人教版（2019）必修 第一册Unit 5 Languages around the world Reading for Writing课件(共36张PPT)

(共36张PPT)
Reading for Writing
Unit 5 Languages Around The World
1. Read about students’ problems in learning English.
2. Talk about your problems in learning English and useful advice.
3. Write a blog about English study.
Learning objectives
Free Talk
What's your biggest problem with learning English
remembering vocabulary
...
expressing myself
reading comprehension
learning grammar
pronunciation
writing ability
Lead-in
Who do you often turn to for help when you meet these problems
1
2
3
4
5
Friends
Parents
Teachers
online sources
...
Have you ever been on an English forum
Wang Le posted a post (发帖) on an online forum(网上论坛).
What is an online forum/ a post
An online forum is an Internet-based place where people exchange ideas and opinions about one problem.
A Post
A piece of writing, image, or other items of content published online.
If you post information on the Internet, you make the information available to other people on the Internet.
Find out what the problems (topic sentences) and the supporting details are.
Supporting details are usually examples or facts that are used to describe or explain the topic sentences. They can make your description or explanation more vivid and convincing.
Reading
search
favourite/collect
Reading for structure
likes/ thumb-up
page
original post
post starter
/blogger
home
replies to a post
comments
Do they only talk about problems with learning English
post starter
thread starter楼主
original post
original thread 原帖
replies to a post 回帖
1. thumb up 点赞
2. favourites 收藏
3. comment 评论
search, homepage
page
Some problems and advice on English learning.
Wang Le.
Liu Wen, Jia Xin and Li Rui.
2. Who starts this text and who responds to it
3. What is the text mainly about
1. What’s the type of the text And what’s the language feature of the text
A blog.
informal
simple
casual
How does Liu Wen express his problem
Brief introduction
Topic sentence
Supporting details
Hi! I’ve been studying English since primary school. I used to get high remarks in English, but now I’m having a lot of trouble with my listening. When I listen to native English speakers talking in a video, I can catch only a few words. I can never quite get the main idea.
Any advice
Summary 1：How to express your problem
1
Brief introduction
2
Topic sentences
3
Supporting details
4
Express thanks
Listening to English radio programmes helps me get used to how fast native speakers talk. I also repeat what I hear to help myself to experience the feeling of the language. Sometimes I even record my voice so I can listen to myself and compare my pronunciation with the radio host’s! My biggest headache is how to be polite in English. It’s so much easier to just say “Open the window!”, but in English that can sound really terrible. I have to think about who I'm talking to and then decide whether to say, “Open the window, please!” or “Could you open the window, please ” or even longer “Would you mind opening the window, please ”
Jia Xin
Listening to English radio programmes
I also repeat what I hear to help myself to experience the feeling of the language.
Sometimes I even record my voice so I can listen to myself and compare
my pronunciation with the radio host’s!
Advice
Supporting details （how to do)
My biggest headache
is how to be polite in English.
It’s so much easier to just say “Open the window!”, but in English that can sound really terrible. I have to think about who I'm talking to and then decide whether to say, “Open the window, please!” or “Could you open the window, please ” or even longer “Would you mind opening the window, please ”
problem
Details/Example
（he has experienced)
How do Jia Xin give advice
Topic sentences
Supporting details
How do Li Rui give advice
Examples
Summary 2: How to give your advice
1
Topic sentences
2
Supporting details
3
Some examples
problems:
Advice:
Problem(topic sentence)+deatils/example
Advice + result/reason/explanation/example
How do they organize their problems ？
How do they put forward their advice？
1.personal experience
2.logical connectors
Read the posts and fill in the table.
Name Problem Advice
Jia Xin's advice
Li Rui's advice
Your advice
have trouble with listening to native English speakers
how to be polite in English
remembering new vocabulary
listen to English radio programmes
repeat what you hear, record your voice and compare to the radio host’s
use short requests for close friends
use longer requests for people who are not so close
use more polite phrases for people senior to you
create your own word bank; carry a small notebook with you everywhere, and add new words when you learn them；learn word chunks(词块) instead of single word；
learn word formation(构词法)
Liu Wen
Jia Xin
Li Rui
Problem Advice
I don’t know how to…我不知道如何...
…is a big difficulty/challenge for me
...对我来说是一个巨大的困难/挑战
I cannot…我无法...
I have no idea how/what…我不知道如何
My biggest problem is...我最大的问题是...
I find it difficult for me to ...
我发现...对我来说很难
I (also) have trouble with...我（还）在...方面有困难
You might try…你可以尝试...
It’s very important to…
...是非常重要的
My advice is…我的建议是...
This worked for me.
这对我来说起到了作用。
It’s helpful to...
...是有帮助的
It would be a great idea to...
...将是一个很棒的主意
Work in groups. List your problems in learning English and brainstorm some useful advice.
1. Doing sth. would be a wise choice.
2. I recommend that you should…
3. It’s a good idea to …
4. It’s highly suggested/recommended that…
5. It’s of great importance to…
6. If I were you, I would …
problems
1. I have no idea how to……
2. … seems a big challenge/difficulty/headache for me.
3. I have trouble with…/ I have trouble/difficulty in doing…
4. I get confused about how/what..
5. My biggest/top
problem/headache/challenge is…
6. It is hard/difficult/challenging for me to...
advice
More useful expressions
Fill in the blanks to find the structure of the blog.
Writing
Writing task 1: Choose one of the problems from your group discussion and write a blog about it.
Describe the problem clearly.
