible use and how to navigate its potential dangers. Only by doing so, can social media witness the day when students can learn to use it in a safe, healthy, and productive way.应用文--地点介绍类写作指南
一、词块积累
climate 气候
surround 围绕
pleasant 令人愉快的;友善的
be famous/well known for 以……著名
special local products 特产
special snacks 特色小吃
delicious dishes 美食
warm in winter and cool in summer 冬暖夏凉
traditional cultures and customs 传统文化和习俗
scenic spots/tourist attractions 旅游景点
places of interest 名胜古迹
natural scenery 自然风景
lie in/be located in/be situated in 位于……;坐落于……
have/cover/with an area of 占地面积为……
have/with a population of 有……人口
have/with a long history of 有……的悠久历史
steep hills 陡峭的山坡
have a great influence on 对……有很大的影响
beautiful countryside 美丽的乡村
be rich in 盛产……
be home to 是……之乡
such as 例如
the local culture and customs 当地文化与习俗
attract millions of visitors 吸引了成千上万的游客
convenient transportation 交通便捷
二、美句背诵
1. Xi'an is a beautiful city with a long history.西安是一座有着悠久历史的美丽城市。
2. I feel proud to make a brief introduction to this city to you. 我很荣幸能向你简要
介绍一下这座城市。
3. The city dates/goes back to over 3000 years. 这座城市的历史可以追溯到3000多
年前。
4. Chongqing lies in/is located in/is situated in southwestern China. 重庆位于中国西
南部。
5. The city is a city with not only a long history but also many places of interest. 这座城市不仅有着悠久历史,还有很多名胜古迹。
6. The city has a population of over 30 million. 该城市有3000多万人口。
7. Beijing, China's capital, is renowned for its ancient landmarks like the Forbidden
City, the Great Wall, and the Temple of Heaven. 北京,中国的首都,以其历史悠久的故宫、长城和天坛等地标而闻名于世。
8. Paris is known as “The City of Lights” and stands as the heart of French culture
and fashion, with the Eiffel Tower rising at its center. 巴黎被称为“光之城”,是法国文化和时尚的中心,埃菲尔铁塔矗立于其市中心。
9. My hometown is a peaceful small town surrounded by lush forests and hills, away
from the hustle and bustle of the city. 我的家乡是一座被郁郁葱葱的山林所环绕的宁静小镇,它远离都市的喧嚣。
10. I was born in a warm coastal city with golden beaches and clear blue waters. 我出生在一座温暖的海滨城市里,那里有着金色的沙滩和清澈的海水。
11. I grew up in a picturesque country village with winding rivers and a rich history. 我是在一个风景如画的乡村长大的,那里有着蜿蜒的小河和悠久的历史。
12. St. Petersburg is the cultural capital of Russia, interwoven with numerous canals
and bridges, and its historic buildings and museums attract tourists from all over the world.
圣彼得堡是俄罗斯的文化之都,众多运河和桥梁交织在一起,其历史建筑和博物馆吸引了全世界的游客。
13. It covers an area of more than 20,000 square kilometers with a population of about
5 million. 它占地面积超过2万平方千米,人口约为500万。
14. Guilin is located in the northeast of Guangxi, where the climate is pleasant. 桂林
位于广西的东北部,那里气候宜人。
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假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Susan要在暑假来你所在的城市旅游,请你写信向
她介绍这座城市。内容包括:
1. 城市概况;2. 城市特色。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Susan,
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案:
Dear Susan,
I'm so glad to hear that you are coming to Guilin during your summer vacation. I'd like to give you a brief introduction to Guilin.
Guilin is located in the northeast of Guangxi, where the climate is pleasant. It covers an area of more than 20,000 square kilometers with a population of about 5 million. Guilin is famous for its beautiful scenery and all kinds of delicious food, such as Guilin rice noodles and chilli sauce. Of all the scenic spots, the Seven Star Park, Lijiang River and Elephant Trunk Hill are the most attractive. You can visit the scenic spots in the city on free buses.
Looking forward to your arrival.
Yours,
Li Hua应用文--观点对立型议论文写作指南
1. 引出话题
The issue/topic of...is of great significance/importance.
