写作帮·作文课
如何写用最高级描述周边的人或事物的文章
话题分析
本单元的话题是"你居住的城镇",与此相关的作文通常要求介绍周围的人或事物,写作时要注意运用形容词或副词的最高级来表达自己的观点。
要求:
写作实践
每个人都生活在一个特定的环境中,你居住的环境有哪些特点呢 请根据下面的提示,用英语写一篇短文来描述你生活的环境。
1.语句通顺、逻辑连贯,可适当发挥;
2.词数 90 左右。
体裁:说明文 时态:一般现在时 人称:以第三人称为主
Which school is the best
2. Which theater is the most popular
3. Which shopping mall do you usuallygo to
总述 →There are many interesting places in my town.
school--the best teachers; an excellent sports center
分述 movie theater-the biggest screens;the most comfortable seats; buy tickets the most quickly
shopping mall-the best service; the clothes there are the most fashionable;the most crowded
素材积累
词汇 big screens 大屏幕 comfortable seats舒适的座位 good service 好的服务 high quality高质量 go shopping 去购物
句子1. It is the best. . . in our town.它是我们镇上最好的……
2. It has the most comfortable seats.它有最舒适的座位。
3. It is the most popular because it has the best...它最受欢迎,因为它有最好的...
4.Of all the..., I like ... best.在所有的……中,我最喜欢……
教材原句·佳作展示. 文章采用"总一分"结构,清晰地介绍了所在城镇的三个场所内容完整。文章正确使用了形容词、副词最高级,是一篇较好的
There are many interesting places in my town.
The best middle school in my town is No.1 Middle School. It has the best teachers and an excellent sports center.①What's the mostpopular movie theater ②I think it's OscarCinema because it has the biggest screens andthe most comfortable seats. You can buy tickets the most quickly there. ③Wanda Plaza is the best place to go to onweekends. because it has the best service and the clothesthere are the most fashionable. But it is alwaysthe most crowded.
①运用含形容词最高级的特殊疑问句,引出第二个要介绍的场所。②使用含有because 引导的原因状语从句的复合句,交代了电影院受欢迎的原因。③运用动词不定式短语作后置定语修饰名词 place,丰富了文章 的句式;此外,运用the bestservice 及 the most fashionable 介绍了万达广场的优势。
1、范文一
假设上周你对你家附近的几家服装店进行了一次调查,调查结果如下表所示。请根据表格内容,写一篇调查报告。不少于80词。
Name Quality(质量) Price Service
Red Star good highest good
Sunshine Clothes Store bestlow worst
Blue Sky not very good lowest best
There are three clothes stores in my neighborhood. They are Red Star, Sunshine Clothes Store and Blue Sky.
Last week, I did a survey about these stores. Here are the results. Red Star is in a fun part of town and it has the best clothes, but their prices are the highest. Its service is very good and you can enjoy the beautiful music when you look through the clothes. As for Sunshine Clothes Store, the clothes are pretty good and the prices are not very high. But the service is the worst. As for Blue Sky,and the prices are not very high. But the service is the worst. As for Blue Sky, people can buy the cheapest clothes there. It also has the best service. So a lot of people like to go there. But the clothes are not as good as those in the other two stores. Which one do you like best
我家附近有三家服装店。他们是红星,阳光和蓝天服装店。
上周,我做了一个关于这些商店的调查。这是结果。红星服装店在镇上一个有趣的地方,那里有最好的衣服,但它们的价格是最高的。它的服务非常好,当你翻看衣服时,你可以欣赏到美妙的音乐。至于阳光服装店,衣服很好,价格也不是很高。但服务是最差的。至于蓝天服装店,人们可以在那里买到最便宜的衣服。它也有最好的服务。所以很多人喜欢去那里。但是衣服没有其他两家商店的好。你最喜欢哪一个
2、范文二
假设你叫王刚,你们班有一位美国交换生Lucy,她给你写了一封电子邮件向你询问你们学校附近餐馆为情况。请你根据下表中的信息给她回复一封电子邮件,并给她推荐一家最好的餐馆。
Name Comment large and beautiful;closest to school;most comfortable seats;Star Restaurantdelicious food;very expensive
Noodles World cheapest; worst service; noisy
Mom's Kitchen most popular; best service;cheap and tasty food要求:1.短文须包括提示中的所有内容,可适当发挥
2.条理清晰,内容完整,语句通顺,书写工整,80词左右。
Dear Lucy,
I'm writing to tell you something about the restaurants near our school. There are three restaurants near our school. Star Restaurant is large and beautiful. It is the closest to our school. It has the most comfortable seats and delicious food. But students hardly ever eat there because it is pretty expensive. Noodles World is the cheapest. However, the service is the worst and it is always noisy at lunchtime. Mom's Kitchen is more popular than the other two. It has the best service and the food is both cheap and tasty. I think Mom's Kitchen is the best of the three. I hope you'll enjoy the food there.
Yours,
Wang Gang亲爱的露西,
我写信是想告诉你一些我们学校附近的餐馆的情况。我们学校附近有三家餐馆。星级餐厅餐馆又大又漂亮。它离我们学校最近。它有最舒适的座位和美味的食物。但是学生们很少在那里吃饭,因为那里很贵。面条世界餐馆是最便宜的。
然而,服务是最差的,而且午餐时间总是很吵。妈妈的厨房餐馆比另外两个更受欢迎。它的服务最好,食物又便宜又好吃。我觉得妈妈的厨房餐馆是三个餐馆中
最好的。我希望你会喜欢那里的食物。
你的,王刚
3、范文三
上周,你们学校对学校附近的三家饭馆进行了一次调查。下面星调查的结果。假如你是校报的记者,请你根据调查结果写一篇70个词左右的短文。
要求:1.短文须包括提示中的所有内容,可适当发挥
2.条理清晰,内容完整,语句通顺,书写工整。
Restaurants Food Service Price
Yangguang most delicious best most expensive
Restaurant Xinyu
worst worst cheapest
Restaurant
Restaurant Lixin delicious good cheap
What do you think of the three restaurants near our school Last week we asked some students the question and here is what we learned. Yangguang Restaurant has the most delicious food. Its service is also the best, but it's the most expensive. You can eat the most cheaply in XinyuRestaurant. But the restaurant has the worst service and its food is the worst. too. Lixin Restaurant is the most popular. It has delicious food and good service. And it's cheap. So many students like to eat there.
6、单元佳作背诵
There are quite a few great places in our city. Let me introduce the best ones to you. No. 15 Middle School is the best of all schools. It has the best teachers and the most beautiful schoolyard. Almost all students in our city want to study there. If you want to go shopping, Xinhua Store is the best choice. Everything at the store is cheap and of good quality. As for hospitals, People's Hospital is a lot better than the others. Its service is the best. The doctors and nurses are kind to everybody.