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English Continuation Writing
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1. 时间不够用
2. 理解不到位——跑题。
3. 构思不充分
4. 语言表达
5. 只重视“写”,忽视“读和思”——“写” 失去基础,造成跑题、不一致、不协调、不真实等诸多影响得分档次的问题。
Writing method: 5W+1H
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where
when
why
who
how
(how to solve the problem)
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Writing method: 5W+1H
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where
when
who
Ali almost neared the finish line in the race.
the day of race.
Ali and Zahra.
Writing method: 5W+1H
what:
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2、Ali took part in a long distance race to get a new pair of shoes.
1、Ali lost Zahra’s shoes, so they have to share Ali’s shoes.
3、Ali crashed to the ground.
Writing method: 5W+1H
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why
1、Ali lost Zahra’s shoes and wanted to get a new one.
2、Ali’s family is poor.
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Beginning
Climax
solution
Lost Zahra’s shoes
afraid, regretful
excited, hopeful
Crashed to the ground
tired, anxious
problem
process
Took part in the race for the third prize
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Paragraph 1: Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead
writing
Paragraph 2: Filled with pleasure, Ali walked home quickly
Paragraph 1: Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead
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Question 2: how did he feel at that time
Question 1: What did he do next
Struggle to his feet; creep; continue; speed;
head; thought; make up one’s mind
Anxious and worried; determined. A flush of, a wave of
Paragraph 1: Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead
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Question 3: What was the consequence of the race
won
excited and happy. Overwhelmed by;
Question 4: How did he feel at the end of the race
Paragraph 1: Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead
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Question 5: Why did he keep running
eager eyes; promise
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Paragraph 1: Ali looked up and saw the other boys rushing ahead
Despite the great pain coming from every part of his body, he struggled to his feet and headed towards the finish line.
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The eager eyes of Zahra and his promise to her flashing through his mind, he ran as fast as his leg could carry him.
Exhausted as he was, he was unwilling to give up. He thought to himself," Ali, you have to win the prize.”
Eventually, he caught up with the other runners one by one and won the third prize.
Homework:
Write paragraph 2 by using this method
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