You can write about:
What is your problem
How does this problem affect you
What factors do you think caused your problem
EXAMPLE:
…but now I’m having a lot of trouble with my listening. When I listen to native speakers talking in a video, I can catch only a few words. I can never quite get the main idea.
2. Write one or two ideas on how to solve the problem.
You can write about:
Suggestions from yourself/classmates/teachers.
Strategies read on the book.
Connective words
EXAMPLE:
Listening to English radio programmes helps me get used to how fast native speakers talk. I also repeat what I hear to help myself to experience the feeling of the language. Sometimes I even record my voice so I can listen to myself and compare my pronunciation with the radio host’s
Possible version:
I have trouble with phrasal verbs. There are so many of them an it seems impossible to work out the meanings just from the words.And some of the verbs have different meanings. For example, "put off" can mean postpone, discourage (someone from doing something), and make someone dislike (something). I try to use phrasal verbs sometimes, but I usually use the wrong one!
My classmates had some suggestions for me. One is to use flash cards on which I write down the phrasal verb and a sentence with it.In this way, I can study them when I have time. Another suggestion is to use the phrasal verb in a sentence that is true for me so that it's easier to remember.
I'm trying them now. I hope they will work for me.
Writing task 2: Write a letter to ask for advice.
你是高一学生李华，英语学习上遇到了困难，写信向Miss Wang寻求建议，要求包含以下内容：
1．单词多，很难记住；
2．课文太长，难以背诵(recite)；
3．写作有困难；
4. 听说能力低；
5. 向Miss Wang寻求学习英语的方法。
要求：包含所有要点，可以适当增加细节，词数80左右。
Step1: 定框架
体裁
人称
时态
布局
第一、第二人称
求助信（asking for advice）
一般现在时
第一段：写信目的
第二段：描述具体问题
第三段：表达感激
写 作 指 导
要点1：我英语学习上遇到了困难，写信向Miss Wang寻求建议。
要点2：我发现课本单词多，很难记住。
要点3：课文太长，我难以背诵(recite) 。
要点4：写作有困难，语法错误比较多。
要点5：听说能力低，听说考试表现糟糕。
要点6：向Miss Wang寻求学习英语的方法。
要点7：表达感激。
Step2: 定要点并适当补充内容
Para 1
Para 2
Para 3
表并列连接词：what's more，besides，in addition，
additionally，furthermore，what's worse（更糟糕的是）
Last but not least（最后但不是最不重要的）
我发现课本单词多，很难记住.(定语从句)
I find our textbook full of new words which are very difficult for me to remember.
写作有困难，语法错误比较多。（ have great difficulty in ）
I have great difficulty in writing and always make many mistakes in grammar.
听说能力低，听说考试表现糟糕（do badly in, v-ing作结果状语）
My listening and speaking ability is weak, making me do badly in listening and speaking exams.
Step3：遣词造句
1．My name is ... I'm writing to you for some help about...
2．I’m wondering whether you can give me some constructive guidance in doing…
1. What troubles/bothers me most is… , since/as…
2. When doing..., I find it challenging/hard for me to do…
3. My biggest headache is..., which…
4. I have trouble/difficulty in doing… , because…
Beginning
Body
Ending
1.I’d be grateful if you could give me a hand. Looking forward to your kind reply.
2. Any of your help would be greatly appreciated.
求助信各段落常用句式：
Dear XXX,
I find it challenging to __________. Therefore, I'm writing in the hope of your assistance.
To begin with, I have trouble in _________, which is caused by ________. What’s more, __________ is a big struggle for me, because______________..
Last but not least, what bothers me most is that _______________________.
I would be grateful if you could reply to me at your earliest convenience.
Yours,
Li Hua
求助信
Format
Dear Miss Wang，
My name is Li Hua. I'm writing a letter to you to ask for some advice on English learning.
I have met with many difficulties in learning English since I entered senior high school. First of all, I find our textbook full of new words which are very difficult for me to remember. Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite. What's more, I have great difficulty in writing and always make many mistakes in grammar. Last but not least, my listening and speaking ability is weak, making me do badly in listening and speaking exams. I don’t know what to do now. Would you like to introduce me some advice so that I can learn English more easily
I would greatly appreciate your timely help.
Yours，
Li Hua
Sample
How to give your advice.
建议信
1. In my opinion/view,… 2. From my point of view,…
3. As far as I am concerned,…
I recommend/advise/suggest that you should do sth
I think … / Why not …
1. You might try … 2. It's very important to …
3. My advice is … 4. This worked for me.
Dear XXX,
I terribly sorry to hear that you’re having trouble in ______ . I understand your feelings quite well. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
To begin with, it is highly recommended that you should ______, which helps you ________. What’s more, you are supposed to________. Only in this way can you ______. Last but not least, you’d better ______ so that you can _______.
I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
建议信
好处1
建议1
建议2
好处2
建议3
好处3
Assess your work according to the checklist.
General content
Basic writing skills
General content（整体内容）（5分）
√ Does the writer give a clear description of the problem （问题是否描述清楚）（2分）
√ Is the advice clearly explained （建议是否清晰）（2分）
√ Does each sentence relate to the main idea （是否切合主题）(1分)
Basic writing skills（基本写作技能）（5分）
√ Does the writer use pronouns to refer to things or people correctly
（正确使用代词）（1分）
√ Does the writer use correct spelling, punctuation, and capitalisation
（有无拼写，标点和大小写问题）（2分）
√ Are there any grammar mistakes （有无语法错误）（2分）
Now, group leaders choose one piece of work in your group. Discuss with your members to check the work together.
Then, the group leader shows it to the whole class!
Assess your work according to the checklist.
Perfect your draft about your ideas
Homework