关于……的问题/话题十分重要。
Nowadays, it has become increasingly common to talk about...
如今,人们越来越普遍地谈论……
In contemporary society, more and more people are concerned about...
在当今社会,越来越多的人关心……
With the development of..., the issue of...has become more and more significant.
随着……的发展,……问题已经变得越来越重要。
Recently, there has been a growing concern among people about the issue of...
近来,有越来越多的人关注……问题。
2. 赞成观点
It is indisputable that... ……是毋庸置疑的。
Everyone can agree that... 每个人可能都同意……
There is no doubt that... 毫无疑问……
Undoubtedly, ... 毫无疑问,……
It is universally acknowledged that... 人们普遍认为……
3. 反驳观点
It is true that..., but it is only half the truth.
的确……,但这只是事实的一部分。
Some people argue that..., but they overlook/refuse to admit...
有些人认为……,但他们忽略了/拒绝承认……
One common argument against...is that..., but this argument fails to recognize that... 对于……一个常见的反对论点是……,但这一论点未能认识到……
Although it may seem that..., upon closer examination, it becomes clear that...
尽管看起来……,但经仔细审查,就能明白……
Many critics claim that... However, a closer scrutiny reveals that...
很多批评家声称……,但更仔细的审视发现……
4. 表达对另一种观点的认同
I agree with...and believe that...
我同意……,且相信……
While I grant that..., I nevertheless believe that...
虽然我承认 ……,但我依然相信……
Although I grant that..., I cannot agree with...
尽管我承认……,但我无法同意……
While it may be true that..., the evidence suggests that...
虽然……可能是对的,但证据表明……
It is true that...and deserves recognition, but...
确实……值得肯定,但……
5. 表示选择
The advantages or disadvantages of...should be carefully considered before making a
decision. 在做出决定之前,需要仔细评估……的优缺点。
It is difficult to decide whether...or..., but after careful consideration, I choose...
很难决定是……还是……,但经过仔细考虑后,我选择……
When weighing the advantages and disadvantages of..., we must consider...
在权衡……的利弊时,我们必须考虑……
6. 发表作者观点
In my opinion/view, ... 在我看来,……
From my standpoint/perspective, ... 从我的角度来看,……
I am convinced that... 我坚信……
My firm belief is that... 我坚信……
I completely/strongly oppose/support... 我完全/强烈反对/支持……
7. 总结全文
to sum up/in conclusion 总之/最后
all in all 总的来说
in summary/overall 总的来说
to conclude 总之
ultimately/in the end 最终
consequently 因此
in brief 简而言之
in short 简言之
8. 其他表达及高频衔接词
One striking example is... 一个显著的例子是……
On the one hand, ... On the other hand, ... 一方面,……;另一方面,……
conversely 相反地
in spite of 尽管
furthermore 此外;而且
additionally 此外;还
not only that 不止如此
Another reason is... 另一个原因是……
It is also worth noting that... 同样值得注意的是……
One notable advantage is... 一个显著的优势是……
Another advantage is... 另一个优势是……
that is to say 也就是说
in other words 换句话说
to put it simply 简单来说
undoubtedly 无疑
likewise 同样
in comparison 相比之下
compared to 与……相比
on the contrary 相反地
as a matter of fact 事实上
needless to say 不用说
admittedly 不可否认地
after all 毕竟
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近期,Crazy English杂志社就“家长是否应该庆祝学业成就”开展了征文活动,下
表是你班就此话题讨论的结果。请根据下表数据写一篇参赛短文。
内容要点:
1. 主要观点的介绍;2. 你的看法。
注意:
1. 篇幅80词左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考答案:
In recent discussions about whether to celebrate academic achievements, opinions appear to be divided. According to the survey results, 58% of the students are in favor of celebrating academic achievements. Among them 27% of the students argue that it demonstrates a deep appreciation for education, 21% of the students claim that it promotes a culture of perseverance, and 10% of the students believe that it enhances community cohesion.
However, 42% of the students believe that celebrating academic achievements
should be discouraged. 16% of the whole students suggest that this practice may make those with less satisfactory results feel excluded and 26% of the students think that the narrow focus on exam scores hinders the all-round development of students, for which 15% of the student think it makes it possible to overlook the importance of character development and overall growth in students.
Personally, rather than solely focusing on academic achievements, it is essential that we strike a balance between recognizing individual success and fostering a supportive environment for all students.应用文--建议信写作指南
一、建议信读写活动审读视角
审读视角 审读意图
标题 迅速理解信件的主题
作者 了解写信人的身份和背景
体裁 分析文章体裁,如倡议书、道歉信、建议信等,不同的体裁要使用不同的语言
关系 了解写信人和信件目标读者的身份和背景,确定双方的关系
语体 为达成写作目的,写信人应采用恰当的语体,如正式语体、非正式语体、学术语体、文学语体、商务语体等
目的 分析写信人写建议信的目的以及为了达到目的而采用的语篇结构、语言风格 及其他写作特色
要点 信件应涵盖实现交际目的所包含的全部信息,检查要点是否齐备
段落结构和 过渡词 关注每个段落的开头和结尾以及过渡词,理解作者的逻辑和组织信息的方式
二、素材导背
语篇环节 高频表达
开篇点题 I am writing to suggest... 我写信是想建议…… I would like to offer a suggestion... 我想提出一个建议…… May I make a suggestion regarding... 我能对……提出一个建议吗?
陈述问题或需求 Could you kindly consider... 您是否可以考虑……? I believe it would be advantageous to... 我相信……将会是有利的。 Is there a possibility of... 是否有可能……? It would be greatly appreciated if... 如果……,将不胜感激。 I would like to request that... 我想请求……
提出建议 It would be beneficial/helpful if... 如果……将会有益处/有帮助。 It would be a good idea to... ……是一个好主意。 Have you considered... 你有没有考虑过……? I would recommend... 我建议…… One possible solution would be to... 一个可能的解决办法是……
建议原因 The reason for this suggestion is... 这条建议的理由是…… By doing this, we can... 通过这样做,我们可以…… This approach has been proven effective in... 这种方法在……方面被证明有效。 This would align with our goals/objectives... 这将与我们的……目标相一致。
陈述建议的重要性 It would greatly benefit... 这将极大地有益于…… It would contribute to... 这将对……有贡献。 This would improve/enhance... 这将改善/增强…… It would lead to... 这将导致…… It would benefit everyone involved. 这将使所有相关人受益。 This would meet the needs/demands of... 这将满足……的需求。 It would reduce the risk of... 这将减少……的风险。 This would promote innovation/creativity. 这将促进创新/创造力。
问题解决 One possible solution would be to... 一个可能的解决方案是…… We could consider implementing... 我们可以考虑实施…… Another option is to... 另一个选择是…… We should explore the possibility of... 我们应该探索……的可能性。 We should review our current approach to... 我们应该仔细研究我们目前应对…… 的方法。 It would be wise to seek input from... 从……那里寻求建议是明智的。 I suggest scheduling a meeting to discuss... 我建议安排一个会议来讨论…… We should create a task force to address... 我们应该创建一个工作组来解决…… It would be helpful to conduct a survey to gather feedback on... 进行一项调查以收 集对……的反馈将是有帮助的。 We should establish new guidelines for... 我们应该为……制定新的准则。 It would be beneficial to collaborate with... 与……合作将是有益的。
预测结果 和未来展望 If we implement these changes, we can expect... 如果我们坚持这些改变,我们可 以期待…… This would pave the way for... 这将为……铺平道路。 I am optimistic that... 我对……持乐观态度。 The potential benefits are... 潜在的好处是…… This could lead to further advancements in... 这可能会导致……的进一步发展。
强调关键点 It is essential to remember that... 记住……是必须的。 The key factor to consider is... 需要考虑的关键因素是…… We must prioritize... 我们必须优先考虑…… It is important to take immediate action on... 对于……,即时采取行动很重要。 We cannot afford to ignore... 我们无法承担忽视……的后果。
三、写作实践
假定你是李华,你的弟弟李明即将升入高一,请你给他发一封电子邮件,对他即
将开始的高中生活提些建议。写作要点:
1. 你的建议;
2. 你的期待和祝福。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 至少需要使用两个前文中解析过的句式和一种修辞。
My dearest Mingming,
Best regards.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
My dearest Mingming,
I hope this email finds you well. It's exciting to know that you'll soon start your high school life. As your elder brother, I want to give you some advice for a successful and enjoyable experience.
Firstly, prioritize your studies and develop good habits. This is the key to your success which I cannot stress enough.Stay organized, manage your time effectively, and don't hesitate to ask for help when needed. Secondly, get involved in activities you're passionate about. It is through these activities that you will become a team oriented member. Lastly,keep open minded and embrace new experiences. High school is about personal growth and exploration.
Remember, I'm here to support you. I believe in your abilities and wish you the best for a fulfilling high school journey even if it is challenging.
Best regards.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua应用文--健康生活写作指南
一、写作框架
二、语言组织
healthy/fit 健康的
unhealthy/unfit 不健康的
green food 绿色食品
healthy diet 健康饮食
good living habits 好的生活习惯
overweight 肥胖的
lose weight 减肥
enough sleep 充足的睡眠
build up one’s body 强身健体
go on a diet 节食
form a healthy eating habit 养成一个健康的饮食习惯
be in poor health 身体状况不佳
be good for one’s health 对某人的健康有益
句子
1. In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy. As we all know, it is important for
us to keep healthy. Now, I will give you some advice on how to keep fit. 你在信中问我如何保持健康。我们都知道,保持健康对我们来说是很重要的。现在,我会给你一些关于如何保持健康的建议。
2. I’d like to share my ideas involving how to keep healthy physically and mentally. 我想分享一下我关于如何保持身心健康的想法。
3. Doing sports can strengthen our body and is good for our mental and physical
health. 运动可以增强我们的体质,有利于我们的身心健康。
4. Doing sports regularly can help me feel energetic and improve my study efficiency.
经常运动可以让我感到精力充沛,并提高我的学习效率。
5. Rather than cutting down the foods I enjoyed,I added healthy foods to my meals.
我并没有减少我喜欢的食物,而是在我的膳食中添加了健康的食物。
6. It’s important to have a balanced diet. 均衡饮食很重要。
7. Staying up late is bad for your health because you may feel tired the following day.
熬夜对你的健康有害,因为在接下来的一天你可能会感到疲惫。
8. By being positive about myself and my body, I became both happier and healthier.
通过积极看待自我和自己的身体,我变得更快乐、更健康了。
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假定你是李华,你的外国朋友 Jenny 写信向你询问如何保持身体健康。请你给
她发一封电子邮件提些建议。要点如下:
1. 合理饮食;
2. 保证充足的睡眠;
3. 坚持锻炼身体。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jenny,
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案:
Dear Jenny,
How nice to hear from you! In your letter, you asked me how to keep healthy. I would like to give you some advice. We know food is of great importance to us teenagers. During the growth period, we are in need of nutritious food, such as fresh vegetables, fruits, fish, meat and so on. However, I think you’d better not eat food with much sugar and fat.And getting plenty of sleep is important. It is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day. In addition, you should take physical exercise regularly, which will be beneficial to your health. Only in this way can you keep fit. I wish you can take these suggestions into consideration. I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua应用文--健康主题征文写作指南
一、写作框架
一、有关健康生活话题的高频词汇
benefit利益;好处
beneficial有好处的
comfortable舒服的;安逸的
uncomfortable不舒服的
harm伤害
necessary必需的;必要的
jog慢跑
yoga瑜伽
aerobics有氧运动
strengthen增强
strong强壮的
balance平衡;天平
fat脂肪;胖的;肥的
obesity肥胖;肥胖症
slim苗条的
health健康;卫生
energetic精力旺盛的
lifestyle生活方式
mental精神的;脑力的
physical 身体的;体力的
nutrition营养;滋养
habit习惯;习性
overweight太胖的;超重的
diet饮食
二、高频短语
a healthy lifestyle健康的生活方式
be in good health身体健康
be/go on a diet节食
put on/gain weight增加体重
cut down/lose weight减轻体重
be beneficial to/be good for/do good to对 ……有益
be harmful to/be bad for/do harm to 对……有害
be high/low in含……高/低
be rich in富含
build up one 's body/strength 增强某人的体质
develop a healthy eating habit 养成健康的饮食习惯
keep a balanced/healthy diet 保持均衡/健康的饮食
have meals on time按时吃饭
be particular about food挑食
convenience food便利食品
fast food快餐
takeaway food外卖食品
junk food垃圾食品
eat snacks吃零食
take regular exercise定期锻炼
take an active part in physical exercise 积极参加体育锻炼
keep fit/healthy/slim保持健康/苗条
stay up熬夜
break down(身体)垮掉
physical and mental health身心健康
三、高频句式
1. As far as I'm concerned, we should develop a healthy eating habit to build up our strength. Only in this way can we have enough energy to study. 我认为,我们应该
养成健康的饮食习惯来增强体质。只有这样我们才能有足够的精力学习。
2. The better eating habits we get into, the healthier our life will become. 我们越
是养成良好的饮食习惯,我们的生活就会变得越健康。
3. Not only does exercise improve our health but also it makes us cheerful and raises our learning efficiency. 锻炼不仅改善我们的健康状况,而且使我们精神愉悦并提高学习效率。
4. Eating in a healthy way and exercising regularly are the key to keeping healthy.
健康饮食和经常运动是保持健康的关键。
即时训练
随着生活水平的提高,青少年的肥胖现象较为普遍,这引起了广泛的关注。你校
英语报正在进行以“Keep a healthy weight”为主题的征文活动,请你根据以下要点,写一篇征文。
1. 加强锻炼;
2. 合理饮食。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Keep a healthy weight
参考答案:
Keep a healthy weight
Currently more and more teenagers are becoming fat, which has been causing great concern. As for how to keep a healthy weight, I believe the keys is regular exercise and good eating habits.
Firstly, teens should get 60 minutes or more of physical activity a day. Teens can do various exercises like jogging, walking and climbing the stairs. Additionally, teens should have a balanced diet. Fruits and vegetables are strongly recommended because they are rich in vitamins and low in fat.
As long as teens do regular exercise and have good eating habits, they will keep a healthy weight.应用文--节日经历
一、素材积累
高频词块
traditional Chinese festivals 中国传统节日
lunar calendar 农历
the first day of the first lunar month 正月初一
New Year's Eve 除夕
put up spring couplets 贴春联
have a family reunion dinner 吃团圆饭
lucky money 压岁钱
eat dumplings 吃饺子
the 15th day of the first lunar month 正月十五
guess lantern riddles 猜灯谜
watch beautiful lanterns 观花灯
the 15th day of the 8th lunar month 农历八月十五
eat mooncakes 吃月饼
admire the full moon 赏圆月
express strong yearnings 表达强烈的思念
the fifth day of the fifth lunar month 农历五月初五
eat zongzi 吃粽子
dragon boat race 赛龙舟
in memory of Qu Yuan 纪念屈原
经典句子
1. As a typical traditional festival, the Lantern Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the
first lunar month. 元宵节是一个典型的传统节日,在农历正月十五。
2. On that day, we eat tangyuan which represents the reunion, enjoying lanterns and
guessing lantern riddles. 在那一天,我们吃代表团圆的汤圆,欣赏灯笼和猜灯谜。
3. Apart from those, there is Dragon Dance and other folk performances. 此外,还有舞龙和其他民间表演。
4. It is a day full of pleasure and laughter. 那是充满快乐和欢声笑语的一天。
5.This is a time for relaxation and celebration when people usually take this opportunity to get together with their family or have a good rest. 这是放松和庆祝的时间,人们通常会借此机会与家人团聚或好好休息。
6. Besides, we tried some traditional foods, watched Dragon Dance and Lion Dance
and participated in some other celebration activities, such as a temple fair. 此外,我们试吃了一些传统食物,看了舞龙、舞狮,并参加了一些其他的庆祝活动,如庙会。
7. Before the festival, people are busy shopping and cleaning their houses. 在节日前,
人们忙着购物和打扫他们的房子。
8. On New Year's Eve, people will have a big dinner with their family, talking and
laughing. 在除夕,人们会和家人吃一顿丰盛的晚餐,一起说说笑笑。
9. With New Year drawing near, we are all excited to greet the most wonderful
moment. 随着新年的临近,我们都非常兴奋地去迎接这最美好的时刻。
10. People like to decorate their windows and doors using varieties of colorful paper
cuts, which may be in the shapes of animals or flowers. 人们喜欢用各种各样的彩色的剪纸装饰他们的窗户和门,这些剪纸可以是动物或者花的形状。
11. As we watched TV, we made dumplings. 我们一边看电视,一边包饺子。
12. I will never forget this festival because so many fascinating moments have left a
deep impression on me. 我不会忘记这个节日,因为许多精彩的时刻给我留下了深刻的印象。
13. I'll never forget the Spring Festival I spent in China because it was an enjoyable
and exciting experience for me. 我永远不会忘记在中国度过的春节,因为这对我来说是一次愉快和令人兴奋的经历。
【佳作欣赏】
An amazing festival experience
This was my first time spending the Lantern Festival with friends, which was an
unforgettable experience for me. The Lantern Festival falls on the fifteenth day of the first month of the lunar year. The custom of joyfully celebrating the Lantern Festival began as early as the Western Han Dynasty, and still has a great influence on Chinese people today.
During the festival, there were lanterns of various shapes and sizes hanging throughout the streets, attracting countless visitors. Lantern shows were also organized, which created a festive atmosphere. What impressed me most was guessing riddles, as riddle guessing was interesting and full of wisdom. Many of the lanterns had riddles written on them and we couldn't wait to go to the owners to check our answers. At last, we received a little gift, extremely excited.
We also ate tangyuan, which tasted sweet and delicious. Tangyuan in Chinese has a similar pronunciation to tuanyuan and the round shape represents reunion, harmony and happiness. Besides, we watched Dragon Dance.
With my friends, I spent an exciting and meaningful Lantern Festival. And I'm
looking forward to the next festival.
假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友John给你发来邮件。邮件提到他想利用自己的
假期来中国体验一下中国的传统节日。请你给他回一封邮件,内容包括:
1. 你推荐的节日;2. 推荐的理由。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear John,
I'm glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals and want to experience one of them.
I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear John,
I'm glad to know that you are interested in traditional Chinese festivals and want to experience one of them. There are many traditional festivals in China, such as the Dragon Boat Festival, the Mid Autumn Festival and the Spring Festival. To be frank, the atmosphere of the Mid Autumn Festival is absolutely significant. I really hope you can come and spend the festival with me.The Mid Autumn Festival, a special occasion for families to gather, falls on the fifteenth day of the eighth month of the lunar year. The festival celebrates the harvest and people admire the beautiful moon with joy. After all, it is said that the moon that day is the biggest and brightest. It's also a day to eat special food like mooncakes.
I am looking forward to your coming.
Yours,
Li Hua应用文--旅行计划写作指南
一、写作框架
二、习作模版
Dear ,
Glad to receive your email! Now let me introduce our travel plan.
In order to know more about (旅游目的), we are planning to visit (旅游目的地).
On the first day, we are going to tour (旅游活动一和有名的景点). On the second day, we are touring (旅游活动二和有名的景点). We will check in (住宿酒店). During the period, we can take (交通方式).
I wish you (表达愿望).
Yours sincerely/truly,
(落款)
三、语言组织
1.开头语常用表达
1. I'm planning to travel to Chengdu, a famous city in China.
2. With my winter holiday coming, I have a plan for it.
3. As National Day is coming, my family are planning to...
4. My travel plan is as follows.
5. I am writing to tell you something about my plans for the trip.
2.主体部分常用表达
1. Known for its various cultural heritage, the city attracts tourists around the world.
2. When we get there, we will first find a hotel to check in.
3. We 'll visit the temple on the first day, where we can take some pictures and buy
some gifts.
4. We can pay a visit to the national park by bus because it's far away from the center
of the city.
5. What is more exciting is that we will make our own DIY products there.
6. You can enjoy delicious local food such as jiaozi and smoked tofu.
3.结束语常用表达
1. It is such a wonderful place that I can't wait to visit it with you.
2. Would you like to join me
3. Looking forward to hearing from you.
即时训练
假定你是李华,你的外国朋友Tom近期计划去杭州游玩并邀请你一同前往。请根据下列要点给他写一封电子邮件。
1. 表示欢迎;
2. 接受邀请;
3. 行程安排。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
Yours,
Li Hua
参考答案:
Dear Tom,
I'm glad to learn that you plan to visit Hangzhou. So first I will express a warm welcome to you and I am willing to be with you.
We'll visit the West Lake on the first day, where we can take some pictures and buy some gifts. For the following days, we can pay a visit to other places of interest in Hangzhou. At the same time, we can enjoy the delicious local cuisine Beggar's Chicken and Dongpo Pork, which enjoy lasting popularity at home and abroad. We'll have a good time in Hangzhou.
Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Li Hua应用文--人物类记叙文写作指南
一、基本框架
二、素材导背
1. 对人物的欣赏、评价以及人物特征
admirable adj. 令人钦佩的 remarkable adj. 非凡的
inspiring adj. 鼓舞人心的 extraordinary adj. 卓越的
courageous adj. 勇敢的 compassionate adj. 有同情心的
resilient adj. 坚韧不拔的 wise adj. 充满智慧的
talented adj. 有才华的 gifted adj. 有天赋的
noble adj. 高尚的 visionary adj. 有远见卓识的
dedicated adj. 专注的 inspirational adj. 激励人心的
motivated adj. 有动力的 influential adj. 有很大影响力的
dynamic adj. 充满活力的 trustworthy adj. 值得信任的
reliable adj. 可靠的 honest adj. 诚实的
caring adj. 体贴的 loyal adj. 忠诚的
kind hearted adj. 心地善良的 selfless adj. 无私的
humble adj. 谦逊的 respectable adj. 值得尊敬的
supportive adj. 支持的 ambitious adj. 有野心的
charismatic adj. 有超凡魅力的 persistent adj. 坚持不懈的
optimistic adj. 乐观的 energetic adj. 精力充沛的
enthusiastic adj. 热情洋溢的 patient adj. 有耐心的
observant adj. 观察力敏锐的 charitable adj. 慈善的
creative adj. 有创造力的 empathetic adj. 有同感的
determined adj. 坚定的 versatile adj. 多才多艺的
knowledgeable adj. 博学的 adaptable adj. 适应性强的
persevering adj. 坚持不懈的 disciplined adj. 守纪律的
proactive adj. 积极主动的 responsible adj. 有责任心的
2.背景信息
be born and raised in 出生和成长于
from a humble background 出身卑微
well traveled adj. 游历广泛的
multicultural background 多元文化背景
be influenced by diverse cultures 受多种文化影响
hail from 来自
graduate from 毕业于
pursue education in 就读于
3.人物事迹
overcome obstacles 克服困难
make a significant impact 产生了重大影响
achieve great success 取得了巨大的成功
devote oneself to 某人致力于
inspire others 激励他人
help those in need 帮助有需要的人
persevere in the face of adversity 在逆境中坚持不懈
make significant contributions 做出了重大贡献
positively impact the lives of many 对许多人的生活产生了积极影响
excel in 在……方面做得出色
overcome personal challenges 战胜个人挑战
demonstrate exceptional skill/talent 展示了非凡的技能/才华
work tirelessly for 为……孜孜不倦地工作
make a positive difference to 对……产生了积极的影响
即时训练
近日,Crazy English杂志社举行了主题为“A miracle teacher”的征文大赛。你想写
一篇短文参加本次比赛。
内容要点:
1. 这位老师是谁; 2. 这位老师的神奇之处; 3. 你对这位老师的评价。
注意:
1. 词数80左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
A miracle teacher
参考答案:
A miracle teacher
Possessing the ability to transform our fates, Mr Chen is truly a miracle teacher.With his unwavering dedication and vast knowledge, he inspires and guides students. By connecting with each student individually, as well as listening attentively and patiently, Mr Chen is always helping us overcome challenges. His innovative teaching methods and engaging activities make learning enjoyable. Moreover, Mr Chen creates a safe and inclusive learning environment that fosters respect for diversity. His passion for education and genuine care for students make him more than just a teacher; he is a role model and mentor.Under his guidance, I've discovered my potential and developed a profound love for learning.